U&I.....KABHI NAHI!!!!(AR short fanfic)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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😆hey guyyzz i had a new idea so wanted to post my ff.... u ppl must be thinkin that im mad to have left y old ff n bak wid a new 1... actually i have come online after like 2months... pls pls read the intro n see if u like it or not....
INTRO
this story is mainly about AR n it is based on the life of a group of students of XAVIERS INSTITUTE in mumbai....


in the canteen of xaviers institute Mumbai, two young boys are sitting while one is plaving with a basketball in his hand other is just looking at the entrance time and again'

1 guy:dude tell me 1 thing tu baar baar bahar kya dekh raha hai yaar'

2 guy: main! Nahi to armaan pagal hain kya kuh bhi bolta hai..😆😆😆

Ar: oh hello! Dekh chill yaar teri MUSKAAN CHADA jaldi hi aa jayegi.. smiles..😆

Ra: Armaaan!!! Tu pitega kitni baar bola hai sabke samne nahi' u no-

Suddenly a girl comes in full anger keeps down her books on the table'

Girl: I HATE history!!!!!! How damn boringgg!!! (keeps her head down)

Ar: oohhh! anjie gussa kam karo thoda u can break the table u no'

An: very funny!😡 (looks at him wid im-gonna-kill u looks)

Just then a girl comes from behind and sits down'

Girl: omg!!! U guyzz no wat????

Ar: ya I no history is very boring!!!

An:armaan mallik u r gonna hav it from me now'

Ra: stop it u 2' sapna wat happnd'

Sa: thnx rahul' arre u guyzz no wat??

Ar: no I don't know' ( he is in a full masti mood😆)

All glare at him'

Ar: oops sorry'

Sa: new admission guyzz!!!

Ar: wat? When? How? Is she a girl?⭐️

Sapna rolls her eyes'

Sa: yup!!! 2day infact she must be here'.

Rahul n anjie wernt intrestd'

Ar: sexy!!! Guyzz gtg badme milta hoo'

Ra: kaha jar aha hain??

Ar: humari new admission ka swagat karne'. He givs a wikd smile'😆

Ra: uff kabhi nahi sudhrega'

All of them leave to check out this new girl'.

In another corner' two girls & 1 boy are chattin and are suddenly broken by anoder boy'.

Boy:hey guyzz u no wat??? We r havin a new admission'

Girl1: so? Big deal' har saal hoti hain' pichle saal tum jaisa bojh diya tha ye saal koi naya bojh hoga'

Boy glared at her'.

Boy1: u no wat? Tumse to-

Girl2:uff band karo tum dono😆' idiots main to soch rahi hun ki ye nayi adm. Girl hain ya boy?(makes a thinkin face)

Boy2: girl hain.. meri 6th sense keh rahi hain ki girl hain'😆

Girl1: oh really atul!!😕 Givs a sarcastic smile'

At; haan yaar nikki sach, abhi muski bola na isse main sach bol raha hun..

Muskaan just rolls her eyes..

Ab: ab tum sach bol rahe hon ya nahi ye to humein jaake hi pata karna hoga'

All look at him n giv a grin' all leave then'

At the main entrance of the college'.

A fast racing motorbike comes and stops right in front of the stairs to get into the college''

Armaan witnesses this and goes to the person sittin on the bike'.

Ar: xcuse me! 😡Mr. this is a college not ur playground jaha tum itni rash driving karo'

just whenarmaan says all ths the person sittin on thebike takes off the helmet''.

Armaan is shocked to see that's it's a girl!!!!!!!😲


Girl: and u no wat mr. mere paas khd ki ankhen hain cheesein dekhne ke liye' n I can see that it's a college' aur main yaha ki student hun' ny problem???😆

Ar(he's shocked n angry): wat do u think ye college tumhare baap ka hain kya😆??? Baat karne ki tameez nahi hain kya???

Girl: oh hello! Khush kismet samjho apne aap ko jo abhi tak chanta nahi pita' how dare u go on my family mr.teacher'

Ar(fuming wid anger): chanta my foot!! Himat hain to haat laga ke dikhao'.

By now evry1 was seeing the tamasha' including armaan and muskaan's group'

*SlAP*


Evry1 shocked'. Because ARMAAN MALLIK ko kisi ne chnta mara'.😲

Ra: yeh ladki to gayi'

Mu:kya baat hain muft main entertainment👏' atul popcorn leke aana zara😆..

