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Posted: 14 years ago

~deewangi~
part 11

Still hitting on the door. She held hid hand & kissed his hand nahi ho sakti
He very slowly placed his lips on her head the touch was so delicate not to hurt her lump.
a very slight brush of his lips on her head. She hugged him tightly. That was the first time
he ever expressed anything in his gesture that he cared.
tears rolled down his eyes seeing her care for him. she didn't notice the tears in his eyes
he wiped it before she realized it. geet called for nakul to get some bandage for maan
nakul - aap dono kya karte rahte ho, you both should learn to take care of each other
not hurt each other, jagdna teehk hain lekin aise chot lagna teehk nahi
he was cribing seeing maans hand bleeding so badly
geet immediately - hum nahi jagad rahe the, woh tho main gir gaye tho sur pe lag gaya
aur inka haat galti door main lag gaya se
nakul smiled at her innocense.
maan just showed his hand for applyng the medicne. she was jumping in pain
detol nahi lagna burn hoga....aaaaa...she closed her eyes
maan smiled looking away. she slowly opened one eye & saw maans face he was smiling
looking at her get so worried & scared.
geet making worried face - aap ko jalan nahi ho rahi ?
he noded smilingly a NO
she still couldn't smile.

A week latter mid July
there was the hype about school vice-captian selection. Principal suggested maan & pari names
maan was least interested. Pari hated even sight of his especially after what guys spoke
about both of them. Anji & pari planned how to go about winning the votes.
guys votes were sure for her but girls she had to work on.
even the 12th guys where very interested in her if not her, anjali.
maan had no such plans. he did concentrate in his studies. he knew if he had to be in the
school then it was marks they need. And now geet expects a lot better than what he did
last time. He waited for geet for lunch. she came running & hugged him.
she looked happy & thrilled. she had some chart papers & sketch pens.
she danced around him jumping in joy - you will be the vice-captain
yes !! yes!! maza aayega!!!!
maan murmured how on earth she has all the information, aab vice captian nahi bana tho upset
hojayegi, kya karon main is deewani ka
geet - pata hain I was the school captain for junior section when I was in 5th Std.
I am so excited for you, yeh dehko main ne aapke liya chart bhi banaya hain
she wrote VOTE FOR MAAN SINGH KHURANA... PRIDE OF DPS
she had got a write ups from the news papers cut & photo copied, looked like she had been
on it for last 2 periods.
maan - tumne phir class bunk kiya?
geet - woh last class waise bhi boring se thi, aap yeh dehko na
he couldn't refuse her for anything. she stuck the cuttings on the chart
dehko 6th & 7th ka sare students sirf aapko vote denge,
maan had no idea what made her say that...
arrey baba main kahon ghi na..I was there captain in 5th right..so they will
listen to me only. aab 8-12th aapko manage karna hoga.
maan murmured challo at least I will get some votes itni bhi buri tharahse nahi haroon ga
geet - aap sun rahe ho na
he snapped out - umm
geet - mujhe nahi pata u have to be the vice-captin. only you..kissed him on his cheeks
meri ridz se sharat lagi hain.
next few days geet spoke to all the 6th & 7th section students
pari & anji with few guys went to all the classes & tried attracting them with her charm
sweet talks. maan never bothered about any thing. it was lunch break
geet cried & came to maan. he yelled - STOP CRYING, I HATE UR TEARS
she twisted her nose & kept weeping
he clucted his fist & looked at her in anger
geet - woh ridz was saying u will not win the election
maan - tho
he felt aacha hain better she finishes her fantacy now
geet - I want you to win the election
he kept quite. she looked into his eyes with her mosit eyes. you are not saying anything
because you are sure you will win right. teehk hain main bhi nahi cry karongi
I love you, you are the best.
maan rubbed his temple. He defintly couldn't let her down. He thought for a while.
he just had 3 days in hand to win his votes. he sat there for a while working out his options.
he was alone, he had to go & represent himself, establish himself to every student.
he started with 8th, 9th & 10th. that was not so difficult he had to just
flash himself with his achivements in 10th. girls where already drooling over him
his sharp wit & sincerity impressed every one. he just said I can only promise to be
a loyal vice-captain nothing more. I cannot be your true friend or anything more than
a vice-captain. his admitting him limitation was appleaing.
tuff part was facing 11th & 12th. he first went to 12th std.
sernior guys wooed him they were already for pari, as she was really attractive
he stood there for 15mins from them to finish with their teasing. he was not shaken
nor was he effected by their wooing. after they settled, he addressed them with
all due respect. Girls were already impressed with his looks now him being
so sophisticated & respectful to them was perfect.
11th other sections he managed. now his class, all of them knew he was silent
actually can'nt be a vice-captian with such qualities. his class mates knew
him & his introvert nature. he walked into the class when pari was giving a speech for
herself. all of them clapped for her.
pari - you definitly don't want him to represent you.
that was it
maan just walked upto face the classmates stood next to her
well please don't vote for me, vote for her she will better represent you. typical you
every one was dumb stuck even pari.
maan - mean, cunning, selfish, arrogant getting her way out flattering teachers
guy1 - what do you mean
maan - I mean every word what I said
pari - kya matlab hain tumhara main mean hoon bolo,repeat what you said pushing his shoulder
maan turned her hand held it real hard - Maan Singh khurana doesn't have to repeat himself
pushes her away & walks back to his seat.
every one was shocked to see him being so different & strong actually
someone who could say the truth on your face
anji kind of impressed even though pari was her best friend but she smiled inwardly
& looked away. few guys liked his dare, paris die hard fans protested
maan cared a dam. girls were already dreaming about his 6 packs now his
confrontation to truth, comparing them to mean pari was difficult to accept

