Collection 2 - Aisa kyon

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Aisa Kyon

Hi All,

Mere demag me keede kulbulane lage naye SS ke liye and here i am

Mayank Sharma : An indian par pala bada hai US me .comes back to india after a long time.Indian culture ki respect karta hai par mod bhi hai.He is like typical Mayank Sharma Focussed,Intelligent and handsom Hunk.

Nupur Bhusha : A very sweet girl ,whose feeling are known to her only.Lost her mother when she was in her school [10th standard].ALone child of Mr Shashi Bhushan.She is from a small town called as Morena from MP.She is educated but not from the high society.She does not know the high society standards.

There is nothing special just one thing is common just one fact that Mayank and Nupur married when both of them were child.

Mayank does not believe in this marriage whereas for Nupur Mayank is the world.

So what will happen ,Mayank sharma is going to accept Nupur Bhushan or not?

The story is form the concept of "Bal Vivah" Bhartiya Samaj ki buri prathao me se ek.

There are supporting characters but they will be coming and going so i do not want to introduce them

I am too keen to know shall i continue or stop

So please let me know by ur responses.

Thats all ,I could not stop myself from posting it as it was killing my brain [which is already very less]

Silent Readers please press the like button or leave in the precious comments

Part 1

Mayank Sharma ,second child of Mr Aditya and Shilpa Sharma :cool dude ,handsome and adorable.He has finished his studies and went to US from last 6 years ,he is looking after his business in US.

Shilpa Sharma : mother come friend of her children's ,Mayank Loves her more than anyone in this world.

Mayank is in his room and someone calling him ,yeah it was none other than his Mom Shilpa

SS : Mayank ,kaisa hai beta?

M : main achha hu maa tum kaisi ho?

SS : main thik hu ,aur india ka baa rahe ho ?

M : maa jald hi aa raha hu ,par aap itni udas si kyon ho?

SS : wo actually

M : haan aage kahiye na

SS : wo actually me Bhushan bhai sahib ka phone aaya tha ,wo puch rahe the

M : maa aap Bhushan uncle ko mana kyon nahi kar deti hai ,aap janti hia ki main us shadi ko nahi manta hu

SS : par Mayank nupur bahut achhi ladki hai beta ,aur tumhari usase shadi ho chuki hai

M : par maa aap ko main pahle bhi kah chukka hu ki main us shadi ko nahi manta jo us samay hui thi jab main 10 sal ka tha aur nupur sirf 7 sal ki ,hume to shadi ka matlab bhi nahi pata tha maa

SS : Mayank ek bar phir se soch le beta

M : please maa and he kept the phone

M[maa aap kyon nahi samajh rahi hai ,main aur nupur ek dusare ke liye nahi bane hai.Main use janta tak nahi matlab abhi hum eek dusre ke bare me kuch bhi pata nahi hai aur wo bhi mujhe nahi janti hai.Main is shadi ko kaise man lu jabki wo mere type ki ladki nahi hai]

This entire conversation was overheard by his very good friend Nikki Malhotra, she knocked on the door

M : are nikki tum kab aai ,come in

Ni : Hi Mayank ,kya hua phir se same topic?

M : haan yaar koi samjh nahi raha hai mujhe

Ni : To ab tumne kya decide kiya hai

M : main kya decide karunga ,maine maa ko mana kar diya hai aur kya?

Ni : par Mayank tum ek bar nupur se bat kyon nahi kar lete ,shayad wo vaisi na ho jaisa tum soch rahe ho?

M : please nikki abhi abhi maa se vaise hi bahas ho gayi hai ab tum please shuru mat ho jana.

Ni : dekho Mayank kisi bhi problem se bhagne se wo solve nahi hoti sirf drag hoti hai ,

M : tum kahna kya chahti ho Nikki?

Ni : Mayank hum ek dusare ko last 3 years se jante hai ,and i really respect you ,kyonki tum ek bahut ache insan ho.Par Mayank ek bar us ladki ka view bhi to janane ki koshish karo

M : matlab??

