**Dil Ka Rishta** Last update @ 63 [03/06] - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: khulh

really really yaar it was fantastic , I liked your editing so so much 😛 😉
and please write the next part very faaaaast


It's 10.30pm over here!!! Almost time to sleep cuz tomorrow I need to go to school!!! Will try my best to finish the assignments in Tutorial class!!! After coming from school tomorrow, I'll write the next part!!! By the way, I added you on Facebook!!! Accept soon!!! Take care!!! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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The last two parts were awesome... Woahh so cool that se can talk now! awwww my poor baby got shot in the arm... so sick that all he's after is property... i wonder what's gonna happen next!! continue soon! :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sharadlicious

The last two parts were awesome... Woahh so cool that se can talk now! awwww my poor baby got shot in the arm... so sick that all he's after is property... i wonder what's gonna happen next!! continue soon! :)


Thank you so much bhumii! Will update the next part tomorrow after school!!! 😃😃
Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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now I read the last editing , you don't know how you made me happy when I read it , it was superb , amaizing I like it soooooooo much
i can't wait for kal please do it fast
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: khulh

now I read the last editing , you don't know how you made me happy when I read it , it was superb , amaizing I like it soooooooo much
i can't wait for kal please do it fast


Haha.. Have patience yaaar!!!😉😉
I'll post it as soon as I'll be back from school, PAKKA!!! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG!!!!!!!!! it's amazing yaar!! WoW SagarVidya mill gaye I'm sooooooooooooo Happy.. i can't wait for the next part plzzzzzzzzzz Bidz update sooooooooooooooooooooooon!!!!!
Love Sana❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
bidz-i loved part 4 teh most!!!
i was sad ven SV didnt tell anythging abt their feelingz :(
but the end..omg......it was mindblowing
the way she called sagarrrrr n d way sagar vidya hugged....haaye...........i was picturising that scene in my mind for a long tym...
:) :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks Sonudi and Sana😃 So me back with Part 5 of my FF!!! Hope you all are enjoying well!!!

Part 5
Sagar and Vidya hug each other very tightly!!! ❤️ They both are in different world!!! ❤️ After few seconds, they came back in the reality!!! (finally😉) Vidya moves backwards and asks Sagar with a tensed look, "tumhare shoulder se toh bohot khoon behe raha hai!!! Abhi chalo hospital!!!" Sagar is just looking at her and is amazed by her sweet voice!!! ☺️ After a while, he says, "ek minute ruko!!!" Devil Samrat is confused and shocked, thinking whats happening!!! Sagar goes to Samrat and says, "Teri itni himmat, tune meri Vidya ko jaan se marne ki koshish ki?! 😡" Hearing this, Vidya was just feeling out of the world!!! ☺️ She is crying cuz of Sagar's injury yet she is smiling hearing that line!!! 😃 Kinda mix emotion, can't be explained in words!!! Samrat says, "Meri Vidya?! Who the hell are you man? Yeh meri mangitaar hai, main jo marzi karu iss ke sath, u get the hell out of here!" 😡 Sagar says, "Oh really!!! Tell again that she's your fiance!!!" Samrat says, "Yeah!!! She's my fiance!!!" 😡 Just after Samrat told this, Sagar gives him a tight punch, DHAMAK!!! 👏 And then, he keeps beating him, punching him and slapping him, isn't giving any chance to Samrat to tell or do something!!! (Go ahead darling👍🏼) By this time, many people were gathered outside Vidya's room and one of them called the police!!! Vidya says, "Sagar, aab chodo usse, usko sazaa hum baad mein denge, pehele tumhara hospital jana zaruri hai!!!" Just then, the police comes and takes Samrat from there (chalo musibaat gaya😊)!!! Suddenly, everything in front of Sagar's eyes began to fade!!! Sagar fell unconscious as the bullet remained for quite a long time in his body!!! 😒 Vidya rushes to Sagar, cries continuously, touches his cheeks with both of her hands and tells, "Sagar, sagar, utho, get up!!!" 😭