Atul actually goes to get some😆..

Girl: mili tasali' ki aur bhi kuch baki hain??

Armaan(he as completely lost it!) he pulls her off from the bike, holds both her hands behind her back in is about to kiss her😳😳'.

Ar(whisper's):main jo kar sakta hun vo shayad hi tum apni zindagi mein kabhi bhool pao'but main itna girahua nahi ho jo ladki ki izat na pehchan saku'

Girl: stop it!!! Pls😭.. she is almost about to cry'

Armaan suddenly feels a shiver down his spine & leaves her immediately'. He looks at her with surprised eyes😲 while she just walks away in her bike to the parking lot!!!😊😊


so guyzz this was the first part do let me no if i shud continue or not!!! pls pls pls press the like tab if u liked it... and ya luv you all..... n ya thnx jannat actuaaly found the pic on google!!!! hehehe!! luv u...

pg1-pt1 &2
pg2-pt 3 & 4
pg3-pt5 & 6
pg4- pt 7
pg5- pt 7b
pg 6-pt8
pg 7-pt 8b
pg8- pt8c
pg 9-pt 9
pg10 -pt 10
pg 11-pt 11
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Brilliant concept!
We all know who the girl would be!!! (shayad...)
cont soon.
Do add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice intro.
Cnt it.
Do pm me whn u update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome start....would love to read more....do add me to you pm list...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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gr8 start
cont soon
n plzz pm me
thanks
dhruvika
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART2
The girl goes off from there in her bike... her face still in shock...she couldn't get over wat just happened with her..while our mr.mallik was just there staring at the bike as it went... when suddenly he felt a hand on his shoulder..
ra: armaan...r u f9? mera matlab chal yaar locker room chalte hain vaise bhi i think-
ar(cutting him in b/w):chal..
anjie tries to talk to armaan but rahul stops her tells the girls that he'll tok 2 him and will join them l8er...
on the other hand...in the parking lot of the college..
the girl sees herself in the rearview mirror n starts tokin 2 herself:stupid,idiot,scoundral,monster teacher how dare he mujhe riddhima gupta ko haat lagane ki himat kaise hui uski...use to main-
she's cut off in b/w by muskaan who was wachin all this from behind...
mu:'nahi chodungi'....yahi kehne vaali thi na tum???
ridz looks at muski in a weird way...
ri:ha-haan..umm tum..
mu:main main hoon muskaan, muskaan chada.. tumhari nayi dost...
ridzz has a huge smile on her face...
ri:thnx muskaan im riddhima gupta.. she puts her hand forward.. but muskaan rolls her eyes and instead hugs her...
mu:i love you yaar kya mara us chachundar ke best friend ko...
ri:chachundar?
mu:haan...vo sab chod cum ill introduce u 2 my..oops sorry our gang..
ridzz smiles and nods and they both go from there..
when muskaan and riddhima ener the canteen, muski's gang is surprised to see muskaan with the girl and give each other whats-rong-wid-her looks...
muski cums to their table and says proudly,
mu:hey guyzz this is riddhima gupta our very new friend...
all look at muskaan surprised and then look at ridz... abhi-nikki in their minds"she's wearin torn jeans with a loose tee folded at the sleeves,chappals and not to forget has a nose piercing and dark kajal with a higgh pony...shit man she's like a total tomboy!!!"
all introduce themselves and start toking to riddhima to make her feel better...and surprisingle really enjoy their time with her and so does ridzz...
on the other hand.. armaan and rahul talk in the locker room about the incident..
ra:dude wats rong wid u??? ye tu kya karne vala tha...
ar: wat do u mean... main kuch nahi karne vala tha..
ra:oh really u wer about to kiss ridzie...
ar:ridzie? who's she? and how the hell do u no her?
ra:she's an old friend of mine..school friend..thats not the point..do u realize wat u did??
ar:god vo vo.. stupid creepy bike woman teri dost...urggh n i did not kiss her nether did i intend to..she's weird!!! meri bhi koi class hain yaar..
rahul rolled his eyes n said:okay... now chal anjie sapna faltu ki tension le rahe honge varna...
they both laugh n then go...
this was part 2...
