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Posted: 14 years ago
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hie guys i am back with some more interesting poetry related to some scenes of angini
at divorce scene from anmol to ragini
sun liya hum ne faisla tera
r sun kar udas ho baithey
zehn chup chap ankh hali
jaise hum kainat kho baithey
in a scene when anmol was wondering abt the rain scene
yadein jab yad ati hain barishon ke mosam mein
ankhein bheeg jati hain barishon ke mosam mein
when anmol leaves the house because he was upset from ragini to amol standing in the rain waiting 4 anmol
hum to samjhey they ke bhula dein ge unko
kia hua aj phir ye kis baat per rona aaya
kis ke liye jeete hain r kis ke liye marte
uthe jo ye swaal to yer swaal pr rona aaya
anmol seeing ragini sleeping and remembering some wonderful moments with her
is dil ki har dhadkan ka ehsaas ho tum
tum kiya jano hmare liye kitne haas ho tum
ill continue with some more shayri on thi topic but now i am going its urgent see u tomorrow
;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;as i had promised the mystery breaks and guys my name is isha;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
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@isha...at last you reveal your name..
btw isha a beautiful name ...😊
well its amazing your post..love the shayrana andaaz for each scene of angini..
really lovely and so aptly penned down for each situation.
"is dil ki haar dhadkan ka ehsaas ho tum"
"tum kya jano hamare liye kitne kaas ho tum"...
these lines are so true ..we did witness his genuine feelings for ragini and how dear she was to him in his heart....
in the end he did say she was his life and how he loved her more than himself..
one more wonderful post and keep it up...👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Finally got to know your name !! Isha so have you been a silent member since never seen you post earlier and you seem to be a newbie..

I liked your shauyari whcih you are posting daily

I think you will be good in writing fac fiction also.. Do give it a shot,

anmol seeing ragini sleeping and remembering some wonderful moments with her
is dil ki har dhadkan ka ehsaas ho tum
tum kiya jano hmare liye kitne haas ho tum

I liked this sstanza you have put !!

Anmol ka dilhamesha bequraar tha apni Ragini kay liye !!

I wish they could have shown more of them in conversation about each others feelings
well the only hope is that this stoyr moves ahead further some tiem soon 😊

Please keep continuing !!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanti05

Finally got to know your name !! Isha so have you been a silent member since never seen you post earlier and you seem to be a newbie..

I liked your shauyari whcih you are posting daily

I think you will be good in writing fac fiction also.. Do give it a shot,

anmol seeing ragini sleeping and remembering some wonderful moments with her
is dil ki har dhadkan ka ehsaas ho tum
tum kiya jano hmare liye kitne haas ho tum
Please keep continuing !!
I liked this sstanza you have put !!

Anmol ka dilhamesha bequraar tha apni Ragini kay liye !!

I wish they could have shown more of them in conversation about each others feelings
well the only hope is that this stoyr moves ahead further some tiem soon 😊


actually it is really hard to make a separate verse 4 every situation but ill continue writing more
and also think to write an ff
also thanks 4 liking my name
Please keep continuing !!
Edited by anmol2 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very Well Done Pal! Made for Gr8 Reading...I cam imagine Anmol mouthing shayaris to his Ragini, while Ragini blushes...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Fantastic👏 👏 👏 👏,This was simply great Isha😃 👏 👏.Your Shayari's were so perfect for Angini😃,Write more.😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice to know about your name , Isha and I don't understand Shayari but it was amazing to watch and hear powerful Hindi words coming from Apurva's mouth, I was rather amazed and hoping we might find Anmol mouth shayaris to his beloved wife someday 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: krithikas

Fantastic👏 👏 👏 👏,This was simply great Isha😃 👏 👏.Your Shayari's were so perfect for Angini😃,Write more.😃

thanks thanks thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 2
this is a verse 4 when anmol dances with ragini and he became angry with him
shama kahe parvaane se door chala ja
meri tarha jal jaye ga paas nahi aa
(the flame says to moth go away from me.............whether u will burn like me)
when tammy knew everything about anmol and ranvir from anmol
choota jo is ka saath to duniya badal gayi
bichde jo is se goya qyaamat thi zindagi
(when losted him the world changed.............when separated from him the life become hell)
in the same episode when ragini hugs anmol he wiped her tears and then gear at him
ujaale apni yaadon ke hamare saath rehne do
najaane kis gali mein zindagi ki shaam ho jaye
(let the dazzling lights of ur memories with me..........not known when will be the last evening of my life)
when ragini for the very first time felt something 4 anmol and suddenly she saw anmol hugging to shivani
mujhe teri muhabbat ka sahara mil gaya hota
agar toofan nahi aata kinara mil gaya hota
(i should have got the support of ur love................should have got the edge if the storm hasnt came)
when anmol left the house as he was very upset and ragini waiting 4 him says
dil ki rahoon se guzro to ye jaan lo tum
kitni veeran hain ye rahein tumhare jaane ka baad
(if u pass from the paths of my herat ull know..................how these paths are ruined after u had left)
hope u guys also liked it😊 ill try to continue this topic soon😉
Edited by anmol2 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow Isha ,how can you write so well?😃 It's just too good👏 👏and thank you for the translated version.😃 🤗

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