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Posted: 14 years ago
muskaan, waiting for ur update
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u never comment on my comment :(......but luved ur story line....really love innocent geet ...nd the way maans falling fr her ....i want maan 2 be xpressive now ..kab tak hell give her silent trauma ......heere ki pehchaan tu jauhar ko hi hoti hai ...this is the most famous saying in india...so geet knows maan is a gem ....lol .....
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~deewangi~
part 10

They shared their lunch. She kissed him & went to her class.
When he went back to his class, every one spoke about him & pari's fight.
She really tried to outsmart him by answering all the questions in the class becoming the class monitor. She became mean to him by complaining about him unnecessarily to the teachers.
Pari - maam he is talking a lot in the class
Teacher gave a warning to maan & asked him to stand out. He walked out & just decided to
go to see geet class. He peeped in from the side of the window. She was making some notes & giggling with her friends. She suddenly turned out & noticed him looking at her. She smiled & next he saw was she did a mischief & thrown out of the class. She came out with her chocolate.
Geet - challo chocolate khaa the hain
Maan - tumne jaan ki naughty ki na class main
She smiled - aap bhar ho tho mera class main man kaise lage ga
They both sat near the water cooler & shared the chocolate.
Pari came out to have water & saw him there. He ignored her & geet looked at pari & then him
Pari - aab dehkna tumhe har rooz aise hi class se bahar nikalvaongi
Geet definitely hated that she crushed the melted chocolate in hands. She pretended to reach for water & bumped her & rested both her chocolate stained hand on pari's chest leaving prominent chocolate stains on her white shirt. Geet - sorry didi, main trip hogaye thi
Pari didn't notice the stains - just buzz off she said rudely
Maan smiled inwards & looked away. After pari left geet gave a high five to maan, staining
his hand now with chocolate. He didn't mind he just licked the chocolates away.
Pari entered the class & all the guys looked at her curved portions which had chocolate fingers
Printed on them. All of them giggled & laughed at her.
Teacher - PARI, go wash yourself & then enter the class. Sharam varam hain bhi yah nahi
She cried & rushed to the loo. The period got over & geet quickly patted a kiss on his cheek & ran
to her class. He went to the class still licking the chocolate in is hand. Wow that was news now
guys assumed it was maans hand prints on paris..mmm'
pari walked in behind him with all wet shirt. One of the boys shouted hum sab ke samne they
keep on fighting!!!
Boy 2- now we know why she sent him outside the class
Boy 1-so that she follow him to drink water
& share chocolates. Woh bhi scanning her curves nastily.
Maan never cared or did even hear what they hinted.
Pari as embarrassed & left for the day.
After the school geet waited for him near the cycle gave him the chocolate & said bye.
She went to her dance class & maan went home changed & went to his karate class.
She didn't meet him outside the karate class he was upset & angry.
He went home to see she was sitting in the pool of books wrapping them. She had papers pieces on her head, in her pony. He was still angry that she didn't come to karate class. He slammed the bag on the chair & stood near the window.
Geet - wrapping papers lena main deri hogai thi, isseliya class nahi aaye
He smiled looking outside the window; she really knew what made him angry.
He still was angry thinking they could have gone together to get the paper, what was the hurry
Geet - stationary shop mera dance class ke pass hi hain. mujhe nahi pata tha
Itne deer lagi ghi nahi tho aapke saat hi jathi.
He still kept looking outside the window
She filled his heart with so much of warmth he didn't want anyone anymore. All he wanted
Was her. Geet - abhi bhi naraz ho?
He came & sat next to her. She slides closer to him rubbing her hands against his.
He moved little away without her noticing it. She asked him to pass the scissors some time the tape sometime paper, book, pen. He kept looking at her, her deep almond colored eyes, her high pony which turned cutely every time she turned her head, has cheeks oops he noticed her lips.
He was definitely getting naughty now. He looked away before he could get carried away.
Geet sighed hogaya & lay on his lap. He almost jumped up. He rested his hand on the side
avoiding touching her. She took is hand & softly caressed it & pulled it closer to her - yah pari didi teehk nahi hain main ne tho soucha ki aachi hogi. Patne main tho bahut aachi hain. anji di ki best friend hain. phir bhi kitni buri. Mujhe aacha nahi laga. Maan could not follow anything what she was saying he was really restless with her rolling on his lap. He pushed her away on the floor with a jerk & folded his knees & looped his legs looking away. She fell on the floor hitting her head & started to cry
geet - katti and cried rubbing her head.
He immediately held her head. Mujhe jorse lag gayee & she cried katti katti katti!! I will not
talk to you.
He noticed a small lump formed already on her head he hated himself to have
caused that. The new servant nakul rushed in - kya huwa beta
geet cried - mera sur floor main lag gaya
nakul checked her head & got an ice pack to ease her the pain.
Maan stood helplessly watching her cry her face turning pink & eyes turning red.
He cursed himself. Nakul got some water for her. Maan came close to her she turned her back
Katti. Nakul left them alone & went to the kitchen. She took her belongings & was leaving
Maan closed the door & stood in front - tum mujhse katti nahi kar sakti he yelled
She looked at him making a baby angry face.. katti!!! Katti!! Katti!!!
He banged his hand on the bolt hurting bleeding still with a stern & straight look
Tum mujhse katti nahi ho sakti
She dropped her bag down & took his bleeding hand & cried.
He pulled his hand away - Tum mujhse katti nahi ho sakti
Still hitting on the door. She held hid hand & kissed his hand nahi ho sakti
He very slowly placed his lips on her head the touch was so delicate not to hurt her lump.
a very slight brush of his lips on her head. She hugged him tightly. That was the first time
he ever expressed anything in his gesture that he cared.

