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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 63

geet thought humara first kiss, she wondered when did we kiss first
where did he kiss me first, yelo babaji humare first kiss
aur first night kuch faraq hi nahi hain, tabhi woh itne
unromantic hain. deehko to inke kiss main kitna romance
lekin where did he kiss first, did he or did I? she got confused &
slept off pulling the spread. maan came really late & checked on her.
took the book away from her & kept it aside & kissed her forhead, & kept looking at her
she shied & smiled - aap aise muje dehkoge to mujhe sharam aati hain
maan smiled & went to his room
geet got up early & looked for maan
he was working out in the gym, she saw him & stood rooted looking at him
his sweaty bare body seemed even more attractive
her gaze travelled through his curves & his tonned muscles
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YdjM2AXgE8w[/YOUTUBE]
geet mumered moah band kar jhali aur neech dehk & looked down
maan pulled on the vest - kuch kaam tha
geet - woh mujhe..she cluctched her dupata trying to control herself
maan lifted her chin to meet her gaze. she closed her eyes tightly
geet - woh kis...bit her tounge & turned to leave
he held her back hold her hand, geet mumered aise main inse door kaise rah
sakti hoon, babaji please aap inhe kuch sat budhi do
maan - kya kaam tha
geet - mujhe kuch poch na tha...looks at him feels very concious runs away from there.

she gets ready & goes to the kitchen & tries to make breakfast
she looks around & wonders what to make
baby~aap kyun bekar kushish kar rahe ho
geet~tu chup kar, mujhe concentrate karne de
she manages to make parata, in different shapes serves it with dahi
maan comes down was shocked to see her in that mess
maan - yeh kya haal bana rakha hain
he takes the napkin and whipes her face, her hair & face
his fingers caresses her lips. she looks at him mesmerised with his touch
their eyes meet she inches forward & closes her eyes

maan closes his eyes & turns away
geet shut her mouth bitting her lips & wondered why she gets so carried away infront of him
maan sees the plate in the table
geet - woh maine breakfast banaya hain
maan cuffed
geet made a baby face
baby~papa mat khana please
geet~shut-up
maan - tumhe yeh sab karne ki kya zaroorat thi
& ate the whole thing, he looked around if she had anything left on the gas
he took that & finished that too
geet was shocked - teehk bana hain?
maan noded. she was so happy & delighted
maan - what is it u have been wanting to ask since morning
geet - woh mujhe pochna tha ki when did we first kiss, & who kissed & where?
she looked at his expressions change & shut her mouth
maan looked at her why was this question, was she trying to seduce him again
but he knew & wondered how kind and giving spirit governed her every action.
If she thought her presence in his life caused him pain, she would leave him to the silence.
he moved closer, but realized she was in control not him & left to the office
geet mumered tu bhi na pagal hain, unhe kya laghe ga
geet~baby dehka papa ko mera khana aacha laga
baby~AACHA
geet challo main bhi taste karti hoon, lekin kya sab kuch to unho ne kha liya
she takes the crums & tastes it & puked..yak
baby~yak..
geet mumered phir unhone kuch kaha kyun nahi, why did he have to finish that one
kitna khayal hain unhe mera, he did'nt want me to know that it was bad
geet~kitne aachen hain na papa
baby~aap utne hi bure ho
geet~lekin papa ne to kuch nahi kaha mera khane ke bare main & he finsihed it all
baby~thats because he did'nt want u to feed that to me
geet~shut up

she changes & gets ready to go to office
she takes a cab & reaches office. all of them gave her a warm welcome
pinky hugged her - yaar tu honey moon ke liya nahi ja rahi
geet mumered honey yanha pe hain to main moon main jakar kya karoonghi
baby~mujhe honey moon pe jana hain😳
geet~main yanha chup chap beti hoon tu kyun itna kud raha hain
baby~papa ko bolo na
geet~tu khud bol
baby~turned his face😒
sasha hugged her & took her to the new cabin
geet mumered yehlo yanha par bhi dor dor kar diya, us cabin se to
kamse kam unhe dehk sakti thi, jado dehk ke bhi kya karna hain
mushkil hi badani hain

