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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Part 6

It's evening 6pm!!! Sagar-Vidya both are sleeping in each other's arms!!! Sagar wakes up, sees Vidya cutely sleeping, keeps looking at her and admires her beauty!!! Suddenly, from somewhere, air comes, and Vidya's hair comes on her face!!! Sagar sees it, touches her face, keeps her hair away from her face!!! And again, Sagar keeps staring at Vidya, amazed by her beauty!!! Now Vidya wakes up, sees her Sagar admiring her beauty!!! ❤️

Vidya - Aise kya dekh rahe ho? ☺️

Sagar - Tumhe dekh raha tha!!! ❤️

Vidya - Mujhe toh humesha hi dekhte ho!!! ☺️

Sagar - Sote waqt tum kuch alag dikh rahi thi!!! ❤️

Vidya - alag? (surprised) 😲 matlab?

Sagar - Matlab, you look even more gorgeous and stunning when you sleep!!! ❤️

Vidya smiles😃!!! Both have an eye-lock season!!! ❤️After few mins....

Vidya - Ek min, ek min!!! Iss ka matlab main baki waqt kharab dikhti hoon kya? 😆😆

Sagar - Arre maine aisa kab kaha? Tum toh humesha ek pari jaisi dikhti ho, extremely beautiful and innocent!!! ❤️

Vidya blushes ☺️!!! Eye lock season starts once again ❤️!!! Both comes close and close and closer!!! Few inches distance remains between their lips!!! ❤️ Suddenly Vidya puts her palm on Sagar's mouth!!! 😉😛

Vidya - Abhi nahi!!! 😛

Sagar - Arrreeeyyy yaaaar.... Tum ladkiyo ki yehi problem hai!!!! Sab kuch baad mein!!! Bhagwan ne tum ladkiyo ko apne fursat ke time par aram se banaya hai aur sara sharam tum sab mein ghusa dia hai!!! 😆🤣

Vidya - Ohhoo!!! Yeh tum kahe rahe ho? Jo ladka college ka sabse shy ladka hai, kisi se jyada baat nahi karta, har waqt kitabo mein duba hota hai woh yeh kehe raha hai? Hahaha... Very funny!!! Waise hum ladkiya aisi hi hai!!! Shaadi se pehele nothing aisa vaisa!!! 😛😉

Sagar - Kabhi kabhi besharmi bhi dikhani parti hai!!! 😉😆 Waise maine shaadi ki baat kab ki?? 😲 (pretends to be shocked)

Vidya - Aisa sawal puchne ka matlab kya hai tumhara? Hum dono shadi nahi karenge kya? 😲

Sagar - Ummm.... Sochna padega!!! 😉😛

Vidya - Sagar..... Jao main tumse baat nahi karti!!!

Vidya gets angry 😡 and tries to go from there!!! Just then, Sagar grabs her hand and pulls her towards himself!!! ❤️ Few inches distance between them!!! ❤️ Vidya gets shy and nervous!!! ☺️

Sagar - Uss din main tumse kuch kehena chahta tha, lekin halat ke vajar se kahe nahi paya!!! ❤️

Vidya - Kya? ☺️

Sagar - I wanted to tell you that, I.... I.... I..... 😛

Vidya - I what? ☺️

Sagar - I love you like crazy!!! ❤️❤️❤️

Both smiles, blushes and are in tears of joy!!! Then both hugs each other!!! Their eyes are closed!!! They are in different world!!! ❤️❤️❤️ Suddenly, Sagar's friend Sahil arrives there to visit Sagar!!! 😆😆🤣

Sahil - ahem ahem *coughing* (in teasing style) 😛😉

Sagar and Vidya gets shocked and moves away!!! Both are feeling shy and embarrassed!!! 😳😳 Sagar thinks, "Hey bhagwaan!!! Pehele doctor phir yeh!!! Meri hi pyaar ki naiya ko kyu rokh dete hai bar bar!!!" 🤣 Vidya smiles to make Sahil feel welcome!!! 😊😊

Sahil - Shayad main galat waqt pe aa gaya!!! 😛😉

Sagar - Aarre nahi nahi!!! Aisa kuch nahi hai!!! Come and sit, yaar!!! 😊

Sahil sits!!!

Sahil - Kaisa hai?

Sagar - Ekdum first class buddy!!! Tu bata!!!

Sahil - Main bhi theek hoon!!! Arre, tune inse toh introduce nahi karwaya!!! (pointing at Vidya)

Sagar - Oh ha!!! Meet Vidya, my friend!!! (just friend, really?😉)

Vidya - Hi!!! 😊

Sahil - Hi!!! Kaisi hai aap?

Vidya - Main theek hoon!!!

