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Simx

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Posted: 14 years ago

This is my first FF so i'd like to keep it short simple.

It starts of from 12 in the night. Its valentines day, naitik is sitting outside in the lawn. Where he hears some footsteps, he looks back and sees aksh standing there, fully dressed. He goes to her, looks into her eyes. Holds her hand and kisses it. Akshara starts looking here and there and is uncomfortable. Naitik takes out a payal from his pocket and puts it on aksharas feet and says "ye payal mujhe hamesha apse jorey rakhey gi, aur mujhe hamesha batayegi kay mera pyaar kahan hai". Having said that, he goes even more closer and tries to kiss her, she smiles and tries to go away. But he holds her hand and says,"nahin, akshara kabhi naitik se door nahin ja sakti, kabhi nahin. akshars hair come on her face due to the wind, she tries to remove them but naitik holds her hand and moves her hair. *a little eye-lock session*. Naitik lifts her p and takes her to the room, they look into each others eyes...

You can suggest any ways of making it better, please comment.

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Parrt1-page 1.

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Part3- page 2.

Part4- page 4.

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Part6- page 6.

Edited by Simx - 14 years ago

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shriya

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Posted: 14 years ago

ohh another 1 new FF😃 nyc start do cont..😊 like itt

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Divya

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Posted: 14 years ago

wow.....nyc part buddy

cont soon......PM nxt tym plz

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shilpa

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey its rly nice yaar...cntnue...😊

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agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 14 years ago

nyc yr continue soon n gudjob 👏

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Simx

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Posted: 14 years ago

Thanks alot guys. Thankyou for the appreciation. Heres the part2 link https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1584854#37902097

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Sameera Badar

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Posted: 14 years ago

NICE PART PLS CONTINUE...... NEXT PART SOON

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_vinita_

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Posted: 14 years ago

woow yaar i really liked it...👏👏

plz cont soon...

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..Akaisha..

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Posted: 14 years ago

owowow yaar nycc FF like ittt...naksh rockssssssss😳👏

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Simx

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Posted: 14 years ago

#10

Moving on..

Next morning, naitik's getting late for the office. He's in a hurry, akshara goes to him to put up the tie. He smiles and tries to kiss her on her nech, but she say "naitik kya kar rahey hein". "apni biwi se pyar" naitik says, and akshara smiles after that. Akshara says, "Acha jaye apko der ho rahi hai na, bye", and he leaves. In the evening they go to varsha's godh bharai. Akshara manages the work, shes explaining what to do to some worker where naitik at the back stands there and watches her/adores her with a smile on his face.😊 Later on, while the rasams are going on, akshara is standing there seeing varsha. Naitik comes from the back and says "apney maa baney key sapney dekh rahi ho"(p.s i wont be using and 'aap's'.) Akshara smiles and tries to move, while naitik says,"nahin akshara, aaj nahain" They look into each others eyes, and he holds her hand☺️. She closes her eyes and smiles. Akshara loks around dreamin' of herself goin' thorugh all of it....

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