KUCH PAL WITH ANGINI

isha

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Posted: 14 years ago

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hie guys i am back with some more interesting poetry related to some scenes of angini

at divorce scene from anmol to ragini

sun liya hum ne faisla tera

r sun kar udas ho baithey

zehn chup chap ankh hali

jaise hum kainat kho baithey

in a scene when anmol was wondering abt the rain scene

yadein jab yad ati hain barishon ke mosam mein

ankhein bheeg jati hain barishon ke mosam mein

when anmol leaves the house because he was upset from ragini to amol standing in the rain waiting 4 anmol

hum to samjhey they ke bhula dein ge unko

kia hua aj phir ye kis baat per rona aaya

kis ke liye jeete hain r kis ke liye marte

uthe jo ye swaal to yer swaal pr rona aaya

anmol seeing ragini sleeping and remembering some wonderful moments with her

is dil ki har dhadkan ka ehsaas ho tum

tum kiya jano hmare liye kitne haas ho tum

ill continue with some more shayri on thi topic but now i am going its urgent see u tomorrow

;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;as i had promised the mystery breaks and guys my name is isha;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;😉

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shanaya28

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Posted: 14 years ago

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@isha...at last you reveal your name..

btw isha a beautiful name ...😊

well its amazing your post..love the shayrana andaaz for each scene of angini..

really lovely and so aptly penned down for each situation.

"is dil ki haar dhadkan ka ehsaas ho tum"

"tum kya jano hamare liye kitne kaas ho tum"...

these lines are so true ..we did witness his genuine feelings for ragini and how dear she was to him in his heart....

in the end he did say she was his life and how he loved her more than himself..

one more wonderful post and keep it up...👍🏼

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Shanti

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Finally got to know your name !! Isha so have you been a silent member since never seen you post earlier and you seem to be a newbie..

I liked your shauyari whcih you are posting daily

I think you will be good in writing fac fiction also.. Do give it a shot,

anmol seeing ragini sleeping and remembering some wonderful moments with her

is dil ki har dhadkan ka ehsaas ho tum

tum kiya jano hmare liye kitne haas ho tum

I liked this sstanza you have put !!

Anmol ka dilhamesha bequraar tha apni Ragini kay liye !!

I wish they could have shown more of them in conversation about each others feelings
well the only hope is that this stoyr moves ahead further some tiem soon 😊

Please keep continuing !!

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isha

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: shanti05
Finally got to know your name !! Isha so have you been a silent member since never seen you post earlier and you seem to be a newbie..

I liked your shauyari whcih you are posting daily

I think you will be good in writing fac fiction also.. Do give it a shot,

anmol seeing ragini sleeping and remembering some wonderful moments with her

is dil ki har dhadkan ka ehsaas ho tum

tum kiya jano hmare liye kitne haas ho tum

Please keep continuing !!
I liked this sstanza you have put !!

Anmol ka dilhamesha bequraar tha apni Ragini kay liye !!

I wish they could have shown more of them in conversation about each others feelings
well the only hope is that this stoyr moves ahead further some tiem soon 😊

actually it is really hard to make a separate verse 4 every situation but ill continue writing more

and also think to write an ff

also thanks 4 liking my name
Please keep continuing !!

Edited by anmol2 - 14 years ago

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luv_sakshi

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Very Well Done Pal! Made for Gr8 Reading...I cam imagine Anmol mouthing shayaris to his Ragini, while Ragini blushes...

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krithika

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Fantastic👏 👏 👏 👏,This was simply great Isha😃 👏 👏.Your Shayari's were so perfect for Angini😃,Write more.😃

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Rekha

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Nice to know about your name , Isha and I don't understand Shayari but it was amazing to watch and hear powerful Hindi words coming from Apurva's mouth, I was rather amazed and hoping we might find Anmol mouth shayaris to his beloved wife someday 😍

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isha

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Posted: 14 years ago

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