Sahil (tells to both) - Waise kya tum dono sirf dost ho? 😉😆

Vidya gets shy!!! Remains silent!!! ☺️

Sagar - Ha yaar!!! Sirf dost!!! Sacchi mein!!! 😳 (thinking, "bohot ho gaya bhagwan, aab aur torture nahi, isske dimag mein please yeh daldo ke isse aab jana hai yaha se!!!) 🤣😆

Sahil - Theek hai, theek hai!!! Achcha sun, aab main chalta hoon!!! (decides to leave cuz he understood the real fact and thinks not to become a "kabab mein haddi" in his friend's romance) 😛😆

Sagar - Theek hai!!! Kal milte hai!!! Bye!!! (thinks, "thank you bhagwaan!!!"

Sahil (friend) goes!!! Vidya realizes that it's night 10pm!!!

Vidya - Chalo aab dinner karne ka waqt hai!!! Tumhe dawai bhi toh leni hai!!! 😊

Sagar - Jo hukum meri maalkin!!! 😛

Vidya laughes!!! Then she prepares Sagar's plate and comes to Sagar with it!!! ❤️

Sagar - Vidya, mere right arm toh injured hai iss liye main apna right hath nahi hila sakta!!! Tum khila do na pls!!! 😛❤️

Vidya smiles 😃, then she says, "Theek hai!!!" 😊

Vidya smiles and now feeding Sagar with her own hands!!! Sagar keeps being amazed by her beauty!!! Suddenly, Sagar bites Vidya's finger by mistake!!! 😛

Vidya - Ouch!!!

Sagar realizes what he did!!!

Sagar - Oh sorry sorry!!! Maine jaan buch ke nahi kia!!! 😒

Vidya - Bohot zor se laga!!! 😔

Sagar looks at her, holds her finger and kisses it!!! ❤️❤️❤️

Sagar - Aab theek hai naa? 😛😉😃

Vidya - Ha!!! (smiles and blushes) ☺️

So Vidya keeps feeding Sagar and Sagar keeps staring at Vidya with a loving expression ❤️!!! After Vidya fed Sagar, she gives him medicine too!!! 😊

Vidya - Aab tum aram karo!!!

Sagar - Phir se? Oh god!!! Main sach mein aab bimar ho jayunga!!! Dopahar ko hi toh aram kia tha!!! Not now again please!!! (requesting expression)

Vidya - Nahi!!! Tumhe aab aram hi karna hai!!! Kal better feel karoge!!! Aur waise bhi, kal sham ki plan yaad hai naa? Kal sham ka plan kharab na ho iss ke liye tumhe ekdum theek hona hai!!! 😉

Sagar smiles!!! 😃

Sagar - Theek hai!!! Lekin ek sharth hai!!! 😛

Vidya - Kya?

Sagar - Tumhe bhi mere pas rahena hoga, meri baho mein!!! ❤️❤️

Vidya - Yeh single bed hai!!! Dono iss pe kaise rahenge?

Sagar - Agar ek dusre ke liye dil mein saccha pyaar ho, toh sab kuch mumkin hai, aur waise bhi, isse humara pyaar barega!!! ❤️❤️

Vidya smiles 😃 and blushes ☺️!!! Then she lies on Sagar's bed!!! Vidya keeps her head on Sagar's chest and her hand on Sagar's body!!! Both hugs each other tightly and close their eyes!!! ❤️

Part 6 ends!!! Hope you all like it!!! Waiting for all of your comments!!! Love... Bidz!!! 😃

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 13 years ago

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: khulh
bidz we are waiting yaar , today you didn't write any update 😭 😭

Sorry yaar!!! Was outside whole day!!! But don't worry cuz I've updated!!! Read n comment!!! :)

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: namratharockz
bidz darling- u created a romantic atmosphere!!!1
u r a gud story teller!!!!

my bidzzzz rockkkkkkkkkkk

Thank u twinnyyyy!!!! I loved ur comment!!! Love ya!!! Now read part 6!!! waiting for ur comment!!! :) <3

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khulh

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Senior Member

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

kya part tha yaar it was fantastic , yeh to hamara sagar hai 😉 🤣 and you really made me laugh a lot as I told you
and vidya was so so so nice and cute in this part
you really really ek good writer yaar , go on 👍🏼

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Sonia Rachel John

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IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

bidz---u r fabbbb...

i mean im picturising those scenes in my mind 24x7.....kyz karoo..even im mad lyk u..:)

i feel lyk watching this story on TV

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baloSD

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

aaaawww..... how cute yaar!! your imagination and writing is too good!!!
i loved it bidzzzzzzzz urr greatttttt!!!!!!!!!
love Sana❤️
Edited by baloSD - 13 years ago

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_SilentSoul_

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IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Thanks everyone for your comments!!! I am so pleased to get such sweet comments!!! Anyways, here is the next part!!!

