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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: JRia

so true kanika
never seen such people in my life ever
though i'm sure they exist somewhere
trusth me such people do exist & they really care...& love u...
juat need to realize & understand them

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Posted: 14 years ago
i wish i too have frnds like them ..
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Anticipating ur update,di!!!
Please hurry up!!
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net was down for 2 days
paagal hogai thi may iss k bghair
awsome updates (40-41)
and wooo geet is feeling something for BACHAN
cant wait wen geet comes to know that bachan is actually maan
cont soon
love
Noor
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Hi di... Please update soon na...
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muskan di waitingggggggggggggg plzzzzzzzzzz update sooonnnnnnnnnnn😊
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Posted: 14 years ago






updates yaar



part 39

maan - u don't want to dance
geet - nahi makes a face fighting against herself & then wonders why is she making a face
maan - ok, main iske saat dance kar leta hoon

geet - jab aap dance nahi kar rahe tha, maine to aap ko ditch nahi kiya, then when
I am not dancing why did u


geet - hope u are not proposing me

geet - ur definitly not my type.
maan mumered thats why u did'nt like me dancing with that girl

maan - how can that be, tumhare itna sare crush main koi nahi
geet - actually nun
maan - now u don't have an option, ur stuck with me

maan - I have mine in my arms
she pushes him away & he pulls her back - itna asni se tumhe aapne se dor nahi hone doongha

maan - but sweet heart now u have me ...Maan Singh Khurana
geet - tum teehk ho ...yeh Maan Singh Khurana kaun hain

maan - tum itna kyun upset ho rahi ho
geet - i don't like the way some guys treat girls, like hum koi insan nahi sex objects hain



part 40

prem - driver seat ke neechi check karo ek pink packet hoga
maan extends his hand & pulls the pink packet out
maan - what is this
prem - PMS(premenstrual syndrome) kit hain, don't let her see it in ur hand she will kill you
maan dropped it at once
just then geet - kya kar rahe ho
maan cleared his throat - kuch nahi ( phans gya maan bechara )

geet - kuch gir gaya kya
he gets up nervously & gives the phone to geet - nahi tumhara phone
trying to hide the things with his legs

geet finished the second bar licking her lips - aap kya kah rahe the maan ke bare main
maan - phir kabhi, abhi mujhe bahut bhook lagi hain dinner ke liya challen
geet - umm
maan give his hanky to her & points at her lips

mukti - I don't believe it, u actually keep track of her PMS
prem rolls his eyes & ignores it
mukti - I always thought u were just friends

prem & armaan comes from front
geet - armaan what are u doing here aaj sanjeevani band hain kya
prem - ghar chal
geet - aaj important class hain
armaan - nahi woh sab baad main
maan could sense tension in their voice - geet do as they say




armaan - kuch nahi we just wanted to spend some time with you
prem - jab se tujhe bachan mila hain u don't have time for us
maan smiled, geet made a baby face - aise nahi hain



latter in the day maan called prem & checked if every thing was fine
prem - nahi meri aur mukti ki misunderstanding hogaye hain & every one is
blamming geet for that
maan - geet ko pata hain
prem - nahi, she may not be able to bare it
maan - umm

friend - u are the problem
geet - can u just get lost
mukti - dare u speak to my friend like that
geet was taken a back
prem - mukti mind ur words with geet
geet - nahi its ok....she wants to say some thing
mukti - ur are the problem

mukti - tum hoti ho to ise kuch aur nahi sojtha, prem tries to hold mukti back
friend - tumhare zindagi main to koi nahi hain, ho bhi kaise sakta hain
u have so many of them, hoga to bhi prem aur tere bare main pata challen ga to
tuje chod dega


aan in attitude glancing at every one - thats enough about my GF. geet looks at him
with tears in her eyes shocked. kisne kaha ki iski zindagi main koi nahi hain he slips his hands
around geet, main hoon, looks at mukti mujhe koi problem nahi hain prem aur geet ke dosti se, infact I feel proud that even after they have each other she is mine. tum yah main
inki dosti ki gharahi nahi samjh sakte. kar sakte hain to bus just accept them the way
they are
geet hugs him & hiding her tears.
friend - yeh Maan Singh Khurana hain na, yeh iska saat kya kar raha
hain