PRECAP
vice - captian election!!!😲

-NEXT PART 11-
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
NOTE OF THANXS TO ALL THE READERS FROM MUSKAN
shining_moon - loved it
wonderful update
geet understands maan so very well even without him uttering a word
beautiful
pari n anji......maan will give them a tough time......they r messing with the wrong guy
keep writing
muskan - thanxs glad u liked it
yah geet understands it or she is just crazy about him...
pari & anji - surely lets see MSK have for them
seriously wrong guys
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ambbiha ;cyberprincess;madhavipatil ;cool_gal17 ;smj1977;SimplyAparajita
Radhika Shah; nithi07 ;Ameena4Eva ;sindu555 ;sweet cherry ;Mrinalini;cyum321;
dia_ditz ; FIRESafiReFIRE ;geetmaank;trishap ;shah10;bhanu_rekhag ;maaniqra;preethia
shamima- ;untamedtigress ;i rok ;chubzy; wajiha-1 ;myedward12;kirti_fiji ;jaanuluv
Mohi_nisH ;PrithviSanyo1;fairyeyes_zizi ;ramahesh ;mariam14 ;sweet scorpio;123pritha
pallavihegde ;sofiya- ;
thanxs a lot thats really sweet of u
will be updating soon paka promise
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jhinki143 -Oh My God....Thats Awesoem....Maan Shud Not Pay Attention To Those Gold Diggers....
I would Luv To See How The Deewangi Takes Place...!!!!
muskan - really maan need not bother about them
what matters to him should be geet...& there deewangi..rest all shoo shoo
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Tressa -Hi Muski Di....
Superb updates... Maan singh Khurana is slowly getting into his character...
Very nice part... Please do continue soon.
muskan - long time no see..yah true MSK getting in form now
glad u liked it
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nan_10 -lovely update dear
maan coming back to his attitude
just perfect name for the FF Khamoshi
everything to be felt in silence
con soon
muskan - thanxs..but me confused...
this is deewangi not khamoshi
did u mean this FF or the other one??
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vrsharma - Wov, Thx a lot Muskaan. loved it
pari don't know that, now onwards every time MSK only be there in top 1 as
he found his strenth in the form of geet
muskan - least did she know that he has geet beside him
thanxs a lot vidya..hope this was in time for you
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-afsha- I jus love the way their relationshp is progressing
Maan got his attitude awesum
I really want him to open up yaar a lil plz
Paka to jus let her be by his side always he will make KC no 1 company
Maan always loose himself in her
Pari n Anji not liking them
Lets c how Maan retorts back to them
muskan - me too love the way their relation is moving forward
maan opening up..umm..lets see
KC no.1 company..umm!!!
maan tho totally lost it..no control at all
pari & anji in big trouble lets see..who & how!!!
thanxs a lot
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annu - Hot nd happening update
hehehehe loving MSK's attitude ...maan is in full form haan ......
maan's condition geet herself dznt understand anything bt makng maan helpless
thnx musky for update thnx
today i cant watch geet nt well
u made pari negative here she topped whole each class but cudnt wen it was necessary
kya fayada ....... i pity such ppl
muskan - thanxs deary..glad u found it HOT & happening
attitude has just started...I know poor maan!!
really don't know hoe to control himself ...
I know poor pari...what is the point not topping 10th
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aarthirajendran - if Geet is with him then Maan is the Topper of 11th and 12th poor Pari
dreaming of beating him...di loved it very much....
muskan - umm..interesting..
will pari able able to beat MSK..now is that a question at all
challo let pari have sweet dreams..night mare is just on the way
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Anu_sajan4ever-wowwwwwwwww so lovely n cuteeeeeeeeeeee update hayeee geet told maan to
write in her cover hayeee n in one book she wrote geet maan khurana awwwwwwwwww n den
wowww maan fired his maid jst coz she throwed da prasad wowww m loving dis man jst
loveeeeeeee maneet n lovee how he was all quite in school lol n wen he saw geet
he became all happy woww now waiting for more
muskan - thanxs a lot..glad u liked it
writing the name was cute na.. bechara all
geet ka deewana.. not able to express himself
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Rohini20 - Hi hi hi ....
hey.....di..u r jus fab...Thnk u ...u made ma day...was superb....superlyk maan's
attitude towards other gals...i jus luv geet..
i wonder if der is anyone as cute as geet...she is so chweet...!!!update soon..:!!!!
muskan - no one can be as cute as geet..she so innocent & cute..
total latto over maan. stupid girls & they think they can distract him
me too love MSK attitude HOT hain na..thanxs a lot
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lovepari
muskan - added u in the PM list deary
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maneet1985 - awesome update muskaan!!!
how cute is geet!!!... maybe he tops in 11trh and 12th.........
even after maan finishes 12th geet will only be in 9th.. what will maan do then!!!
please continue soon!!
muskan - thanxs a lot..yah!! wat will happen & then..muskan has plans
lets see..now how like it..he he...
but why only maan.. bechari geet ka kya hoga???
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hinalshah
muskan - me too hate pari & anji
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MaanEET_FAN - beautiful!
