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Hi FIRESafiReFIRE
Yes we are waiting for your updates also
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~deewangi~
part 9

geet - see we are made for each other & kissed him again
maan notices some paintings in her room. He looks at them curiously.
Geet - main ne banayain hain
He wanted to praise them, all he could do was softy traced his hand over it.
Geet - u liked it, yeh meri bhi fav hain.
It was a beautiful very colorful design & pattern she had created.
Papa kehten hain I should do my interior design course from London.
London word just put him off
Geet - abhi nahi 12th ke baad. Lekin it will cost a fortune, waise bhi mujhe
aapke company main hi kaam karna hain, tho main kanhi se bhi interior design
kar sakti hoon, aap mujhe mana thodi karoge
maan narrowed his eyebrows on his company what was she talking about
geet - KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS, aapki hi company hain na. mujhe sab pata hain
mujhe tho wanhi kaam karna hain aap ke saat.
maan wondered what job will she have there the company is at the verge of closing
geet - main ne tho ridz, meera aur arohi sab ko bol diya hain, I will work with
you only. Kitna maza aayega na pura din raat saat rehen ge. I will never miss
you then
. She hugs him tightly.
He was very conscious since it was her house & any one could come in.
Latter in the day Maan takes leave from rano
Rano - iska tuition ka khayal rakhna beta & do come over whenever you find time
Maan smiles looking down
Geet - mama main inhe drop karke aati hoon
Both of them ride back to maans house.
Geet - mainne parasad table pe rakhi hain, kha lena
He nodes & goes inside.
She was on top of the world. She went straight to ridz house & boosted about him topping.
Ridz sister anjali was suddenly curious OH so you know Maan Singh Khurana
geet - woh tho mere ..ridz closes her mouth iska tuition lethen hain aur abhi aache friend hain
anji - tho tum mera books uss ke liya photo copy karke le gaye thi
geet smiled
after anji left the room
geet - tumne mujhe kahne kyun nahi diya
ridz - tum pagal ho kya, didi mama ko bada dengi aur meri mama tumhari mama ko
geet - aacha, lekin didi aise kyun karengi
ridz - tu sach main na kuch nahi samjh thi

maan reached his room & searched for the Prasad. It was nowhere on the table
he became mad & annoyed he shouted at the maid - where is the Prasad which was on my table she casually replied I binned it. maan ran to the kitchen & looked for it in the dustbin
maid came behind, nahi mera matlab tha ki I have kept it for binning. He saw it was lying in a
corner in the pack which she had got it in. he picked it up at once. U are fired, kal se kaam main mat aana . he walked out without even giving her a second look.
She was dumb stuck with what maan just spoke. She complained to daadi when she came at night. Maan in front of daadi stood crossing his arms on his chest - tum abhi taak gaye nahi
Daadi - lekin beta
Maan - daadi I don't want her hear bus & just leaves from there. daadi was shocked & knew he won't do anything like this without any reason.
Daadi to the maid - kya baat huwi tum dono main ?
Maid - kuch bhi nahi
Daadi cleared her account & looked for another maid.

June end first day of class 11th.
Maan & geet were really excited geet always expressed her excitement with her words & act but maan always kept it to himself . geet came early to his house at 7.30am he opened the door & was surprised
daadi - breakfast karoge beta
geet - nahi mainne kar le
she dragged him to the room. He wondered what did she want. He was still getting ready.
She gives him a pen & her new note books & text books on the bed
He looked at her still wondering
Geet - I want you to write my name in my note books & text books, please likho na
She took his books they were not wrapped - arrey aapne cover nahi ki, aacha sham ko main kar doon ghi Kitni note books hain. she counts & makes a note of long notes & text books & other note book. while maan wrote GEET HANDA, VII-B, DPS, on each book. She took all of them & kissed them Individually, finally kissed his cheek.