Ni : matlab ye ki use to bachpan se sirf tumhare nam ki ghuti ,i mean kaha gaya hoga ki tumhari shadi ho chuki hai and she must be thinking about you only

M : to isme main kya karu nikki

Ni : ek min Mayank meri puri bat sun lo,Dekho Indian society me ek bar jis ladki ki shadi ho jati hai ,wo apne pati ko apna bhagwan manane lagti hai chahe wo kitna bhi bura kyon na ho ,aur jaha tak mujhe yad hai tum dono ki shadi to bahut bachpan me kar di gayi thi na.Wo bandi tabse sirf tumhara name sun rahi hogi aur tumhara hi wait kar rahi hogi.Mayank kyat um usase ek bar bat bhi nahi kar sakte?Bhagwan na kare kahi usne tumhare is decision ko sunkar kahi kuch galat step utha liya to?

M : galat step ???

Ni : Suicide ,not a big deal in our society.Hum nahi jante ki wo kya sochti hai

M : nahi nikki main kisi ki maut ka karan nahi ban sakta

Ni : isiliye to kah rahi hue k bar bat to kar lo ,shayad wo samajh jaye ya tum man jao.

M : thik hai main ek bar usase bat karke dekhata hu ,Thanks Nikki

Ni : anytime Mayank

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Part 2

Mayank agreed to come and meet Nupur in india

So he called his mother ,

SS : hello Mayank

M : haan maa main

SS : haan bolo itni rat ko kaise phone kiya?

M : Maa maine aaj nikki se bat kari to

SS : Nikki kaun hai Mayu?tere to 2 hi friend hai na waha ,Arjun aur uski wife

M : Maa ,Nikki oh main Nikhila yani Arjun ki Wife ki hi bat kar raha hu,Main use Nikki kahta hu maa.

SS : oh to mujhe kya pata ki tu use nikki kahta hai .

M : haan maine Nikki se is bare me bat kari maa wo bhi yahi kah rahi thi ki mujhe ek bar Nupur se milna chahiye ,to main soch raha hu k ii should meet her once

SS was happy after hearing this from her son

SS : thik hai Mayank ek bar milne me koi issue nahi hai ,main unhe inform kar deti hu

M : par maa aap abhi unhe mat bataiye main aakar aapse detail me bat karta hu.

SS : Par kyon beta?

M : nahi maa main abhi se is bat ka dhol nahi bajana chahta hu ,i just want to meet her and please aap ise confirmation mat maniye I have not accepted the marriage

SS : thik hai Mayank jaisa tujhe sahi lage.

As per plan SS did not utter a word to any one ,she was not sure about mayank's decision but she was not opposing also ,as she knew Mayank is not like the other guys who will see only beauty .He is well educated and mature person who will not like to play with anyone's emotion.

Mayank was in dilemma he told that he is coming back and will meet nupur par wo kahega kya use to ye tak nahi pata ki how she looks.After leaving morena he never tried to contact Nupur ,he did not believe in marriage so how can he talk to her.

Nikki arranged ticket for him and soon he came back to India.He made very clear that he will stay only for a week or so in india and then he will be back to US for his assignment.Aisa nahi tha ki Mayank ko India pasand nahi tha but he wanted to explore the business in US and then come back ,it is his dream.

Mayank landed in India around 3 am IST.his mother was waiting for him at home,As soon as he entered she started when he want to meet nupur ,

M : maa abhi to aaya hu aap bhi na ,please kal bat kare i am too tired

SS : thik hai mayu jaisa tujhe sahi lage.

M : maa please aap naraj mat ho ,i am Sorry

SS : koi bat nahi hai Mayank i know kit um sahi ho beta.

Mayank hugged his mom and said luv you maa ,luv u too beta.

Then he went to retire himself on the bed ,he was too tired and had jet lack also.

He was up late in the morning , when he got up he went directly to his almera just to see if he has any photo of nupur ,not out of curiosity just to know how she looks .

