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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part III: Kabab Mein Haddi

Naku is crying in the room, the whole party moving in her mind...
Dutta's words moves in circles in her mind, "Chali jaa Naku"...Naku breaks down on the bed, crying bitterly, "Kaise kahe aap yeh, Kaise? Aapki Naku se? Bus itnaa bharosaa tha?"...She remembers their last night's passionate love making, the gift in the morning and then the promise..She is not able to control her tears and they keep rolling down. All memories move in flashes, Dutta's song - "Duniya ne thookraaya hai...", their hug in Anna's den, here on the podium, Dutta's first proposal, Dutta's love - "Naku, meri zindagi mein aane ke liye, Koti koti dhanyavaad", dutta's promise - "Waada kiyaa tha, teraa saath doonga, tu maukaa kyun nahi deti?"...She pulls the pillow and cries on it bitterly, "yeh mein hee hai, Aapki Naku?"
Just then Dutta enters the room and sees Naku crying bitterly. His heart wrenches at the sight, he hesitates for a second and then with pain in his eyes, goes and kneels down beside her. Naku feels his presence and turns to him. She stops crying but her face is wet with her tears. She looks aimlessly at the floor.
Dutta looks at her and pleads, "Naku, paagal ho raha hoon. Bahut bechaani hai aur sirf tu isse door kar sakti hai. Bol de sirf ek baar, ki jo thodi der pehle hua, woh sirf ek buraa khwab tha. Bahut ummedoan se tere paas aaya hoon. Bure Khwab ki toh ab aadat ho gayi hai. Mein apne pyaar ke liye yeh khwab bhi bhoola doonga. Bus ek baar bol de."

Naku looks at him emotionally, tears stopped at the corner of her eyes, "Kaash mein keh sakti ki apne, apne hee hain. Kaash mein keh sakti ki aapko khokhlaa karne waale, aapke apne nahi hain, Lekin aapke liye, mein jhooth nahi bolegi.

Dutta immediately leaves her hand in shock. Naku tries holding his hand, but he gets up and turns his back towards her. "Kyun kar rahi hai aisaa mere saath Naku? Aisi baatein kyun kar rahi hai, jo tujhe mujhse har kadam door leke jaa rahein hain?".

He looks at the roof, "Kyun Kyun Kyun?", he hits the wall hard. "Kyun mere saath hee zindagi aise rang dikhaati hai, Kyun? Mein hee kyun?"...He hits the wall again.
Naku flinches with the sudden rage. She gets up, takes his hand and tells him, "Naku apne saab se saath janmoan ke liye jood gayi hai. Ab toh khud Bappa bhi
usse saab se alag nahi kar saktaa. Aur har janam mein, Naku apne saab ke liye, saab se bhi ladegi!"
Dutta moves, defeat in his voice, "Shukriya Naku, pata nahi kiska, un chand lamhoan ka jo mujhe, zindagi kya hoti hai, woh dikhaa ke chale gaye, ya us pal ke liye, jismein tu bhi dikhaa gayi ki Dutta akele hi aaya tha, aur akelaa hee reh gayaa."


Naku, "Mein aapko akela nahi chodi. Ek baar agar aap sachchai...", Dutta gets frustrated again and shouts in rage, "Mujhe koi sachchai nahi sunnni....Meri sachchai mere saamne hai".
Naku goes after him determined yet again, "Nahi...Woh jhooth tha...sab jhooth tha ab tak....Jhooth par Jhooth...Jhooth par Jhooth....Kitnaa Jhooth ki patti bandhen ge saab? Kitnaa? Kabhie toh sachchai ka saamna karnaa padegaa, Kabhie toh ladnaa padegaa Jhooth se?"


Dutta holds his head, "Bus Naku! Tune bhi aaj mujhe dhokha de diyaa na!! Jiss Aayi ke liye mein jaan de saktaa hoon, jis ke liye mein sab kuch chod saktaa hoon, un par tu itnaa bada ilzaam laga rahi hai?".

He holds his hand in front of him and looks at them desperately, gulps his tears and says, "Naku, jab khaane mein zidd kartaa tha na, toh apne un hatoan se khaana khilaati thi, jab raat mein akele dar lagtaa tha, toh apni god ki aanchal mein mujhe chupaa leti thi, aur unhi haatoan se mere sar ko sehlaati thi, poori raat bhar khud nahi soyengi, par mujhe sulaayengi! Meri behnoan ko nahi khilayengi, lekin mujhe khaana zaroor deti thi! Aur tu uss aadmi ki baatoan mein aa rahi hai, jisne aaj tak sirf dookh baata hai?"
Naku - "Unki mamtaa ka roop meine bhi dekhaa hai! Mein kaise bolegi aapko ki mere par kya beet rahi hai! Lekin woh sab naatak tha. Aur ek galat ko doosre galat se theek nahi kiyaa jaata! Mein Aapke Baba ko maaf karne ke liye nahi keh rahi, mein sirf unki baat sun ne ke liye keh rahi hai! yeh kahaan ka Insaaf hai ki baap ki sazaa, betaa bhookte?"


Dutta holds Naku and shakes her, "Bhooke pet rehnaa unkaa naatak tha Naku? Tu nahi samjhegi kyunki tu nahi thi na!" Dutta leaves her abruptly and turns.
Naku holds his hand from behind, "Aap meri jagah hote toh kyaa karte?" Dutta doesnt answer. Naku waits for few seconds then answers, "Nahi bol sakte na, Mein bataati hai. Aap mujh ko, mujhse bachaate. Wohi karte jo mein kar rahi hai."

Dutta - "Mein waada nahi todta Naku...Tu hi mujhe chod ke doosri ooar chali gayi hai...Tune hee wada todaa Naku...Chaubees ghante bhi nahi hue aur..."
Naku stares at him and says with conviction, "Naku mar jaayegi lekin apne saab se kiyaa waada nahi todegi! Aapki khushi aapko laake degi!"


Dutta turns, takes a deep breadth and looks at her with lot of pain in his eyes, "Naku, Pehle tere ko dekhtaa tha, toh lagtaa tha Khushi dekh li...", He rubs his forehead, fixes his eyes on her face, "par ab toh meraa aehsaas bhi nahi dikhaayi detaa kahin.". He looks at her as if he was searching something on her face.


Naku is hurt. Dutta tells her, "Apne rishtoan par vishwaas karna padtaa hai."
Naku retorts back, "Vishwaas, lekin andhaa vishwaas nahi. Na mera Vishwaas andha hai, na meraa pyaar, aur yehi pyaar, aapko chodke nahi jaayegaa!"
The moist in his eyes was dying to take the form of tears..."Saab, vishwaas bhari kal raat ke baad, vishwaas he nahi raha aap ko? Itnaa kamzor nahi hai yeh dhaaga"
Dutta - "Dhaaga tune apni taraf se chodaa Naku...Meine nahi!" He starts leaving, defeated at his last attempt to save the marriage.
Naku looks at his back, hopelessly, "Aap apni Naku se kaise door jaaoge...?"
Dutta stops in his tracks, without turning, he tells her, "Door tu mujhese jaa rahi hai...mujhe lagtaa tha ki tu mere se pyaar karti hai, mere aehsaasoan ka aehsaas hai tere ko...mere jeene ki wajah ban gayi thi tu Naku, ab kya boloon apni saansoan ko, ki tu saans kyun le?"
Naku pleads at him, "Math jaao aise..."
Dutta starts receding towards the stairs, "Aaj toh apni parchaayi bhi saath chod gayi...". He leaves.

