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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: bluedreamz953

Oye...kya dekh liya usne???

Arre Amrita jaldi update kar...I can't wait to know what she saw!!!
Thanks for the awesome update!!!
Love you!!!!!

Sweetie......
please bear it with me this time, but I won't take much time to update :)))
thanks for the sweet comment, and love you too dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh i hate u for doing this....
U left too many unanswered questions like from where did she get all those marks n wat did she see...

I completely understood the reason she went missing suddenly...

U betta update soon, warna


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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb update....
But why suddenly she wants to leave?

Please cont soon.....
thanx 4 pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: swatichowdhury

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh i hate u for doing this....
U left too many unanswered questions like from where did she get all those marks n wat did she see...

I completely understood the reason she went missing suddenly...

U betta update soon, warna


Awwwwww , sorry dear, I had to stop at that point coz some guests arrived, so I posted it, but I'm going to update in a while.....so please....no....wait.....I'm wearing a shield now...lol
the marks on her hands were coz Maan held it so tightly that she got hurt and the marks remained
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Posted: 14 years ago

Nilam...

thanks for loving the update.....I know you will get the answers soon
Shah....
thanks dear :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
I know that you all mad at me...lol...here is the update for you , now gimme a smile :)))I know you all have so many questions...cannot answer all the questions at once...so pls bear with me and you will get the answers as the story proceeds
Forever - Part 11

"Maan sir" cried Geet, as she ran into the gym where Maan was trying to overcome his anger by throwing everything upside down. Geet tried to touch his arm when she saw blood oozing from the cut on his arm, it was not just a small cut and she knew it. He jostled Geet as she touched his arm and roared at her "Geet, go away from here" he moved away from her trying to control himself as he knew he might hurt her in fury. "You are bleeding sir" she spoke softly, her voice trembling from terror and agony. Maan glanced at the cut on his arm but remained silent; it would be easier for him to bear physical pain rather than emotional pain he was going through.

Geet tore a piece of cloth from the edge of her dhupatta and tried to cover Maan's wound, but he had jolted away rejecting her help. He knew that she could help him to stop bleeding from his physical wound which would heal sooner, but by doing so she would be encouraging his wounded heart to bleed further more. "I said leave" Maan uttered the words in between his clenched teeth forcing himself not to be too harsh on her. "I'm not leaving you like this" Geet opposed the wounded Maan Singh Khurana, she pulled his arm and tied the piece of cloth on his cut.

Maan obeyed Geet in agape, as she helped him to get out of the gym and to enter into the living room; she kept on grumbling about his stubbornness. With his instructions she searched for the first aid kit and cleaned his wound, advising him to go to a hospital for dressing as there were not enough ingredients to dress a big wound. He shook his head and told her that he was used to such small things, he has learnt to live his life with everything and he did not need doctors or even her to help her. Geet felt him saying that he did not even need her, bitter to her ears but she swallowed it realizing that she should have trusted him, instead of drawing conclusions so soon.

It was not because of Maan that she decided to leave, but because of her, she did not want to fall for anyone after Dev, who ruined her life and Maan has no clue of her being married and cheated by her husband. The last thing she would ever want was falling for a man like Maan, who has built up his reputation within the society with his manners and great efforts. She has no right to ruin his reputation at any cost and it would be better that she leave him before it was too late.

"Geet pour the saline now" Maan told Geet for the third time and she finally managed to gather herself apart from her thoughts, but she found her hands numb. "Geeet, what are you waiting for?" Maan questioned her while turning his head to look at her dull face over his shoulder. He grinned at her and said "I know you can't do it" Maan tried to get up from his chair to apply saline to his wound. "I'm afraid it may hurt you" Geet murmured slowly while looking at Maan who rose to his feet suddenly. Maan wondered about Geet's concern, now she was worried that it might hurt him, but she did not dare to ask him when she decided to leave him, all alone. "I can tolerate the physical pain rather than the emotional pain that kills me" Maan whispered in a husky voice, forgetting that she would leave him at any time.

"I mean you can pour it and I can tolerate with it" Maan corrected his statement, and took Geet's hand into his and nodded, assuring her that she has to do it for him. Geet closed her eyes as she poured the saline into his wounds, but unlike she thought Maan did not make any noise but he shut his eyes tightly as the pain took over his mind for a while. "Are you alright sir?" Geet asked after a while, afraid of thinking that he might wanted to lie down and rest for a while. Maan remained silent and glanced at Geet with moisted eyes and asked "when are you leaving?" he wanted to know how long she could stay with him, though he wanted her to stay with him forever.

"I can wait until you become alright" Geet's answer surprised him and he wished that his wound would never get healed so that she could never leave him. "Sir, I think you need to take a day off from work" Geet suggested Maan to take rest so that he could relax and his wound would heal sooner. "Only if you make a promise" Maan tried to express what he wanted but indirectly and he wanted her to make a promise before he puts out his condition in front of her. Geet conjectured for a while and nodded before giving her word to him, and a huge grin appeared on Maan's face as he whispered the words softly just for her ears to hear it "you are not leaving then".

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"What might have happened to Maan? Why didn't he answer the phone?" Daadi murmured to herself while walking up and down in her room, she was worried about Maan. A smiled curved onto her old lips as she thought to call office and talk to him, so she dialed the number and waited for Maan to answer. The call got disconnected after ringing for sometime and Daadi panicked more thinking that something might have happened to Maan. She called Adi to ask about Maan and come to know that Maan did not go to office as he was unwell.

Daadima reached Maan's apartment at lunch time and she thought not to ring the bell as it would trouble Maan, so she opened the door with the key she had which was given by Maan long time back. Slowly she peeped inside and hid herself behind the door when she heard a female voice speaking to Maan "you are not going to lift your arm, understand? So better open your mouth so that I could feed you" it was Geet who was speaking to Maan. "Geeeeeeet" Maan called her name with so much affection as she teased him with the spoon and Daadi smiled heartily as she knew the reason for Maan's illness, but she decided to get away from there without disturbing them.
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Edited by amrita2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
its really gud i found the last part to sweet update asap
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Posted: 14 years ago

awww...that was awesome update.....really loved it

so finally maaneet are moving ahead in their
relationship.....so loved it.....poor geet...
but all well ends well.....love dadi to core
for giving maaneet the space....would have been
more adorable if she teases maan...
maybe next update....just a request....😊
thankkkkkkuuuuuuu for taking the time and
giving us awesome....superb update......
love u for this....🤗



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Posted: 14 years ago
Both of the parts were great!!
-Amrita2010 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ansah

awww...that was awesome update.....really loved it

so finally maaneet are moving ahead in their
relationship.....so loved it.....poor geet...
but all well ends well.....love dadi to core
for giving maaneet the space....would have been
more adorable if she teases maan...
maybe next update....just a request....😊
thankkkkkkuuuuuuu for taking the time and
giving us awesome....superb update......
love u for this....🤗



Ahhhh thanks sweetie 🤗
I wish I too could have such cute emos :(
Daadi has seen it....remember she has a promise to full fill....her teasing will come in a difference style this time, you never knew....naughty Daadi...lol
love you loads, sweetie....my lil daughter is acting as the emo, while I write this comment....hahaha....loveeeed your comment😳

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