Wait over !!! Diwali Dhamaka released !!! - Page 8

No yaar....I don't know...I know someone has edited the whole thing in the end. Maybe Bhavana.

heehee well you'd like to wait till we let it out ??

lovely story.......👏......very well written......👏

Originally posted by: Bhavanab

@akshay arre mere chote bhai tu mujhse bach nahi saktha !!! I know this story will take time !!! Drilabh is superfast in reading stories,I know that well !!!

Great work........ 👏well done all the writers.......⭐️⭐️👏 keep it up.......👍🏼😃

I want to give a little detailed review.......with some of my favorite moments from the story...I'll post it latter......😊😛
once again 👏 👏 👏 thanks a lot for giving us a wonderful story....⭐️ ⭐️

Ok....I haven't read it yet.........surely I will by tonight! but I believe its a great story by the comments!
kaash FW walo ke pass aisa writer hota!

@princess thanks for liking it !!!!
@akshay so you finally read it !!! Nice to know you liked it yaar !!!
@aditi. thanks for appreciating our work !! Will be waiting for detailed review !!
@tanza. well will be waiting for your comments after reading re !!

@Shagnika - ur 1st post is awesome... 👏👏

@twinkle Thanks for liking dear.... But its a combined effort by all 4 of us! Me and Bhavana just posted the story in parts... 😃

@princess, aditi, akshay Thank you so much for liking! Means a lot.... Aditi, surely waiting for your detailed review as Bhavs said 😃

@ tanza dii, waiting for your comments 😊 😊

its really a mindblowing story with very well described situations, i loved the whole story. the details r done very minutely.👏👏👏 the chemistry between our duo is very beautifully described, i loved the concern they showed for each other very much.😍 well i can visualise tasha as govt. employee doing survey.😊freddy sir as sweeper, too funny😆😆😆,and the scene where acp sir was confused as he could not understand a single word the old man was saying and duo trying to control their laughter, too good, i am still laughing by remembering that scene. 😆but i wanna ask one thing why abhi sir was carrying a matchbox with him?😕😕 i am sure u people have some solid reason behind it, but please explain it if possible. overall i enjoyed the story very much.⭐️⭐️ thanks to all four of you for giving me a treat after i got the not so good news of postponement of my exams.