so Maan didn't changed towards Geet..
i m liking it!! no no.. i m loving it!!
i really dont know hw to comment properly bt just can't control my self from expressing
what i feel while reading ur updates..
ur Geet is really very sweet... she is loving Maan for what he is not bcoz of any secondary reasons..
like pari n anjali..
hope this love remains and becomes stronger as they grow up!!
u hav always made me think defination of love every time u give diff. outlook of love...
now i really wonder what is love!!
without expecting anything... without any change because of external changes....
love always remains love...
awesome MUSKAN........!!!
muskan - thanxs a lot ..that was so profound
me totaly lost thanxs a lot dear...
definition of love very interesting!! really love for me
is every thing
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swetha10 - geet's so innocent n understanding..
luved the way she made him write her name on each book...
Whts pari upto??? do continue soon
muskan - geet ..me too like her ..bahut pyari hain na
pari...grrrr!! lets see what is she upto now
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pickachu
muskan - I also don't like them...thanxs a lot fatima
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18mypride - lovely update.... kya baath hai! uff yeh deewangi abhi se hamen mardalegi,,,thuddd!
sooooooooooo sweeet
muskan - thanxs a lot
Geet Maan Khurana cute hain na...
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JRia/MARIA - why???? is there some specific reason like about his past i mean someone 1
is there of his relation in London right??? is that the reason??
or he doesn't want to be seperated from Geet--NO NO BECUASE SHE WILL GO AWAY THATS WHY
Wow she has already planned her future - naughty naughty na
pari always is a trouble hope she doesn't upset Geet or else her life is
doomed for Maan uski barah baja dega na....---VERY TRUE..SHE BETTER NOT MESS WITH GEET
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maanmishti -cute part.....the best scene rough note book geet maan khurana.......
already hate pari.....i hope geet makes her learn a lesson after all she is troubling her maan
muskan - thanxs sweety, lets see whay geet has in for pari
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sakadafi -Geet is truly the one who moulds Maan into The MAAN SINGH KHURANA...
her unconditional love making Maan want to be the man (boy?) Geet believes
him to be. It's amazing how you're slowly and gradually capturing the building of MSK.
The whole conversation on Geet working for KC and then her writing Geet Maan Khurana
in her notebook....awww, her acts are so adorable. Really love her character.
You write so well...leaving us wanting for more. Can't wait for the next update!!!
muskan - thanxs a lot dear. glad u liked the update
really geet has the vand in her hand to turn maan into MSK.
lets see hoe it effects their relationship
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radiant_raisa - Pari is such a dumb blonde..MSK is never gonna be interested in you no
matter how hard you put on your charm!
MSK is already fida over my sweet Geet..sorry Pari
Thanks for the update Di!
Rockingggg
muskan - really yaar pari is a dumbo!!!how dreamy maan all latto over his little pari
thanxs to u sweety
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humz_786 - Great update baji!
Geet is already planning for the future,and wants to work in his office,--yah major future plans
i am sure that Maan will make Khurana Constructions No.1!--maan better does that
It was soooo sweet of Geet to make Maan write her name in all her books--cute na..I loved it too
and how she hid the one where she wrote "Geet Maan Singh Khurana! --how lovey dovy
Will Geet be leaving Maan in the future then because of painting ?!?! hmmm..--lets see what happens
Maan really does lose himself infront of Geet, can't wait till he starts --really
to open up his feelings towards her !--me too can't wait until he starts to express himself
Pari and Anji seem like they will trouble Maan a lot!--yah!!!u know school J & studies
Love how Maan's character is shaping up, lets see how Geet will work her way around him!
Thanks for the pm baji, plz update soon! xx
thanxs to u dear for such cute & long long comment
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punjabi.princes -awesome FF.. just read it all now
love their young, innocent love
hope they stay together till they are older
con't soon!
muskan - wow finaly u read it
thanxs a lot for liking it
I hope they stay close too!!! umm
lets see how things take a turn
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angelic shaz - woww dat was amazin maan gettin close to geet having that feelin was amzingg
and now they bac at school pari wll trouble maan awww i hope geet comes and helps him
cnt wait for more continue soon
muskan - me blushing thinking about the almost a fall
I know pari...grrrr
don't worry geet hain na
thanxs for ur comments dear
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maangeetcrazy - OMG!!!
Loving every updateee..haiiiii Awesome partttt
Awww geet is sooooo adorable..She wrote Geet Maan Khurana..sooo cute---me too loved it
OMG...Loved maan..---OMG OMG OMG maan is so cuty here
He threw the maid out because she threw the prasad away..awww -- offcourse how dare she!!!
Sooo sweeet Loved it..--- glad u liked it..ummah
ughh now this parii...Hope she doesnt create problems in maaneet relationship..lets see what she does
Awesome one
Pls pls pls continue soon
Cant wait
Thanks for the PM muskii..Love yaa<3

