MAYUR FF...The Lost Magic. - Page 47

Cinderella I'm HERE😆, finally is sat down and read all the parts in one go. Actually when i started to read i didn't want to stop so i told everyone to not disturb me😳.

The transaction from a bitter marriage to a marriage that was filled with love was beautiful, the pace you showed the relationship go at was subtle yet i could connect it too it alot. A husband and wife who were so busy in their own lives forgetting the love that had once connected them to each other were at a phase were there was nothing but bitterness enriched in them, but slowly slowly you showed how they revived their old relationship again and brought back the love that was missing from their relations.It was not that the love had dissappeared, just they needed to remind themselves of what brought them together at first and then they'd realize it was "Love".

From their questioning of their relationship to their realizing of they needed in their lives...was an just an emotional ride that you penned down oustandingly. You connect to the readers through your words...you touched our emotions. And Cinderella that is a gift in itself being able to touch someones emotions and making them feel as the characters feel. You are magnificant👏👏👏👏 ALl Praises are less for you.

My most favorite part was their karwachauth, you wrote is beautifully and at that poin their relationship was at such a point that they either realize or regret all their lives. I love it.

Cinderella, again we are at the end of a magical journey, that you showed us through your words, I'm hoping you are planning to take us on another journey very soon because I'm ready. You are a brilliant Writer.

Love You Loads

Sajjal

I have edited the last 2 posts. Pls do write more