Hi friends 🤗! My name is Aparna (you can call me Appu too 😳). I really want to mention something here.....its just been 2-3 weeks since I have been visiting this forum, and I have noticed really great, creative and analytical writers in this forum as compared to any other forum 👏. I have been reading topics, writeups and comments by many of you and I am really impressed with the creativity of you guys here 👍🏼. The way some of you write I really think maybe you guys are 'writers' 😲, then the way many of you analyse Dutta and his psychology I wonder whether you guys are science students studying for 'psychology' 😆. Its really AMAZING 👏! And many things that you all have analysed was so in line with my feelings and analysis - when I read a particular subject topic and open it I get points in my head which I might want to mention in that topic, but after reading all the pages in that particular topic I realize I don't have anything to contribute as you all have beautifully mentioned whatever was in my mind 👏. I really want to mention those members' names here but I'm sure I might miss out on many of them if I start mentioning so am not, and even if I dont, you all already know whom all I'm referring to 😉.
So I can confidently say one thing......the creativity of the writers here are any day better than the creative team of LTL 😊. After reading all your creative suggestions, when an actual scene takes place in LTL, I feel our ideas were better 😉.
Now coming to the main intention of this topic......as I mentioned, since we all have the gift of CREATIVITY & IMAGINATION, lets have fun and put to use our imagination and writing skills to create MAGICAL Tasha REUNION scene/incident/event. You have to come up with that one INCIDENT, a POWERFUL INCIDENT that would steer start Tasha romance 😉. By one incident I mean, even though the process of soulful reunion of Tasha would be a slow one, there would always be that one incident that will heavily mark the starting point of such a groW*H right?
TASK - So if you were given the pen to create that ONE INCIDENT that marks a turning point in Tasha relationship and romance, how beautifully do you imagine it, and how would you write it down and how would you expect it to be executed 😉?
The reason why I came up with this topic is, am sure all of us enjoy reading really thought provoking and imaginative writeups by creative writers here, so why not use their skill to create stuff which we all might have a gala time reading and dream of watching onscreen in LTL 😉 (which can hopefully be adapted by the creatives of LTL if they ever visit the forum 🤔). I'm sure we will have a good database of soulful writeups, and I just cant wait to read them 😃!
Since I created this topic, I thought of starting off this task by presenting to you my version of that one Tasha incident that paves way for Tasha reunion 😳.......
I was just thinking....more than Dutta coming to terms with the fact that Nakku is the old Nakku by observing her acts or listening to her words, don't you think it would be more SOULFUL and 'FROM THE HEART' when he realizes this fair woman is her Nakku FROM HER FEEL 😉?! Confused?! Ok read further to know what I mean 😉......
1st Step - Evacuate everyone else from PN except Dutta & Nakku 😆....
One of Patil family's relative's daughter is getting married in Bangalore or some place outside Maharashtra, and the entire Patil family has been invited. Since they are close relatives, PN cannot refute their invitation so they decide to go out of town for it. However as expected, Dutta refuses to go and asks everyone else to carry on. Again as expected, Nakku tells everyone 'main nahin jaayegi....main saab ko akela chodke nahin jaayegi....'. So eventually Nakku convinces everyone that she will stay back and take care of Dutta, and everyone else can go ahead and enjoy without worrying about them (phew.....shukar hain bala chutti 😆!)
Now for 3 days the only 2 people left in the entire PN is Dutta & Nakku 😉......
After everyone leaves, on that night.....
As usual Dutta is hardly bothered and is busy drinking and roaming around. Finally he comes home at night?.Nakku is waiting for him at the dining table to have dinner, she sleeps off there 🥱...
Suddenly she hears a noise and wakes up and finds Dutta has arrived home with a 'sharab ki baatli'. She tries to grab the bottle from him and give him dinner but Dutta gets so pissed that he pulls her by the hand and throws her outside the main door and closes the door! As we all know when Dutta is drunk he doesn't have any sense and he doesn't even know what he does (remember the 1st time he hurt Nakku when he was drunk and pissed because of Supriya, when he got up in the morning he dint even remember the way he treated Nakku and only when Baaji told him he remembered he illtreated her ).