He checked all his things but never he got a single snap.So he thought of asking to his mom.

M:Maa mujhe aapse kuch puchana hai

SS : haan mayu bol

M : aap please mayu mat kahiye na main ab kitna bada ho gaya hu

SS : maa-baap ke liye bachhe kabhi bade nahi hote hai mayu

M : oh aapko to kuch bhi kahna bekar hai aapse mujhe ek kam tha

SS : haan kaho kya kam tha with a smile

M : wo aapke pas Nupur ki koi photo hai kya

His mother gave him mischievous smile

M : mom aap apne dimag ko jyada kam mat karaiye ,maine use dekha nahi hai kaise pahchanunga

SS :maine kab kuch kaha mayu and she ruffled his hair

M : balo mat hath lagaiye please

SS : oho badi style kharab ho jati hai tere balo ki.I guess mere pas ek snap hogi Suhani ke shadi ke samay wo aai to thi.

Both went to SS's bedroom and then she took out all the album they searched entire album par nupur ki e bhi photo kahi nahi thi ,tabhi achanak SS said , are ye rahi Nupur wo nili saree me

But Mayank was not able to identify where is she ,She was wearing a blue saree but he was not able to guess where is she

M : mujhe to nahi dikh rahi hai

SS :are wo to hai jiske lambe bal hai ,

M: maa iska chehra nahi dikh raha hai

SS : haan wo to hai par yahi hai nupur uske bal bahut sundar hai mayu

M : Offo maa aapke pas uski ek photo bhi nahi hai main kaise pahchanunga use ab

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Part 3

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Mayank decided to go to Morena and talk with nupur directly ,but what will i ask her.maine to usase kabhi bat bhi nahi kari.Bewkoof mat ban Mayank tum use jante ho na she is your wife right?Wife???nahi main usase yahi to puchane ja raha hu ki does she believe in this marriage unlike me.But why am i freaking out so much.

He was biting his nails and thinking kya bat karunga usase ,kya puchunga?kya tumhe ye shadi manjoor hai?nahi kyat um is shadi me believe karti ho nahi Mayank,tumhara education kya hai ?par maa ne to bataya hai eng literature me MA hai.phir kaun hai tumhare ghar me?

Mayank tum pagal ho gaye ho kya?aise question bhi koi karta hai bhala.Oh God what shall i do ,good nikki ne mujhe fasaya hai na now she has to give me solution.He called nikki in the midnight one.other side :Hello

M : Hello Arjun are yaar nikki ko phone de

A:itni rat gaye kya hua,anything serious

M : tum pahle nikki ko phone do please and Arjun obeyed Mayank

Nikki got up with the jerk

N : haan Mayank kya hua itni rat ko phone

M: dekho nikki main bahut badi confusion me hu and you are the reason

N : what did i do?

M : you asked me to talk with nupur rt?

N : yeah but how is it creating confusion

M : see nikki i don't know what to ask her ,i am nervous now

N : Chill Mayank u are not going to propose her ,she is your wife

M : dekho nikki abhi bhi maine use accept nahi kiya hai so

N : fine Mayank sorry ,but still she is your wife rt ,she was teasing him

M : ok fine go and sleep you need it badly i guess ,he was furious

N : ok fine don't get angry and then they spoke for some time that what he can ask nupur.

Mayank said thanks to nikki and thought of visiting morena next day

He was all set with the questions.he left in the morning as it is around 8-10 hours journey so he just wanted to come back same day.He asked his mom not to inform them as he visiting there.

In morena

Nupur was PG with literature and she was working as lecturer in the college.she has her cousin who was quite young around 11 years at home and who has a tuition master for him.He was very naughty and never liked his tuition teacher.

He wanted to trouble him with every possible way ,one thing he did not like his master because he was liking nupur which Rushil [name of her cousin] didn't like.it was around 2 in the afternoon and was time for his teacher to come so he made a plan.He kept wheat floor above on the door as soon as he will open it ,he will turn as ghost in the floor.

