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All fanfics and oneshots which i have been written with my own knowledge - this is solely my work and no one can recreate or copy my work without permission

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Hey friends, i am starting my 1st storyline which is different from the original except aehem hating gopi which will change in this storyline
Hope you all like this FF and do comment on it for sure
i will thank diya for telling me to write an scenario about this
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Chapter 1

It was already 11pm and Kinjal has left the house to start her life anew in her sasural. Gopi is waiting for everyone to go to their rooms so she could leave .Gopi tried not to shed any tears but what could she do, she had to leave as she told the whole house she will go after kinjals marriage and this was the time. Gopi took off her mangulsutra and put it on the table at the main hall; she left everything, everything which she had in this house. Tears streamed down her face she had except the gift panna had gave her. She broke down and had some flashback of the vows she had broken and the day she first came to this house as the Daughter-in-law. She thought about that person who broke her heart but what could she do, she loved him and she would do anything for his sake. But then she realized why she thinking about that guy whom he doesn't care about her and didn't love her but a girl called Anita. Anita she thought of, Anita who is she and why didn't she stop this marriage? That person whom he couldn't treat her as his own but treated her as dirt compelled her to leave but immediately she began to walk up to the door and looked behind for the final time.

The Viranis were waiting for her, Ansh and Damini (yes am talking about the kyunki saas bhi kabhi bahu thi Viranis who was Gopi new tutor for educating her), wondering why she still not here yet, gopi came outside with the gift panna gave her and was greeting. She sat in the car and put the seatbelt on.

Damini: Gopi phir se sooch lo, are you ready to leave, paaka(definitely sure) ?

Ansh: Damini tum bhi na, bechari pehle sai bohot parishan hai aur tum bhi na ?

Gopi: ha Damini am ready, Ansh Bhai can u please leave before anyone wakes up and notices?

As soon as they leave Aehem wakes up due to a bad cough and flu, and suddenly he starts to feel something strange, he knew it was for Gopi but completely ignores it.

He goes down to the kitchen to get water and thinks about kinjal how she ruined her life for a man called Umang. Umang who is pathetic and irresponsible and tears starts to fall down as she had left the house.

He goes to the hall and notices someone's mangulsutra and notices its gopi's

Aehem: Yeh gawar bhi na, what the hell is she up to, I already made the biggest mistake in my life by getting married to her and goes to her room and find out she is not there,. He searched the whole house and comes to knw that she had left the house and shouts out 'MOM' 'DAD' KAKA' , sub neeche aaye

Everyone comes down and koki asks "dikra yeh kya hai raat ke 2 baaj chookai hai and ab kya huwa"

Aehem "Mom, Gopi ghar pe nahi hai "

Koki and hetal: Kya

Everyone was shocked, but Rashi smirked but she was hopeless without her, thinking how she was going to run the house without her

Hetal : how do you know ?

Aehem: look around, can u see her, and when I came down to get water I found Gopi mangulsutra and went to go and give it to her in her room she wasn't there and searched for her in the house, she nowhere to be found.

Rashi smirks and says : jiju aap ko yaad hai jab gopi ne shaadi kai 7 vow tor diye ? aur she even prmised she would leave the house for ur sake after kinjal marraige, aab daika aapke pyaar mein kya kya nai kya us bechari nai aur appne kya dya usko. Kinjal ki to bidaai ho gai, aur Gopi sasural chor kar kaha gai ho ge.

While everyone had their face on aehem if he was the one to blame, jigar looks at her and sees her smirking and notices she is up to something, and wonders what it is.

Next part to be continued.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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really nice continue ⭐️
Edited by fanbidaai - 14 years ago
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Rashi smirks and says : jiju aap ko yaad hai jab gopi ne shaadi kai 7 vow tor diye ? aur she even prmised she would leave the house for ur sake after kinjal marraige, aab daika aapke pyaar mein kya kya nai kya us bechari nai aur appne kya dya usko. Kinjal ki to bidaai ho gai, aur Gopi sasural chor kar kaha gai ho ge.

While everyone had their face on aehem if he was the one to blame, jigar looks at her and sees her smirking and notices she is up to something, and wonders what it is.

Chapter 2

Chirag calls up the police station, tellin inspector Daya that their daughter in law is missing, and ask if it is possible if they could find her. The men left the house except Jigar who wondering what Rashi is up to. As he goes past kinjals room which seems to be empty, hears a voice and over hears Rashi talking to Urmi about what they going to plan next as she already made a motive by making Aehem shouting at Gopi as she broke his laptop. Jigar , was listening to all this and was trying to peek through the door. He could not believe his ears what he had heard about Gopi, how she was treated before marriage. He didn't know what to do , as soon as he sees koki,

Jigar: kaki did u know all this, what rashi been up to?