thnx for ur precious comments guyzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice part
cont soon
thanx 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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HEY..JUST READ IT...
LOVED DA CONCEPT N PART!!!LOVED DA NEW RIDZI....
CONTINUE DEAR N PM ME ALSO WHEN U UPD8...
amoon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey nice part bt it was short.........
waiting 4 a long update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hiiii guyzzz luv u all... thnkx for the luvly comments & likes....... luv u all muahhh!!!!!😳 nd do keep likin n commentin..haha😆...
PART 3
riddhima and the gang really enjoyed... ridzie's company and soon ridzz became a part of dem...
ri:thnx guyzz..i really needed some support after 2day's "welcome" in the morning!
mu: shutup!!! kya yaar 1 to dost bolti hain upar se sorry...
ri: accha no sorry!!!! ab to man jao... nywayzz tum log mujhe college nai ghumao ge kya??? i no canteen tumhara fav. spot hoga bt guyzz i wana see oder things also in"india's best college"....
ni: ok baba but main atul aur ye abhimanyu tumhe company nai de payenge... we've got a class to attend(make a sad face)
ri: toh kya hua!!! chill yaar ab toh hum frendzz hain jab chahe saath mein kabhi aur chale jayenge...
mu: arre aise kaise.. main hun na main tujhe dikhaongi...
ri: muski i dont think-
mu: chup!! hum jayenge to jayenge..
now ridzz cudnt say a word so she just simply nodded...
they all leave for their respective work...
ridz and muskaan decide to go to the bb court as ridzz insisted and it was gettin late...she decided to see the other things later...
on the other hand,
anjie is waiting for ammy and rahul in the bb court...she's a bit worried...
she jumps when armaan comes and scres her from behind...
ar:hahaha.. are are baby darr gayi..
an:VERY FUNNY RMAAN MALLIK!!!!!!!!
ar: ii no...
ra:gosh stop it u 2..... anjie wer's sapna???
an: she's gone home.. anoder guy cumin 2 see her... so she decided 2 go early 2 make an alternativ plan...with amit!!!!!
ar(takin a bb shot):who's amit???
an: armaan wats rong wid u? amit.. childhud friend of sapna...
ar: oh her bf... grinnin
ra: god!!!!! a girl n a guy can be friends u no ammy...
ar: wen did i say they cant???? but if they just cant almost u no... stay widout each oder den dey arnt frends...
an: watever.. anywayz guyzz gotta go.. last class i hav to attend dis...
armaan rolled his eyes..
ar: anjie pls yaar mere-
an;notes bana dungi..bye.. she goes
ar:thnx babes..
ra;kab tak hum pe depend rahega yaar????
ar:huh?
ra: ntn chal ghar chaltein hain.. its gettin l8!
just then muski and ridzz enter the court...
mu: and this is our...chachundhar... TU!!!! he bhagu kya paap kara tha jo end of the day iski shakal dikh gayi..
rahul and armaan turn, armaan is angry,irritated and shocked to see ridzz..
rahul was happy to see ridz(and muski ofcourse)+irritated to hear muski call him names...
riddhima was hell shocked to see rahul there and happy to..+was angry to see him wid armaan..
ri:TUM!!!!! urggghh...😡
muskaan den realised dat AR wer face to face!!! muskaan started praying and rahul's eyes wer now wide...😆
ar:gosh! madam y dont u understand mai tumme interested nahi hun pls mera picha chod do😆...

ri: shutup! u stupid moron,jerk,idiot,fool,cheap a**hole,dog,pig,mad,crazy man witha useless head!!!! u gali ka gunda,weird😆-
ar,ra&mu:BAS!!!!😃
dey all wer hell shocked... firstly, a girl saying so many bad adjectives to ARMAAN MALLIK secondly... this girl shit in one breath how many bad words could she say...
ar: tumhe na gaaliyon ka school kholna chahiye...im sure kafi acha bussiness hoga...
ri:agar tum samne hoge na den paka se hoga!!!!
ar: lisen u-

ra: STOP IT!!!!
ridzz lukd at rahul and widin secs huggd him, muskaan armaan wer shocked to see her reaction!!!!!!!!
rahul hugged her back..
ra: hey basketball!!! dude vaisi ki vaisi hi hain no change in ms.riddhima gupta..
ri:ya and mr.badi..tumhara to naksha hi badal gaya hai...
ar:rahul i dont believe dis..
mu:neieder do i..
rahul and riddhima looked at each other.. and winked...

guyzz this was part3 pls leave ur valuable comments and likes😃 luv u all!!!!

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