He was ready to execute it when someone entered and all wheat floor was spreader over the one who entered .Rushil didn't know and came clapping and was stunt when he saw today his target is his Di Nupur ,she was all farming in the anger ,uske balo se lekar pairo tak she was complete white.Rushil was scared after knowing that he is gone today tabhi door par ek aur knock hua and unknowingly nupur opened it ,the one who was outside shouted.tab jakar nupur ko realise hua ki uski halat kitni buri hai she ran to her room without even looking at him.

Rushil came in front and asked : aapko kaun chahiye?aur aap hai kaun?

Person : Mera name Mayank hai aur main Mumbai se aaya hu.Kya main andar aa sakta hu.

R:Are Mayank jiju aap aaiye na.he called his mom who was nupur's bui.Maa Jiju aaye hai

M : Kamal hai yaha to mujhe sab jante hai.

B : Are shor kyon macha raha hai apne jiju ko bol baithe main aati hu

R : par maa wo dusare jiju hai ,wo dusare wale hai na wo

B : are kaun dusare wale wo padosi shalu ke pati hi hai na

R : nahi maa wo hai na Mumbai me wo jinse Nupur di ki shadi hui hai wo

B : kya kah raha hai rushil ,Mayank kyon aayega abhi

R : haan wahi Mayank ,main nam bhul gaya tha.

Bui came out in hurry burry ,she saw Mayank seating on the charpai ,he was looking entire home.Bui came in front and he took blessing from her.

B: are beta aane ki khabar to de dete

M : nahi bui main to aise hi aa gaya,wo uncle kaise hai aur ye kaun hai?

Rushil was in front he started speaking

R : main rushil hu nupur di ka bhai aur hai meri maa ,aur uncle means mamaji bahar gaye hai

M : so sweet rushil aap to badi achhi bate karte hai.

B : tum baitho main tumhare liye kuch lekar aati hu.

Mayank was quite ,use na to kuch khana tha na hi kuch pina he just wanted to talk with nupur par koi mauka hi nahi mil raha tha.

He asked rushil very casual stuff his studies,his friends and soon rushil became his friend.He asked tumhari Di ghar par nahi hai??

R : hai na wo job hut banker khadi thi wahi to hai Di

Mayank smiled :kya kismet hai kahne ko nupur meri biwi hai par mere ghar me jo photo hai usme sirf uske bal dikhe yaha aaya to nupur dikhi to sahi par floor me dubi hui .

R : aap hans kyon rahe hai

M : kuch nahi bus aise hi

By then Bui came and gave him some snacks and went from there to nupur's room

B : Nupur beta jaldi tayar ho ja Mayank aaya hai

N : kaun aaya hai?

B : are pagli Mayank aaya hai

Nupur blush karte huye ,kaun Mayank aaye hai?par achanak kaise na koi call na kuch aise kaise

B : are bewkoof apne pati ka name nahi lete hai aur wo hamare mehman hai mehman kya suchana dekar aate hai

N:thik hai bui par main kya karu

B : dekh unke samne jayegi to ghunghat me jana

N : par bui wo to

B : nahi nupur maine kaha na

N : thik hai bui.

Bui took nupur with ghunghat Mayank was shocked to see her in ghunghat [hum 21st century me hai phir bhi aaj ye ghunghat OMG]

Bui left nupur and Mayank alone.

Both were standing with what to ask.

Mayank can see nupur but not her face ,his mom was right nupur had beautiful hair and figure too,she has perfect feminine curves.he saw her from top to bottom but could not see her face.

Whereas nupur was able to see him partially as her ghungaht was there still she can make out he has good physique and one more thing he has dimple,

They both remained silent but someone has to initiate the talk.

Mayank started conversation: tumhe kya pasand hai nupur

N : ji wo main [she was not able to say anything ,kya kahu khana banana pasand hai .pata nahi kya sochenge nahi gappe marna pasand hai,bawli ho gayi kya nupur aise answer degi]

Mujhe movies dekhana pasand hai

M : Movies??