adi gives her the files relating to the company details
adi - geet abhi to office ki owner hain, so u will need to know all this
geet looks at the files & gets confused
adi - go through all this, have any doubt ask me
geet - phir mujhe kya karna hoga
adi - MK ne abhi to kuch specify nahi kiya hain, lekin unless u really learn about the
business details you will not be able to do much
geet - aacha??
sasha - waise bhi MK ke dil ka rashta uske office hokar hi jata hain & winks at her
geet blushes & looks down
adi & sasha leave her in the alone
geet bangs the file & mumers aab unke liya yeh sab bhi padna padega
baby~mama rahene do aap se yeh sab nahi hoga
geet~kyun nahi hoga?
she works really hard to read through the files & make her notes


maan reaches home really late & looks for her in her room
she was not around, he quickly checked his room, kitchen
the ran to the mansion asked nakul - geet ko dehka?
nakul - woh to subha office gayee thi uske baad aayee nahi
maan checked the time it was way passed 2am, he drove to office & looked for her
she was sleeping on the piles of the files
he rubbed his temple & cursed himself for being ignorant
he lifted her & drove her to their house


he made her lie on the bed & wondered if she had anything since morning

he made her some soup & slowly tried to wake her up
she got up in shock, she was in office & this room..she was still trying to get
acquainted all that took a hit on her & she hugged him tight in fear
koi andaaz E ada saat ka use ayena
bhola pan ye masoom surat aur uspe ye ghabrana
tadap utt tha uski yeh halat par,
aapne seena se laga kar, sahlata
darte huwa usne aanke kholi, uska dar dehka nahi gaya
dil kiya chum lo un dare huwa aankho ko,
lekin aap hi woh dor chali gaye
geet - main woh
maan - its ok, soup pilo
he fed her & she threw u the whole thing
maan shouted - tumne subha se phir kuch nahi khaya
he took her to the wash room & cleaned her up
he went to change her..she hesitated - main change karlongi
yeh kinchav maan ke dil ko chani kar gaya, lekin woh yahi to chata tha
to phir kisi se kya gila karta
geet changed & came out
maan took her to the kitchen & made pasta for her with extra spice
made her finish the whole thing & told her to sleep in his room
geet - woh teehk nahi hoga & goes to her room

precap
maan fighting against his own emotions
VM CREDIT MsDreamyPrincess
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yay!! first to comment
will read it first

lovely update

Edited by nan_10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

just loved it 👏 love baby.. loving maan for his struggle for his emotions

Edited by maansee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update as usual

enjoyed reading it to the core
geet in kitchen😲 liked geet trying to impress him by preparing parata😊
baby n geet convo was too good n hilarious
aap kyun bekar kushish kar rahe ho😆😆
liked maan so caring
papa mat khana please 🤣🤣🤣
geet shocked she prepared well😆 she also knows she can't prepare well😆
geet innocenly questioning😛 him n maan trying to control again
liked the ma&bache ka convo again

geet in office n the answer she gave to pinky😆
sasha advice is working on geet trying to impress maan in every way she can😛
liked how maan took care of her food😊
lets see till how long maan fighting aganist his emotions

Edited by nan_10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loveeee the part.
Maan is concerned abt geet.
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.




Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi,
Loved the update!!!!!!!!
So fantastic!!!!!!!!!!
Hmmm the best part was Geet's attitude.......
Maan was little sweet and smart too-he just finished all her food,,,,,,
baby is so intelligent na...........
The last dialogue was so awesome...........
Loved Geet changes a lot,
Love
Lakshmi
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank u so much 4 d wish .Wow very nice update! I realy want geet to make him taste his own medicine, i knw he is afraid tat he wil harm their baby tats y he is nt coming closer bt he cn make her undrstand by explaining, jst avoidin her n denying her advances wil jst hurt her emotion y cnt he jst explain her.waitin 4 more.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow another nice update and tht too so soon. thnx 4 the pm. maan is so confusing, he should realize his love and ya love the dialogues of baby.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwww loved it a lot yaar awesome part 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi muskan really nice update
but really i cant understand maan feeling's
wat is the mystery
plzzzzzz reveal it soon
who diary kiska hai
update the next part asap
THANKS FOR DAILY UPDATES
THANKS DARLING
THANKS FOR PM.

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