Koki: ha dikra, I knew how she was since the day I found Gopi for Aehem and I was always against your marriage with her since day 1 but my son doesnt even like my choice, ab mein kya karo?

Jigar: phir aap ne mujko bataya kyun nai, mai to us sai shaadi nai karta.

Jigar breaks down, and doesn't knw what to do. Then he realizes all the tamaasha going in the house is all because of her, kinjal marriage also broke, and she was the one who spreaded to the society that she was pregnant.

Koki goes all emotional and goes to her room.

Rashi comes out, finding jiger was outside all in anger, ignores her and goes away.

Back to the drive, the Viranis was at the tea stall beside the airport and the hotel deciding what to do with Gopi. Gopi was in the car, still not out of shock as what happened to her 2 days before kinjals marriage as Aehem gave her a huge tight slap after she broke the laptop, thinking to herself "itna gusa sirf ek laptop ke liye"

Ansh and Damini comes back to the car and tells Gopi we are going home.

When they go home, they sat down and gopi narrates the whole story of how miserable she had been when she lost her parent, shifting to her mahmas house, and then after her marriage.

Gopi: are u definitely sure u 2 will educate me and change me so that Aehem stoned heart will melt.

Damini: I will insure u that whatever u want will happen but it will take at least 2 to 3 months

Gopi: I don't care how long it take as far as I know I have to get educated, I had enough of being called a gawar.

It has been 2 weeks since gopi has been missing, but there were still no reaction on Aehem face. It seems like he didn't care but he was hurt from the inside. But why he thought. "I better not be in love with that gawar "

Jigar knocks at aehems bedroom and asks if he could come in

Aehem: bolo jigar, koi kaam hai ?

Jigar: ha bhai, I wanted to tell u something,

Jigar begins to tell Urmi-Rashi tricks against the whole family especially Gopi and him.

Jigar: I had enough of that woman I wont be able to stand her one minute, I will be filling a divorce against her soon

Aehem: uski himat kaisi hoi, by ruining the family honour

Both brothers spent the whole night thinking how to bring Gopi back, jigar was amused to find tears in his brothers eyes and asks him

Jigar: bhai are u in love with '.?

Aehem: (silence) '. Ha I mean nahi. Nai I mean I don't knw

Jigar laughed and says: u don't knw huh, ur face is saying u love bhabhi

The next morning at 8:30 everyone was waiting for the inspector to come and tell them some news about Gopi and suddenly there was a knock on the door

Koki: Mani.

Mani: jee nani bhabhi

Koki : darwaza kholo

Mani opens the door and urmila was there with dhawal and Kinjal. Everyone was pleased to see Kinjal, who was changed soo much but she was soo angry.

Aehem and Jigar looked at each other who was boiling with anger seeing rashi and urmi hugging each other

Parag: daya gopi kai barai mein kuch maloom para?

Daya: nahi ek buri khabar mili hai,

Jigar: inspector Kaisi khabr?

Daya: I found out some finger prints and some news which is related to gopi, whatever happened in the past few weeks someone in this family is behind it. Urmi and rashi gets scared and get a fright while the inspector stares at them.

To be continued ( part 3 - HUGE ARGUMENT BETWEEN BROTHERS AGAINST URMI AND RASHI)

Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: fanbidaai

really nice continue ⭐️


thank you 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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am here, reading it now :)

Edit - just completed it. It is lovely and i am waiting for the dhamakas😉... i guess they are due in next 2 parts
Edited by upasana.diya - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: upasana.diya

am here, reading it now :)

Edit - just completed it. It is lovely and i am waiting for the dhamakas😉... i guess they are due in next 2 parts


Part 3 and 4 surely gnna be dhamakas when the truth will be revealled out to the whole family surely will post it tmz when I finish writing it xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ayesha! nice story and fast updates too! thank you very much. I am very intrigued by your story line. I have no idea who the new characters are but I hope they are nice people. I am tired of schemers and plotters. Keep the updates coming. Right now FFs are the only place where we see good stories and pleasant romance.
Edited by br2499 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oooh... the plot thickens. Loved it!
Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow great story! Cont soon babe!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ff dear
loved both the parts
gr8 concept
plz continue soon

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