FANFICTION...Garv and the new girl...

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Hey all first part of this fanfiction! Please comment! You all should make some too...it'd be great...make the show more interesting plus this board!

Kabie Socha Na tha…

This fan fiction is on Garv and another girl. Obviously he will play the role of a lawyer and well his usual role and he still can't get over Kumud. A girl and her family are in debt and are blamed for not paying for loans when they really did. The girl needs to go to court and needs a lawyer…well read on.

Aamna is from a middle class family

Characters

(A)Aamna: Daughter (She will be a main character and will ask Garv for help)

D (father): father of Aamna…not much dialogue

G Garv: of course the main character

K: Kumud

Ks: Kshitij

Prologue

Aamna is sitting in the living room reading the newspaper. She reads the headline.

Kapoor family member goes missing

She begins to read the article. And thinks about how many times the Kapoor family made it into the paper.

There was a time when their daughter Kumud got humiliated. There was also the time where their industry became unsuccessful, and the time where Abhay Kapoor went missing and so many times. Aamna pitied that fact that such a big industry and such a big name…the Kapoors always had problems. But people still accepted them. They had parties every month and she had even attending some of them. Usually something unexpected happened which made the party end early.

Just as she finished reading the story of Kkusum Deshmukh going missing…her dad burst in the door with a tense expression on his face. Aamna stood up and went to the kitchen and filled a glass for water and handed it to her father.

A: What's the matter? Anything wrong? You seem tense

D: no, no Nothing's wrong. Everything is fine. Just find dear…you continue reading your article…is it on the Kapoor's again? He chuckled

A: Yes, another tension going on. I know Mr.Kapoor's daughter, she went to my collage. Kali…yes Kali…she was such a character

D: Oh yes, I heard she left the house

A: Ohh yeah she probably did

A letter drops from her fathers pocket…he tries to pick it up but Aamna beats him to it

She opens the letter while her dad looks perturbed

The letter says that they need to pay their loans or they will face consequences

A: Father? Didn't you pay your bills already??

D: Yes I did, but I guess they didn't get them. This is bad Aamna, if we don't send them bills we will have to sell the house

A: But you did pay for the loan!

D: My boss doesn't believe me. Now we'll have to go to court. I don't have a lawyer Aamna!

A: Well…I'll look for one dad. Don't worry, we paid our loans, we'll surely win this case

D: It's not as easy as it sounds…these people want their money…and quick!

A: Don't worry I know someone…

She runs over to the table where the newspaper is laying. She opens and skims down to the section where one can hire lawyers.

A: Mr. Garv Sachdev. He's a great lawyer. We can get him.

D: Sachdev…oh yes I have heard of him. He has been married twice.

A: That's not the point. He's a great lawyer and he's won many cases.

I'll go meet him tomorrow.

D: Thank you so much Aamna…I'll do my best to get them to realize that I paid these bills!

A: You need not worry.

At the office

Garv is sitting in his desk trying to look at a case which is recently filed. He can't stop thinking about the events going on at the Kapoor house. Kkusum gone missing and maybe even dead. Kali leaving the house. Although Trishul has gotten arrested he is still worried about Abhay Papa. He's been in tension and even had accident.

All of the sudden all these thoughts leave his head and he sees Kumud.

He thinks about Kumud. The times he spent with her…the great memories during marriage and the saddened memories after. He thinks about her telling him that perhaps he deserved what he got.

Garv thinking:

Oh Kumud, if only you understood my love for you. Many times you admitted that you loved me but when it came to face to face you'd always deny it. Maybe you really did love Kshitij after all. You two are meant to be. And I am really glad that you are married…I really am.

Garv puts his hands to his face…

Suddenly there's a knock on the door.

G: Come in.

Aamna comes rushing in…while in process she knocks over a few things along the way.

A: oh so sorry…she hastily picks them up

G: It does ok…take a seat.

She sits down

A: Well I heard you're a great lawyer Mr.Garv…

She holds out her hand

Garv shakes it and grins

A: And well…

She takes out a file from her bag and hands it to him

A: Read this and you'll find out

Garv begins to read the file.

G: Serious case eh? Well don't worry I will help. I am sure that you will win. You paid for these loans. People these days are so enthralled about money…it's a pity

A: Yes, yes… She laughs

Garv suddenly looks at her and has a flashback of Kumud laughing. Her smile her hair everything…he looks at Aamna and realizes that she looks exactly like Kumud…or so he may think. There was something about the girl that just made him feel as if…as if he were looking and talking to Kumud.

A: Well, I hope you can help. Everything you need is in that file. My father can contact you too. His number is in the file…oh if god listens to us then we will surely win. I have my hopes. We didn't do anything wrong Mr. Garv. I have heard that you have helped many people including the big business man Mr. Abhay Kapoor!

Kapoor reminds Garv of Kumud…

He has more flashbacks.

Of the time when Kumud was drunk and confessed her feelings for him. The time when she admitted that she didn't stab Nakul and they hug…the time where they divorce. The time where they meet at the park. So many times.

Aamna snaps her fingers at him…

A: Are you there?

G: Ohh…yes…jee?

A: Jee, meh…well I was saying that please…I have faith in you. And I am sure that god does too. Thanks so much.

G: NO problem.

They both stand up.

They shake hands.

A: Thank you again!

She turns to leave and knocks over her chair in process.

A: ohh sorry.

She sets the chair back up and then knocks it over again

Garv starts laughing and walks over to her and helps her set the chair.

Their hands touch and they look at each other. Garv has more flashbacks of Kumud…this time when they got married, and when they celebrated her birthday.

A: Well…thanks again.

She turns to leave.

Garv sits back down and tries to think of what just happened

G: Why does she remind me of….Kumud?

END…

Next Time:

Garv and Aamna meet at a resteraunt to discuss the case and they see Kumud and Kshitij there.

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smilingstar3 thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Yeah I kno it seems long but if you read it, it'll go by fast
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Posted: 20 years ago
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interesting...if this really happens in kusum then it wouldn' be boring atleast we would get to laugh😃.............Aamna could be kumuds twin sister😆 , then abhay would discover tht he has another daughter
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Posted: 20 years ago
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OMG that is SOOOO good I'll try to think something up!!!!!!
smilingstar3 thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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😆LOL that would be cool!!!

nice idea...hmm you should write one too!

yeah later in the next one I am gonna make Kumud all jealous lol

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Posted: 20 years ago
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that looks really cool, i jus read it and its a really good story to start with. 😆(twin sister) and I wonder whom the dad must be?(siddarth?)
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: mikagurl23

that looks really cool, i jus read it and its a really good story to start with. 😆(twin sister) and I wonder whom the dad must be?(siddarth?)

That's a good idea actually!

Oh no.........If Ekta is reading secretly..................

She is gonna bring him back from the dead (like mahi), and have his and Kkusum's kid.😲

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Posted: 20 years ago
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............LOL, if this Aamna is Kkusum's daughter, and Garv falls in love with her, and marries her, that means he married 3 sisters! 😆🤢
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Posted: 20 years ago
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😆That would be funny!

but in a way maybe Aamna could be secret cousin of Kumud's

or u kno how love sick garv is so he probably thinks that Aamna is similar to Kumud

good ideas all maybe i'll use that in my next one

but I ain't bringing anyone back to life...so don't worry

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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow ur fanfiction is really good u should do loadz more

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