Dialogues -Something amiss? - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Priya,
Super post.....U're really talented, lady! Absolutely loved ur 'Aye Baiko ,maaf kardo'.......totally original i must say!!
That "woh teen shabd" thing, Shaan's cupping of Khanak's face, and their subsequent intense/ wide-eyed expressions have been done to death man!!
CVs, pls rack ur brains! Come up with some original one-liners and regenerate our interest in the dialogues, yet again!!
Cheers,
Dyotona
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Priya darling you truly have said it all dear...Bang on girl!!!
The Cv's especially the dialogue writers really really need to buck up with their dialogues...they seem to completely forget the ones they used previously or things like Natty never ever cooked so???? Why have Sam use that to get Khanak to cook halwa??
The dialogues are really bad for Sam...they really need to work on them as they are off putting in many ways and the character has depth...loved the past mystery being brought up...and hope the other new entry has good dialogues too as dialogues do a lot in putting us off a crtain character or us loving them, liking them...or...being intrigud to know them.
CV'S please please work on your dialogues..make them great as they were in th beginning...Dulwhadi days, the Kuch Khass Hai sequence...the whole adventure time etc...great great dialogues them..adn even during the change in feelings for both and love relaization by both.

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