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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mahakmev

interesting and osom dearr

thnku so much dear
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Posted: 14 years ago

HELLO GUYS

Love u all…im so relived to know ur fine with the flow of ths story….thnks aloot

Rplyd to u all….

N where is Tasfia???

Oki next part is up

Sumthings I wanna clear…

  1. dnt wait for MN wedding…it may cum like u didn't imagine…..n its nt cuming atleast for upcoming 4 parts
  2. past is up for sum updates

Luv ya

Fiza

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
CHAPTER: 5b
The went to a club 'a loud crowded place'.settling them on a far corner'away from people'view them dancing like insane'.she was waiting impatiently for him to open up'.she knew sumthing is inside him'.she knew him frm past 8 mths now but he never wants to talk abt all ths'but today he has agred'..

Mayank: do u know Vivek Sharam

Nupur: finding words between drinking her drink'.the famous industrialist'.who people say is involve in many other business'.

Maynk: yes'.many other wrong business''.after a pause'he is my father

Nupur: wht ..she almost shouted..

Mayank: yes he is my so called father

Nupur: mayank but it doesn't mater '.wht people say is nt always true'u know there r thousands of rumors abt it

Maynk: thy r nt rumors thy r true'remember the chool accident few days back'tht was my fathers master plan'to get the area'

Nupur: ur mom never tried to stop him

Mayank: he laughed faintly'..mom'I was four whn she died'so I didnt saw my real mom'dad got married after two yrs again'n I have a younger brother because of tht

Nupur: so thts y u don't live with them'step mother brother

Mayank: oye its nt a Cinderella story'.my mom n brother are the most loving people I can have in my life'..mom has no control over her husband'she cant argue'.he is mad'.

N sami..i mean smart is young'.n sumhow don't find these business non ethical'for him sab yeahi kerty hain'.

So I left the home'I don't want to live my life on black money..i ask mom to be with me but she is an Indian wife'laughed sarcastically'

Nupur: ofcorse he is her husband /'.how can she leave him

Mayank: husband'???..he even don't rember last time he lookd lovingly towards her'.he just want a k''forget it

Nupur: do u meet anty

Mayank: ya'evry tueday I meet her at mandir'n sumtime sami cums to hostel to meet me..or gave me my dads grant for his son..

The silence was all over '.she could'nt understand wht he is'..at one point he enjoys life at fullest..without any rules'.n on the other hand' he lives his life'struggle just for his principle'whtever it is but she cherish his frndship the most' a relation she is proud of'

Nupur: to break the silence'..acha bus'stop behaving like a Devdas'.v r here to celebrate ur victory dear 'right

Mayank: he smile at her'.true she is here support system'..chal last burn the dance floor'.com get up '.

He drag her to dace floor'.dancing n enjoying'celebrating there friendship'thy were having blast'true the don't need anybody except themselves around to have the bst of time'.

Nupur: chal aj have sum drink

Mayank: no way '. tali hony k bad meri izzaat kaun bachy ga'

Nupur: mayank'.ur so

Mayank: I m so wht'.wasy aj kal ur too in mood to have FUNNNN' laughed out loud

Nupur: very funny '.just shut up

The club was surrounded with claps n shouts'.

Nupur: no nt again'

Maynk: God'.phr koi stupid kisis ko propose ker rah hoga

Nupur: han aur '.ek mth bad phr ya tu devdas bana batha ho ga''yap hr kisi aur k sth hoga''

Th bth shared a high five

Mayank: whn people cant handle there relationship ''why they comit so ''achay khasay rishto ko mazak bana diya'..

Nupur: haay mera filmi hero'array she jumped with excitement'..

Mayank: kya ho'.Srk ko dkh liya kiya

Nupur: woh dkh'.yeah is ki frnd thin a'

Mayank: han right'.

M/N: yuck'pathetic

Boy: I have cherish u as my bst friend'u have been there throught thick n thin'u know me in n out 'even thn u have expectd me'stand with me'.always'..will u be mine for ever'.

The girls was in shocked n rush out of the club'every1 was sad'except the two in corner..who have ths disgusting expression on there faces'..

Mayank: how could he

Nupur: disgusting'.i mean how can he just imagine her like tht'

Mayank: ya'she would have trusted him so much n he'

Nupur: n he'had hai'.rishto mein milawat'I hate it

Mayank: me too'so disrespectful'..

Nupur: so ture'..is ko tu punishment milni chaiy

Mayank: agar mein is ki jaga hota tu tum kiya punish kerti

His question just came like tht'.but let her dumb struck '.she could'nt just imagine ths question even he didn't mean anything'.

Nupur: hmm'to live alone till death

Maynk: aur agar tumhain asa feel hota tu..