Geet Handa ka BF MAAN SINGH KHURANA
is jhali ke saat woh kya kar raha hain & he does'nt have problem with
her friendship with other guys, so lucky yaar


part 41
maan - GF ab tum puri ki puri ki offical GF ho

geet smiled with moist eyes - aap bhi koi mauqa nahi chodthe na
maan wipes her tears - itna aacha mauqa kaise chod deta

she turned & saw armaan. she ran & hugged armaan & started crying again
armaan pat her - its ok
geet weeping - I never thought of all the person mukti will
armaan with moist eyes refeclting her hurt - umm
raj called on geets phone
geet with teary eyes & heavy voice still restin in armaan's arms- umm
raj - mera sweety cuty kyun ro raha hain
geet still weeping
raj - this is not fair
geet - why
raj - sab tumhare galti hain
geet - u r also blamming me & starts crying more
raj - tum itni hot & happening ho to hum theeno ki GFs tho insecured feel karengi na
geet smiled


love this type of friendship



raj - I just hope ab tumhare BF ko humse koye problem na ho
geet - kyun
raj - bekar hi pit jayega tumse
geet made a baby face - don't worry use problem nahi hain(she bites her lips)
raj - am I missing some thing there
geet causiously - nahi mera matlab hain use koi problem kaise ho sakta hain

armaan - he is really sweet na
geet - umm
armaan - u did'nt tell us that u were going around
geet - aise nahi hain, we are just friends
armaan - don't tell me he never proposed
geet - nahi
armaan - I thought u were only the confused lot, woh bhi

armaan - tum dono ke ankhoo main saaf dihkta hain ur more than just friends

armaan - aacha this bachan is not very strong types na, I mean body shody type nahi hain na
geet promptly -nahi nahi he is quite strong. maine uski biceps dehki hain
aur us din he fought with those guys, he lifted him with one hand
armaan - uska dressing sense kuch khas nahi hain I feel
geet thinks - mujhe bhaut smart lagta hain, uske combinations dehkna chahiya tumhe
kya collection hain uske pas
armaan smiles inwardly..& she dose'nt love him, kya karoon main is pagli ka
armaan - uski stuble not happening
geet - I love him with stubble, kya bachan type looks deta hain, have u noticed
that straight jaw line, & firm looks uff
armaan kept looking at her
geet - u should see him when he rides horse, kya style, & aur OMG, car ..he really
has great control on it. us din mainne to marva dena tha, he controlled it
she probably went on & On...
she felt he was quite & looked at armaan, he lifted his eye brows questioning she felt she probably spoke too much - main ne jada bol diya na, main chalti hoon
she picked her bag & left then she just peeped back & said - he is nice but still I feel
we don't have that magic
armaan hits head & lies down, what more magic she wants...GEET HANDA going gaga about some one!!!




maan - ur tears haunted me the whole day, I can't see tears in ur eyes
geet smiled & closed her eyes


want







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Posted: 14 years ago

thanxs for all ur support & love...really love all ur long & nice comments...keeps me going!!! how much u love to read what I have written..I love ur comments with equal probably double zeal....

love u all
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 42

the watch beeps...
geet with her closed eyes hugs the watch & sleeps not bothered about the beep
maan wondered what happened to her today
maan - geet alarm band karo
geet in her sleep - mujhe usse problem nahi to aap ko kya hain
maan - GEET
she got up at once & fell off the bed, wondering what happened , she looked
around the watch was beeping she could hear in laughing in the earplugs
she smiled wow meri har subha aise nahi hosakti
maan - aise bed se ghirke & starts laughing again
geet - nahi aise...aapki hasi sunke she closed her mouth
& maan was moved with what she said they were quite for few minutes absorbing that
moment into their lifes.
maan cleared his throat - so javoo will wake u up at 7.30am
geet softly - aab neied kaise aayeghi
maan lifting his eye brows - mmm???
geet hiding her face in the spread - kuch nahi bye & cuts the call