So now Nakku is stuck outside the house and she doesn't know what to do. She tries shouting and asking Dutta to open the door but by that time he has already reached his room, throws himself on the sofa, finishes off his baatli and sleeps off there .
Suddenly it starts raining. Nakku gets scared and keeps trying to get Dutta to open the door, but in vain. Now the rains started to become really heavy, heavy enough to create floods! As much as possible, Nakku tries to snuggle up in some corner but because the rains are really heavy, she is not able to escape it and the entire night she spends in the rain .
Morning at PN......
Slowly Dutta gets up with his hands on his head and as usual walks down to the hall. After sometime he just opens the main door and sees Nakku lying unconscious at the left corner! He suddenly overhears his servant's conversation about how heavily it rained last night and how people stayed back home. That's when suddenly Dutta remembers how he dragged Nakku out of the house and closed the main door. He then realizes that she was lying outside the house the entire night in the heavy rains 😭.
He suddenly moves to her, lifts her by the head and tries to shake her calling 'Nakkuuuu....Nakkuuuu....' to bring her back to consciousness. She doesn't move. Her face looks totally pale and lips white. Dutta feels very guilty and carries her to his room. He tries several times to bring her back to consciousness, puts water on her face, etc., but she doesn't move. He gets really scared and calls their family doctor. She comes and does her check-up and gives Nakku an injection and slowly Nakku moves her head. The doctor tells Dutta 'good you called me now itself, she is really very sick and if you would have delayed calling me even little, her condition would have worsened......anyways I have given her an injection now, but her condition is still bad.....you will have to take very good care of her and make sure she has proper food and medicines on time. In case of any emergency, call me.'
Dutta feels guilty and remembers what the doctor told him - TAKE GOOD CARE OF HER, FOOD ON TIME, MEDICINES ON TIME.
Nakku is really weak, she is not aware of anything happening around her. She is so sick that she loses her sense.
Dutta hesitantly brings her 'haldi wala doodh', food etc. but he realizes that she is so weak that she cant even get up on her own or even sit up. Then he hesitantly sits next to her and feeds her with his own hands, this might be something Nakku might be waiting for a long time but unfortunately she is so sick that she cant even feel these gestures of Dutta 😭.
The whole day Dutta maintains himself without drinking alcohol. He doesn't even go outside his room thinking 'what if Nakku needs him' 😳.
That night.....
Nakku is lying on the bed and Dutta on the sofa. Again it starts raining heavily outside. Dutta notices this and closes all windows.
But after some time Nakku starts shivering badly and Dutta notices this and moves to her and blankets her properly......but still she continues to shiver and he doesn't know what to do. He notices things are worsening with her shivering and thinks about calling the doctor, but unfortunately seeing the rains outside he is doubtful if he would be able to get the doctor .
He is totally confused and doesn't know what to do and then out of reflex he just hugs her tightly and she stops shivering 😳. On realizing that she stopped shivering when he hugged her, he cannot leave her and go so he continues to lie on the bed hugging her 😍. Initially you can still see that anger and irritation on his face that he has to lie there hugging her, but the guilt feeling that he is responsible for Nakku's sick condition prompts him to lie there besides her. Slowly after sometime he just looks at her face and then starts to stare at her 😍.....
If required, an entire episode can be shot on this one scene if the creatives have the ability to really shoot it beautifully, and since Mishal is excellent with expressions, the entire episode can be a play of just this guy's expressions 😉.
This can be the sequence of his expressions 😳.....
Initially Dutta helplessly wonders what to do to stop her shiver and then accidently he just 'tries' hugging her just as an 'experiment' and there - she stops shivering 😳. Then initially for sometime Dutta will have that 'hate' & 'irritated' looks on his face as he is just hugging her out of 'majboori'. He is still thinking of 'dhoka' and stuff, but this time he just cannot throw her away and walk off.....ahem ahem.....as LITERALLY the need of the hour is 'Tasha hug' 😉.
