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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome back to back updates.....part 82 was emotional...
but the next one was uber cute....maan in thinking mode
what will be the outcome....hopefully a desired one
waiting for more.....keep writing
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Awesome update..!!!
Glad that maan is the legal father now..!!
Aww maan is so sweet...!!!
but why is he worried???
cant wait for the next part...!!
please cont.soon..!!!
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lovely, n sweet part....
new side of Msk n very sweet geet
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just read ur ff...........resly nyc.........plz pm me the next part.......
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Mr. Know-it-all Singh Khurana, Dadima asked me to call her when the appointment was finished. And don't think that you are fooling anyone with your care-free attitude. Dadima told me how you called 15 minutes ago to ask how Priya was doing." Maan colored at being found out by his wife, causing Geet to laugh and grab his hand, saying, "Come on, Papa, let's go home


luved it Mr.Know it all😃
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Amazing updates! Maan is now legally Priya's father......great!
Why was Maan worried when Geet mentioned the doctors.....do continue soon.
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really loved tht maan is so protective about priya and geet
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Nothing Can Keep Us Apart


Part 84 - A new plan

Geet didn't know whether to be sad or angry. Stealing away a few minutes to herself while Priya was sleeping, she went to the garden in an attempt to calm down. The attempt was not working and after walking up and down for some time, she finally decided that she was angry with her stupid, gadha husband!

After finding out from the doctor that she was recovered enough from labor that physical relations with her husband posed no problem, Geet had felt embarrassed, nervous, but mostly excited. She had not expressed her love verbally to Maan, nor had he said anything to her, but she was sure that he felt the same love for her, that she felt for him. Having been reared in a very conservative family, she considered it to be Maan's responsibility to initiate their coming together, for which she waited anxiously.

But nothing happened. The day after Geet's appointment with the doctor, Priya came down with a cold. They followed the doctor's recommendations, but she didn't get better. When her fever spiked, Geet was terrified, and Maan insisted that they rush Priya to the hospital. The doctors found that along with her cold, she had developed an ear infection. While not life threatening and common among infants, it was important that they treat her symptoms, especially the fever.

Maan and Geet spent quite a few sleepless nights worrying over Priya. Maan refused to go into work, even when she started to improve. It wasn't until the doctor finally declared Priya 100% healthy, that Geet was able to persuade Maan to go back to the office, that too, after promising repeatedly that she would call him if there was any problem. It was only once he was gone that Geet realized they had been so preoccupied with Priya, that they hadn't taken any time for themselves.

She was too shy to come right out and say anything to Maan, but she tried to give him hints and be a little closer to him physically. When that had no impact, she concluded that maybe he was uncomfortable with physical expression in from of Priya. At least it seemed that way, when every time she came near him, he would shift his focus to Priya, speaking to her or holding her. Geet thought that maybe it was time to move their daughter to the nursery at night. She had started to sleep much longer stretches at night, and they had baby monitors, as well as the room being right next to theirs.

Maan put up a fuss at first, but eventually Geet won his agreement. It was a difficult adjustment for the new parents at first, but Priya had no troubles at all. The change worked out better than Geet imagined, except that her husband's behavior became stranger than before. As long as they were discussing anything other than themselves, everything was normal, but as soon as Geet tried to talk about their relationship or get close to him, he would change the topic or make some excuse to leave.

This morning Geet had come to the end of her patience. Making sure that she was awake when Maan went to do his morning exercise, she checked on Priya, took a quick shower, and then waited expectantly for her husband to come back to their room. Listening carefully at the bathroom door, when she heard Maan come in, she rushed out, and purposely collided with him. Out of reflex Maan's arms went around his wife, his arms touching bare skin and towel, just as his mind registered that it was Geet's wet hair that was plastered all over his face. With one arm still around Geet, the other reached up and moved her hair away from both their faces.

"I'm sorry," said Geet. "I thought you were still exercising."

Maan stared into Geet's eyes and felt himself begin to be mesmerized. He began to inch slightly closer, when he suddenly recollected himself and backed away. Stammering, he said, "I'll go check on Priya," and rushed out of the room.

Remembering that incident as she paced up and down the garden, Geet's anger continued to multiply. What was her husband doing? Why was he staying away from her? If he wasn't attracted to her, then what was she supposed to make of his behavior all those months before Priya was born? She hadn't imagined all those times he had come close to her, especially during Pari's marriage. Just remembering those times sent a shiver of desire down her spine.