Part 7

It's night 11pm!!! Sagar and Vidya are lying on bed in each other's arms!!! ❤️

Sagar - Vidya... Neend nahi aa rahi!!!

Vidya - Mujhe bhi!!! Kya karein?

Sagar - Baat karein?

Vidya - Theek hai!!! 😊

Sagar - Waise, tumne khana kha liya na?

Vidya - Nahi, bhuk nahi hai!!!

Sagar - Kyaaa? 😲 Utho, abhi utho!!!

Vidya gets up!!!

Vidya - Kya hua? Uthaya kyu?

Sagar - Abhi khana khaw, right in front of me!!! Maine toh socha tumne khana kha liya!!! Lekin tum... Anyways, take food and eat now in front of me!!!

Vidya (smiles) - Theek hai!!! 😃

Vidya takes food on her plate and starts eating!!! Keeping his hand on his cheek, Sagar is cutely looking at Vidya ❤️!!! Vidya notices it!!!

Vidya - Kya hua?

Sagar - Tum jab khana khati ho toh bohot hi cute lagti ho!!!

Vidya smiles!!! 😃 Then she finishes her food!!!

Vidya - Aab theek hai?

Sagar - Yes sweetheart!!! ❤️😉

Vidya blushes!!! ☺️

Sagar - Aab sharmana bandh karo aur mere pas mere bed par aake leto!!! ❤️

Vidya does that!!!

Sagar - Waise, tumne pucha na tha ke main itna sharmila ladka hokar tumko sharmili hone ke liye tease kyu karta hoo?

Vidya - Ha!!!

Sagar - Woh iss liye ke kabhi kabhi zarurat ke liye besharmi bhi dikhani parti hai!!! 😉😆

Vidya - Oh really? Is it so? 😛

Sagar - Yeah yeah!!! 😉😉

Vidya - Achcha toh tum aur kya kya besharmi dikha sakte ho? 😛😛

Sagar - Yeh toh karke dikhana parega!!! Abhi dikhayu, hmm? (comes closer to Vidya) 😉😉❤️

Vidya - nahi nahi nahi!!! Koi zarurat nahi hai!!! Achcha, aab bohot raat ho chuki hai!!! Now you better sleep cuz it's important for your health!!! 😃😛

Sagar - Arre yaar!!! Tum toh ekdum nurse ki tarah baat karti ho!!! Aur ekdum unromantic ho tum!!!

Vidya - Unromantic hoon ki nahi yeh kal sham ke baad bolna!!! 😉😛

Sagar (smiles) - Umm... matlab? 😃

Vidya - Matlab kuch nahi!!! Waise, agar tum aab so gaye toh kal sham humari date pe tumhe ek surprise milegi!!! 😃❤️

Sagar - Really?? Kya surprise batao na!!! 😃😃

Vidya - Surprise bata dungi toh surprise kaise rahega!!! Aab baate kam aur kam jyada!!! Sleep now!!!

Sagar - Achcha theek hai!!! I am sleeping, madam!!! Waise, mujhe jaldi neend tabhi aayegi when you'll hug me tightly!!! ❤️😊

Vidya blushes ☺️ and smiles 😃!! Then she hugs him tight!!! 🤗

Sagar - Vidya, sone se pehele ek baat kehena chahta hoon!!! Phir promise so jayunga!!! 😊

Vidya - Kya bolo!!!

Sagar - Thank you for being in my lonely life!!! Mere zindagi mein tumhare aane se meri bejaan zindagi mein jaan aa gayi!!! Kyuki tumhi toh ho meri zindagi, meri har khushi!!! Mujhe kabhi chodkar nahi jana, Vidya!!! I can't live without you!!! You are my life, my world, my everything!!! ❤️❤️

Then he kisses on her forehead!!! ☺️ Vidya is amazed and she blushes!!! ☺️ Then both have an eye-lock season!!! Then suddenly, Vidya kisses on both of Sagar's cheeks!!! ❤️❤️

Vidya - Thank you too!!! Tumne meri bezuban zindagi mein mithi awaaz bhardi!!! I see my whole world in you!!! Hum dono ka sharir alag hai lekin dil ek hi hai!!! I love you a lot!!! 😃

Sagar smiles!!! 😃 Then he hugs Vidya, and Vidya too hugs him!!! 🤗And then they both sleep!!! 😊

It's morning!!! ❤️ Vidya wakes up and tries to get up but Sagar is holding her so tightly that she can't do so!!! After her failure to get up, she smiles and keeps staring at Sagar who is sleeping so cutely like a baby!!! After a few minutes, Sagar wakes up and sees Vidya staring at him!!! Eye-lock season again!!! *Kabhi na sukun aaya song playing in the background* ❤️ Finally, they are out of their dreamland after a few minutes. 😆

Vidya - Chalo utho!!! Hotel vapas jana hai!!!