(Their trade mark romantic background music has started playing at this point.....)
Then they show Dutta staring at Nakku's innocent face, and how comfortable she is in the wraps of his arms away from the 'cold'. They show how comfortably Nakku is placed inside Dutta's arms with her head on his chest, and how protectively and tightly Dutta is hugging her so that she doesn't shiver. He then looks at her hands, how her hands are also hugging him from his neck as though 'I am safe in your arms' 😳.
Then while he is staring at her face, he remembers the nice and romantic moments between them - mainly in the jungle and few other romantic scenes after their marriage was fixed (like the scene where Nakku falls and he holds her, where he places the payal on her legs, etc. 😳)
After remembering these scenes he has a happy and romantic look on his face, but when he looks at her face and notices her complexion, he again remembers 'DHOKA'. But somehow this time his emotions are not that aggressive and he is able to feel something familiar about this woman in his arms - her touch, her smell......basically the NAKKU FEEL 😉!
The moment Dutta gets the NAKKU FEEL, he feels something inside him melting.....he can hear the violins play 😆.....something is happening to his soul.....Dutta is wondering "yeh mujhe kya ho raha hain?.....something is replacing my 'bechaini' inside.....something is filling inside me.....whats going on.....ANGER, HATRED - WHERE ART THOU' 😲 ?!?!?!?."
Inbetween when he senses Nakku is getting uncomfortable and has started shivering slightly, immediately he tightens his arms and she regains back her comfort and stops shivering (if you want we can put in a funny scene where Dutta introduces his leg on her to give her a tighter hug 😆....funny scene it would be though 😆)
Slowly in couple of hours time, Dutta's all bechaini, anger, hatred and everything negative just melts.....he cant even move as he wants to maintain Nakku in a comfortable position, so he just maintains his pose of staring at Nakku and spends the night 😳....
(our trademark Tasha background music continues.......)
Just imagine Dutta spending the entire night hugging Nakku.....now tell me - AISI KAUNSI SHAKTHI HAIN JO DUTTA KO PIGHALNE SE ROK SAKTHA HAIN 😉 ?!?!?! Kala, ET, anyone else?!?!?!
It will be a treat to watch Dutta's expressions here 👍🏼.
So as I mentioned initially, here Dutta realizes that this fair woman is her Nakku from HER FEEL AN TOUCH! There will not be any need for any words, explanations or proofs for Dutta to feel the REAL NAKKU. I think this would be an amazing scene if the creatives are able to show it with that soul. When everyone, especially Kala and gang would be wondering 'now how will Dutta recognize Nakku, what explanations will convince Dutta?', here they show language of love doesn't need any words or explanations - the feel, the touch and heart to heart hug itself is more than enough to recognize the SOUL & TRUE LOVE. Like how blind people don't have to see to recognize the one he/she loves, they can feel and understand that the person standing in front of them is their LOVE - such is the POWER OF SOULFUL LOVE 😳.
Actualy I have seen and read in many places that what appears like a big problem between couple, one fine day one incident of love between them happens and the big problem that everyone thought would never get solved for many days to come, gets solved instantly 😉.
And just imagine the shock Kala would get when she comes back 😆!
Godd am getting goosebumps thinking of the above scene 😆.....it would be nice if more people can come up with their ideas so that we all can play 'goosebumps...goosebumps...' 😆! Ok on a serious note, do tell me what you think of my write up.....your comments, brickbats, watever it is I would love to hear 😃!
And it would be nice if other creative and imaginative writers can come up with their own soulful and romantic versions, we would love to read them 😳. I know this is a really long writeup, actually I dint plan it to be so long and thought it would end in 3-4 paras, but when I started typing, more and more ideas came to me and finally this is the end result 😆. So incase you guys want to contribute, it need not be as long as this, even if it is 1-2 paras it would be good enough 😊. Or even if you dont want to write on this no problem, do tell me what you think about this and if you have any interesting suggessions or variations to this 😉.
Edited by *dewdrop~pearl* - 14 years ago
mayb ad sum twists n stf lol hehe 😆 xx
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