Chup tum raho- New PRIDA SS Update on Pg 24

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@Sia889

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: LazyKid
NE PLANS OF UPDATING NEXT PART 😉

Chee chee chee Greediness ke bhee koi hud hote hai..u got ua gift an aur kyaa abhee???

Waise on the other hand,i can update wid great IMPROVISATIONS in the climax after u do the LT update which was left in da middle of nowhere by u last month!!!!

So if anybody wants update n conclusion of the story BUG KANCHAN( AKA-LAZY KID!)

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simran

@shooooona

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#192

awesome update😊😊😊

please pm me when u update NEXT part

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darknite

@darknite

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#193

☺️😳😍 update... pls continue soon

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sia

@Sia889

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: LazyKid
See ek bhi tomatoes pade kya u idiot 😡
itna acha part likha n u think its not gud
wasie pri toh sammy ka bhi teacher nikala on the matter of confessing love
aur kya baat hai spanish bhi seekh li damz ko propose karne ke liye... awesome
too gud yaar

N DONT U DARE TO END IT HERE WE ALL WANT MORE

Tab nai padhe toh ab padengee😆
Spanish haha u see Pri was all geared up for this...as in to propose Damzi..but at a Proper time..he ahd made everything ready-all arrangements where done for there first Date😉 since the situation called he had to pre-pone his plans n location😳
If i dnt end now..its gonna turn into a TV serial running for 2years that too without TRP's😆

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sia

@Sia889

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: gauchalover
sorry for commenting late
hheheh i shd not have read it in ramazan i think so
lol
coming to ur update it was good i really love the scene when he proposed 😛 abt sami being gay coud not imagine😡
totally mindblowing update

coming up o ur question
as a pridaholic i would say u shd keep on writing
as a writer i would like to say it is ur decision either u have something in mind or not if yes then go a head but if u think it is difficult then leave it

LOlz...opss😳

Thanks for liking it dear..ua comments mean a lot to me😃
@ writing further i guess 2 years say i have been stretching it..now i thhink should wrap it up wid a decent *C* scene ..in fact i have already written it..bus need to edit it😳

Thanks so much for the advice sweety...i can expect that from u pal😃

Edited by Killer_Shark - 13 years ago

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sia

@Sia889

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: Sweet_violet
So d naughty gals Sia n Kanchan come up wid Hot Hot update . . . . Not that I'm Complainin 😉 . . . N ya I agree wid d hunk y did Suman choose that moment only 4 her grand entry . . . . Loved it to d core . . . . N hey who told u to stop?? Lukin fwd to d nxt update . . . .

Kanchy aur naughty...she is nerdooo like Sheldon fro TBBT...but a total sweetheart 😆

Well coming to da update Suman entered at that very moment cause...picture abhee baki hai..like they needed a proper proposal moment to show each other there love...they had to get a proper intimate moment to consummate there marriage 😛

@ending... repeat mah self...there isn't anything exciting abt this couple after they realize there feelings for one another ... except for there
*C* night..so it has to end on that note naa.. Thanks for those love;y words Sweety...ur a darling🤗

yeh sab chodo when ru gonna update urs hun???😡 i suppose ua done wid ua examss...now come outta ua lazy zone n give us a nice update!😆