N: ji haan SRK ki

M : SRK kaun hai and he just turned ,nupur apna ghunghat uthate huye boli

N : aap SRK nahi jante

Par agle hi pal jaise hi Mayank turn hua usne phir se ghunghat dal diya

M : nahi kaun hai wo?

N : Shah rukh khan [Thinking - kaise hai SRK nahi jante]

M : oh main nahi janta tha aur uske alawa kya pasand hai

N : aap bataiye aapko kya achha lagta hai

M : mujhe to books panda achha lagta hai,apna office achha lagta hai beach achhi lagti hai and i love long drive too.

N : beach ,wo to mujhe bhi achhi lagti hai par Morena me to beach hai hi nahi

Part 4

Mayank : Par Mumbai me to hai na ,

Nupur : main Mumbai sirf Suhani di ki shadi me gayi thi aur us waqt sab itne busy the na ki i didn't get chance to go beach.i really missed it.I love to go and spend time there.You feel so relaxed rt??

Mayank was surprised he though probably nupur may not know English ,but he was amazed with the fluency ,out of curiosity he asked tumhe English aati hai

At that moment Nupur realised that she started in English

N : wo haan ,main actually she was stammering

M : are its ok ,actually me hum likh aur pad to lete hai bolte waqt hi prob hoti hai but its good

Nupur blushed already she was in veil covering her mouth on top of that she was blushing.

M:Vaise Morena me ye trend hai kya ki ladkiyan ghunghat me hi rahe

N : nahi aisa kuch nahi hai ,par Bui ne kaha hai to main mana kaise karti jee.

M :Jee,Nupur mera name Mayank hai aur tum mujhe shayad isi name se bulaya karti thi.

N : tab mujhame akal nahi thi aur hum tab dost hua karte the

M : to ab kya hai ?[he forgot what he said for a moment]

Nupur : Abhi hum pati patni hai aur main aapka name nahi le sakti

Mayank [Oh no main to bato me ye bhul hi gaya ki mujhe nupur se jo bat karni thi ]

M : Par main hu to Mayank hi na ,you can call me Mayank

N : dekhiye morena me to ya possible nahi hai ,Mumbai me hi bula sakti hu shayad

Again shock for Mayank – that means nupur ne ye shadi accept kar li hai Mayank aise bewkoofo ki tarah kya khada hai puch jo puchana tha ,after composing himself he took a deep breath and said

M : Nupur ,tum is shadi ko manti ho?I mean hamari shadi to tab hui thi when we really didn't know what it means?

N : Haan kyon aap nahi mante?I mean kya aapko koi aur pasand hai [it was not easy for nupur to ask him as she loved him from the day one]

M : Nahi aisa kuch nahi hai ,main sirf janana chahta tha ki aajkal ki generation me bhi koi aise bate manta hai bhala?

N : Haan aap sahi kah rahe hai par still i believe

M [oh no ab main kya karu ,ise to is shadi se koi issue hi nahi hai]

M : Par nupur tum janti ho ki main to US me rahta hu ,would it be possible for you to adjust there?

Nupur thought for a while and then answered : Haan par kya aap wahi settle hone wale ho?

Mayank : nahi par agle kuch sal to main wahi rahunga.,mujhe apna business set karna hai

N : oh phir thik hai

Mayank was not able to tell her rather to ask her ki wo is shadi me yakin nahi karta hai ,uska gala sukhane laga and he said nupur mujhe pani chahiye.

Nupur went and got the water while giving it to him there hand brushed against each other, nupur felt current running to her body Mayank felt same as nupur and glass fell down.Nupur saw there was no water in room to wo pani lene ke liye niche jane lagi par jate waqt uske dupatta table me stuck ho gaya and she ran till the door without thinking ki kya hua hai?when she reached she thought Dupatta to wahi rah gaya hai

Mayank saw her again and now he could see her open hair ,her feminine curves and her shivering hand ,he saw her from back she didn't turn to take her duppat ,Mayank ne halato ko samajhate huye he took the dupatta from table and placed it on her shoulder without touching her ,she turned and Mayank could see her ek jhalak in the mirror ,he was able to see her eyes.