Nupur: tab bhi'saaz tu ek hi honi chaiy

Mayank: hmm'ya so fair'.dhokay ke yeah hi saza honi chaiy'..

Silence was there''..question n answer bth disturbed them '

Mayank: kya yaar'spoiled our night'chal ghar chalty hai..ur dad must b waiting

Nupur: ya right

He went to drop her home and went inside to meet her father

Mayank: hey uncle'.how r u

Dad: hey young man'.so party mean u won

Maynk: yes uncle I did'.n u wont belive I beat him in straight sets'gr8 na

Dad: so where is my part of treat

Mayank: oops sorry ..next time we'll have a men's night out ..how tht

Dad: sounds gud

Mayank: hain na 'n than we'll have loads of fun

He received a tight slap on head

Mayank: wht cant u just get out of ur definitions''

Uncle ap is ko kasay bardasht kertay hoo

Dada: jasay tum kertay hoo

Mayank: meri tu majbori hai

Dad: mein yeah kaho tu samhj bhi aata hai'tumhari tu choice hai

Mayank: kaha choice '..pehly din hi takra gai'galay par gai

Dad: acha tu chalo tumhari muskil asan kerta hoon'.vr going to delhi

He was siping coffe wch chocked'..

Mayan: wht uncle'kyun'array mein tu mazak ker raha tha'.ap ko yaha koi problem hai'tranfesr hoa hai tu mein rukh wa do ga'.

Nupur: han dad kyun'I don't wanna go

Dad: ek min'roller coaster ho tum dono'hum hamesha k lyan nhi'3 dino k lyan ja rhy hain

Mayank: ohh'.who was standing in excitement'jump back to sofa'.bs 3 din'mjhy laga jan chuti'.

Dad: tum dono na'.pagal ho

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update...
thnx for de pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hum jaise apki updte k liye wait karte hai- waise aap bhi humari comment k liye wait ki jiye





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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

HELLO GUYS

Love u all'im so relived to know ur fine with the flow of ths story'.thnks aloot

Rplyd to u all'.

N where is Tasfia???

Oki next part is up

Sumthings I wanna clear'

  1. dnt wait for MN wedding'it may cum like u didn't imagine'..n its nt cuming atleast for upcoming 4 parts
  2. past is up for sum updates

Luv ya

Fiza



Hmmmmmmm i knew it
u and mayur weeding dur dur tak koi rishta nehi hai

dekho jitna jaldi ho sake mayur shaadi karwa do- nehi tou main...........
yes my dear bilkul sahi samjha- kacchi kha jaongi.LOL

ok baba now coming to ur update------------

superb update MOM.LOL
so mayus father is not a good person. he is doing many wrong business and thats why mayu he doesnt spend his dad's money........


awwwwwwww i feel bad for maynk
loved mayu-nups convo

Fiza i thnk at later both of them fell in love for each other but they didnt express it. becoz they had the fear of rejection

anyway i also loved nups dad and mayu's convo

it was awesome update dear
lovelyyyyyyyyyy
keep it up
.






Faria. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

reserve karke bhaag gayi
jaldi unres karo
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice one dear.........😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
ah......pehle maine gussa utar liya hai.niche dekho.....ab mai ache se comment karungi😆
that was a blast.......cool update.....😃
the past is just too fab....i mean such a rocking jodi i tell u⭐️
mind blowing.....
hahaha nupur's dad is just rocking......😛
i am falling in love with this mayank😳......allah sabko aise mayank naseeb na karein.....sirf mere liye 😳😳
mayank's dad is a negative person..😲
how come i didnt guess that.........🤣
ok aaj ek guessing to banti hai...........plsssssssss🤣
ok suno😆....i think mayank's dad that that so called doctor is responsible for mayank's condition😆
yaar joote mat marna😳......pichla part pm nahi kiya mujhe to mera ek guess karna banta hai........its your punishment......
lost then......iska kya matlab tha..i mean nupur loved him😲😲😲........ha! kya pata fiza api kab kya kare....🤣

aur what was that MN ki shadi ke liye 4 parts wait karna hai😲......kyun?.....😒
arey mujhe mauka mile to mai kal hi shadi kar lun🤣🤣...aur inke pas mauka hai to tum inki shadi nahi karwa rahi ho.......kyun???????????????????🤣

now update soon
aur agar mujhe pm nahi kiya na to dekh lena.......
😈
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Edited by tasfia123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
first of all mujhe dhundo mat😡.......pichla part pm nahi kiya mujhe.......
ek to pm nahi kiya aur auch rahi ho where is tasfia......abhi dekha maine ki arey yea part to maine pada nahi......kaise padti apne pm thodi kiya mujhe....haan haan bhool jao mujhe aaj pm nahi kiya kal ea bhool jaogi ki tasfia naam ki koi hai.....😒

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