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@Sia889

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

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Mah🤗
Glad u liked it😊
dnt worry Pri ko bhe mehenat karwayengee...after all Damzi isnt that easy a thing to win
Keep readin gonna update soon[/Quote]

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lol first time comment thanku thanku😆 me happy😃
yeh aap jaise readers ke liye hee ek ad scene ko ek OS banaya hain u see😉
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Spark ...dnt worry the fire works are on there way😉 Thanx for those lovely comments
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Thanx Bazy
PM toh maine kisko bhe nai bheja its from the last update i started PMing...will PM u all from now on

@Hehhe yep i purposely added the Nity wala scene ...we ddnt have much scope fr the poor nity in love ne season-1 (why not elaborate it here😉)
@Dont worry abt Sami usska bhe intazam kar rakha hain maine😉
Thanq soo much sweety for those lovely comments it means a lot to me da
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@Hosh udd jana of pri ....tis is just the trailer picher abhe baake hain mere dost nah Pri😆
Glad u liked it
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Tumhain toh kusch bhe likhoon y ownt find any improvisation uff very High hopes u have yaar😉
will do it ...i know u very well 😆
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Thanq all for liking it
Love u all

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sia

@Sia889

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Chapter:4

Friends chat

They drive back home
Damini changes to her famous pinky nity makes her way to the mirror to take off her blackbeeds n stuff

He sits on there bed,as she combs her hair slowly wind creases her face...he looks at her intensely but she was in her own sweet world thinking of the
series of events that they experienced that party night ,it completely took her by surprise, she didn't know that just one move of Sameer would gain her hubbies attention which she was desperately trying to grab for so long even after there first kiss where he slowly moves towards her unknowingly he places his hands on her shoulder which brings her out of her thoughts ,she looks at his hand n then to him,"kya hua?Prithvi"she asks
"Damini kya tum sach main khush nai ho iss shaadi say? kya tum Sameer ke saath sach main apna first affair karne wali hoo?"he replies a little worriedly

she was now surprised n wondered that why only this thought hit him?
why didn't he think any other thing...like our dance,the time which we spent together,her dress
woh chodo now what abt now? why isnt he thinking abt the present moment,its such a romantic weather n his wife is looking so sexy n desirable..why didnt he comment abt her her beauty now?anyways abhe Mr Dhakkan ko jab toh dena hii hoga

Damini says "nai Prithvi ah aise koi baat nai hain, i didn't mean it ,i was just kidding! you know that don't you? "though she uttered these words with a straight face but somewhere he felt a pain in those words,which althe more made him guilty conscious.

The next day after attending the clients Damini rushes her way out the resort where she spots Sameer with a gal..
"Damini Bhabhi "a call stops her..
"HI bhabhi how r ,aap yahan aur mujhe dekh kar why are u Ignoring me?😒boliye boliye? haan" sami taunts

"Are baba bolne doge toh bolunge na... firstly hello, m doing good,Meri ek client meeting thee and finally tum kisi ke saath busy thee and i didn't want to disturb u both."a sweet Damzi

"hm...well bhabi uska naam Avni hai" we are together ruffling his hair

Damini counters "Hmm so maha shayee is in Love hun"

"guess so😛 plz join us "he replies
"no no what am i gonna do between you love birds!"she excuses

Sami insists " par"

Damini "m in a rush as of now,gtg...n yeh u both should come to our house n that's an order"

"oh yes off-course bhabi" he replies
" ok then you both njoy yourselves, byee" she leaves them both
"bye bhabi: he greets

A few days later...

"Hello Nautanki?: a Gibing Prithvi

"Hello han bol sadu"😉 Sami taunts back

a shocked Prithvi" what Sadu ?😡 bus kar nautanki kaise hain:

"Milgaye fursat DOST se baat karneke?"😡pouts sami

"Natanki tujhe toh pata hain na kitna kaam hota hai " pri justifies

Nautanki ops sami😆: "han theek hai bhabi kaise hain?
aut mujhe ghar par kab bula raha hai?"