Her eyes were beautiful even in fraction of seconds he was able to see it speaks volume.He thought for a while kah du usase ya ek chance du apni is shadi ko jis par main trust nahi karta ,would it be right if i ask her that we can give a chance to this marriage?Nahi Mayank wo toot jayegi ,she believes in this marriage aur dekha nahi she has positive attitude ,she is frank she asked if you have anyone in your life too?mayank its true ki ye shadi jab hui thi tum aur nupur iska matlab bhi nahi jante the par you know what dude you should give a chance ,nupur suljhi hui ladki hai,she is not from royal family but she has manners ,moreover tumhari ghar me wo sabko pasand hai.

He was thinking a lot to take a decision and then he saw nupur came with water ,he drank water and then said – thik hai nupur its quite late i guess mujhe bhi chalna chahiye.Meri train ka reservation hai .

Nupur felt sad for a while [ye kya itne salo bad mile hai aur ye abhi jane ki bat kar rahe hai]-par abhi to aap Bauji se mile hi nahi hai ,unhe pata chalega to Bui ko aur mujhe dant padegi.aap kal chale jaiyega.

M : par nupur ,mujhe kal kuch kam hai aur main

N : Please Mayank aaj ki rat hi rukne kah rahi hu ,mera matlab hai aap aaj rat ko ruk jaiye kal chale jaiyega [nupur samajh gayi ki she referred him as Mayank ]

Mayank was smiling after hearing his name –he felt good after hearing his name from nupur, Tumne to kaha tha kit um mujhe Mayank kahkar sirf Mumbai me hi bulaogi with mischievous smile

Nupur was fiddling with her dupatta – wo actually galti se nikal gaya ,Sorry ab se nahi kahunga

M : thats fine with me nupur main to yahi chahta hu na ,again pause for a min and he said .Thik hai aaj ki rat main ruk jata hu.Maa ko inform kar du

N :with a broad smile on her face thik hai main bhi bui ko bata deti hu.

M : ok ,Mayank calls mom and nupur goes from there

MM :Hello Mayu ,kaise ho beta jab se gayi ho no call

M : Sorry maa ,main thik se pahunch gaya hu aur kal ki train se wapas aaunga

MM : kal kyon aaj kyon nahi [with the mischievous smile]

M : maa wo aaj uncle nahi the unse milana padega na ,nupur ne kaha to main and then he realised ki usne kya kah dala

MM : gale ki kharash and then nupur ne kya mayu?

M : maa please

MM : Kya please ,maine kya kaha?

M : aapna sace me impossible ho

MM : achha thik hai ,ye bata nupur kaisi lagi

M : thik hai

MM : Thik hai matlab??achhi hai bahut achhi hai ya expectation se bhi jyada hai

M : Mom main ghar aakar bat karunga aapse

MM : par uske bauji se milega to kya kahega ye to bata

M : maine abhi socha nahi hai par i think i should give a chance maa

Shilpa became too happy after hearing this from Mayank and

MM: God bless you beta ,i think u should

M : Thik hai ma [with a broad smile]

They cut the call and Mayank went to his room ,he had one pair of spare cloth which had a white cotton kurta only. So he changed in that and came to have dinner by that time Mr Bhushan also came.Mayank took blessing from him and as it was dinner time they did not talk much and soon went to their respective room.Mayank was not feeling sleepy so he went to terrace .