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Kala and Leela are sitting in the room, both of them very happy with the turn of events.
Kala, "Yeh toh beithe bethaaye chandi ho gayi! Itnaa koshish kiya, kissi tarah Naku aur Dutta mein daraar aa jaaye, par aati hi nahi thi kambaqht lekin aaj toh beenaa maange hee sab kuch mil gaya! Waah bhagwaan wah!!..Tu bhi na...Kabhie Kabhie, aisa hee khush kar detaa hai!"
Leela laughs and both toast their drinks!

Leela, "Tayi lekin Naku gayi toh nahi na, kahin Bhaoo waapis se uske paas chale gaye toh."
Kala, "Nahi Leela, Ab nahi! Ab mein aisaa nahi hone doongi!, Mera paas aisaa paasa hai, jo In dono ko ab waapis kabhie nahi ek hone degaa!"
Leela is puzzled when Kala goes out and calls someone.
Kala, "Thodi der mein pata chal jaayegaa, sabar rakh, aati hi hogi."

Just them Jhoomri comes inside cat walking.
Jhoomri - "Bolo Taayi! Kya karne ka"...She scratches her palm.
Kala takes out a fad of notes and hands it to Jhumri. She explains to Jhumri what needs to be done and Jhumri leaves, with a glee!
Leela turns to Kala, "Wah taayi, maan gaye aap ko."
Kala, "Naku ko nikaalne ka ticket hai - Jhumri! Jo Dutta nahi kar paaya ab woh Kala karegi, Jhumri ki madad se!"

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Its 1 hr past midnight and Naku is worried about Dutta. He hasnt yet come to his room. She goes downstairs to find him. She searches for him everywhere, in the pation, lawn, living area, temple, finally decides to go to the bar! When she reaches the bar, she sees Dutta gulping the whishky and Jhumri beside him, helping him with more. She is shocked to see Jhumri. Just then Jhumri's eyes fall on Naku and she purposely, puts her hand on Dutta's shoulder and pours more hard rock whisky! Dutta keeps drinking more and more and saying, "Dhoka dee na, mujhe...WOh dhokaa dee na...dee ki nahi?"...Jhumri looks at him pathetically and says, "Haan, di...bada dhokaa dee." Dutta again goes on, "Meri Aayi...woh bolti, meri Aayi mere ko...."...Jhumri goes on, "Nahi, Aayi nahi ki kuch, woh hi dhokaa dee..."...Naku had enough, she goes near Dutta and pulls the whisky from him. "Bus bahut ho gaya, Aap chalo yahaan se."

Dutta gets pissed and snatches his glass back from her. "mein peeongaa, mein aur peeongaa."...Jhumri pours more whisky and Naku gets pissed and pulls the liquor bottle from her grasp. "Tu kya kar rahi hai yahaan, Jaa yahaan se.". Jhumri doesnt budge but keeps giving dirty look to Naku. Naku ignores her and tries pulling Dutta but Dutta shrugs her off! "Kahaan na, mujhe akelaa chod de...", after a second he adds, "hameshaa ke liye". He pushes his glass in front of Jhumri and Jhumri pours more whisky with an evil grin!. Naku stares at the two for few seconds and then leaves!
She straight goes to Baaji, "Inki haalat khrab hai Baaji, is samay sirf tu inko sambhaal saktaa hai. Tu unke paas jayegaa?"
Baaji looks at Naku, trying to read her mind, "Zakhm bhi teraa, Davaa bhi teri?"

Naku gives him a sad look, "Baaji, mein kya bolegi, bus itnaa keh sakti hai, mein jo boli, sach boli. Aage tu jaane. Mujhe maaloom, tu bhi unkaa bhala hee karegaa!"
With that she leaves. Baaji looks at her for a long time, sighs and goes towards the bar.

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Naku is climbing the stairs to her room when Jhumri comes from behind.
Jhumri, "Aigaa Pori, Mujhe door kar rahi thi...Dekhaa, khud hee door ho gayi! Tere ko yeh ich nahi maaloom ga, ki tere marad ko kya chahiye, kya nahi!! lekin mein un ko woh sab dee jo ek mard ko chahiye."
Naku gives Jhumri a cold shoulder and keeps climbing the stairs.
Jhumri gets muffed, "Ab teraa mard mere paas aayegaa, tere paas nahi! Iss kehte, aa bhense, mujhe maar!"
Naku sighs, and finally turns back and tells Jhumri, very cooly, "Hum pyaar kiye, saudaa nahi! Apne pyaar par mere ko apne se bhi zyaada bharosa, woh Bappa usse kabhie nahi tode gaa!"
Jhumri laughs, "Arre, ab toh tu dekh, kiskaa pyaar rang laayegaa."
Naku smirks, "Aur tu pyaar kisse kehti? Jo tu abhi kar rahi thi woh pyaar hai?"
Jhumri defends herself, "Mein saab ko khush kar rahi thi?"
It was Naku's turn to laugh, "Daaroo peelaa ke? Jhumri, jab tere ko sachchi pyaar hoga na, tab tu khud jaan jaayegi, pyaar mein Daroo zyaada zaroori hai ya dawaa!"
With this Naku goes to her room. Jhumri gives Naku a angry stare!

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Love,

DD

Edited by Dancingdoll - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
Yaaaayyiiiiiiiiiii
here comes my post mortem😆

Originally posted by: Dancingdoll

Part 2 - Daraar

Dutta and Naku's party is on
wat Party😲 just kidding😉
i know i know😆 ek saal ki salgira😳
aab kya karein mein bhi CV walo ki tarha slow n steady motion mein apne aap ko dhaal liy hu😆 warna bohut bore lagta hein LTL kabhi kabhi🥱 aab its my favrt show bore tow lagna hiy nahi chahiye isisliye I have washed my brain😆
and Naku gets down from the stairs to come to the living room, where the party was at its peak. Marathi dances were going on. As soon as NAKU steps down, her eyes search for Dutta. She was wearing a saree for the first time, only for him and today, she just wanted to be with him, all the way.
chalo accha hiy heinn ..... Dutta ki gang mein aur ek name include kaar liya Nakusha Dutta Patil jo sirf Dutta ke liye kaam karta hein😆😆😆 ...... track record itniy strong hein ki legend has it tha oncxe even Bappa tried to bribe Naku but Naku refused😆😆😆
Just then her eyes fall on Dutta, sitting in the bar, looking dashing in Carbon Black Jeans, Black shirt and Black Sports coat.
ki fark payenda jhein yaar aab pura ka pura aadmi hiy uska hein tow kya pehna hein kya nahi usko fark bhi nahi pardna chahiye LOL😆
She is mesmerized by his looks, Dutta turns to see Naku staring at him.
abhi bhi???? hey bhagwaan ek saal beet gaya inlogo ka staring competition khatam nahi huya???😲😆
He blushes and smiles slightly. Naku goes to him and smiles.
😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 sanki admi kab hasta hein kab cheekhta hein samajh mein nahi ata😆😆😆
She didnt know what to say.
huh???😲😲😲 u sure DD???? ur talkin abt our dear lil Naku???😆😆😆
They both stare at each other for a long time then Dutta finally breaks the silence. "Tum bahut achchi lag rahi ho." More than Naku, he blushes.
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 sharmila gunda 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Naku finds her voice, "Aap bhi.". Dutta hears this and starts adjusting his jacket. "Achchi lag rahi hai na. Meine Pehli baar pehnaa."...he looks at her with anticipation.
😲😲😲😲 matlab ???? wat does he want???? Naku pouncing on him???😆😆😆
aab yehiy dekhna baki hein LTL mein kya🤣🤣🤣
Naku gives him an assuring nod.
wat a loaded sentence DD 🤣🤣🤣🤣 she assures him once they r alone bak in thr room she will pounce😆😳😉🤣🤣🤣
Madhia where are you need some help here😳
Just then the whole PN bataalion approach them.
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 PN Batallion???? kuya baat hein wat a wonderfulchoice of phrase
mwah to that
First Baaji and Roops congratulate the couple.
Baaji, "Kya Bhaoo, tu toh chaukaa maara re, ab chakka kab maaregaa, huh?" Baaji gives a notorious laugh
like a pig kya???? oink oink oink oink 🤣🤣🤣
and Dutta hits him on the head and turns his face with a blushing smile.
Naku also smiles back. Roops hugs her brother and tells him, "Bhaoo, Aapko khush dekhkar, mein bahut khush hai aaj." Dutta hugs her back, "Tu khush hai na Choti, toh mein toh khush hoga hee." Roops turns to Naku and hugs her too, "Vehni, Mere Bhaoo ko uske khushi ke 1 saal dene ke liye, dhanyaavaad."...Naku blushes, looks at Dutta who is looking at her with hidden smile.
where where where????? kahi uss bakse ke andaar tow nahi hein jo gift wrap mein AS ke paasss aya tha from a stranger????🤣🤣🤣🤣