muskan assumes that they... most of the time talk on bluetooth head phones
so the phone can be at near proximity or kept on charging when ever required
also they have like couple of bluetooth head phone, even they require charging na
monthly bill...UMMMM!!! simple ..they both are on unlimited talk plan
waise bhi Khunrana's aur Handa's don't have to bother about such pitty matters

geet reaches college still on call with him.
geet - bachan sab lag mujhe kuch ajeeb tarah se dehk rahen hain
maan gets worried - prem hain wanha?
geet - nahi, merko lagta hain sab ko humare bare main pata chalgaya hoga
isse liya they are making fun of me
maan - why will they make fun ?
geet - meri koi reputation hai bhi yah nahi
maan rooled his eyes - tho
geet - tho kya, they main think GEET HANDA ka BF chi chi bla...aap ho
maan looked at himself - itna bhi bura nahi hoon
geet - nahi mera matlab woh nahi tha
maan rubbing it in - phir kya matlab tha
geet - do u even know who was my last crush???
maan - jisko tumne kiss ke chakar main bhaga diya tha
geet rolled her eyes - yah bolna zarorri nahi tha
maan smiled
geet proudly - Ishant
maan - kaun Ishant???
geet - u don't know Ishant Sharma?
maan - geet i don't know, tum aage peeche bolgi to I can understand
geet - aap news sports wagera deehkthe ho ya nahi?
maan right ..isse nahi mallom Maan Singh Khurana kaun hain & she is telling me uff
maan - tum news wagera ki baat na karo tho hi aacha hain
geet - Indian cricket team ka fast bowler
maan actually was impressed - not bad, aur tumne use baga diya, mera liya
geet - aap ke liya nahi
maan - off course mere liya huwa na
geet - kya matlab
maan - tum use nahi bhagathi to mujhse kaise milti
geet - aap baat mat badlo meri problem solve karo, yanha meri reputation ka kachda ho raha hain
maan wondered Maan Singh Khurana ke saat naam jod ke iski reputation ka kachda, yeh aapne
aap ko samjh thi kya hain, then smiled jo bhi hain ek pal main deewan kar dethi hain
muktis friend comes towards her
geet - yaar woh mukti ki friend hain na
maan - umm
geet - woh meri taraf aa rahi hain
maan - just don't talk to her tum wabha se chale javo
geet - nahi pulling her sleeve up, agar usne kuch kaha na aaj main uska mo thod dongi
maan smiled
friend smiled at geet
geet was shocked - bachan she is smiling at me
maan - aacha
friend - hi
geet - bachan woh hai bolrahi hain
maan - tum pagal ho gayee ho ...talk to her then
friend she hugs geet - hi geet
maan - main call cut kar raha hoon, talk to her
geet - nahi
maan cuts the call smiling sach main pagli hain
geet - cut kar diya
friend pulls back of the hug- kya huwa
geet looks at her dressed in jeans & lose top like her...
she had never seen her in anything but salwar
geet wondered what happened to her. geet gave a weak smile. any way geet
was not very good in talking with girl or understanding their POV. so she remained confused
friend lifted her hand & shouted gathering other girls attention

friend - tum log engaged ho
geet snapped her hand back - nahi
another girl - phir yah ring
friend - tumhare BF ne hi di na
geet could not react much
geet - woh to aise hi gift de thi karwa chaut ka vrat she was confused at evry ones reaction
& did'nt know why were they behind her today
friend - hai!! ek vrat ke liya 5 million ki ring, main to rooz vrat rakhu
geet suddenly felt her finger was heavier than usual. she looked at the ring & was shocked
she knew it was expensive but not this much
another girl - agar gift main ring diya hain to engagement main kaunse ring dega
friend - he is so HOT na, where did u meet him
geet kept looking at their weird questions & still wondering about how expensive the ring was
another girl - yaar woh to kisi bhi ladki ko gaas nahi detha phir tumhe kaise
geet definitly did'nt like that
friend - is he romatic, like kissing & all,
another girl - bata na did he kiss you, how was it?
geet was uncomfartable listening to all that. never had she spoken to girls & when
they talk they filled her more with unfelt emotions
friend - yaar tu to chupi rustam nikali
geet was getting so angry now
another girl - u always had the reputation of most happeneing BF...but trust me
he is the HOTEST & most happening
geet cribbed wat was so happening about him