He was loving the breeze and the light windy weather also.Terrace door was open he was about to step out from the door when one dupatta came and covered his face

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 5

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Mayank was at the door and his face was covered with her dupatta.Nupur was not aware ki uska duaptta uske shoulder par nahi hai she was busy in titanic pose feeling the breeze.Mayank ne apne face se dupatta hataya aur samne nupur thi apne aankhe band karke us bahti hui hawa ko mahsus kar rahi thi uske khule bal uske face ko cover kar rahe the and she had a smile ,Mayank was so lost in her innocence ki use pata hi nahi chala ki he came to give her dupatta, Mayank was staring at her face but again because of wind and dim light it was not clear to him he came closer to her and pushed her hair strain back to her shoulder nupur felt shiver running to her spines she turned and became red.she forgot to take the dupatta and turned Mayank thought undoubtedly she is beautiful girl he has seen ever. He never used to see girls ,neither in his college not like typical flirty boys.

Both stood silently jaise dono statue ho, Mayank wanted to break that unwanted silence between them,Nupur tum pahle jaise chubby chubby nahi ho he teased her .Matlab main moti thi ,she turned aur apni badi aankhon ko aur bhi bada karke puchange lagi.aur nahi to kya tumne apni bachpan ki photo nahi dekhi kya ,jo mujhase aise badi badi aankhen karke puch rahi ho.she made a puppy face Mayank was smiling at her .Haan tumhe nahi lagta , i mean tum pahle se kafi slim ho gayi ho aur khubsurat bhi aur uski smile ke sath uske cute dimples bhi najar aane lage.

Thodi der pahle nupur jis awkward situation se bahar aai thi wo phir se wahi pahunch gayi ,her eyes lowered and she was about to leave when he came in front and asked – tum pahle to itna blush nahi karti thi aajkal to her waqt ghunghat me hi rahti ho

N : Pahle hum dono sirf dost the par ab aisa nahi hai na she was playing with the hem of her dupatta and her eyes lowered and she was making a half circle with her toe

M : achha to ab kya difference aa gaya hai

She saw him in shocked state

N : tum hamesha bhul jate ho ,hamari shadi ho gayi hai

After getting this response only mayank realises yeah he is married

M : But nupur kya shadi hone se dosti nahi ho sakti ,ya shadi ke bad dosti khatam ho jati hai???

He was serious and he knew what he meant

N: nahi maine aisa to nahi kaha ,i mean but changes to aa hi jate hai na

M : par kyon aate hai?Aisa kyon hota hai ?

N : Wo mujhe nahi pata ,par itna pata hai ki relation badal jata hai to changes to aane hi hai rt?

M: but changes lata kaun hai its we only rt?

N : par Mayank ye to society ke sath humame aa hi jata hai na?ye to change hai jo samay ke sath hota hi hai.

M : main nahi manta ,ye hum par depend karta hai nupur ki hum un bato ko kaise manage karte hai ,society humse banti hai ,hum society se nahi.Hum society ka hissa hai par kya hamari responsibility nahi banti ki hum un chijo ko sahi kare jo sahi nahi hai, main change ke against nahi hu par haa un changes ke sath bhi nahi jo ek pati patni se unka dosti ka rishta hi chin le.

[Achoose in short for you – I am not against changes ,i just want that two persons can be friends though they are married and i really don't want to accept any change ]

Nupur was astonished and her thought process was continued : is it because of you brought up in US or you really believe in this these were the sudden words which came out

M : it is not because of US or india you know in my family maa did not differentiate between me and Di aur dad ne bhi kabhi ye nahi kaha.Di aur jiju ki shadi bhi to arrange marriage hi hai par dono shadi se pahle bhi dost the aur aaj bhi vaise hi hai.I feel really happy jab Di aur jijaji chote se choti bat ek dusare se dosto ki tarah share karte hai aur mujhe nahi lagta ki unki marriage ne friendship ko override kar liya hai.main US jakar bhi hamare culture ko nahi bhula hu ,i agree ki waha jane se i am changed a bit but wo changes ache ke liye hi hai.

Nupur was lost in her thoughts but she was listening him very carefully,she raised another question : kya tum US me hi settle hona chahte ho? Main shayad waha adjust na ho pau Mayank

Both were in serious discussion ,Mayank wanted to talk as much is possible at that moment , he wanted to answer her questions and get answers for his questions also

M : maine aisa kab kaha ,i am not in favour of settling down there bus mujhe apna business establish karna hai and i need some time for that.

