Maneet - To Start with a SLAP Part 10/Page 49 8/24 - Page 3

Originally posted by: slovania

nice.....update soon preet...

Originally posted by: zahra15

😊vry nice preethi...amazing part....luvd that line.."is that adi's brother?"😆

.....it seems that msk is hell bent on ruining the life of geet handa.......

....precap is a bit funny..cnt figure out wat will happen.......

.........continue soon.......

....zahra....

oh my god...

the precap is hilarious.

plz do pm me when you update

Originally posted by: ursrithika

hiiiiiii dear... i did like the concept very well... 2 rivals wit equal strngth... wooooooooow nice....but 1 request... pls try to make ur updates longer ones..........

oye preets....good start..!!👍🏼

it's a wonderful beginning indeed and i love the sarcasm of MSK in ur ff..

the two most sarcastic lines of msk i liked:

Adi - Knocks MSK's cabin door - May i come in Maan Sir?

MSK - What are you waiting for? Diwali? Come in..

Adi who after much of fumbling got the grip of the film roll - Yes Sir.. Shall i leave now?

MSK - I dont pay you to stare at me.. OUT!

very good start...precap sounds interesting😉...plz do continue soon!!