Maan noticed she didn't give one note book - woh
she blushed - mainne use main lik li hain
maan - dikhavoo
she nodded for a no naughtily hiding the book behind her
he looped her in his arms trying to take the book from her. She struggles & he falls
on top of her on the bed. His every part of the body pressing her down & his hand holding her
from waist, he felt strangely losing himself, feeling himself getting harder.
His hand held her tightly. First time ever embracing her he lied on top of her,
resting his face on her still flat chest. Just for few minutes not able to force himself to move away.
Geet screaming - dedthi hoon baba, aap utto tho, aapki shirt crush hojayegi
he was already panting & wet. He rushed to the washroom & cleaned. He never felt anything like this before. She could just make him lose himself totally to her. He came out with his dress all wet. Geet - kya karte ho, dehko pant aur shirt sab gili ho gaye, dosri pehen lo
She opens his wardrobe & picks the other set of dress, it was crushed. Aarey yeh to crushed
hain
. maan - that's ok , I will iron it. he switches on the iron
geet - I will do it for you. Aap change karlo. she quickly irons the shirt
Aapki maid kanha hain, usually tho woh door open karti hain?
maan removing his shirt - she doesn't work with us any more
she passed the shirt without turning back & then passed the pants.
He changed the pants. She switched off the iron & closed his shirt buttons. Her coming
close again was just making him lose himself. He just moved away to the dressing table
& began to comb his hair. How much he wanted to feel her again but knew it was not right
she probably doesn't even know how he felt and what effect she had on him.
maan - woh note book dihkavoo mujhe
she looked down & gave it to him. it was her rough note book
then saw further she had written her name GEET MAAN KHURANA
she hugged him hiding her face in his chest. he smiled looking at what she had written.
daadi called out - Maan I am leaving
maan went to the hall to say good bye
daadi kissed his forefead - all the best for your first day in 11th
geet stood near the door scribbling with her fingers on the door
daadi to geet - all the best to you too
geet came & took blessing from daadi - thanxs daadi
daadi smiled & left.
They went to school she parked the cycle next to him & locked their cycle after he left.
Maan went into his class with shuffled set of students, from other sections & some from different
School. Everyone was delighted to see him & welcomed him with a warm smile. As if he cared.
He quietly went & sat in his usual place. Few boys tried to be friendly with him. He kept quiet.
Anjali & Pari came & sat next to him. He ignored them.
Anjali - hi
He didn't respond
Anjali - u know those notes which geet gave you, that was from me
Geets name just brought a smile in him. He would do anything to hear her name around him.
Anjali - this is pari, you might be knowing her, humare school ki humesha se topper rahi hain
Pari - hi maan
He was still quite
Other guys were already feeling jealous of Maan getting so much of attention from
Anji & pari. They were the most happening girls in the school. Beautiful, great with studies
and attitude to kill. Guys would do anything to speak to them types.
Other girls where just drooling over maan. They had never noticed his stern looks & well
toned built until now. Few girls giggled yaar iske the abhi se hi six packs hain. Look at his
shirt it just sticks to his body, showing every single muscle. Yah itna hot hain mujhe tho
pata hi nahi tha. I used to sit next to his bench in 10th STD yaar.
Teachers where very proud of having him in their class. He still never cared about any one.
He knew this second look was all for his marks not for what he was. Nobody cared about
him until he really did well. He hated them more especially Anjali & pari. But didn't say
anything to anji since she was geets best friend's sister. He could never do anything that would
cause any pain to geet.

Lunch break pari invited him to have lunch with them. He didn't respond just
walked away giving a stern look. That was such a letdown. All the guys made fun of pari.
Pari to anji - yeh aapne aap ko samjtha kya hain?
Anji - pata nahi yaar.
Pari - may be trying to play getting hard types
Anji smirked
Pari - ek bar first aagaya tho iske attitude dehko
Anji - really yaar, kitna rude hain
Pari - yeh sirf ek bar first aaya hain, I have always topped myself, just wait & watch
Maan Singh Khurana 11th & 12th kaun top kartha hain. tumhe aapne pecha nahi gumha aaya tho
Mera naam bhi pari nahi
Maan really didn't care. All he was bothered was geet would be waiting for him near the tree
He ran to the tree, she was waiting restlessly.
Geet - kitni late kardi, abhi break katam ho jayega
He smiled in relief. Seeing her was always like bringing life back in him. He felt alive when he was with her. How he wished to spend every min in front of those eyes. She had so much to tell him about 7th std. new teachers & new class room.

