Dmg-AR love. Short ff. PART 7 on PG 31.* 28/12/12*.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi frnds i am Anuj. Writer of love and respect and wants only love.
I just want to say tht from last 2 days i am thnkng to write a very short ff like 3 or 4 parts only.
I want to knew ur opinion wheter i write or not.
This story is start frm where whole sanjevani see sid and rid photos.
But only difference in ths is our whole favourite intern gang is there to support rid. PART- 1 PG- 2.
PART- 2. PG- 8.
PART- 3. PG- 11. PART- 4 PG - 12
PART- 5 PG - 20.
PART- 6 PG- 26
PART- 7 PG- 31Edited by AMMY12 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey Anuj
loved the concept
yeah you should write
we love to read it
pls post it
n yeah pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Is that even a thing to ask?
Gr8 idea and u pls cont soon...
And add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey
yaar this is a great part....
that was a part where the story got messed up.............
and i really wanna kill cv's 4 dat....
bt all is well that ends well...
bt hope u start the story soon...
n please add me to ur pm list.....

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Posted: 13 years ago
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heyy 
gr8 idea
plzz post it up soon 
n pm me 
thx
dhruvika
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey 
you should continue to write it
i really want to read the story especially since the whole gang is going to be in the story
continue soon
plz send me a pm when you update
thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanx for the support frnd.
And i will surely update first part today.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: AMMY12

thanx for the support frnd.
And i will surely update first part today.



yeyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
pls do pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey nice concept
cont soon
and plzzzzzz update ur both another ff also
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART1


A bike came and stop infront of sanjevani hospital. The guy take out his helmet and look towards the board of sanjevani. As he read it a beautiful smile appear on his face.
He is wearing Black jeans with plain white tshirt and slefless jacke ( the one whch he wear on his came back)
As he entered in sanjevani the song Aasmani rang ho start playing in back ground.
All the memories of his internshp start revolving infrnt of him. His first day, thn his frndshp with anjy, champ and sapna the way he f8 and irritate riddhima and the name he given to her Basket. And thn how he fell in love with her all the romance and the trouble whch they face. And finally the day he loose her.
As these memories is cmng back he start moving towards nurse station but he was cnfuse as he didnt see any wardboy or sister.
As he came near nurse station he see whole sanjevani is standing there and thn he see dr. Keerti is shouting on nurse and wardboy.
And thn he start searchng tht face who was his life, his everythng, his love.
But he didnt see her there and neither his frnds.
As he is searchng for her or for his frnds he see 2 boys and 2 girl in labcoat and one in nurse dress and another is just standng near them.
He undrstand tht they were new interns he smile thnkng abt their internshp days.
Till now nobody see him.
As he move near thm he listen sister saying somethng to dr. Keerti.
Sis- arre isme hamari kya galti he. Agar unhone ye sab karte hu sharam nai ai to hume bolte huye kyu aaye.
Kr- sister stella mind ur language.
Seeing all the scene Armaan undrstand tht the matter is serious. He move a little so tht he is now standing very near frm sister stella and the wordboy.
But as he is in crowd nobody see him clearly.
Sis- dr. Keerti me galat kya keh rai hu dr. Shashank ki beti dr. Riddhima ne aisa karte hue nai socha to ham bolte hue kyu soche.
As soon as Armaan listen Riddhima name he became attentive and thn wht he saw take away all his happiness.

His happy face became pale the eyes which is sinning with smile is became teary.
(The snaps were same whch is shown on dmg).
Snaps were lying on the floor. He see the snaps and his anger is having no control. The person whch is there with riddhima is standing infront of him with his head down.
He wantd to go and punch him hardly on his face because he have full trust on his love and his Riddhima. He knew she cant to do ths dirty thngs.
Sis- dr. Keerti me to ye kehti hu ki dr. Riddhima ko is hospital se nilakna chaiye. Kyu me sai bol rai hu na.
Wardboy- yes dr. Riddhima jaisi CHARACTERLESS.

But before say more Armaan punch him on his face. All eyes turn towards him. Those who knows him gasp and those who didnt knew him is confuse.

Dr. Keerti is just standing there with shocked face. She is not believing her eyes. As she look towards Armaan she see only Love and Trust for Riddhima. That at least there is someone who loves her and trust her madly.
Wardboy is lying on the floor with blood cmng out frm his mouth.
Sis- hey u tum kaun ho our usse kyu mara.
Armaan look towards her and thn towards keerti.
Her eyes were moist.
Ar- me jo bi hu apko Riddhima ke liye aisa nai bolna chaiye.
All were cnfused. As know body knews who he is excpt dr. Keerti.
Sis- maine galat kya bola he. Sach keh rai hu.
She pick one photo of sid and riddhima.
Sis- ye photo dekh rahe ho. Dekho our ab bolo me kya galat bol rai hu.
Armaan take tht snap and tore it infrnt of whole sanjevani.
Ar- ab ap kya bolengi.
Sister Stella look towards him with shckd face.
Sis- ye karne se sachai badal nai jaeegi. Dr. Riddhima ek characterless ladki he our bo is hospital me ab work nai karegi.
The wordboy who lying on floor also supported Stella.
Armaan look here and there and thn start moving towards nurse and take a paper and start writing somethng.
All others look towards him with confused face. As they didnt knew him and moreover he is f8ing for Riddhima.
Dr. Keerti undrstand that Armaan is going to do somethng big.
After 2 minutes Armaan come and gave 1 paper to Stella and another paper to wardboy. They take it.
Sis- wht is ths?
Ar- jada kuch nai ap dono suspend ho chuke he. So plz apdono apna apna saman pack kare and yah se chale jaye. Apke pass 30 min. He.
All look towards him with shckd face thnkng who he is.