Sagar - Itni jaldi? Nahi, kuch din aur rukhte hai na yaha? 😛

Vidya - Can't do so naa!!! Try to understand, janu!!! 😉😛

Sagar - Janu?! 😲 Waah waah!!! Sharmilapan thoda thoda kam ho raha hai!!! 😆😆

Vidya (laughing) 😆 - Yeh toh baas shuruwat hai bacchu!!! Aage aage dekho hota hai kya!!! 😉

Sagar - Oh really!!! Theek hai ji!!! Hum bhi uss hasin pal ka intezaar karenge!!! 😛❤️

Vidya smiles!!! 😃

Vidya - Achcha!!! Aab bohot ho gayi baatein, aab chalo!!! 😛

Sagar gets up and both are ready to go!!! Doctor comes!!!

Doctor (to Sagar) - Yeh raha aap ka discharge papers!!!

Sagar - Thank you doctor!!! Achcha, toh hum chalte hai!!!

Doctor - Theek hai!!! Bye!!!

Sagar and Vidya go to the hotel!!! On entering, Sahil comes!!!

Sahil (to Sagar) - Arre yaar, tu aa gaya!!! Bohot achcha hua!!! Aab kaisa hai tu?

Sagar - Tere samne hi hoon, ekdum first class!!!

Sahil - Chalo, sunkar accha laga!!! Waise, Mrs. Gupta (their dance teacher) tujhe dhund rahe the!!! Kuch baat karni thi unhe tujhse!!!

Sagar - Mujhse? Kyu kya hua?

Sahil - Mujhe nahi pata yaar!!! Tu khud hi jaake puchle!!!

Sagar - Accha theek hai!!! Tu ja, main aata hoon!!!

Sahil goes!!!

Sagar (to Vidya) - Main abhi aata hoon!!! Tum apne kamre mein jao aur fresh hokar aao!!!

Vidya - Theek hai!!! Tum apna khayal rakhna!!! Main fresh hokar aati hoon!!!

Both goes different ways!!! Vidya, while going to her room, meets her Principal Sir on the way!!!

Vidya's Principal (VP) - Arre Vidya, kaha thi tum? Tumhe kitni time se dhund raha tha!!!

Vidya - Woh sir!!! Mera dost hospital mein tha iss liye main wahi thi!!!

VP - Oh!! That's sad!! Waise, kaisa hai woh aab? And by the way, tum aabtum bol sakti ho? Congratulations!!! 😃😃

Vidya - Thank you sir!!! 😃 Yeh sab mere uss dost ki vajar se hi hua hai!!! Waise aab vo kafi behetar hai!!!

VP - That's good!!! Waise, mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai!!!

Vidya - Kya sir?

VP - Tumne dance competition mein participate kia tha naa, so voh dance competition dopahar ko hai!!!

Vidya - Wow Sir!!! 😃 That's great news!!! Waise, kaun kaun hai iss competition mein, sir?

VP - Umm... Delhi se St. Joseph ki student Kavita Mehta, Kolkata se R.I. College se Sumon Das aur Mumbai se St. Martin ka topper and best dancer Sagar Singh Thakur!!!

Vidya - Kyaaa????? 😲😲

VP - Ha!!! Kyu kya hua?

Vidya - Kuch nahi Sir!!! Achcha Sir, main chalti hoon!!! Kuch kam hai!!! (Mood thoda sa kharab ho gaya Vidya ka)

VP - Theek hai!!! Bye!!!

Vidya goes to the room, thinking that how she and Sagar are gonna perform!!! She's thinking that they can't do so cuz they want each other to win and above that, Sagar is having plaster!!! Lots of thinking are coming in her mind!!! (tensed and confused look) 😕

Precap : Vidya tells Sagar not to perform cuz he's injured but Sagar wants to perform for his college, so he and Vidya goes to his doctor to ask whether the plaster can be removed or not and he can perform or not!!!

Part 7 is over!!! I hope you all will like this part as well!!! Feel free to tell me if there's anything confusing or wrong, just don't worry at all!!! Waiting for all of your comments!!! Love ya... Bidz!!! 😊

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 12 years ago

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khulh

@khulh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Hi bidz
don't say that yaar it was too good but maybe you feel that because this part didn't had many events but as I said it was so so nice and please write the next part so soon , I can't wait to know what will happen now

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: khulh
Hi bidz
don't say that yaar it was too good but maybe you feel that because this part didn't had many events but as I said it was so so nice and please write the next part so soon , I can't wait to know what will happen now

Thank you!!! You know, I was so tensed about this part!!! May be you are right!!! Well, next part will be updated tomorrow!!! But for you all, I am giving a precap of the next part!!! 😃

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: khulh
ok we are waiting

I've already posted the precap!!! See the second last paragraph typed in green color!!!!!!!!!

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