Vidya takes him to City hospital with the help of people!!! Now Sagar is in ICU and Vidya is outside praying to God!!! After 30mins, the doctor comes out and informs Vidya, "Mr. Singh aab khatre se bahar hai!!! Kuch hi der mein unhe hosh aa jayega!!!" Vidya smiles in happiness!!! 😃 She goes to Sagar's room, sits beside his bed, keeps looking at him for about a minute or two and then tells, "Thank you Shambunath ji!!! Tumne mere Sagar ko theek kar dia!!! Aab jaldi se isse hosh mein lao pls!!!" 😊 Then she tells to Sagar, "Thank God ke tum theek ho!!! Agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh main toh mar hi jati!!!" ❤️ Just then, Sagar opens his eyes and tells, "Aur agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh main kya bohot khush hota, idiot?!" 😆😆 Vidya instantly looks at Sagar with a shocking face!!! She sees Sagar smiling!!! Then she hugs him!!! 🤗 Her head is on Sagar's chest!!! And then she began to cry, while crying, she tells, "Tum kya thoda sa savdhan nahi rehe sakte hai? Kuch aisa vaisa ho jata toh...?! Toh main toh mar jati!!!" ❤️❤️ Sagar puts his finger on Vidya's mouth and says, "Ssshh...!!! Aisi baat nahi karte!!! Main bhi theek hoon aur tum bhi!!! Aur waise bhi, agar mujhe goli lagne se tumhari mithi awaaz se apna naam sunne ko mile, toh main aise hazar goli ke dard ko bhi haaste haaste sehe lunga!!! (awww☺️☺️)" Vidya is amazed by Sagar's words!!! Then she hugs him tighly again!!! 🤗 Sagar hugs her back 🤗 and tells her, "thoda dhire se pakro na!!! shoulder pe dard hota hai!!!" 😛😛 Vidya says, "Ohhh!!! So sorry!!!" Sagar started laughing loudly!!! 🤣 Vidya says, "Tum mera mazak ura rahe ho? Jaao, main baat nahi karti!!!" 😛😉 Sagar says, "Agar baat nahi karogi toh main toh sach mein hi mar jayunga!!!" ❤️ Vidya instantly covers Sagar's mouth with her palm!!! ❤️ Both have an eyelock for a min!!! ❤️ *Tere naam humne kia hai song playing in the background* Both comes near, and nearer ❤️ and suddenly the doctor comes to check Sagar!!! LOL!!! 😆😆 Sagar whispers, "Iss kabab mein haddi ko abhi aanaa tha kya?" 🤣 Vidya laughes loudly!!! 😆😆 Doctor says to Sagar, "Aap kafi hadh tak theek ho chuke hai!!! Kal subhe apko discharge mil jayegi!!!" 😃 Sagar says, "Thank you doctor!! 😊" (thinking in mind, now go yaar!!! kyu romance ke bich mein aa rahe ho!! 😆😆") Doctor goes!!! Vidya is laughing!!! 🤣 Sagar says, "tumhe haasi aa rahi hai? yeh doctor kisi bhi waqt aa jata hai!!! kabab mein haddi kahika!!!" Telling this, Sagar also starts laughing!!! 😆😆 After both of them stop their laughing, Sagar tells Vidya, "uss din, jab hum peheli baar mile the, kuch aisi baat thi jo main tumse kehena chahta tha lekin halat ke vajar se kahe nahi paya!!!" ☺️❤️ Vidya says, "Kya?" (expecting to hear three magical words❤️) Sagar says, "vohh... ke... main... kahe raha tha ke... m-m-m-m-a-a-a-i-n... Belated Happy 2nd Anniversary of our Friendship!!! 😛😉" Vidya whispers, "Hey Shambunath ji!!! isse kuch akal do!!!" 🤣🤣 Sagar tells, "Tumne kuch kaha?" 😛 Vidya tells, "Nahi woh main kahe rahi thi ke Thank you!!!" 😃 Sagar thinking in mind, "Kya yaar!!! Woh bhi janti hai ke main usse pyaar karta hoo aur main bhi janta hoo that she loves me!!! Phir bhi itni nervousness kyu?!?!" 😆 Vidya says, "kya hua, kuch soch rahe the kya?" Sagar says, "kuch nahi, voh main kahe raha tha ki.... K-k-k-k-y-y-y-a-a-a...." 😛 Vidya laughes!!! She says, "kya hua? hakla kyu rahe ho? 🤣 Jo dil mein hai boldo!!!" Sagar then tells, "Kya.... tum... mere... sath.... kal.... date pe chalogi?" (finally, line pe aa gaye😃) Vidya blushes!!! ☺️❤️ She tells, "Ha chalungi!!!" 😃☺️ Sagar blushes ☺️ and smiles!!! Gets damn happy!!! 😃 Then they have an eyelock!!! ❤️ After a minute or two, when they are out of their dream world, Sagar tells Vidya, "Achcha Vidya, tum apne dad ko phone karo!!! Unhe bhi toh apni beti ki awaaz sun lene do!!!" 😃😃 (aww kitna caring hai, sabke khushi ke baade mein sochta hai pehele😊) Vidya gets little bit shocked!!! 😲 She just now realizes that she can speak now!!! She was so in lost in getting tensed about Sagar then talking with him that she even didn't realized that she can speak!!! 😛😛 After realization, Vidya smiles 😃 and then she says, "Theek hai!!!" 😊 She calls her dad!!! Vidya's dad, seeing Vidya's name flashing on his mobile screen, gets shocked 😲 and thinks that Vidya usually texts her then why she's calling him now!!! He receives the call!!!
VD - Hello!!!
Vidya - Papa!!! (almost in tears of joy) 😛
Vidya's dad (VD) - Vidya!!! (Shocked) 😲
Vidya - Ha papa!!! Main Vidya!!! 😊
VD - Tum.... Yeh.... Tumhari awaaz.... Yeh sab kaise hua? 😲
Vidya tells him the whole incident!!!
VD - Main soch bhi nahi sakta tha ke Samrat aisa kar sakta hai!!! 😡 Khair jo hua so hua!!! Beta, Sagar ko phone do pls!!!
Vidya - Sure!!! (Gives her phone to Sagar)
Sagar (getting shy, after all sasurji se peheli bar baat kar rahe hai darling ji😛😉) - Namaste Uncle!!! Kaise hai aap? 😊
VD - Main theek hoon beta!!! Tum aab kaise ho? 😊
Sagar - Main ekdum theek hoo!!! 😊
VD - Thank you so much beta!!! 😃 Tumne jo aaj kia hai uske liye main zindagi bhar tumhara shukre guzar rahunga!!! Thanks a lot beta!!! 😃
Sagar (smiles) - Arre uncle iss mein thanks ki kya baat hai!!! Yeh toh mera farz tha! Akhir Vidya meri sabse achchi dost hai!!! (dost, hmm😉😉)
VD - Awww that's so sweet beta!!! 😊 Accha aab tum aram karo!!! Main rakhta hoon!!! Aur apna khayal rakhna aur Vidya ka bhi!!! (aab toh zindagi bhar khayal rakhna hai, Sagar darling 😉❤️)
Sagar - Chinta maat kijiye uncle!!! Hum dono theek hai!!! Okay Uncle, bye!!! 😃😉
VD - Bye beta!!! 😃
Call disconnects!!!
Sagar (tells Vidya) - Tumhare dad tumhare jaise hi cute hai!!! ☺️
Vidya - Aww thank you!!! 😃
Sagar - Thank you? Main gussa ho jayunga!!! 😛 Yaad hai, tumne hi mujhe kaha tha ke humare rishte mein no sorry no thank you!!! 😃
Vidya - Achcha achcha theek hai, aab tum aram karo!!!
Sagar - Aram karunga agar tum bhi kal subhe tak yaha ruki!!! ☺️❤️
Vidya smiles and blushes 😃☺️!!! Then she says, "Theek hai main yaha hoon!!! Aab tum aram karo!!!" 😃
Sagar - Meri baho mein aao naa!!! Tumhare chune se mujhe sukun milta hai!!! ☺️☺️❤️
Vidya smiles and then both hugs!!! ❤️🤗 Sagar sleeps after few minutes!!! Vidya gets into sleep too keeping her head on Sagar's chest!!! ❤️❤️