From behind a voice interjects, "Hume bhi toh koi dekhe."
Baaji, Naku and Roops get serious but Dutta sees Kala and Leela and gets up. He hugs Kala. "Taayi, tere ko kaise bhool sakte hain."
my word eeeegggjaaacccttllyy
hum aapko keise bhoole???
arey TaSha bina LTL shayad ban bhi jaye pur aapke bina kaise banega ????
aap tow iss purey drama ke Shylock ho
Naku Portia
Dutta Bassanio
Baji Gratiano
Damodar Patil and Babi are joined winner of the role of Antonio
Damodar for having a reason and Babi for resonlessly being unhappy🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 somewhr down the road i can very well imagine Babi saying something in the same lines of "In sooth I know not why I am so sad"
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Kala pats his face, "Bhaoo, shaadi ki saalgiraa mubaarak ho. Teri zindagi mein jaise utaar chadaav aaye, lagtaa nahi tha ki yeh din dekhne ko milegaa." Naku gives Kala a hard stare but keeps quiet. Dutta thanks kala and tells her, "Aap log ho na Taayi, toh mein sab toofaanoan ko dekh legaa." Naku shifts her gaze, anger rising inside her. Kala sees her and comes to Naku, "Humari vehni ko bhi toh koi dekhe. Uske bina kya saalgiraa.". Naku forces a smile.

AS comes from behind and calls for Dutta. "Dutta, apni Aayi ke gale nahi lagegaa?." Dutta hugs AS for a long time. AS then tells him with tears in her eyes, "Tere chehre par yeh khushi dekhne ke liye humaari aankhen taras gayi thi dutta. Maa Jagdambe saari khushi tere aanchal mein daal de." She blesses him and seeing this tears roll down Naku's eyes.
This girl has no idea where to give wat emotions😡
instead of becoming all stern n being observant
she is clouding her vision with tears????😡
GOD saab Babi ke saath rehna ka side effects hein😆
like Mother like Daughter😡
*Mithai disapprovingly nods her head*
*Mithai facepalm*
This was too much for her to take. The flashes of the tape come in front of her and she holds the bar stool tight. AS notices the tears in naku's eyes and so does Dutta. He rushes to be by her side, he looks at her, "Kya hua Naku?"...Naku is not able to say anything when AS speaks up, "Yeh Khushi ke aansoon hai Dutta, Tu nahi samjhegaa aurtoan ki baatein. Naku, yede aa!" Naku makes herself go to AS with lot of effort. Dutta still looks concerned and unsure. AS holds Naku by shoulder. Naku touches her feet, all the time, AS's true face flashing in front of her! AS blesses her, "Jeete reh Naku, Doodho nah, pooto phal, agle baras hume doosri hi khushi chahiye." Naku keeps looking at AS in a serious manner. Baaji shouts from behind, "Yehi toh Aayi Saheb, Mein aur kya bol raha hai, ek chota dutta, bus, aur jaasti toh kuch nahi maangaa na."
arey yaar tere OS mein tow at least sudhar jata yeh sudhar ne ka naam hiy nahi leta he always cracks up the wrong joke in the wrong tym at the wrong places in front a the wrong ppl😡
itniy baar Dutta ne pita fir bhi nahi sudhra
tere OS mein bhi nahi
meine tow umeed hiy cchord diy😆😕😆
...Dutta again gives a hard whack to Baaji but Naku doesnt change her expression. She is not able to enjoy the joke. "Mukhote, sab jagah Mukhote....Kaise pehnte itne mukhote aur pure samay pehne rehte..." She turns her face in disgust, Dutta notices Naku's discomfort. He tells Aayi, "Aayi Saheb, Jashn shuru karein?". AS agrees and all leave to take their place.
Dutta holds Naku's hand and turns her face towards him, "Kya baat hai Naku? Tu aaj badli badli hai?"
Naku forces a smile, "Kuch nahi! Mei theek hai."
Dutta sighs, "Naku, Jaanta hai ki tu mujhe padh sakti hai, bahut achchi tarah, lekin mein bhi koi kam nahi hai.
yeh lo yeh gadhe ka gadha hiy rahega yahan pe bhi competition
arey kya staring competition kum tha ki aab tu Naku ki mind reading ko leke bhi compete kaar raha hein
*Mithai whacks Dutta on the head😡*
Tu itni saaf hai na Naku,
😆😆😆 aab yeh bhi koi bolne wali baat hein???
pata hein jitne din kali avatar mein thiy saaf nahi dikhti thiy
pur jabh bhi ek dow baaar apni asli roop leke screen mein ayi hein bohut saaf dihti hein
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
tere dil ka haal, jhalakta hai un aankhon mein. Aaj mein chahtaa tha ki tu aur mein sirf khush rahein, lekin agar tu khush nahi hai, toh laalat hai mujh par. Waada kiyaa tha, teraa saath doonga, tu maukaa kyun nahi deti?"
Naku holds his hand and assures him, "Mei theek hai, sachchi! Aap jab tak Naku ke saath ho, Naku ko kuch nahi ho saktaa! Aur aap khushi bole na, sirf aaj nahi, ab humaare zindagi mei khushi hameshaa ke liye aayegi. yeh naku ka waada hai, apne saab se! Bus thoda bharosa karnaa hoga." She looks at him expectantly. Dutta tells her, "Bus tere par hi toh aankh band karne waala bharoasa hai Naku."
Naku smiles back, "Chalo, ab jashn mein chalein? Humari hi saalgiraa hai na?"
Both laugh and leave. Naku looks at the PN Family and thinks, "Ab mere saab ke zindagi mein asli khushiyaan aayengi."...Dutta gives Naku a side glance and sees a look of satisfaction on her face. He becomes happy seeing that look.
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The function is ON with Marathi dance and plays being played in front of the family and guests. Naku and Dutta sitting in the middle, Dutta is having a great time but Naku keeps looking over her side, not able to get over the betrayal of her family.
Naku looks at all the faces..."Itne chehre, aur sab nakli? Kaise rahein hain yeh in sab ke beech mein ab tak!"..She shudders. Dutta notices her shudder and comes close to her, holds her shoulders, "Tum theek ho na?"...🥱🥱
Naku looks at Dutta and her eyes wells up. Her vision suddenly changes to see Dutta in the middle of the room, trapped between room full of black evil masks and he holding her shoulders as last support and trust!
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
wonderful vision
lovely DD lovely
...She tells Dutta, "Bappa ko mein kaise dhanyawaad degi, ki usne mujhe aap diye"❤️❤️❤️
A pretty gal comes on the stage in the fisherwomen costume and starts dancing on, "Galiyaan sakli sonaa chi". The Patil family enjoy her dance. Once done, kala comes forward and pulls the girl in front of Dutta and Naku.
Kala - "Bhaoo, yeh Jhumri hai. Yahaan ki bahut naami nratya mandali ki sadasya. Khaas aapke jashn ke liye bulaaya hai."...She turns to face Jhumri, "Jhumri, Yeh mere Bhao - Dutta Bhaao aur humari Vehni hai.". Jhumri gets excited and holds on to Dutta's hand, "Mein badi naseeb waali hai ich ki mujhe bhagwaan, Dutta Bhao se milne kaa mauka mila ich! Haila Tauba!!...Aaj toh mein sabko bataayegi jaake, Mein Dutta Bhaao se milli."...😆😆😆,,,Dutta smiles at her and tries disengaging his hand from her, which was held for a few extra minutes than was required. Dutta - "Theek ho na Bai. Kuch chahiye toh bolnaa.". Jhumri gets more excited, "Aaigaa Saab, Majhaa Aaayi Baaba bahut khush honaar. Aap mere baare mein pooche. Aaigaa!"😳😳😆😆... Naku cant help laughing at Jhumri's excitement. Kala helps Dutta disengage his hand from jhumri's hold and she takes him away.
Dutta looks at Naku with embarrasment, "Meine nahi..."...Naku smiles at him back, "Aapko lagtaa hai ki aapko bolne ki zaroorat hai, mere ko?". Dutta's embarrasment changes to a lovelorn look, "Har din mere ko aehsaas hota hai, naye naye tareekoan se, ki mein kitna naseeb waala hoon."...
Naku and Dutta have been staring at each other when they hear Baaji's voice yelling on the mike, "Toh Bhaiyoan aur unki behnoan,
😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
Mere Bhaoo ka toh encounter bahut pehle hee ho gaya tha, lekin ek saal pehle usne shaadi ki goli bhi khaa le, tab se bus Khalaas hee ho gaya...😆😆😆...Ab Bhao ke muh se hum, Maarna, Kaatna, Khatam kar denaa, goli se udaa denaa sunte hee rehte hain, Aaj mein socha, kyun nahi hum woh sune jo sirf humari vehni sunti...Kyun Vehni?"...Dutta and Naku gets confused. Baaji goes on mischeviously, "Dutta Bhao, kya boltaa, Aaj humare sab ke saamne, bol daal, kuch shabdoan mein, tujhe pyaar mein kya kya hotaa hai?"
EXCUSE ME😲😲😲
*surprised muh*
yeh banda chahta kya hein????
arey agar itna hiy curiosity hein tow khub pyar ke jaaal mein fasta kyun nahi??????😡
bechara gadha ko embarras kar raha hein
hadnt he heard the old English proverb "Every dog has his day" ???😆😆
Baaji laughs at Dutta's embarrasment. Dutta shakes his head in denial, but with everyone's pesterance, he finally goes on the podium, extremely shy and blushing from head to toe. Baaji tells Dutta, "Tujhe yaad hai Bhaao, ek baar mein tere ko challenge kiyaa tha, Naku ko shaadi ke liye bolne ka, Aaj mein tere ko phir challenge karta, agar tera pyaar abhi bhi jawaan hai, toh hum sab ke saamne Naku ko bata, tum dono ke pyaar ka kya aehsaas hai?" With this Baaji leaves.
The challenge makes Dutta determined. The new found strength makes him feel that it was just Naku and him in the room, and everyone else faded in a fog! Dutta takes the mike and then looks at Naku. For few minutes, he just keeps looking at her, ❤️❤️❤️❤️...then suddenly he starts speaking, an unprepared oration of love, right from the heart, "Naku, meri zindagi mein aane ke liye, Koti koti dhanyavaad. Mujhe gaana nahi aata, par tere ko itnaa kehnaa chahtaa hoon"
He stares at her for few seconds, lost in her, and suddenly the room is filled with a cacophonic voice, singing -
how do u know he has a cacaphonic voice?????😲
I mean I can guess well enough that he doesnt sing in a cacphonic voice😕😉
Somewhr I read MR plays guitar n somebody who has the sense of tune can never sing in a cacaphonic voice
nuh uh never ever
unless of course his voice is cacaphonic😆😆😆
or if he is a tuneless tuner tuning his guitar🤣
by the way DD tujhe aur koi gana nahi mila???😕
yeh gana accha hein nothing against the song
but somehow i cant forget thewiered way Sunil Shetty was walking in this song
he looked as if he was badly limping n as if his ryt hand palm got stuck to his ryt knee
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
okay PERIOD no more laughing
😕😕😕😕............................
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