thanxs a lot dear...for all ur comment & support
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Lakshmi86 -Hi, That was a great update!!!!!!!!
so Geet will make Maan to grow his Company also well,
I loved Geets pyaar for him,
Truly unbelievable,
Love Lakshmi
muskan - thanxs a lot lakshmi
I know KC has to grow now!!!!
me too love geets love here..so cute

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bpinky - thanxs a lot dear..just love ur detailed analysis.how well you capture the emotions
thannxs a lot
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hermoini - thanxs a lot for lovely comments always...
maan kab taak chup rahe ga!!! umm intresting!!! but this is
deewangi na...so see deewangi now...maan bechara waise bhi
kuch bolta nahi hain..but I guess u should be happy with todays part
wink wink..maan did say & ummm..😳did some thing..muskan blushing naughtily
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thanxs a lot for all your support & love
shall try to reply to all the comments when ever possible
see the updating gets delayed..muskan kare bhi tho kya kare
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwwwwwww maan getting naughty every day new feelings hun ye geet ko bhi jaldi barha karo yaar want some fun now hahahahah ,wen u updating next sweets?😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Muskaan,
Really loved today's part. felt maan pain also. Wonderful part.
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wow... Superb prt....
Oh I cant tell you how much Im enjoying all this school college stuff.... Its so different & so much fun to read...
& again I'll say Bechara Maan.. cant control himself in front of geet..
& ya Bechari Pari too... how sad...
Well that part was embarassing... esp the boys teasing her.. But she was also cunning.. troubling Maan for no reason...
I wonder who's gonna b the vice-captian...
Hey ya..one more thing... Maan will continue to excel in studies na???????????
Please please ... I really hope that happens....
I wanna see Maan & Geet top in their respective classes...
Please do continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago

such a cute geet!!!

i was trying to figure out a cute little girl with a pony !!!!!
she is so cute!!!!!!!i dont have words to say anything!!!
its always fun to read ur ff updates!!!!
please Maan should excel in his studies in 11tha nd 12th too!!!..
the way you explained that she creied andshowed her baby face and said kutti was the cutest scene!!!...
i love this geet!!!
Edited by maneet1985 - 14 years ago
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Dard ke bahaane hi sahi par he's starting to express himself to her.....that's really nice.......really nice update Muskan.....waise kis cheez ka vice-captain...???

And I like your signature......how did you made that..?😛
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awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
cant tell wat i m feeling........
bt it ws awesome!!!!!!!!

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