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Thought to make this post yesterday ...but had to put down my thoughts on the track ...I still say wait for the current track to unfold ...its too soon to comment on it ...but nocticed something which has potential to overshadow the currect track .. So being honest yet again...
Dialogues and context of scene sometimes do not sync ....coz the continuity ,characteristics was lacking at many places .. ...
So whats with Shaans dialogues ,is it a new person who is writting his dialogues ..Shaanism is lacking but lots of attitude is in...just becoz the actor and character is the same those part gets pulled through ...
Khanak ..I think she needs to talk to give back to Sam but in her non nonsense manner ..
Sam ...Its too soon to comment ...If u want to give her good hold on show give her some good depth wala dialogues...same for Rahul...they both have lotsa potential ...
@ Track -Like Shaan missed his friend and both of then are glad to see each other ..nothing is wrong with track ..nor with Shaan nor Sam.... nor Shaan not sharing bout his frens to Khanak...
@Dialogues - lets not forget Shaan never missed this friend when he went thru some real bad phases...So dialogues should not show as if Shaan cant imagine solving his problems without her and next appeasing Khanak with something similar ...
@Track -Show tiff between Shanak ,show word wars between Sam and Khanak ...ok ..
@Dialogues - But dont use cliched dialougues like 'tumahara pyaar sacha hai......to usko dost ko kyun zaroorat hui" with comic treatment ...That was just a retaliation from Sam on Khanak's again cliched 'Tumhe kya pata sacha pyar kya hota hai' ....the entire word war was perceived in two different ways -one set who felt bad with dialogue uttered and next who got the context of scene ...not good ...
I would have loved if Shaan would have only said 'Aye Baiko ,maaf kardo' and said I know I was wrong , Burthal me ....rather than repeating dialogues tum meri patni ho ,main tumse bahut pyar karta hoon ...reminded me of 'woh teen shabd' ...
Its not a complain but humble request to the dialogue writters -you guys have been great in past...but something is amiss here
So please take care of the continuity ...If thats an instruction from some other department to have such dialogues please make them understand ..coz misplaced dialogues and wrong treatment of same dialogues can be suicide for a well built character too...
I like the way the current track is unfolding ...Too soon to pass judgement ..I am being catious as dialogues can swing it either ways ..Dont write what audience want to hear ,write what u think Shaan or Khank would say ...u have done so in past pls do so in future
PS: Understand this post is not on character or episode analysis ..
Anupamaa
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