Now her husband behaved as if he was a brahmachari. It made Geet so angry. It had been so hard for to gather her courage to wear that skimpy little towel in front of him. She had thought that he would at least give her a kiss or a hug. Instead, he ran away. Now what was she supposed to do?

Geet continued to pace up and down, unable to come out of her dilemma. She wished she could talk to someone, but she was too embarrassed to mention anything to Savitri, Devya, or Nandini. How did you tell an elder that your husband didn't want to come near you? Geet wished that she had a young married friend, but the only married girl she knew was Pari, and she didn't want that crazy girl to mess the situation up even more. That one person that she would go to for any problem was the person who WAS the problem.

It was in this condition that Vicky found Geet, when he came home from completing his college registration. Having only known Geet since a few days before Priya was born, he was surprised to see her so agitated. He was even more surprised to hear some of her words. "Ullu", "khotey", and "dusht danaav" were among some of the words he was able to hear in her rapid mumblings.

"Bhabi," asked Vicky cautiously, "is everything okay?"

"Vicky!" exclaimed Geet, holding her hand to her heart, as she turned around to face her devar. "You gave me a shock! Did everything go alright at the college?"

"Everything was fine, Bhabi, but don't try to divert my attention. I can tell something is bothering you. What is it?"

"No, nothing. There's nothing wrong."

"Really? I think you're not telling the truth and I should call Veerji."

"No!" cried Geet. "Don't call him. He's the problem!"

As soon as she said it out loud, Geet burst into tears. Vicky rushed over and did his best to calm her. He urged her to tell him the matter. She didn't want to at first, but Vicky was at his brotherly best, and soon got her to confess the entire problem. As Geet explained the whole thing, Vicky became more and more uncomfortable. When she angrily explained her plan of wearing only the towel and how it had flopped just that morning, Vicky complained about "too much information".

"See? I knew I shouldn't have told you anything. Just forget it." Geet started to march away, trying to wipe away her tears.

Vicky ran after her. "Bhabi, don't be like that. Please, Bhabi, I'm sorry. I want to help you."

"But what can you do, Vicky?"

"Well, maybe I can give you some suggestions. I have known Veerji longer than you, so maybe that will help. Did you tell him that you love him?"

"What?" asked Geet, shocked. "Of course not. I'm a girl, he's a boy. He should say it first."

"Bhabi, you mean to tell me that Veerji hasn't told you that he loves you, and neither have you told him the same? How did you both get married without one of you saying it? Why did you marry Veerji?"

"It was a confusing time. I'd just found out Dev was your brother and for awhile I thought Maan was involved. When I understood that he wasn't and he demanded that we marry, all I could think was that I wanted a family. I wasn't thinking about my feelings or what his might be."

Vicky shook his, and said disapprovingly, "You never should have agreed. Not without getting Veerji to admit his feelings." At Geet's confused look, Vicky explained, "Bhabi, boys have a terrible time expressing their feelings. If they can get their girl without having to say 'I love you', they'll jump at the chance. Veerji, is worse than most. Malika Mami and Damon Uncle did a number on him, to the point where he never wanted to hear love mentioned. That changed with you, Bhabi. Veerji loves you very much, even if he doesn't say it."

"If he loves me, how can he stay away from me? Maybe he doesn't find me attractive any more. Maybe he thinks I'm too fat. You know, I'm not quite as thin as I was before Priya was born. Do you think I'm attractive, or am I too fat?"

Vicky blanched at that question. What man wanted to think of his bhabi in that way? It was like considering the attractiveness of his sister. He decided to side-step the question, and deal with the underlying issue behind it.

"Bhabi, Veerji doesn't think you're fat, I'm sure of it. He loves you. Look, I'll prove it to you. I once asked Veerji who he would save first from being run over by a car, you or Nani. He didn't even have to think, he just said your name immediately. When I used to ask that question about Sameera di, he always answered Nani. This proves that your more important to him than Nani, which can only mean that he loves you more than his life."

"Sameera?" asked Geet, feeling strange to hear an unfamiliar name linked with Maan.

"You know. Veerji's fiance."

"FIANCE?" Geet's mouth dropped open, and she crossed her arms angrily. "What fiance?"

"Uh...." Vicky tried to figure out a way to salvage the situation, having realized too late that Geet didn't know anything about Sameera.

