*Khushi's One-Shot* RTMC/DV SS Part 4 Pg 16

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Index

Veer- Nandini pg. 1
Let Me Love You- MaanEet pg 3
Only Love- MaanEet pg 5
Arjuhi- Imperfect Love pg. 8

Kyun Ho Gaya na...
Part 1 Pg 11
Part 2 Pg 11
Part 3 Pg 15
Part 4 Pg 16



Hey Guyz M Bored Of Writing FFs So Thought Of Writing One-Shots, So that I get Rid of Updating The FFs , So Here's My First One-Shot On VEER-NANDINI...Hope u all enjoy it.




From the very Begining, the girl's family objected strongly on her dating this guy. Saying that it has got to do with family background & that the girl will have to suffer for the rest of her life if she were to be with him.

Due to family's pressure, the couple quarrel very often. Though the girl love the guy deeply, but she always ask him: "How deep is your love for me?"

As the guy is not good with his words, this often cause the girl to be very upset. With that & the family's pressure, the girl often vent her anger on him. As for him, he only endure it in silence.

After a couple of years, the guy finally graduated & decided to further his studies in overseas. Before leaving, he proposed to the girl: "I'm not very good with words. But all I know is that I love you. If you allow me, I will take care of you for the rest of my life. As for your family, I'll try my best to talk them round. Will you marry me?"

The girl agreed, & with the guy's determination, the family finally gave in & agreed to let them get married. So before he leave, they got engaged.

The girl went out to the working society, whereas the guy was overseas, continuing his studies. They sent their love through emails & phone calls. Though it's hard, but both never thought of giving up.

One day, while the girl was on her way to work, she was knocked down by a car that lost control. When she woke up, she saw her parents beside her bed. She realised that she was badly injured. Seeing her mum crying, she wanted to comfort her. But she realized that all that could come out of her mouth was just a sigh. She has lost her voice...

The doctors says that the impact on her brain has caused her to lose her voice. Listening to her parents' comfort, but with nothing coming out from her, she broke down.

During the stay in hospital, besides silence cry,...it's still just silence cry that companied her. Upon reaching home, everything seems to be the same. Except for the ringing tone of the phone. Which pierced into her heart everytime it rang. She does not wish to let the guy know. & not wanting to be a burden to him, she wrote a letter to him saying that she does not wish to wait any longer.

With that, she sent the ring back to him. In return, the guy sent millions & millions of reply, and countless of phonecalls,.. all the girl could do, besides crying, is still crying...

The parents decided to move away, hoping that she could eventually forget everything & be happy.

With a new environment, the girl learn sign language & started a new life. Telling herself everyday that she must forget the guy. One day, her friend came & told her that he's back. She asked her friend not to let him know what happened to her. Since then, there wasn't anymore news of him.

A year has passed & her friend came with an envelope, containing an invitation card for the guy's wedding. The girl was shattered. When she open the letter, she saw her name in it instead.

When she was about to ask her friend what's going on, she saw the guy standing in front of her. He used sign language telling her "I've spent a year's time to learn sign language. Just to let you know that I've not forgotten our promise. Let me have the chance to be your voice. I Love You. With that, he slipped the ring back into her finger. The girl finally smiled.


Plz Leave ur comments n suggestions, whether i shud continue or not.

Love

Khushi.

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anumeha_rajat thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awwww...that was soooo sweet di...

beautifully written...

do write more...

thnx for the pm.........

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kya bolun di

speechless

hats off

dis is called true luv............awesome👏

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Posted: 14 years ago
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khushi it's superb very touchy. It easily reach to one's heart. Keep writing more and more OS.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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gr8 kushi u shud ud it
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hi
the ff of one shot is very good
plz aase he os likhte rahene and thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was so nice
amazing
if u hav time pls continue it
it was really a fantastic job
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awwww khushi...i alwayz like sweet luv story...😳
and its beautifully written and very predictable for me😛😉
but lovely indeed 👏👏
keep it up 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Khushi that was so touching....
Loved your one shot......
❤️ Prachi
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowohhooooooooo
dis is soo beautiful...................
**hugs**
m waitng 4 more...........

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