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Preethi

@Preethi-Premi

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: --Shika--

oye preets....good start..!!👍🏼

it's a wonderful beginning indeed and i love the sarcasm of MSK in ur ff..

the two most sarcastic lines of msk i liked:

Adi - Knocks MSK's cabin door - May i come in Maan Sir?

MSK - What are you waiting for? Diwali? Come in..

Adi who after much of fumbling got the grip of the film roll - Yes Sir.. Shall i leave now?

MSK - I dont pay you to stare at me.. OUT!

very good start...precap sounds interesting😉...plz do continue soon!!

shika... re-read... you missed many other sarcasm dear! Love you! thanks a lot dear! More to come more to come!1😃😳

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kiran naryani

@kirannaryani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

wow that was really nice update can u plz add me in pm list ......😊

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-Sangs-

@-Sangs-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Wow....love Adi ..😆 Anyways..Preethi you have an amazing writing skill..keep up the good work...and update soon...Love You Preeths....

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komlika

@komlika

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#34

love it.........poor adi😆........sasha comments were so funny.....she called adi...his brother🤣..........babaji save geet .........thnks for update n PM

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puth

@puth

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#35

lovely update preethi....waiting to see what maan does to take revenge on geet handa😆😆😆

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roopali

@rsroopali

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

preethi tht was smthing god
start only with a slap
awesomeeeeeeee luved itttttttttt
update sooonnnnnnnn wt 2 see whr d slap takes geet

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princess_jyoti

@princess_jyoti

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Hey preethi it's rocking yaar 👍🏼...Loved it...

Do continue soon

thanks for PM

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sakadafi

@sakadafi

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Amazing start...really like your chapter titles. Please do add me to your PM list.

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Shreya

@..shreyaa..

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Lol
Loved the update haha
It was funny...
Awesomeeee
amazinggg part
Lol loved mask's line here🤣
MSK - What are you waiting for? Diwali? Come in..
Awhh poor adi..lolzz
shasha called him his bro..
Hahaha..
Continue soon
Precap looks hilarious..
ant cant wait for it
update soon
Thank u

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maanmishti

@maanmishti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#40

awesome ff..........loved maan he is so different......loved precap r u staright🤣 oh my god i cant stop laughing......plzzzz update soon and want longgggggggggggg update.......plzzzzz