"Vicky," she said sternly, "Tell me who this Sameera is. Now!"

"Bhabi," sighed Vicky. "She's no one that you need to worry about. When Nana had a heart attack 8 years ago, and we knew that he wasn't going to survive, he asked Veerji to do two things. Look after the business, and marry his friend's granddaughter. That was Sameera di. She and Veerji only agreed to the engagement for the families. Before that they had barely talked to each other. After that Veerji had to balance college and helping Nani and Gauresh Uncle with the business. When Veerji was 20, Gauresh Uncle passed away, and it was discovered that a friend of his and Nana's had sold them a lot of inferior materials. There was a huge scandal and Khurana Constructions nearly went bankrupt. During this difficult time, Sameera di eloped with a boy from her college. The media made a big issue out of Veerji's fiance ditching him for someone else when he was having money troubles. A lot of people said that it was good that she was looking out for herself, that Veerji didn't have the capability of saving the business."

Geet had her hands to her mouth in shock at the tale Vicky told. "How could she do that to Maan?"

"Bhabi, you have to understand something. Sameera di and Veerji weren't in love. They weren't even friends, just barely acquaintances. They would see each other a few times a month, but otherwise, they had no contact. Sameera di fell in love with this neighbor guy who went to her college and they wanted to get married. Di was afraid the families wouldn't accept it, so they eloped. All this happened before the business scandal, it just happened that the families found out about it afterwards, making it seem like Sameera di ditched Veerji because of the money. She tried to explain everything to Veerji, but you know what he's like when he's angry. He wouldn't listen to anything she had to say. His opinion of women was never very high, but after that, he vowed never to trust another woman or to ever get married."

Geet didn't know how to take all these revelations, and sat down heavily on a bench. Vicky sat down beside her and said, "Bhabi, don't you see how this proves Veerji loves you? He never would have married you otherwise. He's changed completely, only because of you."

"If that's true, why is he pulling away? Why doesn't he tell me how he feels?"

"He's probably scared of something, and frankly, he hasn't had that great of a track record with women who are supposed to care for him. The only way he will confess is if we put him in a situation where he has too."

"Vicky, what do you mean? Don't be thinking of doing anything dangerous!"

"Dangerous! Oh, Bhabi, that's not what I meant. We need a plan, a very good plan and a good script. Can you cry on cue?"

"Cry on cue?"

"You know, fake cry, pretend tears, that kind of thing."

"I guess so."

"Great! That's a definite must for the script."

"Vicky, this isn't one of your plays."

"Shh! I'm thinking. We'll need a romantic atmosphere, and some sort of excuse. It's not your anniversary, so that won't work. Bhabi is your birthday sometime soon?"

"Actually, it was the week before Priya was born. I didn't remember until just now when you asked."

"Did Veerji do anything to celebrate it, or wish you?" Geet shook her head no. "I can't believe it. Veerji never forgets things like that."

Geet was quick to defend her husband. "It was a stressful time, even I forgot."

"Don't get upset, Bhabi. It's actually a perfect excuse. I'll probably need some help with the romantic stuff. M's good with things like that. I think I'll give her a call."

"M?"

"You know, M. My friend. I told you about her, didn't I?"

Geet looked at Vicky blankly, before asking, "Why do you call her M?"

"Her real name is Meera. Meera, Sameera, do you see? She moved here right after the whole elopement debacle, and the first time Veerji heard her name, he went through the roof. I started calling her M after that, and it's just become a habit. I suppose I could stop now, since I don't think that Veerji thinks about Sameera di any more."

"Vicky," said Geet sternly, "I don't want you to mention that woman's name again!"

"Who? You mean, Sa..."

Geet held up her finger, giving Vicky a warning look that reminded him all to much of his eldest brother. "Bhabi, there's no need for you to be jealous. I'm telling you that Veerji doesn't care a thing for her." With Geet's continued angry glare, Vicky conceded. "Fine. I won't mention anything. But I'm still going to give M a call. She's really smart and cool. She's the perfect person to help us."



Precap:
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And Thanks Goes To:

Nothing this time.

Who Got There First:

Nothing this time.

Edited by laxmi2010 - 14 years ago
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Nothing Can Keep Us Apart


Part 85 - What else am I to think?

Geet walked into the hallway, wearing the beautiful red saree that Pari had chosen for her, to see Vicky and Meera lighting the last of the candles that they had set up as part of Vicky's plan. She moved over to them slowly, feeling uneasy about what she was about to do. They both smiled when they saw Geet, and Vicky came to give her an encouraging hug.