"Duniyaa ne thookraaya hai, Bus tumne apnaaya hai,
Dil ko kitnaa chain milaa, sab ne itnaa sataaya hai,
Apna hai, ek sapnaa, ek tu hee ho apnaa"❤️❤️❤️❤️

Dutta's eyes wells up with each and every memory of their love flashing in front of him. ❤️❤️❤️❤️The guests desperately try to not close their ears
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
galati se bhi ankhein band na karna guests
varna picchle track record dekha jaye tow PN mein party mein invited guests bechare ka tow haal behaal ho jata hein
kya pata DSP ka gana sunke ankhein band kar liye tow kahi Baji hiy na cheye ke cheye utar dey😆😆😆
but there was one person in the crowd who understood the depth of the words and the language of the the love, ❤️❤️❤️❤️she cried! 😭😭😭Naku got up and with tears in her eyes, went and hugged Dutta tightly. Both of them didnt care how many people were there in front of them, they two were immersed in love. ❤️❤️❤️😭😭😭Baaji starts crying seeing their love when Roops comes and gives his hand a hard squish.😭😭😭
yeh leh yeh kyun ro raha hein???
waise bhi PN mein baccho ki kami nahiy hein😆😆😆
aur nahi rone walo ki😆😆😆
Baaji wipes his tears and goes on the stage and gives a group hug to Dutta and Naku! 😳😳He takes the mike, "Pyaar bahut khoobsurat hota hai re! Bappa, mere ko bhi denaa."
arey yeh tow bada pohucha huya nikla
sidhe Bappa se dil laga beitha???😆😆😆
jks apart havent he heard God helps them those who helps themselves
help urself Baji Roops ki asliyat hum sab ko pata chalgaya hein kaal
tu bhi sambhal ja varna tere bhao ki tarha tujhe bhi dans jayegi
yaha IF mein bohut acchi acchi ladkiya hein 😆😆😆 tu kahe tow mein tere liye kisi se baat karoo???😉😆
He looks at Roops for a second and then shifts his gaze. 😳😳😳Dutta and Naku go back to their seats, hands locked in each other!❤️❤️
The rest of the program goes on when Roops calls Naku, "Vehni, Aap pooja ki thaali kahaan rakhein hain? Aayi Saheb ko chahiye." Naku gets up and goes to the kitchen to search for it.
In the meanwhile, in the living room, a pair of feet moves with determined stride towards Dutta.
oye hoye tui tuiiiiiiiii
*Mithai whistles*
purani villian ki re entry???
woh bhi ekdum jhakas hero ishtyle???😳👏
he comes close when AS turns to see that DP was approaching Dutta. A fear crosses her face and she shreiks!
Oh God there she goes again
now i bet she will fake to be claustrophobic
sheeesshhh in LTL
even if she aint the BH i wud still want her to be removed
gosh she gets on my nerves with this rona dhona stuffs😡
Everyone turns towards AS. Dutta follows AS's line of sight to see DP standing near him, giving a tender look to Dutta. Anger rises inside Dutta, his palms clench, he starts hissing, "Inko yahaan kinse aane diyaa?"
kya bakwas sawal hein🤢
bekar sawal karke sab ka tym waste maat kar🤢
tere ko nahi pata tere BGs sare ke sare nikumme nitthalle hein???😆😆😆
obviously tere BGs nehi darwaza khol diya hoga😡
He goes near DP and holds his collar, "Teri himmat kaise hui yahaan aane ki?"