2 days passed election day. pari was confident.
morning prayers the school captian announced of the election to be held. teacher told them
about the code of conduct. maans eyes skimmed the crowd looking for her. she giggled
& waved at him. it was the first time maan ever stood infront of the whole school
he looked superconfident after his eyes met hers. both were to give their respective speech
she gave a very polished speech making all the promises.
maans speech was confident & filled with attitude. Didn't make any promises.
pari was sure that she will win because she sounded too rosy
forgetting that maans was filled with reality.
after the election the counting was on. geet met maan for lunch.
she had got halwa. he wondered sweet.
geet - party time
he smiled
geet - mama ko kal raat se bolke raka tha maine aaj halwa hi chahiyen
maan - what if I don't win?
her faced changed totaly
he had never seen such a sudden change of expression on her face
geet - Maan Singh Khurana can never lose!!!! samjhe!!!
maan - khana khaa lo
she turned her face..ok...baba...Maan Singh Khurana can never lose
wondering he has already lost himself totally to her.
she smiled & ate his tiffin

teachers annonced the result & it was real let down for pari
she got only 50 odd votes rest of the 2500 odd voted for Maan
it was insulting & humilating. even her own classmates didn't stand by her.
she was embarressed and her hatredness just seem to increase.
like maan cared. all he cared was the delight in her eyes.
she was happiest. she took him to the ice-cream parlour & treated him
chocolate ice-cream. god knows how many times she kissed him
hugged him, jumped in joy. teased ridz for losing the bet.

PRECAP
birthday!!!(on special request from annu)

Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
After a long time, I have got to reserve the first post after the update. I am happy just like Geet is happy on Maan being the Vice Captain😳
What a lovely update!
Geet is so adorable, she is too cute.
She loves Maan madly. I love the confidence she has in him, the way she works for him bunking her own classes, the sweet little gestures-making chart, getting halwa for him-everything is so sweet. She is naive and innocent!
Maan had enclosed himself in a hard shell but Geet is changing him. He is breaking the hard shell layer by layer for his Geet. He wants to see her happy and can go for any limits for her!
Pari-seems like she's gonna bring problems in future specially after losing with such a huge difference!
I love this FF a lot, not for Maan but for geet. She's so sweet and innocent. Her love is pure, serene!
Muskan-
Edited by shivangi783 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey looks like I'm one of the first to comment. Thanks for the lovely update. Just one small request: whatever you do please, please DO NOT bring anyone between them. Please let their love only increase and even if - in the WORST case scenario- you seperate them for any length of time, please dont let them fall out of love, think they love someone else or doubt the other's love. Almost all ffs start with great love which gets lost or tarnished on the way. I really really want to read a love story where the lovers remain true to each other till the end. After reading this ff I have feeling this might be it. Do you think you would do it? I sorry if I spoke tom much.
Edited by Jador - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wat should i say.......... it ws not only awesome...........
ok i m res. this . i need time to commnt..........
Edited by MaanEET_FAN - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow.....loved it....πŸ‘


Maan singh khurana ka yahi attitude to deewaana kr deta hai....😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update!!!! muskaan
will wait for next!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi....
u r just fantastic!!
gr8 update as always
maan is just smart for he knowns wat he has to do nd talk, loved geet's confidence nd trust in him
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
maan turned her hand held it real hard - Maan Singh khurana doesn't have to repeat himself
First time Maan said his full name. party time.

Awasome Episode,

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U R Rocking with your FF's
Loved it.
Really MSK is the besttttttttttt
Our Maaneet is besttttttttttttt
Edited by vrsharma - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome awesome awesome update!
loved it loadzzz!
maan became d vice captain!
yay! party! πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³yipeeeee!
loved it loadzzzz!
n he did juz for geet...he wasn't even interested otherwise
n i loved his attitude n geet's confidence in him....lovely!
n pari only got 50 votes while maan got 2500 votes!
hahahahahaha apri lost! yay!
m soooo happy about tat! πŸ˜ƒ
d way he gave all his specehes n stuff..amazing
his speech wz realistic unlike pari's
even anji wz impressed by maan...
nice!
n now birthday!??!kiska??
loved d update!
update soon!

love
Navpreet
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awe so now it's geets deewangi how she can't see her maan loose and she did all she can for him to win buy also maans where he won only for her happiness and to see the smile on her face it's just too swee and innocent their lovefo each other anyways great update as always and do continue soon 😊

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