N : i don't know Mayank ki main adjust kar paungi ya nahi ,like i am very new to that culture ,she looked at him in disbelief

M : Nupur do you really think ki waha adjust karna is impossible ,waha bahut se log hai jo india se hai aur bhi dusare countries se hai you really need not to bother for that.

N : par mere liye to tum hi waha apne hoge na Mayank ,i don't know the US culture too

M : par kisi culture ko janane me waqt hi kitna lagta hai ,i mean it hardly matters.Aur waha main hi hu iska kya matlab ,don't you trust me?

N : nahi maine aisa to nahi kaha ,mera kahne ke matlab tha ki sab kuch tum par aa jayega ,you have to teach me ,u need to focus on your work so how will you manage that

Mayank smiled and answered : are uske liye tum tension kyon le rahi ho .meri ek friend hai she will be helping me.

N : friend matlab ???? Girl or Boy?she became curious

Mayank chuckled and said : girl kyon?

N : main to aise hi puch rahi thi?

M : achha ,to aise kyon pucha?

N was slightly angry : cant i ask a simple question?

M : of course you can ,maine mana thode hi kiya hai Nupsi?

N : Nupsi?

M : tumhare bachapan ka name yahi hai na?

N : mujhe wo name pasand nahi hai and you know that Mayu?

M: And i too don't like anyone calling me Mayu ? you know that nupsi?

N: tumne mujhe phir se nupsi kaha?i wont stop until you call me Nupur ,Mayu?

M : oh to yahi hai Bhartiy nari jo apne pati ko name se bulati hai [hiding his smile]

N : oho ab tak to bada society ki achhi buri bate sikha rahe the what happened suddenly?

Mayank was at losing side he said ,Nupur Bui

Nupur wanted to hide and ran behind the wall ,Mayank started laughing ,it didn't take time for her to know the truth.Mayank main tumhe chodungi nahi and tey started running around the terries

Both were tried chasing each other and stopped to take breath.Mayank again said nupur Bui and placed her dupatta on her shoulder and went at one side

N : dekho Mayank mujhe bewkoof mat banao ,main janti hu tumhari sari adate but before she say something more Bui called her name and said : yaha kisase bate kar rahi hai tu

Nupur was shocked after hearing Bui and composed herself : main kaha kisi se bate kar rahi hu wo to bus aise hi shlok yad kar rahi thi bui

B : achha ab chal niche rat kafi ho gayi hai

Nupur went and while going she saw Mayank who was showing his thumb down to her and she was furious at that moment but nothing can be done.She closed the door thinking she can take revenge now, and went straight to her room.

She was angry but it was fake anger ,she sat near her window and started thinking about what she spoke and what he replied ,he was very firm yet confident,she realised how she forgot to take the dupatta and how nicely he covered when bui came she didn't realise that it started raining and she was feeling it is cold too,she became tensed as Mayank was on the terries .

Nupur ko tension barish ke sath increase ho rahi thi, she was cursing herself for doing this to Mayank,she went to terries only to find him standing in the rain ,

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So gals aaj yahi tak ,soon ill update it ,till then enjoy and comment

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Edited by ardramn - 14 years ago
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resssssssss
edited
me first
yay me
wow di
i am so glad you updated
really proud of you
didn't expect it so soon

the update was amazing
mayur talk was so cute
i loved it a lot
i loved how both put forward their views
but i found it very short
update soon and a long one




mahima


Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 14 years ago
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Amazin one !!!!
Wil edoit m comment later,.,,,,
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wow awesome
amazing update
like mayur terrace scene
next scene cant wait 4 it
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that was a mindbllowing update dear...loved the conversation between mayur...........and aruna...thanx a lot 4 translation dear.....u r a sweetheart.........................thanx a ton...............
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very nice update
do continue soon
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lovely updt
thanks for the pm
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fabulous aruna di
i hope i can call u tht
cumin 2 the upd8
it was fabulous
loved it

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