Oye Dutta zara sambhal ke tera baap hein kucch tow izzat kar kya teri AS ne itna nahi sikhaya ki umre se baro ke saath keise pesh aatey hein????👎🏼

*disapproving muh*
DP tells Dutta calmly, "Betaa, Mein sirf..." but Dutta stops him, "Kitni baar bataana padegaa, mein teraa betaa nahi hoon, nahi hoon, nahi hoon.",
DD tu kya Ekta ki tarha effective hone ke liye ek dialogue thrice repeat karwaraha hein?????😆😆😆
he hits his fist in the air.
DP looks at Dutta for a second and speaks again, "Sachchai ko kitnaa bhi jhookla le, badal nahi saktaa. Mein yahaan tere ko sirf sach bataane aaya hoon."

Oh God Mr. D. Patil baap ka beta sipahi ka ghora kucch nahi to thoda thoda aab yeh aapka beta hein

tow kuch tow aapki tarha hoga ki nahi???
initial level mein escapism iska adat ban gaya hein
aab galat kya hein aap hiy se inherit kiya hein
jaise aap Sriram Patil ke accident ke baad bhag gaye tthey
pur wapas aye woh bhi 26 saal baad
LOL I can almost hear O. Henry scribbling another of his master pc short story entitled "After 26 Years"😆😆😆
the rest is reserved for later now going for the puja will continue once im done

Dutta roars at him, "Mujhe teri koi sachchai nahi sun ni. Tere muh se aise lafz achche nahi lagte hain." He calls for his BGs, "Isko yahaan se lekaar jaao."😡😡😡😡😡

DP becomes adamant, "Mein yahaan se Nahi jaaongaa, jab tak tu meri poori baat nahi sun lete."
Dutta holds his collar tight, "Mujhe majboor mat kar aisaa kuch karne ke liye, jisse humari peediyaan pachtaayein."😡😡😡
DP - "Jo karnaa hai kar le betaa, mein yahaan aaj apni baat bataake hi jaaongaa."
Naku hears the screams inside the kitchen and rushes outside. She gets worried seeing Dutta being aggressive with DP. She sees Dutta about to punch DP and she rushes to him and stops him. She stands between Dutta and DP. "Aap yeh kya kar rahe hain?"
Dutta keeps looking at DP, "Naku, hat ja beech mein se."
Naku doesnt budge, "Nahi, Mein nahi jaayegi."
Kala and Leela are enjoying the scene and wish that Naku had not interfered.
Dutta releases DP's collar and turns in frustration. "isse kisne yahaan aane diyaa. Kisne?". He gets more and more aggressive , every minute. 😡😡😡
Naku takes a deep breadth and tells him, "Mei boolaayi unko yahaan."
Dutta turns shocked, He is not able to say anything for quiet sometime. "Naku, Tu?". He moves closer to her, "Kyun Bulaayi tu isko?"
Naku holds his hand and calms him down, "Aap apne Baba ki ek baar baat toh sunlo?"
Dutta holds his hand, "Bus NAKU, Hum is baare mein baat kar chuke hain. Jab meine keh diyaa tha ki mein is se koi rishtaa nahi rakhnaa chahtaa hoon, toh tune usse kyun bulaaya? Woh bhi aaj? Jab mein humaare liye sab se khushi ka din banaana chahtaa tha, toh tune yeh tofaa diyaa mujhe?" Dutta gets emotional, pain reflecting from his eyes.
Naku feels his pain and tells him, "Humari khushi ke liye yeh zaroori hai, ki aap ek baar inki baat sunno."

Kala interjects, "Naku, Jab bhao keh raha hai ki woh is aadmi se milnaa nahi chahtaa toh mujhe samajh mein nahi aata ki tu kyun Bhaoo ko dookh par dookh denaa chahti hai? Tujhe humaare dookhoan ka koi aehsaas nahi hai?"
Naku gives Kala a dirty look but ignores her. She goes to Dutta and holds him, "Apne Naku ki aap ek baat nahi maanoge?"
Dutta falls on the couch, "Naku, Aisaa kuch math maang jo mein kabhie nahi de paaoon.Tujh se achcha kaun jaantaa hai..."
Naku cuts in, "Haan, mein jaanti hai...Dikhta mere ko, lekin jo mujhe dikhataa, woh aapko nahi dikhtaa...Aapko yeh sach jaan na zaroori hai." Dutta turns towards her agressively, "Sach sach sach, Kaisaa sach?"
Naku tells him boldly, "Aapke apnoan ka sach...Aap jinko apnaa kehtaa, woh kitne aapke apne hai, woh sach!...Aur uske liye agar aapke Baba se mujhe milnaa pade toh, mein woh bhi karegi! Mein aap ke liye, aap ke khilaf bhi khadi ho jaayegi!"
Dutta sits on couch, tired, "Tu kya keh rahi hai Naku, mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha."
Naku takes a deep breadth and tells him, "Saab! Aapko khokhlaa kiyaa hoga aapke Baba ne, par unkaa badlaa le rahe hain aap se, aapke apne, Aapki Aayi aur behnein!...Aapke khilaf har saazish, har khel, woh khele!..."
Dutta keeps getting infuriated at Naku's word
but Naku goes on! "Supriya ko bhagaaye yeh log, naam aaya mere pe, dil tootaa aapka...Har Khushi ko aap se door rakhne ki saazish kare yeh." Naku gives AS and Kala a venomous look. - "Lekin yeh bhool gaye ki Bappa sab dekh raha tha...Bappa ke aage toh kissi ki nahi chalti. Woh aapke Baba ko bhejaa aapki Aayi aur behnoan ke muh se mukhotaa nikaalne ke liye..."
Dutta gets very pissed off, and shouts at Naku, "Nakuuuuuuuu...".
Dutta raises his hand at Naku but stops midway. "Bus Naku, Bus!! Apne rishtey ki laaj rakhi abhi tak, suntaa gayaa, par ab nahi...bus!". This doesnt waver Naku, she goes on, "Nahi! Bus Nahi! Aap ko sun na padegaa...Kitnaa bhagenge hum? Kitni der tak patti pehne rahenge..."
Dutta moves around restlessly, giving signs to Naku to stop, but she doesnt."Aap jaante na ki mein Sups ko nahi bhagaayi, toh aap soche kaun bhagaaya...Aap hi bole the na ki ghar se koi usse bhagaaya...Toh kaun bhagaaya?".
Dutta shouts at Naku back, "Toh mein apni Aayi aur behnoan par ilzaam laga doon...?"
Naku - "Nahi, math lagao...Aisa toh kissi par bhi ilzaam nahi lagaane ka...Mein bhi nahi vishawaas ki aisa hee...lekin Baba ke paas saboot hai..."
Dutta argues, "Saboot banaaye bhi jaa sakte hain Naku...tere se accha yeh kaun jaantaa hai?"
Naku counter argues, "Haan mere samay par bhi saboot banaaye gaye the, lekin kisne banaaye the? Kuch saboot banaaye nahi ja sakte, aur woh dekhne se pata chalegaa na? Ek baar aap saboot toh dekho"

Dutta gets very emotional, he sits beside AS, who has been crying profusely.😭😭😭😭😭 He holds her hand, "Naku, Kaash apni poori zindagi ka saboot la saktaa, Kaash unmein dikhaa saktaa ki Aayi saheb ne mujhe kaise paala, Kaash dikha saktaa tere ko ki kaise meri behnein tadpi hain, jab mere par goli chalayi jaati....Kahaan se un aehsaasoan ke saboot laaoon Naku?"
Naku doesnt loose her hold, "Woh aehsaas nafrat ka tha...sonaa deti murgi ko bhi toh paala jaata hai? Mein aapko aise nahi dekh sakti!"