she got a call from maan
all the girls - uska call hain
geet looked at them feeling odd
girls - please hume uski awaz suna na please
geet lifted her eye brows yak..what is wrong with them
but she was kind of liking it some where down the line, she answered the call in speaker
maan - thank God u picked the call, mujhe laga tum naraz ho
all the girls fell down...hai..how sweet
geet babaji issme itna sweet kya hain, she moved away from all of them
shouted at him - mujhe abhi aap se milna hain
maan - I am going for a meeting now will meet u in an hour
she cuts the call in anger & drives to his office

she barges into his cabin he was not there.
pinky comes running to geet - maam sir meeting main hain
aur kaha hainki agar aap yee to aap ko yanha wait karne ko kanhe
GEET HANDA & waiting... she pushed opened the conferenced room door
maan closed his eyes - hogayee meeting he soar under is throat
yeh ring 4 million rupees ki hain trying to pull it out of her finger
he requested the staff to leave
maan - nahi 4 million rupees ki nahi hain
she relaxed
he moved closer to her & pulled her curls behind lifting her hand & caressing it softly - 4 million pounds ki hain
her eyes poped out.
geet fumingly - itna mehengi gift kyun di mujhe
maan - tumne bhi to mujhe itni mehengi gift di
geet - cuffling were few lakhs...few lakh rupees
maan - main cufflings ki baat nahi kar raha
geet narrowed her eyebrows
maan - GEET HANDA ne ek din pura mera liya vrat rakha kitni badi baat hain
geet - woh to hain lekin
maan cups her face - uske samne to yeh ring kuch bhi nahi
geet - college mein sab ledkiyan aap pe fida hain
maan knew what was bothering her - Jealous umm


geet - NO WAYS
maan was enjoying this went & sat in his chair - phir
geet - I was just wondering unhe aap kis angle se HOT & happening lage
aap bahut khus hona, itna attention paake
maan looking into his files - what is the point
geet - kyun humari college ki sari ladkiyan aap ko attention de rahi hain
mind it meri wajah se, aur aap phir bhi khus nahi ho..
pokes him with her index finger
maan - jise HOt & happening lagna chahiya woh to kuch nahi bolti
geet innocently - kise
maan pulles her closer looking into her eyes - tumhe
geet looked at him feeling embarrassed - its not like that
maan moves still closer - so u agree I am HOt & happening
geet does'nt move pretending not to feel anything but probably, she just melted
with his closeness, her knees felt like they could hold her any further
she trembled back ward, he held her from waist
maan - umm..nodding looking into her eyes
geet - umm..lost in those eyes
she snaps NAHI mera matalb hain aap teehk taak ho, straightening herself & moving away
maan smiled wickedly walking to his seat- teehk hain mujhe apni college ki kisi laki se mila do
jisi main HOT & happening lagta hoon
geet mumere woh to aap ko kacha kha jayeghi
maan turned back to see her - kya?
geet - woh mukti ke friend se mila doon getting irritated
maan sat on his chair resting his head - not bad, waise bhi mujhe salwar suit wali ladkiyan zada pasand hain
geet looked at her self & then at his tauting comment
geet - phir meri peeche kyun pade ho, maine to aapko pehli hi kaha tha
main aapki type ki nahi hoon..
she was hurt & her eyes mosit
he walked quickly to her & hugged her main mazak kar raha tha
geet - mujhe aise mazak nahi pasand hain

precap
geet not liking girls drooling over her bachan

Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

loving this. geet jealous.
haha
loved it
xxx
Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago

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