*Khushi's One-Shot* RTMC/DV SS Part 4 Pg 16

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Khushi Grover

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: megha01
ooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmgggggggggggggggggggggg
awesome OS
luvd it truly👏
soooooooooooooo touching
well di i really lyk tragic luv stories............dey hav a more enchanting effect on d readers...
so no problem wid me

thnkuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu so much megha

atlast kisi ko to dil se achi lagi 😉

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

beautiful os.
but very sad.
I'm crying after read it.
waiting for new os on maaneet

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Khushi Grover

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
beautiful os.
but very sad.
I'm crying after read it.
waiting for new os on maaneet

srry chutki for letting u cry

thnx dear😃

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ruchi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

its was so tragic yaar...i became emotional while reading..😭.

poor geet...😭

and i like d way u portrayed Maan...i like d way he love

and kept his words...wonderfully written 👏

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Khushi Grover

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: ruchi89
its was so tragic yaar...i became emotional while reading..😭.
poor geet...😭
and i like d way u portrayed Maan...i like d way he love
and kept his words...wonderfully written 👏

thnkuuuuuuuuuuuuu jaaneman😳

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anumeha khanna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

oh my my....di....that was simply superb...

mindblowing...

simply loved it...

though a bit senti....but marvelous.........

thnx for the pm.............

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shonagudia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Very nice one. Though it's sad one but it truly gave the msg for true love.

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radt

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Absolutely WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Amazingly talented Chupa-rustam friend!!!!!!!!!

I got thinking of the old scenes of PRC!

U carried me away!!!!!!!!!!

Keep It up Shona!!!!!!!!!!

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radt

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

You never fail until you stop trying

Wonderfully written meri shona!

i read it again and again... have no idea abt aneet but this is darn amazing and very touching indeed!

Loved the way u express things soooooo clearly!

Ur a fab writer.... no doubt abt it...

plus ur extremely creative too!

God bless My shona!

Do continue writing n Pm me sooooooooon1

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Khushi Grover

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Posted: 14 years ago

#50

Arjun Arohi

Imperfect Love

They have been married for two years. He loves literature and often posts his work on the net, but nobody ever reads them. He is also into photography and he handles their wedding photos. He loves her very much. Likewise with her. She has a quick temper and always bullies him. He is a gentleman and always gives in to her.

Today, she's being willful again.

arohi: "Why can't you be the photographer for my friend's wedding? She promised she'd pay."

arjun: "I don't have time that day."

arohi: "Humph!"

arjun: "Huh?"

arohi: "Don't have time? Write less of those novels, and you will have all the time you need."

arjun: "I... someone will definitely recognize my work some day."

arohi: "Humph! I don't care, you'll have to do it for her!"

arjun: "No."

arohi: "Just this once?"

arjun: "No."

Negotiation's broken. So, she gave the final warning: "Give me a Yes within three days, or else..."

First day, she "withheld" the kitchen, bathroom, computer, refrigerator, television, hi-fi... Except the double bed, to show her "benevolence".

Of course, she has to sleep on it too. He didn't mind, as he still has some cash in his pockets.

Second day, she conducted a raid and removed everything from his pockets and warned, "Seek any external help, and you bear the consequences."

He's nervous now. That night, on the bed, he begs for mercy, hoping that she'll end this state. She doesn't give a damn. No way am I giving in, whatever he says. Until he agrees.

Third day, night. On the bed. He's lying on the bed, looking to one side. She's lying on the bed, looking to the other side.

arjun: "We need to talk."

arohi: "Unless it's about the wedding, forget it."

arjun: "It's something very important."

She remains silent.

arjun:"Let's get a divorce."

She did not believe her ears.

arjun: "I got to know a girl."

She's totally angry, and wanted to hit him. But she held it down, wanting to let him finish. But her eyes already felt wet. He took a photo out from his chest. Probably from his undershirt pocket, that's the only place she didn't go through yesterday. How careless.

arjun: "She's a nice girl."

Her tears fell.

arjun: "She has a good personality too."

She's heartbroken because he puts a photo of some other girl close to his heart.

arjun: "She says that she'll support me fully in my pursue for literature after we got married."

She's very jealous because she said the same thing in the past.

arjun: "She loves me truly."

She wishes to sit up and scream at him "Don't I?"

arjun: "So, I think she won't force me to do something that I don't want to do."

She's thinking, but the rage won't subside.

arjun: "Want to take a look at the photo I took for her?"

arohi: "...!"

He brings the photo before her eyes. She's in a total rage, hits his hand away and leaves a burning slap on his face.

He sighs. She cries.

He puts the photo back to his pocket. She pulls her hand back under the blanket.

He turns off the light, and sleeps. She turns on the light, and sits up. He's asleep. She lost sleep. She regrets treating him the way she treated him.

She cried again, and thought about a lot of things. She wants to wake him up. She wants to have a intimate talk with him. She doesn't want to push him anymore. She stares at his chest. She wants to see how the girl looks.

She slips the photo out. She wanted to cry and she wanted to laugh.

It's a nicely taken photo. A photo he took for her. She bends down, and kissed him on his cheek.

He smiled. He was just pretending to be asleep.

"You learn to love, not by finding a perfect person, but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly."

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Khushi