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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update!
feeling really bad for maneet! 😭
m dying to noe geet's reaction!!!
n can't wait to noe wt happened wid sameera
cuz maan is distancing himself from geet cuz of wtever had happened!
update SOON!

love
Navpreet
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Posted: 14 years ago
cant wait to see geets reaction now ... ll she be angry on maan or wat ???do post the next update soon,,,
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 69

while geet looked into his eyes reading beyound those barriers today
daadi continued - sameera ne jo bhi kiya woh galat tha
uski bewafai ka sila is bechari ko kyun de rahe ho
maan clutched his fist & looked away not able to bare daadi's words
or not able to bare geets eyes that had learned to read him.
geet remembered every single line in the dairy & realized it was him
sameera wrote about. every thing flashed in with clear picture, their first time
meeting when maan actually put the duppata around her, maan caresing her shawl in
the class room, him saying ~naa chaaho kisi ko itna,
ki chaahat tumhari majboori ban jaye, chaaho kisi ko itna,
ki tumhara pyar uske le jaroori ho jaye~
she probably smiled & cried at the same time
it had to be..his love that gave her all the strength to hold their relation
she wondered why, babaji yeh sab mera saath kyun. she smiled at the irony
then the pain in their eyes when sameera could not speak anything infront
of her parents & maan's bebas ankhein...her thought paused froze


she looked at him caringly noding at him with tears welling her eyes- daadi sameera bewaafa nahi thi maan looked at her at once. the intensity in her eyes. he had not heard a word in sameera's favour in past so many years. his heart ached when ever he heard
her name but when geet said her name today it was so different & felt so touching
daadi - humein aapko pehle hi sab batana tha, sameera ne maan ko dhoka
geet walked to daadi - nahi daadi usne koi dhoka nahi diya
she comes back to maan cups his chin - aap kuch bolte kyun nahi
aap to uski majboori samajh gaye the na, phir kyun chup chap
use ruswa hote dehk rahe hain.
maans eyes was filled with tears, confusion on how she knew all about
sameera. why did'nt she ever mention to him. why there was no question
in her eyes, why she was talking in her favour. why there was no fear or anguish. why was she so cool or was it just a silence before the storm. he wanted to just confess it all
at that moment, wanted to let her in. but would that solve their relation
no it may just complicate it further making it difficult to stay away from her
he snapped her hand & walked away. daadi tried to stop him. he did'nt
geet went into her room & looked at the dary again, looked at the flower
looked at sameera's pic & smiled. aap bahut pyari ho & kept the dairy
far away from his reach.
maan walked in later at night & slipped in slowly without disturbing her on
the other end. she turned & came into his arms - kitna late karte ho, ye bhi koi
waqt hota hain ghar aane ka. aap ko humara bikul bhi khayal nahi hain.
murmering in sleep
he held her close & caressed her, she dozed off again.
he laid looking at the cieling wondering why she was not questioning about sameera
what did she know about her, how did she know more than any one else could know
was'nt it enough of confusion in their realtion that now this too

3days had passed since that incident. maan was not able to undersatnd why she remained
so calm about it. geet probably loved him more & expressed herself more lovingly
and wantingly. like there was no fear of losing him. maano kuch aise baat
samjhe gaye ho unke rishte ke bare main jo shayad pehle nahi jaan thi thi
uske is samajh ko maan samajh nahi paya.
every time she said suniye he would jump out in anticipation of her questions
kanhi kuch aise na puchle jiska woh jawab na de paya. this uncertainity & fear killed him
geet - suniye, yeh sab theek nahi hain
maan heart almost stopped beating
geet - aise koi kaise kar sakta hain
maan looking away restly - kaise
she comes & stands in front of him resting her hand on her waist - yeh sab theek nahi hain
isse abhi strawberry & cream khaani hain
maan looked at her, her losely tied plat, her tummy which was quite promnent now,
her eyes which looked so hassled & troubled, her innocent face, complaining cutely
her lips non stop cribbing about every small thing but never bother about serious issues
he raised & without thinking just touched her face, then ran his fingers through her long hair.
Gently he tilter her head toward him & took her lips into his & kissed her.
His eyes bore into hers. He tugged on her hair, pulling her head back farther, exposing her neck.
Bending over her he kissed the skin beneath her ear, then moved lower to the hollow of her throat. He tasted her, licking and nibbling, enjoying her soft moans of pleasure.
She trembled in his embrace and he was lost like the very time she had that spell on him
baby~strawberry & cream
geet~abhi nahi baad main covering her tummy
maan kissed her tummy~abhi
geet made a baby face
baby~loves me more🤗
geet~nahi loves me more
maan drives them to the dessert parlour & places an order for 2 strawberry & cream
she takes the waffers from his bowl & maan takes the choclate toppings from hers
geet - idhar bhi hain
maan feeds her a bite of chocalate topping, she makes a face
maan - usse bahut pasand hain
baby~my papa the bestest😳

they comes back home & she changes into her nighty & slips next to him
maan was still looked very concerned & tensed about why she did'nt ask any thing
about her. na jane uski dil ki har baat kaise samjh jathi
she turned into him - maine use dehka
his heart almost stopped beating
geet - bahut pyari hain
his heart would just burst probably in pain & the wamrth she filled him with
geet - mujhe aap se koi shikayat nahi
she kissed his chest close to the heart & wispered I love you
and I know you love me 2, 3, ..10 aap nahi kehte to kya, yeh dhadkane toh sirf
mera naam leti hain, she raised to kiss his nose inn saanson mein sirf meri
khushboo basti hain aur she shied & kissed his eyes one after & the other
inhe mere allawa kuch aur dehkna khabool hi nahi

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xxJfYseqtYM&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]
precap
BRIJ coming to meet geet
VM CREDIT sweety2441
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
1st to read and comment YAY I'm so happy that Geet feels this way about the whole Maan-Sameera thing. I'm proud of her :-)
Edited by pushpi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the part
Aww..Maaneet Baby part was ssooo cute
Awesome Update
Continue soon!!:)
Edited by maangeetcrazy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow!!!!!!!!! Muskaan u took my heart away..Loved da way Geet understood da pain of Maan.....n his love too!!!!!! CLAPSSSSSSSSSSS
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh i love this...😊... geet trust maan fully .... she dosent even ask any question to him....precap sounds interesting,,, hope brij dosent create any problem for maneet with his overflowing love for geet ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing love by Geet. And she atarted understanding the love after reading sameera's dairy so obviously she understands their feelings very much. Lovely on eMuskan

love you for this
Jaya
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update
hope no prob arises on brij's arrival
keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful update!!!
i really loved it.... i felt like i ws living her.....
very beautifully written n expressed... hats off.......

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