"Are you ready, Bhabi? It's almost time for the show to start. How is my darling little niece doing?"

"She's fine. I just put her to bed, so she should be alright for a few hours. Vicky, was it really necessary to send Nakul with a message for me to meet Maan?"

"Of course it was, Bhabi. Veerji is very smart. We have to take care of every detail, or he'll figure out that something is fishy. The plan won't work unless he thinks I set up everything on my own."

Vicky took a piece of paper from his pocket and gave it to Geet, saying, "Here is my letter to Veerji. Make sure that you look like you're reading it when he comes, and don't forget to hide behind your back. That..."

"Vicky, I remember everything that you told me. I'm just not sure if all this is going to work."

"Trust me, Bhabi, it will work. Now, Veerji should be coming any minute, so M and I need to leave. Good luck, Bhabi."

Vicky and Meera left, leaving Geet to feel very nervous and alone. To distract herself, she decided to see what Vicky had written in Maan's "note".

Veerji,
I'm sorry if you think this is presumptuous, but you seriously need help. I've noticed that Bhabi has been looking upset for weeks, and when I found out that you forgot her birthday, I just couldn't believe it. What kind of husband are you?
I've set the whole place up to be very romantic, and given Bhabi a message to meet you. It seems like you barely spend any time with Bhabi any more, and I don't think I'm the only one to notice. Don't mess up this opportunity to spend some quality time with your wife.
Your brother,
Vicky

Geet marveled at how convincing Vicky had made the note, and was so engrossed in its contents, that she was shocked when Maan finally came striding into the room, calling Vicky's name. Geet couldn't help but look at him with a mixture of fear and nervousness. The time had come to put Vicky's plan into action.

As Maan emerged from the shadows, his eyes seemed to burn into Geet's. Unable to take the intensity of the stare, she lowered her eyes. Somehow, she remembered to hide the note behind her back, as she started to move towards her husband.

Maan came closer to Geet, moving like a panther stalking its prey. He couldn't stop himself from being mesmerized by her beauty. He hadn't seen her with her hair open, or wearing saree, since before Priya's birth. She looked gorgeous, and he felt himself falling into her eyes, those luminous eyes that held a thousand different emotions.

Eventually Maan moved his gaze down from her face, and noticed she was holding one hand behind her. He questioned her about it, and wasn't surprised when she denied. However, he knew she was hiding something, and was determined to find out what it was. He captured her hand and brought it forward, eventually wrestling a piece of paper out of her hands. He saw that it had his name on it, and opened it to see the familiar handwriting of his brother.

While Maan quickly read the note, Geet ran away. As soon as he was finished, he ran after her, thankful that the ran had stopped her from leaving completely. He didn't know that so far it was all going as planned, and that Geet had no real intention of leaving. All Maan knew was that Geet seemed upset, and he thought after reading the letter that he knew the reason.

"Geet," said Maan, as he turned her to look at him. "Why are you upset? If it's because of what Vicky wrote in the note about your birthday, I'm sorry. I didn't mean to forget."

"Maan, I don't care about that," said Geet tearfully.

"You don't?" questioned a confused Maan.

"No! Even I forgot about my birthday. Do you know, I was so happy when I got the message to meet you here. I thought, 'finally he wants to spend some time, just with me'. Then I get here and see that note. I find out that it wasn't you at all, it was Vicky. The worst part is that he realized the same thing that I did, that you don't want to be with me any more. Maybe you never did."

"Geet, what are you talking about?"

"Don't deny it. I've noticed how you go out of your way to avoid me. You can't even stand to touch me. The only time you interact with me now is if it is regarding Priya. This just proves what I've been afraid of, what everyone else has probably understood now. That you married me only because you felt sorry for me, due to what your brother had done. Well, I'll tell you the same thing I told Dadima. I don't need someone to marry me because of support or society, and especially not out of pity!"

After speaking such heartrending words, Geet rushed past Maan, back into the midst of the candlelight. Maan, unable to contain his frustration, banged his hand against the wall, trying to make sense of everything that Geet had said. Her parting words echoed over and over in his mind, propelling him to rush after her.