The End of Part 5!!! Waiting for all of yours' comments!!! Tried my best to make the SV convo magical with some funny moments!!! Hope I'm successful and you all will like it!!! Take care all!!! Love... Bidz!!! 😊❤️
Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Kya part tha yaar so so romantic and amaizig , and your comments made me lugh so so much 🤣 sach mein it was so nice and I hope if their eyes met with warm after their first hug and when she was thanking shambunat I think it will be the better if you say tanivad rather than thank you , and I think vidya should be more shy than these all and sagar not be so shy 😉 if she back to the hospital it will be good 😉 and sagar will make a cute naraz baby face
if you like
but as I said it was wonderfull yaar 👍🏼
Edited by khulh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: khulh

Kya part tha yaar so so romantic and amaizig , and your comments made me lugh so so much 🤣 sach mein it was so nice and I hope if their eyes met with warm after their first hug and when she was thanking shambunat I think it will be the better if you say tanivad rather than thank you , and I think vidya should be more shy than these all and sagar not be so shy 😉 if she back to the hospital it will be good 😉 and sagar will make a cute naraz baby face
if you like
but as I said it was wonderfull yaar 👍🏼


I'm glad that I was successful in making you laugh, feel and enjoy!! 😃 Yaar, don't mind please but I think, "Thank you" is better in this line cuz you see, here, Vidya is a college student not any illiterate small town girl!!! Hope you understand what I'm trying to say!!! And yeah, from the first of my FF, the SV characters are introduced as quite and shy that's why both feels shy!!! But don't worry!!! Sagar dhire dhire apni besharmi dikhayega!!! 😆😉 By the way, I didn't understand these lines,
"I hope if their eyes met with warm after their first hug"
"if she back to the hospital it will be good 😉 and sagar will make a cute naraz baby face"
Can you explain these properly, dear?
Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago

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