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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
hai meri jaan
i read ur updte today.
haye awesome
amazing
fab update
loved mayur convo
it was so meaningful- i really loved myank

the terrace scene was too good.
myank in rain- hmm ab nupur kya karegi

plzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz meri twitty update soon.

take care
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
awesome update.cant wait 4 the next part ...continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
Hi Gals,
Sorry for not updating it for so long ,here is the update and this is for "Mishthi - Faria70" ,one of the known emotional blackmailer on the Forum though she is a great reader [after grabing the award for the same ]
Ab khush na Mishthi
So here it goes
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PART 6

Nupur was too much concern for Mayank thinking about the heavy rain she rushed towards the terrace and when she opened the door having umbrella in her hand ,she couldn't find him there.To increase her helpless condition she cant even shout his name otherwise all will be awake.Suddenly she felt touch on her shoulder and was about to shout when another sequence action happened and her mouth was shut because of his hand on her mouth.

He took her to the shed place and asked – maine to socha aaj rat is barish me hi gujarani padegi

N:Tumne to mujhe dara hi diya tha,cant you see ki main dar gayi thi,kahi mujhe attack aa jata to ,and started taking heavy breath

M:par aaya to nahi na,aur main is barish me bimar pad jata to with fake anger

N : huye to nahi na ,Sadu kahike?

M : kya kaha tumne ,Sadu ,main koi sadu nahi hu ,miss Bhushan

N : correction Mrs Nupur Sharma ,i guess tum Gajini se kafi inspired ho ,i am married Mr Sharma and wink at him

M : haan thik hai ,ab bate banana band karo chatter box

N : dekho Mayank main koi chatter box nahi hu ,samjhe na

M : to main bhi koi sadu nahi hu ,tum bhi jan lo

And to stop their fight it started lightning and then nupur said ,Mayank niche chalo mujhe bijali se bahut dar lagta hai ,chupchap mere piche aana shor mat machana,Mayank started laughing but was soon stopped as her eyes gave him 'i- will – kill – you' look.

They went down ,infect Mayank was following nupur ,

N : tum mere piche kyon aa rahe ho

M : tumne hi to kaha ki chupchap mere piche aao

N : hey bhagwan main bhi na

M : wahi to main bhi kah raha hu ,tum bhi na ,dekho mere kapde wet ho gaye hai ,what should i do now?

N : oh itni si bat i have one pair of ur clothes?

M : how u have?

N : wo actually ,when last time i went for Suhani Di's marriage i got it.bauji asked me to get it

M : but kyon?

N: because ,soon after u come back meri bidai ki bat chal rahi thi so he wants a pair so that last min hurry bhari na ho.

M : Oh is it

N : yes it is

M : thats cool ,chalo jo bhi hai kam se ka mi have a fresh pair ,

N : Provided u r not put on ,and she smiled mischievously

M : Very funny ,i take care of myself and i am sure i am not saying that he pulled his clothes and before leaving he just did woogly woogly woosh [pulling nupur's cheek] and went to his room

After changing he lied on the bed ,but nindiya rani was away from his eyes

Both were twisting and turning on the bed and just thinking of the day , their talk and then how they fought for a while like a kid or like 10years ago they used to do that.

Mayank ,took his cell and called Nikki, it was eve in US

Ni : haan Mayank ,all izz well

M : haan nikki sab thik hai

Ni : that sounds nice so at last Mayank Sharma finalized it rt?

M : yeah kind of ,ok will catch you later niks ,bye for now and he cut the call.

He got up and went near wardrobe ,he opened and started searching if he gets a single snap of nupur ,but to his bad luck he just got few albums when they were kid ,he was kind of disappointed but still he was turning the pages so he get atleast a photo of nupur ,to share with nikki ,or that was an excuse ,he smiled after a long search he saw one photo where she was with her cousin.He took that and kept in his bag without asking or saying anything.

In the morning Mayank got up as he wanted to leave for Mumbai ,Nupur was bit said she wanted to spend some time with Mayank but nothing can be done until she finally goes to Sharma's mansion so she didn't utter a word.

Mayank made his way back to Mumbai and nupur kept herself busy remembering what happened yesterday night

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Thats all Girls ,i actually not feeling like updating but still wrote something,Hopefully no tomato's are thrown on me .Leave in ur comments and do press the like button if u like it

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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
Reserve


Thank u so muchhhhhhhhhhhhhh Aruuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Love u Muahhhhhhhhhhhh
will back soon....................................


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Hey Aru
thank u so much for updating it
i know u were not in the mood of upating any ff
u update this one just becoz of me
i forced u na- sorry jaan
kya karu i really missed ur update.

ok about ur updte - it was good part twittyyyyyyyyyyy

Really very nice
i loved nups concern for mayanks
and loved their small fight as usual......

mayur were so comfortable with each other.
wah nupur bought clothes for mayank - chalo accha hai sahi waqt pe kaam aya.
oh maynk was searching a pic of nupur and finally he got it
smo maynk left 4 mumbai and nupur was sad
koi bat nehi nupur - ab maynk bhi tumhari bina nehi reh payegi.
so dont worry- maynk will come to u very soon


beautiful update aru but it was too short.
no prob- at least u updated this ff
and thank u so much jani
plz apna mood thik karo n next upate ki tayari karo-plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

love u loads



Edited by fariaa70 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25

Thank you Pari ; agar tum na hote tho hamein ye update nahi milti na... 😊 Aur kisise kaho ki update acha tha, especially considering the fact that she lost interest in this..

Edited by Nirvrithi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
res
edited
nice update
loved mayur terrace part
so mayu already fallen 4 nupur
next part cant wait 4 it
update when u get time
Edited by .rumki. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
Aruuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu kaha ho tummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz jaldi update karna
we r waiting 4 ur update.........

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