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@-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: ruky786
sorry for late comment loved turn back the clock it was very inspiring and loved blue guitar thanks for pm both OS were amazing it felt as if this was actually happening

thanks for commenting Ruky...don't feel sorry for being late as I have told you before...when you find time and mood then read it....thanks alot dear....somehow its nearly the track of the show

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-Amrita2010

@-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: togepe30
Wahhh !! The creative juices are Overflowing today Ma'am...!
Lovely OS !! Absolutely adorable...I wonder what was the question Sam asked?

Luv,

Vandu

thanks alot babes....Keep the question as a suspense because I too don't know what she asked😆

@adventuregurl; thanks dear

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

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Posted: 15 years ago

#333

Amrita!!!!

I love the concern Khanak shows towards Shaan. Theres so much closeness which isn't expressed, but it still shines through!!

A true masterpiece hun!!!

Whenever you say the OS is not as good as it can be...it turns out to be two steps ahead!!

Please have faith in yourself and your writing...you've almost hit 50 pages on this thread!!!!

Convince ho gayi ya phir aur bolun??

😉

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-Amrita2010

@-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower
Amrita!!!!
I love the concern Khanak shows towards Shaan. Theres so much closeness which isn't expressed, but it still shines through!!

A true masterpiece hun!!!

Whenever you say the OS is not as good as it can be...it turns out to be two steps ahead!!

Please have faith in yourself and your writing...you've almost hit 50 pages on this thread!!!!

Convince ho gayi ya phir aur bolun??

😉

Ahhh, Zeba, sometimes we don't find the best words to express our feelings so it's better this way

I have to say because these are done in a rush, I hardly proof read most of the times, so I know some mistakes also will be there😆

Hitting 50pages???? Well, I have completed more than one thread (150pages) on some of my FFs, so this is just a very small acheivement for me, here😆

Anyways, your lovely comments mean alot to me...Keep them coming, so I could write more😉

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Pickachu

@pickachu

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#335

Veryyyy well written.

Loveeee shanak.

Thanxx for the pm.

Fatima

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-Amrita2010

@-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#336

Shriyaa requested me to write one on SR....so here is a treat dedicated to all....especially for Shriyaa😛

Finding Paradise

Her confession changed their lives welcoming to a special world for her and for him. It bonded them with a special bond that was invisible, but that wrapped them up in its cocoon which would hold them fiercely in its womb. Shaan closed his eyes lightly thinking if he could have just a single wish; to wake up every day to the sound of her breathing on his neck, the feel of her heart beating with his as he knew that he could never be this happy with anyone other than her.

"Shantanu, you are still here? Come on, we have to decorate the room for mom and dad" he was taken back with his wife, Khanak's words as she came running to him. With a sigh, he raised his eyebrows at her and grinned at her which took Khanak's breath away. "Are you sure that we have to prepare bed for mom and dad?" he whispered into her eyes in a husky voice and put her hair aside from her shoulder to make his track clear. He breathed in and out slowly so that she could feel the warmth of his breath on her neck and shoulder and looked at her eyes that were closed with desire. She tilted her head to one side giving him more access but he halted his movements upon hearing footsteps towards them. "Khanak, you go, I will be back in a while" Shaan made her to leave before Akshay reached him.

"Congratulations, bro. I wish I too would have such a wife who listens to me" Akshay spilled out his problems in front of Shaan, giving Shaan a hint that their plan had backfired. "So, you mean Kam did not affect on bhabhi? Man Khushboo bhabhi is too smart" Shaan held his waist with his hands and stared on the floor thinking what more could be done to help his brother. "Akshay" Khushboo called Akshay before Shaan could think of anything, but he promised to Akshay that he would help to solve the issue as soon as possible.

Khanak was arranging the red rose petals on the bed when Shaan entered into his parents' room, but she did not notice his presence as she was too involved in her task. She smiled with an angelic smile that pierced his heart, as she was finishing her task by arranging the last petal to complete the heart she made on the bed. Before she could keep the last petal on the bed, a strong hand caught on her wrist halting her work for a while. "No, let us complete it" Shaan whispered into her ears and together they placed the last rose petal to make the heart complete. For them it was not just a heart they made on the bed but it was a promise that they would be together and never apart. No one could ever understand how different and perfect their love was as silence speaks more than the words they exchanged.

"The red Odhani (veil women used to put around their neck or cover the head) should be put together with mom's sari so that she would dress as a bride again" Khanak took out the red odhani out of the dresser and walked towards Madvi's dress which was kept on the couch. Shaan who was following Kahank's actions with his eyes reacted so quickly that Khanak did not even get a chance to confront against him. Shaan pulled it so quickly from her and covered her head with it and murmured "perfect bride" hearing this color of Khanak's cheeks changed into red as she blushed.

Each time he saw her like that his knees weakened from the sensation, like a person who had dried throats and longed for water, he too needed to overcome his desire that would crush him sooner or later. The odhani on her head fell more on her face obstructing the view of her face hiding her expressions from him but relieved her nervousness for a while. He took her hand up to his lips as he could not control his emotions any more against his will; he wanted to love every inch of her, taste every part of her body if he could ever drink the love in her blood through her pores. He wanted her to quench the fire in his blood with her sweet caresses and her to touch his soul with passion.

They did not know when and how their ballet began, moving along the rhythm of their souls they vowed never to end the dance as long as the song played. They wanted this moment to last forever as they were fused in the heat of passionate love together as one mind and one soul. They looked deep into each other's eyes as they saw the reflection of heaven within them, allowing them to reveal what they felt for each other.

"Shantanu, wake up" Shaan woke up hearing his wife calling him as she brought bed tea for him. Thinking that it was another dream he bit his lip in frustration but when he saw the marks on his chest he realized that it was not a dream and waited for the moment until he could see his wife's reddened cheeks.

Edited by amrita2010 - 15 years ago

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#337

WOW Amrita!!!

That was brilliant. Every word was heartfelt. I could feel the passion as I was reading every line!!! The Shanak chemistry is just amazing!!!

Aur bechara Akshay....hope his problem is solved soon....😆😆

Great work hun.

I wonder when we will see anything like this in the show???

😊

Edited by FebruaryFlower - 15 years ago

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manjiri

@m4manju

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#338

love u so much for this lovely OS amrita di... its totally amazing... i read it like 2-3 times already and everytime i got goosebumps as i approached the end part of this OS...😳 😳 .... its just too romantic OS ❤️ 😍

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Simi

@simikr

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Posted: 15 years ago

#339

OMG!! They did it??? !!! Haiiiii!!! Sensual to the Core!!! I loved the way you described Shaan's feelings....I just lost it then yaar!!! Going to read it again and again!!!😳

Edited by simiv - 15 years ago

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-Amrita2010

@-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#340

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

WOW Amrita!!!

That was brilliant. Every word was heartfelt. I could feel the passion as I was reading every line!!! The Shanak chemistry is just amazing!!!

Aur bechara Akshay....hope his problem is solved soon....😆😆

Great work hun.

I wonder when we will see anything like this in the show???

😊

DOUBLE POSTED😭😭😭

Edited by amrita2010 - 15 years ago

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