Though it was all part of the plan, much of what Geet had said to Maan sprang from her hidden fears regarding their relationship. The upset she felt was quite genuine, especially when she considered that this whole thing might not work out like Vicky thought it would. She was almost about to give up on the whole thing and leave, when she felt her pallu being pulled. She knew instantly who it was, and her heartbeat quickened in anticipation of what would happen next. She could feel him drawing closer. His touch on her shoulder was feather light, as he adjusted her pallu so that it covered her more fully. His other hand draped the end of the pallu over her exposed arm, before it stole seductively down her front to rest on her stomach.

"You think I married you out of pity? Because I felt responsible for Dev's actions?" Pulling her roughly towards himself, so that her back rested right against his chest, he continued, "You think that I took care of you, protected you, fought for you, because I felt sorry for you? This is what you think of our relationship? This is what you think of me?"

"What else am I to think when you behave like you have the last few weeks? If you didn't marry me out of pity, then why? Why did you marry me?"

When Maan didn't answer right away, Geet pressed harder with her questioning, determined to make him answer her. "Kyun? Jawab dijiye. Kyun?"

Tears poured down Geet's cheeks, which put Maan over the edge. Unable to contain himself any longer, he pulled Geet around to face him, saying emotionally, "Kyunki, mein tumse pyaar karta hoon. Bahut pyaar karta hoon mein tumse!" Pulling Geet to him sharply, Maan reached forward and captured her open lips with his, expressing all his pent up desire and frustration that had been building from even before they were married.

Maan felt the conflict within himself, between his inclination to continue the pleasant onslaught of his lips on Geet's, and his need to finish expressing his feelings verbally. Verbal expression won, and he pulled back slightly, the sweet taste of his wife's mouth still lingering on his own. Gazing into Geet's surprised face, he questioned, "How could you not know how much I love you? Haven't I shown my love in everything I've done for you? Don't you know that you are my world, Geet?"

Maan was saying everything that Geet had been longing to hear, and in the most beautiful words. It was so wonderful, that Geet couldn't quite take it all in. Turning a bit away from Maan, she lifted her fingers to her mouth, running them lightly over the lips that had just been kissed passionately by her own husband. The whole, wonderful experience kept replaying in Geet's mind, preventing her from forming any rational thought.

Maan was unsure how to take Geet's silence. He had just expressed his inner most feelings in the clearest way possible, and then she turned away from him. He couldn't tell if she was pleased with what he said, or if it had upset her more.

"Geet," said Maan softly, putting his hand lightly on her shoulder, and turning her to look at him. The emotions he could see clearly in her eyes removed all his doubts. Words were no longer necessary. Eyes are said to be windows to the soul, and they were just that for Maan and Geet. Everything that needed to be said was said by looking into the other's eyes.

Maan bent down, putting his arms around Geet, as she simultaneously slid her arm up over his chest and around his shoulders. Maan picked Geet up effortlessly, like she weighed nothing, and began walking slowly, securely holding her close to him.

Geet wrapped her arms more firmly around Maan, unable to look away from his hypnotic gaze. She had never felt more content in her life. This was what she wanted, to be held by the man she loved, with no more difficulties or misunderstandings between them.

They were so engrossed in each other that they had no idea if any of the family or staff saw them. Neither did they realize that Maan was slowly making his way back to their room. The only thing that Geet and Maan knew was that they were the only two people in the world at that moment.

When they come to the door of their room, Geet let go of Maan with one of her hands just long enough to open the door. When they were inside their room and the door was shut, Geet's hand once again moved to circle Maan's neck, bringing her face even closer to his. It wasn't clear which of them closed that final distance, but once again their lips were touching, tasting, exploring. Maan pressed Geet closer to himself, while Geet's fingers unconsciously made their way into Maan's hair, all the while the silent action of their lips expressing so much more than their words ever could.


Precap:
No Precap, a very special Maaneet VM instead. Please click and enjoy.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rwqtyDwmBUU[/YOUTUBE]

And Thanks Goes To:

Romantic moments/Geet in red saree - Aug. 25 & 26 episodes

Who Got There First:

Maan says ILU to Geet - Me!

Maaneet kiss - Me!

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So, I spent hours and hours trying to get Youtube to accept my VM without giving it an audio sync problem, but all to no avail. I will try some other things to see if I can't get Youtube to have a good copy, but until then, we're stuck with Tinypic. Stupid Youtube!

Edit: Youtube is still stupid, but at least after going through a lot of trouble I was finally able to get the video uploaded properly.

Edited by laxmi2010 - 14 years ago

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