PRECAP
pari troubling maan

~NEXT PART 10~
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Rocks.Dhara -
res........yepeeeeehey u going to update khamoshi also na????? the longggg update
muskan - khamoshi..need some time dear...
thanxs a lot for waiting
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humz_786 -
Awesome awesome update baji!
Yaay Maan topped in the whole region!
And he is now starting to become "THE" Maan Singh Khurana !
Awwe didn't feel right till he saw Geet after his results, and he didn't know how to treat her !
Yaaay Maan not leaving Geet now!! He can always be with her, to give her his first salary !
It's sooooo sweet how they share each others ice-cream, and how Geet took Maan to her house naza uttarne ke liye !!
And Geet's mum recognized him as well, awww Maan sees Geet's room and she has his presence in it everywhere!
He has always thought of her as a pari as well !!
Can't wait till the next update Maan going to be in the 11th class, and being the most hot and happening !! xx
Update soon !

muskan - glad u liked maan topped across all region..wanted to make it MSK style
nice na..misses geet always..she means every thing to him
I know naughty geet..puri salary
dreamy dreamy sequence...mum ko bhi tho milna tha..abb 11th main pata nahi kya karega!!!
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thanxs a lot thats really sweet of u
will be updating soon paka promise
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basket - hahaha!!!
geet is sooooooooo adorablee!!
loved maan's reaction!! hope he doesnt change...especially their relationship!!
please continue soon!
thanks,
Sanju
muskan - I know cute hain na, me too hope he doesn't change!!!
thanxs a lot sanju
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nilu710 - yeeeeeeeeeeyeeehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
maan toppedddddddddddd good job dude!!!!
very cute update, but u forgot to mention the thing i mean
prasad she brought for him. i am sure u have u have something coming up with it.
now waiting for khamoshi and truly magical of the day.
please update soonnnnnnnn
fantastic update
muskan - prasad offcourse mujhe yaad hain...
taken care in the part next part
will update them also soon..thanxs a lot
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aarthirajendran - yepieeeeeeeeeeeeeeee......di...loved it... i was wondering if it is
MAAN SINGH KHURANA then he sud top in everything wnd with Geet around him how cud he
not win over anything... loved it....and our MSK is getting t form... hmmm 11th std
......Hot and Happening....how he wud not be........
muskan - true how could MSK not..
yes MSK just getting in form wait & watch...
Hot and Happening..to kill!!!
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heermeher - luved it plsssssss dont bring sameera any where
muskan - ok no sameera ..got pari..what say!!!😉
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Preethi-Premi - Great Muski... I was delightd to read this!
Now now now! Please kabhi bhi Maan ko attitude mein math lana
jisse woh Apni geet ko hurt kar de! Please!!!
muskan - ok ..taken in account..geet ko maan ke attitude!!!
lets see how does geet react to maans attitude!!!
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mamon.moon - wow superb update. just loved it. now maan will be famous in his school.
hope his and geet's relationship wont change. continue soon.
muskan - offcourse he will be famous..but the point is how their
relationship turns!!!
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Rocks.Dhara - awesome update....loved it to the core........MSK in 11th..HOT AND HAPPENING
......ummmmmmmm WHAT ELSE pls continue yaar.....and jaldi jaldi khamoshi bhi update kar
de Lol...u promised yesterday..he he he he..make it longgggggggggg as u promised
muskan - thanxs for so many lovely post & waiting
glad u liked the update
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jhinki143 - di luvd it.....MSK made it...now thats the real MSK attitude.he will soften
only fo our kudi....oh god just awesome part
muskan - yeppy!! lets see what happens with the MSK attitude & kudi
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smj1977 -congratulation Geet
your Maan did it for you
now he won't leave
but Geet what will you do now as he had topped the regions ... he is in demand
he was very good looking always
and now proven has brains also... not that he didnot have earlier...
he was not concentrating enough
anger is filled in him
initially he had no target
but now he had one .... he did not want to go away from you
but now as the time will move he will have many targets to fulfill
and once he gets his proper education Buisness will take more of his time