Dutta rises up and shouts, "Nakuuuuuuu ...Bus!!Bahut sun liyaa meine...Aaj tune apni har had paar kar di hai." He turns and stops near her.
He looks at her for few seconds and finally says, "Aayi par ungli uthaane walle ki is ghar mein toh kya, mere zindagi mein koi jagah nahi hai!"
Naku looks at him shocked, "Humaare pyaar mein Hadein kahaan se aa gayi? Aur agar aapke liye mujhe hadeein paar karni padegi, toh mein woh bhi karegi!"
Dutta shakes his head in frustration, "Pyaar ka naam math de isse...Aaj tune mere pyaar ko bhi ruswaa kar diyaa.". He holds her for a long time and then abruptly releases her.
He sits on the couch and covers his face with his hand, "Chali jaa yahaan se Naku, Isse pehle ki mein iss pyaar ko kossoon, chali jaa!"
Naku goes near him, holds his hand and turns him to face her, She starts crying, "Aap apni Naku ko apne se door jaane ko keh rahe?"
Dutta turns his face from Naku and disengages his arm, "Chali jaa Naku! Isse pehle ki yeh betaa bhool jaaye ki woh kissi ke beintehaa pyaar karta hai, chali jaa! Nahi toh aaj mere se aisaa anarth ho jaayegaa, jiske liye mein apne aap ko kabhie maaf nahi kar paaongaa..."

AS keeps crying, "Dutta nahi...Mat kar...Hume Naku se koi shikaayat nahi hai. Yeh sab iss aadmi ka kiyaa karaaya hai. Naku toh sirf teraa bhala chahti hai."
Dutta looks at Naku, "Dekhaa! Aaj bhi meri Aayi mere baare mein soch rahi hai, meri khushi ke baare mein soch rahi hai, aur tu..." He turns his face, disgusted with Naku. "Meri Zindagi se chali jaa Naku. Meri Aayi mere liye sab se zyaada zaroori hai. Iske liye mein kuch bhi chod saktaa hai." Naku becomes stoned for a second. She couldnt believe what she was hearing.
Dutta gets up and starts leaving. His walk indicated that the man of the house had passed the verdict and Naku had to follow it. He reaches the stairs when Naku's voice roars from behind, "Nahi jaayegi, Mein nahi jaayegi! Aur kyun jaaye? Yeh ghar meraa hai, Aap mere ho!" Dutta turns in shock. Naku goes close to him and gives him a determined look, "Aap bole the na ek baar, ki mein aapko, aap se zyaada jaanti hai. Haan mein khud kehti hai, Aaj aapko meri sabse zyaada zaroorat hai. Aaj mein hi hai iss ghar mein, jo aapki hai, Aapko abhi dikhayi nahi de raha, par mein aapko dikhaayegi! Mein aapko aisee akelaa chod ke nahi jaayegi."

Kala realizes the game was slipping, she interjects,"Dekho toh, kitni dheet hai...Jab bhaao keh raha hai, jaane ke liye, toh jaati kyun nahi? Humaari Aayi ke upar ungli utnaane waale ko hum maaf nahi karte!"
Naku looks at her, and then back at Dutta, more determined than ever, "Aapne sunaa, Mein nahi jaayegi". She turns to look at Kala and AS. "Aur ab, Baba bhi humaare saath rahenge."

Dutta shouts back, "Nakuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu, tu nahi jaanti tu...."
Naku turns to look at Dutta, revolting look in her eyes, "Mein jaanti hai, achchi tarah jaanti hai, aur ek din aap bhi jaan jaaoge.". She turns towards DP, "Chaliye Baba! Aap ab se yahin rahoge! Humaare saath!"
DP gets skeptical, "Beti, magar..."...Naku interjects, "Baba, Beti kaha hai na, Beti ki baat maano!". She stares at Dutta but talks to DP, "Aap apna sachcha praishchit karnaa chahte na, toh aapko yahin rehnaa hoga."
With that she pulls DP and takes him to the guest room.
Dutta keeps hissing, with a strong punch on the railing of the stairs, he goes towards the bar.
AS and Kala keep staring, worried at the turn on events.
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Please leave your comments.
Love,
DD

Edited by princessmithai - 14 years ago
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Hieeee DD........sowwweeeeeeee i 'm late.....😭😭😭u updated part 4....😉

it's really awesome sweetheart......u n ur OS r really rocking



hehe DD.....each n evry dialouge r toooo gooood....actually i have no words to ......give complements for ur dialouge writting......kahin Anil tumhare under toh training nahin le raha n

the convo....wer datta say kehde ye khwab he ohhhh......
n this jhumri throw her out.....jaldieeeeee.....ahhhhhh.....
n sweety i just luv dis emotions....
sooo u got it... in my every comment .....thnk u 4 pm n
for ur OS......... i'm really glad dat i read it.......




Edited by sonee - 14 years ago
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HEY DD nice part. vry emotional.. I hav faith in u. U'll make evrythng fine. Sab ka sach samne aajyega aur Tasha ek ho jayenge.. But the part was awesome.👍🏼
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DD I was like this😭😭 while reading very emotional ,can not see Tasha in pain ,not able to write more after reading will be waiting for next part ,please jaldi next part update karo
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DD.........kitna sad update tha.......plz TaSha ko phir se milado.........i can't see them in pain.......n is jhumri ka kuchh karo.........update soon......
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Yeh jhumri ki to 😡😡😡😡😡 Woah awesome updateee but can't see dutta like dis😭😭😭😭 Can't he just listen 2 nakku and DP for once... uska kya chalega? damn that man is stubborn lol... anyway update sooon!!!
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Firstly DD I am extremely SORRY for reading ur post sooooo late........................
I am supposed to read it earlier but everytime I start reading ur post, always interupteded by smbody..............
after reading all three post I am compeletly speechless
all three parts are awesome.................
dialogues b/w taSha are
superubbbbbbb......... U write lyk a
professional writer.................
i liked each & every single word of ur
OS.......
There are a lots of convo b/w TaSha, in which u did a fabulas job dear👏👏👏......................

"Tu toh mujhe chod ke nahi jaayegi na? Mere andar ka toofan mein sirf tere ko dikhaa saktaa hoon Naku. Tu mere se rooth jaayegi toh mein bilkool toot jaaongaa!".

I am feeling lyk crying when Dutta said this to nakku😭...........................

and when nakku said "Humaare pyaar mein Hadein kahaan se aa gayi? Aur agar aapke liye mujhe hadeein paar karni padegi, toh mein woh bhi karegi!"
and later she said ki
agar aapki khushi ke liye mujhe aapke khilaf bhi jana pade to main jayegi
these dialouges were very heart touching...........................

