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Posted: 14 years ago
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our MSK getting slapped twice😲....that 2 by geet...i wonder wat cud be that he has done.......vry nice concept😊..thoda hatke se hai..sounds interesting.do update soon...😉
..n plzzz....add me to ur pm list.....

....zahra....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting...can u pls pm me?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very interesting preetu.....keep it up,,,,our handa in typical sunny deol's isshtyle- ye dhai killo ka hath jab kisi pe padta h to wo uthta nahi balki uth jata h....🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting concept... do continue.. plz add me to yr PM list...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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GEET slap MAAN😲........ tht too twice 😲 ............hai babaji ab geet ka kya hoga??........... great start.......... do PM me😃
Edited by komlika - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks you all.... I might sound a bit too dramatic with my approach... I would even want to add the PG rating for this FF but that will take sometime now... 😛
Thanks for your encouragement!😳 Will try my best to keepup to your expectations.... Criticism is very welcome! but no bashing please!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice intro.
do continue plz
add me to yr pm list
thx.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice concept .

add me to ur PM list

waiting for update

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 3
He is untamable...Really?
MSK walks out of the lobby to the area where his car is parked.

His looks send shivers down to the driver. With every step of MSK, driver moves backwards. MSK snatches the car key from the dirver and drives off from the airport giving a damn about the his guards and the driver who had been waiting for almost 3 hours for his arrival!


In comes the black Merc into the Khurana construction.


Khurana Construction is one of the wierdest place to work with. Per say the rules and regulations & Terms and Conditions would seem ridiculous to any outsider who is a Sane self.

MSK walks into KC with his boots sound echoing in every corner of K ignoring the morning wishes and the amused look on people's face and goes straight into his cabin. Just before he enters the cabin - Adi, into my cabin NOW..

Sasha's legs are just ready to give away seeing MSK shut the door on her face.

Sasha - How come Maan sir came in so early. He was supposed to have come to Delhi only an hour ago right? *tries to touch Tasha*

Adi who was dumbstruck with MSK's sudden arrival comes out of trance and runs to MSK's cabin.

Adi - Knocks MSK's cabin door - May i come in Maan Sir?

MSK - What are you waiting for? Diwali? Come in..

Adi - Yes Sir *gets into the cabin*

MSK Throws a camera film roll to Adi. and says - Photographs should be on my table in an hour and dare you try to see them!

Adi who after much of fumbling got the grip of the film roll - Yes Sir.. Shall i leave now?

MSK - I dont pay you to stare at me.. OUT!

Adi runs out of MSK's cabin and out of KC to his car...

After 59 minutes..

KC witnesses a black spectecled man with his shirt hair tie and almost everything about him messed up running into KC..

Sasha - Is that Adi's brother? *searches for Tasha*


Oh the man... The man was is indeed ADI!

Adi knocks MSK's cabin - Sir, may i come in?

MSK - Yes

Adi - Sir the photos. *hands him the cover*..

MSK without even lookin at the state Adi was in says - Ok Get out!

Adi comes out to find the whole staff giving him Wierd looks. He ruishes to the male restroom!

Adi self thought - Did god make anyone who can tame this man!

In his cabin MSK holds the cover and says - Geet Handa. Welcome to the world of MAAN SINGH KHURANA!😡

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Precap - "Are you straight?"😉

Edited by Preethi-Premi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey preethi
Awwwwwesome prt
Update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
N thanxxxxx fo d pm
Edited by tehzeeb25 - 14 years ago

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