he will surely want to give you a comfortable life
as you said that his room ih yours he will surely want to provide you with a
bigger one than your parents have
also he will work hard with the single aim of giving you all the conforts of the world....
what I sense in his nature by the above updates that in the want of providing you with
all worldly comfort he will loose you...
he does not seem like a person who can express himself in words and you sense his silence...
but sooner or later his timidness will surely give you pain
so be prepared sweet heart though he loves you like his life he will surely hurt you not once
but many a times....it will only be you who will understand him
you are his and always be his ... he knows this very welll
you will never leave him in high or low in sunshine or darkness....
but Geet you will have to h\understand that though he will be crowded with people
many a times in his success his eyes will always search for you ... want you to be by his side
then it will be upto you to come to him cutting the crowds
Muskaan sory for writing tooo much but I could not help my self the character of MSK
touched my heart you made me understand why he hi arrogant thanks.......
keep going
muskan - thanxs a lot for such a lovely view..
very true most of it..but lets see how will it turn
whether maan will hurt her unknowingly??? interesting!!!
how geet manages the crowd around him & be beside him always will be worth a watch
his timidness yes ..may hurt her..but let see how muskan handles that now!!!
love u deary that was really touchy
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bpinky -wow...wow....awesome one dear...i m very happy now..maan topped in entire region..
i ws jst thinkg may be he vl top in school bt u hv surprised me by dis..
n u knw i lvd this surprise n shock...it ws very nice beautiful, fantastic,
wonderful...n i really loved each n evry bit of it...maan wanted to meet geet n
shared his happiness n noone else..he evn didnt care abt press, teachers.
principal noone...he jst wnted his geet to be vth him...wah kya pyar hen i also
lvd the way geet tells her mom abt maan ki nazar utaro mamma n maan feels insecure
still so he ws afraid to meet her parentss bt i m sure as time goes geet's presence
in his life vl make him so much confident n secured....i m really happy for maan...
n the ice cream part ws very cute dear...i loved it how evry time geet ate frm his cup...
it shows her love n affection towards maan...n maan definitely needs it...
only geet can make him like dis...we all can see the effect of geet in maan's life,
he hs topped in board...so it vl be more better day by day...n precap sounds nice...
bt i knw maan vl show his MSK attitude to evry one except his geet...
waiting for next part updt soon dear...
muskan - u just wrote beautifully the crust of the update..
thanxs a lot, really wanted to suprise the readers..topping
all of us wanted..but yeh to muskan ka MSK hain have to be special
ice-cream was really random thought..
it will be nice to see MSK's attitude lets see how geet handles it
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I am still trying to comment on all the responds...yaar I get stuck between
commenting & updating.. nahi comment karthi tho aap log
mujhe chote chote comment likthe ho..so muskan decided to respond on
comments when ever possible... dam with updates...just kidding!!!
love u all a lot for all the beautiful replies
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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loved it
wonderful update
geet understands maan so very well even without him uttering a word
beautiful
pari n anji......maan will give them a tough time......they r messing with the wrong guy
keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow loved it
😉😉😉😉😉😉
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Oh My God....Thats Awesoem....Maan Shud Not Pay Attention To Those Gold Diggers....I would Luv To See How The Deewangi Takes Place...!!!!😊
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Hi Muski Di....
Superb updates... Maan singh Khurana is slowly getting into his character...
Very nice part... Please do continue soon.
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lovely update dear
maan coming back to his attitude
dewaangi meh be Khamoshi bara hai
everything to be felt in silence
con soon
Edited by nan_10 - 14 years ago
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pls tell na u going to update khamoshi or not????
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Wov, Thx a lot Muskaan. loved it
pari don't know that, now onwards every time MSK only be there in top 1 as he found his strenth in the form of geet

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