There a lots of more such dialouges which actually very heart touching.........
Very good work DD...................................
A lots of appriciation to u........................
plz plz plz update soon dear............................
Edited by khushi0318 - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dancingdoll

Part III: Kabab Mein Haddi

poor nakku.. feel so sorry for her..as she rightly remembers the previous night they spent together, the gift and all those special moments all thru the time she has known him.. how can he forget all tht.. ok, not forget, but push that aside so easily. i tell u .. men.. brainless😡😆 but to be honest, dutta is also suffering even more, hai na
Just then Dutta enters the room and sees Naku crying bitterly. His heart wrenches at the sight😭😭😭😭, he hesitates for a second and then with pain in his eyes, goes and kneels down beside her. Naku feels his presence and turns to him. She stops crying but her face is wet with her tears. She looks aimlessly at the floor. Bahut ummedoan se tere paas aaya hoon. Bure Khwab ki toh ab aadat ho gayi hai. Mein apne pyaar ke liye yeh khwab bhi bhoola doonga. Bus ek baar bol de."
he just wants to be happy here na.. he somehow hope that if he pleads with nakku she will take her case back and their life can go back to how it was.. at least he hopes so.. he has had so many incidents to pain him that he has reached a point where he cant handle anymore😭

Naku looks at him emotionally, tears stopped at the corner of her eyes, "Kaash mein keh sakti ki apne, apne hee hain. Kaash mein keh sakti ki aapko khokhlaa karne waale, aapke apne nahi hain, Lekin aapke liye, mein jhooth nahi bolegi.

Dutta immediately leaves her hand in shock. Naku tries holding his hand, but he gets up and turns his back towards her. "Kyun kar rahi hai aisaa mere saath Naku? Aisi baatein kyun kar rahi hai, jo tujhe mujhse har kadam door leke jaa rahein hain?".

He looks at the roof, "Kyun Kyun Kyun?", he hits the wall hard. "Kyun mere saath hee zindagi aise rang dikhaati hai, Kyun? Mein hee kyun?"...He hits the wall again.
Naku flinches with the sudden rage. She gets up, takes his hand and tells him, "Naku apne saab se saath janmoan ke liye jood gayi hai. Ab toh khud Bappa bhi
usse saab se alag nahi kar saktaa. Aur har janam mein, Naku apne saab ke liye, saab se bhi ladegi!"
Dutta moves, defeat in his voice, "Shukriya Naku, pata nahi kiska, un chand lamhoan ka jo mujhe, zindagi kya hoti hai, woh dikhaa ke chale gaye, ya us pal ke liye, jismein tu bhi dikhaa gayi ki Dutta akele hi aaya tha, aur akelaa hee reh gayaa."

👏👏👏👏👏.. no words to describe anything here by me😭

Naku, "Mein aapko akela nahi chodi. Ek baar agar aap sachchai...", Dutta gets frustrated again and shouts in rage, "Mujhe koi sachchai nahi sunnni....Meri sachchai mere saamne hai".

he is back to being the petulant dutta again.. he just wants to believe what he thinks is right.. even if his heart is saying that even for a moment nakku is right, he is turning a deaf ear to it here.. Naku goes after him determined yet again, "Nahi...Woh jhooth tha...sab jhooth tha ab tak....Jhooth par Jhooth...Jhooth par Jhooth....Kitnaa Jhooth ki patti bandhen ge saab? Kitnaa? Kabhie toh sachchai ka saamna karnaa padegaa, Kabhie toh ladnaa padegaa Jhooth se?"


Dutta holds his head, "Bus Naku! Tune bhi aaj mujhe dhokha de diyaa na!! Jiss Aayi ke liye mein jaan de saktaa hoon, jis ke liye mein sab kuch chod saktaa hoon, un par tu itnaa bada ilzaam laga rahi hai?".

He holds his hand in front of him and looks at them desperately, gulps his tears and says, "Naku, jab khaane mein zidd kartaa tha na, toh apne un hatoan se khaana khilaati thi, jab raat mein akele dar lagtaa tha, toh apni god ki aanchal mein mujhe chupaa leti thi, aur unhi haatoan se mere sar ko sehlaati thi, poori raat bhar khud nahi soyengi, par mujhe sulaayengi! Meri behnoan ko nahi khilayengi, lekin mujhe khaana zaroor deti thi! Aur tu uss aadmi ki baatoan mein aa rahi hai, jisne aaj tak sirf dookh baata hai?"

beautifully explained dialogues of what all AS has done for him.. very touching and poignant.. a son who loves his mom unconditionally and with all his heart.. baring his heart to his wife to try and make her understand why he will not believe her.. poor dutta .. he has nakku's words against all that AS has done for him.. obviously comparng nakku words to all teh good deeds done by AS is not going to get any brownie points for nakku😭
Naku - "Unki mamtaa ka roop meine bhi dekhaa hai! Mein kaise bolegi aapko ki mere par kya beet rahi hai! Lekin woh sab naatak tha. Aur ek galat ko doosre galat se theek nahi kiyaa jaata! Mein Aapke Baba ko maaf karne ke liye nahi keh rahi, mein sirf unki baat sun ne ke liye keh rahi hai! yeh kahaan ka Insaaf hai ki baap ki sazaa, betaa bhookte?"


Dutta holds Naku and shakes her, "Bhooke pet rehnaa unkaa naatak tha Naku? Tu nahi samjhegi kyunki tu nahi thi na!" Dutta leaves her abruptly and turns.
Naku holds his hand from behind, "Aap meri jagah hote toh kyaa karte?" Dutta doesnt answer. Naku waits for few seconds then answers, "Nahi bol sakte na, Mein bataati hai. Aap mujh ko, mujhse bachaate. Wohi karte jo mein kar rahi hai."

😭😭😭😭😭😭
Dutta - "Mein waada nahi todta Naku...Tu hi mujhe chod ke doosri ooar chali gayi hai...Tune hee wada todaa Naku...Chaubees ghante bhi nahi hue aur..."
Naku stares at him and says with conviction, "Naku mar jaayegi lekin apne saab se kiyaa waada nahi todegi! Aapki khushi aapko laake degi!"


Dutta turns, takes a deep breadth and looks at her with lot of pain in his eyes, "Naku, Pehle tere ko dekhtaa tha, toh lagtaa tha Khushi dekh li...", He rubs his forehead, fixes his eyes on her face, "par ab toh meraa aehsaas bhi nahi dikhaayi detaa kahin.". He looks at her as if he was searching something on her face.


Naku is hurt. Dutta tells her, "Apne rishtoan par vishwaas karna padtaa hai."
Naku retorts back, "Vishwaas, lekin andhaa vishwaas nahi. Na mera Vishwaas andha hai, na meraa pyaar, aur yehi pyaar, aapko chodke nahi jaayegaa!"
The moist in his eyes was dying to take the form of tears..."Saab, vishwaas bhari kal raat ke baad, vishwaas he nahi raha aap ko? Itnaa kamzor nahi hai yeh dhaaga"
Dutta - "Dhaaga tune apni taraf se chodaa Naku...Meine nahi!" He starts leaving, defeated at his last attempt to save the marriage.
this is sooo heartwrenching DD.. 😭😭😭.. these 2 are so much in love and it is killing themt o say such things to each otehr.. both are right in what they say, though dutta should have at least seen the proof.. but then i am not surprised.. woh szaa sunata hain and then think karta hai😡 but this is soooo sad😭
Naku looks at his back, hopelessly, "Aap apni Naku se kaise door jaaoge...?"
Dutta stops in his tracks, without turning, he tells her, "Door tu mujhese jaa rahi hai...mujhe lagtaa tha ki tu mere se pyaar karti hai, mere aehsaasoan ka aehsaas hai tere ko...mere jeene ki wajah ban gayi thi tu Naku, ab kya boloon apni saansoan ko, ki tu saans kyun le?"
Naku pleads at him, "Math jaao aise..."
Dutta starts receding towards the stairs, "Aaj toh apni parchaayi bhi saath chod gayi...". He leaves.

