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Audiwalia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Its a nice concept u should continue......plz add me on ur pm list......

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Thiis is Really Great.

Beautifully written 👏

I really Love it.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

AWESOME 👏👏update yaar but PRECAP is more tempetating😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

plz continue....very interesting concept....

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drashti.dfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

hey nyc concept ......
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cool_gal17

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Posted: 14 years ago

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PART 3

schools annual day!!!...

every1 was bisi in geting into something either dance or singing!!!

geet who loved dance was always nervous 2 tak part in dance competition becuz she was fat!!..

so she volunter her self fr decorating the stage!

bt wot was d best part dat maan dint also took part in any activity as they were in 10th and he wana jst concentrate on bookz!!

while geet enter d library whch was fully occupied by decoration she skiped her heart beat when she saw maan!!

GEET: hey wot ya doin here?

MAAN: bisi in cutting thermocall dnt repond frndly n said dat helpin mam

geet was nw use 2 wid his wierd behaviour!

GEET: maan u doin it rong!

maan gives her a glare whch says maan singh khurana kabhi kuch galat nhi karta hai!

GEET: itne guss kyun ho rahe ho..u ll tare dat!

maan nt listening and end up tearing! the sheet!

geet bursted laughin she said: agar mera baat sunle hoti tho itne mehnath waste nhi jalti!.....wase tum bhe kya kar sakte ho tum tho MAAN SIGH KHURANA HO! tum hum jase aam logo ki baatein kyun sunoge...

MAAN was fullon in anger n says: will u shut up! tum kitna bolti ho tumhe kya paise milte hain!

GEET: abh tak tho nhi milte par tum itna kaam kyun bolte ho tumhe kya bole par tax barna badta hai...

MAAN: chup ho jaoo

GEET: i can say u d sam...

arguing goes on and on!...

finnaly d annual day cumz since d stage was getting ready! maan and geet were alone in library sending d props before d correct sequence on dance!....

and sunddenly!!

litez go off!!!

geet...ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.......shoutin so loud as if she saw a ghost!!...and her voice was hurtin maan! unwillingly maan kept his hand on her mouth...and said CHUP bil KUL chup!!

his thouch on her lips was an enough reason for her lose her self! and a sudden thunder made her hug him!!...he felt a bit wired bt he dnt say anything!...and suddenly d lite cumz and their hug breaks!!

and maan was lost in her brown eyes he could nt feel anything else!!

her eyes showsd her innocene! her inner beauty her heart! it was nt d same maan for a moment he cam nxt 2 her n said r u okay??

geet was abt 2 faint he jst askd me dis...wowoowo!!!!!

geet wis a grin yea i m!!

days passed their frndhsp grew!!..

and one day afta thier classes maan askd : geet tumhe lagta hai ki logo kho school lyf main pyaar hota hai

GEET: hota hai na tumhe pata meri frnd aur ushka bf r dating frm 6th std

MAAN: tho tumhara bf bhe ho ga?

GEET: nhi nhi she blushd and said mujhe bf alowd nhi hai!

MAAN: allowd nhi hai matlab?

GEET: matlab meli mom kho pata chal gaya tho she ll kill me! tum pato hws ya gf? while she wanted 2 hear he dnst have a gf... her fingers were crossed

MAAN: i dnt hav a gf

geet wid a grin on her face askd y?

MAAN: becus u are nt allowd 2 hav a bf...

geet was lost in his words wot did he jst said!!

maan said geet i reli like u will u b mah gf!!

geet was like her dream is reality widout hesitating she said yes!

maan : mom kho pata chala tho?

geet: MOM kho nhi bolungi! aur pata bhe chal gaya tho kya hojega...

geet at hme diary aaj main upar aasam necha u noe kya kaha mera maan ne ki main ushke jaan hun!!!...dairy! i hope dis nt a dream! and goes 2 sleep!!

precap:

farewell party at school! geet hurt ...

Edited by cool_gal17 - 14 years ago

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shivangi783

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Just read it from beginning.

Add me to the PM list please.

have sent you the buddy request....

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cool_gal17

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

part 4:

geet was healthy so she prefer wearing suits because jeans and ol stuff made her look more fat!

and it was d most waited nite thier prom nite!!

geet was no doubt beautiful bt her fatness was always a matter of concern 2 her she dnt like it atol! n also d amin reason she is dating the hotest guy! of her school!!

geet almost wore 15 dresses and was nt happy and then she realises! maan ka fav color white main wahe penungi!!!

GEETZ MOM:

beta are u ready?

GEET: haan maa

GEETZ MOM: awhh meli pari u lookin so beautiful!...like an angle baccha!

GEET: thanx maan! i mean maaa..

while maan was dresed in a suit black suit! it shwd the richeness of khuarana khandaan!

DAADI: aaj tho humara potta kisi raj kumar se kam nhi lag raha hai!

MAN: daadi aap bhe na!

DAADI: aaj tho school ki har ladki aapkho dhekh kar dhekhti rahege...

MAAN thinkz in his mind sabka mujhe nhi pata bas woh mujhe dhekhti reh! and said bye dadi and left!

PROM NITE!

maan entered d school hall....and as expected ol d gals were still at d moment! he was lookin hot! hansum! and stunning!

many tried 2 hit on her!! bt he was lookin at the door!!!

while yash cumz in and say!

MAAN hey hiee!

MAAN: hie ...they were havin a chat whn geet entered..

geet was lookin for maan and she was freezed when she saw maan he was d most desirable thing on earth! and d bst part was she owned him!!

while geet cumz near maan she over hear maan and yash tok!

YASH: hyy maan u datin geet! as in i noe she is beautiful bt she is so fat i mean like!u noe u cn get any1 better!..

MAAN: was lost lookin fr sum1

YASH: u lost in geet kya?

MAAN: no i m waiting fr sameera!

YASH: kamine abh main samjha yeah geet ka chakhar!

MAAN: haan ...woh actuly mujhe na sammera bhut ache lagti hai

YASH : mujhe bhe

MAAN: giv him a look and said tho jab maine ushe aproach kiya tho she said no! tho mak her feel jealious i asked geet to me mah gf ..aur wase bhe woh itnbe moti hai she is nt mah types!! aur agar! woh ksii kho bole bhe ki she is mah gf no 1 will belive becuas I M MAAN SINGH KHUARAN AND i deserve d bst!

maan and yash startz laughing!

GEET was in tears she cnt belive wot maan said ....the tym the spent 2gthere everything flashed in fornt of her! nothing was the same widout wasting a second she wnt home!

she was in tears as she entered home

GEETZ MOM beta u sam so early she was in tears ...she ran inside her room!

mom asks beta kya hua?

GEET locked her room and said mom me nt feelin weell ...

geet mom understood dat she was hurt bt she tld ohk beta tc when u feel beta cum and tok 2 me

maanz words were hurting geets ears like an echo...

geet started riting her dairy wid tears...

I HATE MAAN SINGH KHURANA I HATE HIM!..he ll pay fr dis ....

boards cam geet dnt worried much abt maan wot he said fr her....fr her its gonna b a revenage .....he ll b sory fr wot he did i hate u maan!!!

during board once maan and geet met geet dnt bother 2 even look at him she jst wnt..maan felt odd bt he cnnt go n ask her wots rong as he was datin sameera at afta prom

PRECAP:

maan and geet! afta 8 yrs ...both 24

part 5

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Edited by cool_gal17 - 14 years ago