" hmm kal dinner ko ayegaa? teri bhabi yaad karre thee tujhe"he invites

Sami "hmm ok lekin SIRF BHABI ke liyee😆"

The next evening Sameer is warmly welcomed by the couple

At the dinner table:
"Hmm.. delicious bhabhi umm...licking his fingers,must say sad...Priithvi is very lucky "
Damini Proudly syas" thanq so much devarji for those kind words that's very sweet of you"

Sami" ur welcome bhabi"
Prithvi cuts"chal terrace pay bhaith kar batein karte hain"

At The Terrace:

"Hows life after marriage sadhu"inquires Sami

"now u dont call that again" Prithvi in raised tone
but sami would never listen to him goes on spins him up

"U didnt answer me hows life? bhabhi must have been the best thing that ever happened to you right ?" he says

A little taken aback by discussing Her with someone which he never, even in his own thought did..he had to say something this time, so he says
"Daaminiii is good wife she is very nice"pasting a smile

This answer from his best friend took him by surprise n confused,that why is he the same after there marriage?

" acha yeh bataoo how did u both meet and everything"Sami again inquires

Prithvi Now he was in a fix... what will he say abt a relationship wait a RELATIONSHIP? should he call it one?

At that instant Damini comes in to give them some coffee saves Prithvi indirectly ,from sami's grilling

"Oh bhabi come sit with us" sami invites

Damini makes herself comfortable

"Acha where ru staying here?"Damini counters to divert the topic

"ahh woh Greenland main" sami replies

" I doubt if such place exists here!" confused Pri
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i haven't heard it either" she adds

" woh Hotel Greenland main"Sami clears

"what u staying at a hotel?
no ways if ur in mumbai u'll have to stay at Saxena mansion n that's an Order" Damini orders

" par aap sab ko meri wajha say dikkat n all" Sami a little hesitantly

"oye nautanki bus kar itna formal kyun hora hain? tere Bhabi samne hain issiliyee?chup chaap apne lugagge la n stay here till your in India"Prithvi says

Sami" little 😳 hmm ok😳"

" kal hee ajaona ,we have navratri starting from tomorrow zyaada kaam bhe nai hogaa and we will be celebrating the festival with you" excited damzi

Precap:

Sami:waise where did u go to ur honeymoon

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Kanchan

@LazyKid

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

very nice update Sia

love it...

wah kya Pri ki himat ki daad deni padegi for saying this to damz

Damini kya tum sach main khush nai ho iss shaadi say? kya tum Sameer ke saath sach main apna first affair karne wali hoo?🤣 🤣 🤣

btw PriDa ki geography weak hai lagta hai donno ko bhi pata nahi where greenland is 😆

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Anna

@Ann_92

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

lolz prithvi gets my award 4 de no.1 dhakkan........

am gonna bvang him..

strange dat pri s making sure dat he reminds sameer in every sentence dat damz s his bhabhi..he s real jealous lolz..
nice update sia..but where s de romance :(

luv de precap..honeymoon lolz

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Devil_Of_Heaven

@Devil_Of_Heaven

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

diiiiiiiiiiiii awesome update...🤗

loved it....😍

damini is right prithvi is a dhakan...really a big DHAKAN.....😆

and loving Mr nautanki.....

yay now he is gonna stay with them....hope he plays the cupid part.....😆

now update soon di.....

once again superb update di....👏

-Mah

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Hina

@samratrocks

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

awesome updtt...

grr888 joobbbb di!

interesting partt

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pia09

@pia09

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Hi Sia great update. Waiting for next update.

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Khwahish

@Khwahish

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

nyc update sia...sam is toally grilling Pri ..hehehe wicked ...loved it

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Perspectives.

@Perspectives.

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#69

Hey Siaaaa diii

i am sorry us din nahi comment kiya..i ran away 😆bahut padhaaye baki thi

in the previous part, Lovedd the shock sameer got...bhabhi par line maar raha tha eheh??😉

And Sameer haule haule drilling everything out from prida...and getting the hell outta Prithvi!

And di, i just wanted to request you to put the inverted commas wen they r speakin coz sumtimes i cant understand whose speakin..sorry if u felt bad

waitin for the next part...Snehal 😛

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..Waves..

@..Waves..

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#70

Siaaaa......

Nice part.....!!! Pri sud get *Bewkoof Pati* award along with Dhakkan no.1 😛😆.....!!! Hope Nautanki knocks some sense into him.....!!! BDW just loved Pri-Sam part......der r my all time favorite bro's 😊.....!!! 🤣 @ sam calling pri *Sadhu*

Great job.....!!! Update soon....!!!

-Nitika

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