😭😭😭😭😭 on the above line and 👏👏👏👏 forwriting it dear DD.. yes, his parchayi nakku is no longer with him..she who was with him in all his moments of happiness, sadness, anger, mistrust, pain

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Kala and Leela are sitting in the room, both of them very happy with the turn of events.
Kala, "Yeh toh beithe bethaaye chandi ho gayi! Itnaa koshish kiya, kissi tarah Naku aur Dutta mein daraar aa jaaye, par aati hi nahi thi kambaqht lekin aaj toh beenaa maange hee sab kuch mil gaya! Waah bhagwaan wah!!..Tu bhi na...Kabhie Kabhie, aisa hee khush kar detaa hai!"
Leela laughs and both toast their drinks!

Leela, "Tayi lekin Naku gayi toh nahi na, kahin Bhaoo waapis se uske paas chale gaye toh."
Kala, "Nahi Leela, Ab nahi! Ab mein aisaa nahi hone doongi!, Mera paas aisaa paasa hai, jo In dono ko ab waapis kabhie nahi ek hone degaa!"
Leela is puzzled when Kala goes out and calls someone.
Kala, "Thodi der mein pata chal jaayegaa, sabar rakh, aati hi hogi."

Just them Jhoomri comes inside cat walking.
Jhoomri - "Bolo Taayi! Kya karne ka"...She scratches her palm.
Kala takes out a fad of notes and hands it to Jhumri. She explains to Jhumri what needs to be done and Jhumri leaves, with a glee!
Leela turns to Kala, "Wah taayi, maan gaye aap ko."
Kala, "Naku ko nikaalne ka ticket hai - Jhumri! Jo Dutta nahi kar paaya ab woh Kala karegi, Jhumri ki madad se!"

I knew it.. i knew it.. forgot to add that comment when this Jhumri creature turned up in the last part.. i knew that she would come back.. call it 6th sense or whatever DD, but i just knew it! But DD i know i cant entrude upon your creativeness, but pls pls i beg you, dont let this woman come any closer to dutta please.. that will be the last straw.. i remember u saying there is one thing that dutta will do which we wont relate to.. pls dont let that be with this jhumri😡.. i am so involved with this OS, it is unbelievable.. can experience every emotion😭

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Its 1 hr past midnight and Naku is worried about Dutta. He hasnt yet come to his room. She goes downstairs to find him. She searches for him everywhere, in the pation, lawn, living area, temple, finally decides to go to the bar! When she reaches the bar, she sees Dutta gulping the whishky and Jhumri beside him, helping him with more. She is shocked to see Jhumri. Just then Jhumri's eyes fall on Naku and she purposely, puts her hand on Dutta's shoulder and pours more hard rock whisky! Dutta keeps drinking more and more and saying, "Dhoka dee na, mujhe...WOh dhokaa dee na...dee ki nahi?"...Jhumri looks at him pathetically and says, "Haan, di...bada dhokaa dee." Dutta again goes on, "Meri Aayi...woh bolti, meri Aayi mere ko...."...Jhumri goes on, "Nahi, Aayi nahi ki kuch, woh hi dhokaa dee..."...Naku had enough, she goes near Dutta and pulls the whisky from him. "Bus bahut ho gaya, Aap chalo yahaan se."

Dutta gets pissed and snatches his glass back from her. "mein peeongaa, mein aur peeongaa."...Jhumri pours more whisky and Naku gets pissed and pulls the liquor bottle from her grasp. "Tu kya kar rahi hai yahaan, Jaa yahaan se.". Jhumri doesnt budge but keeps giving dirty look to Naku. Naku ignores her and tries pulling Dutta but Dutta shrugs her off! "Kahaan na, mujhe akelaa chod de...", after a second he adds, "hameshaa ke liye". He pushes his glass in front of Jhumri and Jhumri pours more whisky with an evil grin!. Naku stares at the two for few seconds and then leaves!

i am not liking it that he is ignoring nakku like this.. agreed he is like that.. and our dutta is like that.. but me still not liking it that another woman is pouring him drinks and he is asking nakku to leave him.. i can understand he is not in his senses.. but how much pain will thta cause a wife isn't it? we all love dutta and put him on a pedestal, but when he does such stuff to nakku, i just feel really sad.. sad for her and for him for doing it😭

She straight goes to Baaji, "Inki haalat khrab hai Baaji, is samay sirf tu inko sambhaal saktaa hai. Tu unke paas jayegaa?"
Baaji looks at Naku, trying to read her mind, "Zakhm bhi teraa, Davaa bhi teri?"

Naku gives him a sad look, "Baaji, mein kya bolegi, bus itnaa keh sakti hai, mein jo boli, sach boli. Aage tu jaane. Mujhe maaloom, tu bhi unkaa bhala hee karegaa!"
With that she leaves. Baaji looks at her for a long time, sighs and goes towards the bar.

👏👏👏 well done.. who else but baaji to help him now👏👏

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Naku is climbing the stairs to her room when Jhumri comes from behind.
Jhumri, "Aigaa Pori, Mujhe door kar rahi thi...Dekhaa, khud hee door ho gayi! Tere ko yeh ich nahi maaloom ga, ki tere marad ko kya chahiye, kya nahi!! lekin mein un ko woh sab dee jo ek mard ko chahiye."
Naku gives Jhumri a cold shoulder and keeps climbing the stairs.
Jhumri gets muffed, "Ab teraa mard mere paas aayegaa, tere paas nahi! Iss kehte, aa bhense, mujhe maar!"

oh littl does she know that D-N are bound together in their heart and soul.. there is no way any 😡 can come between them.. taht is what is so unique about them.. the love they share is forever

Naku sighs, and finally turns back and tells Jhumri, very cooly, "Hum pyaar kiye, saudaa nahi! Apne pyaar par mere ko apne se bhi zyaada bharosa, woh Bappa usse kabhie nahi tode gaa!"
Jhumri laughs, "Arre, ab toh tu dekh, kiskaa pyaar rang laayegaa."
Naku smirks, "Aur tu pyaar kisse kehti? Jo tu abhi kar rahi thi woh pyaar hai?"
Jhumri defends herself, "Mein saab ko khush kar rahi thi?"
It was Naku's turn to laugh, "Daaroo peelaa ke? Jhumri, jab tere ko sachchi pyaar hoga na, tab tu khud jaan jaayegi, pyaar mein Daroo zyaada zaroori hai ya dawaa!"
With this Naku goes to her room. Jhumri gives Naku a angry stare!

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Please leave your comments!

oh DD.. i am drained.. very emotionally after such a part.. cant imagine how you must feel to write something like this.. pls make dutta grovel big time once he realises.. i am sure nakku will not allow him to grovel😭 as she will not be able to stand that at all.. i knw life is full of ups and downs.. unfortunately our Dutta has more downs than ups, though the presence of Nakku in his life allows him to endure the downs and still pull thru.. hope thenext part wil at least bring them back to talking.. how can Dutta think that the marriage is ending😡 and make a last attempt to save it.. how can he even think like that DD.. diff of opinion however extreme will/ should not affect their marriage.. how can he just give uyp, agreed AS is his mum who has loved him all his life.. BUT nakku is his life too.. how can he not even think once of all that she has done for him.. at least all the love she has for him.. why oh why.. pls pls update quick...

vandu

Love,

DD

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What's this?Ab yeh Jhumri kaun hai?😲🤢 Woh teen kya kam the ke ab yeh bhi aa gayi?Jhumri? I hope the CVs don't lift this idea now.I can't bear it.😭
But very well written.Superb!👍🏼 Eagerly awaiting the next installment.Jaldi jaldi bhanda phod kijiye na,DD, Kaala & Co ka!
I dread the day when he really comes to know of his family.Obviously Nakku will be the one to bring it all out.Poor Nakku.Kuch aisa hi haal hoga uska.😔

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