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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
awesome update
loved it
loved the shakspear
awesome cliffhanger
cant wait 2 c what happens next
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Posted: 15 years ago
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gr8 update👍🏼
can't wait 4 next part
plzz update soon .
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
OMG! Chandniiii! This Izz Awesome I Love Reading Ur FFs They Give Me The Goosebumps!!! Haha COUNTINUE SOOOONN!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chandni-



Mommy Mmujhe Bachaooo
Haha
Yup ab tume wait karni hi parengi 😆

Me too
Congo for being first glad u liked it



Hey Chandini!!!
Kamini I am BACKKK!!!
Tujhe Mommy tih kya mummy bhi nahi bacha aayegi!
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WHERE IS THE PART????
Yaar so long no update??
Bhool gayyi kya??
Mujhe jaldi update chahiye JALDIII!!!
I Mean It!!!

Jinszyy! Kum Khoon choos ne vaali!!
Edited by KaSh_Deewaanie - 15 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65

~ Recap ~

Muskan tells Ridhima to stay away from Ridhima because he is bad. Ridhima goes to class and tries to stay away from Armaan as much as possible, she asks Sid to come with her to the Theater after school for practice and he agrees. Ridhima is at the Theater with Armaan and they are practicing it is time for the kissing part and Armaan is about to kiss her.

RIDHIMA'S P.O.V

" Oh my god he is going to kiss me, help me god, help me, Muskann told me to stay away from him but this kiss ahhhhhhhhh" as I felt his breath slowly reaching my lips I felt weak he slipped his hands around my waist to support me, but I wanted to stop myself, but couldn't. I could feel his lips inching closer and closer to mine as we were about to kiss I heard a familiar voice.

Sid – "RIDHIMA" I broke away from Armaan and looked out towards the audience seats and saw Sid standing there with Steam coming out of him. He was fuming with anger. I Pushed Armaan away and ran off the stage and up to Sid. "Sid listen to me whatever you saw was nothing we didn't don't worry, please believe me" as laid my hand on his cheeks feeling the heat I knew he was really angry. Sid – "Ridhima how could you do this is this why you told me to come with you here so I can see you making out with your new friend" he hit my hand off is cheek and looked away. "Please Sid I only love you I just barely met this guy" before I could finish what I wanted to say the idiot spoke Armaan – "excuse me this guy has a name its Armaan A- R-M-A-A-N, thank you" i ignored him, because right now Sid was mad. "Shut up ARMAAN" I looked back at Sid, "Please Sid listen to me, tell me one thing why would I kiss a disgusting guy like this you know Muskann warned me to stay away from him, she also told what he does to girls and you know what he does, he uses them" I said it as low as possible making sure Armaan didn't hear that. Sid- "If Muskann said that then why are you here with him right now" looking me straight in the eyes all I saw in those beautiful brown eyes was hatred. "That's why I ask you if you would come with me, but you came let, and here you are yelling at me like if I was about to do something bad, me out of all the girls possible, why would do something to hurt you I have never done anything to hurt anyone. Sid I love you and only you, this is my skit for the playa and it is part of it I don't want to kiss him and I don't want him.." before I could continue his lips were covering my mouth so I couldn't say anything. I was still mad at him and tried to push him, but I gave in. As I stood there kissing the man I love the most I heard tapping noises. We broke apart and looked at the stage it was Armaan.

Armaan – "sorry to break such a romantic moment, but can we practice since you already did the KISSING scene can we continue" I kissed Sid one last time and went back on the stage and Sid took a seat out in the audience area. "Sorry about that" walking to the center of the stage. Armaan – "it's ok let's get started"

ARMAAN: O, wilt thou leave me so unsatisfied?

RIDHIMA: What satisfaction canst thou have to-night?

ARMAAN: The exchange of thy love's faithful vow for mine.

RIDHIMA: I gave thee mine before thou didst request it:
and yet I would it were to give again.

ARMAAN: Would'st thou withdraw it? for what purpose, love?

RIDHIMA: But to be frank and give it thee again.
And yet I wish but for the thing I have.
My bounty is as boundless as the sea,
My love as deep; the more I give to thee,
The more I have, for both are infinite.
I hear some noise within. Dear love, adieu!
[NURSE calls within.]
Anon, good nurse! Sweet Montague, be true.
Stay but a little, I will come again. [Exit.]

Armaan – "Ok that's it for today" folding the script and walking to his backpack. I got off the stage and walked to Sid. He slipped his hand into my mine and we walked out of the Theater hand in hand without saying a word to each other or Armaan.

The car ride was very quiet "Sid are you still mad at me" I said as I clutched his free hand. He stopped the car on the side of the road Sid – "No Ridhima, I was, but I'm not anymore ok" and looked at him, but it seemed as if he wasn't telling the truth "ok". He started the car again and we drove to my house. After saying our goodbyes I went into the house and upstairs.

As I got ready for bed my phone started ringing I went to pick up my phone, it was Sid "I love you" I said after picking up the phone Sid – "I love you too" his voice sounded different. "Baby what's wrong with your voice" I was worried that he might have a cold. Sid – "Baby? When did you start calling me baby" I was shocked he must be playing a prank on me. "I have been calling you Baby since the day we started going out remember" Sid – "We were never going out I just met you like 3 days ago" woo who is this I'm talking to I've known Sid for 2 years this time he is going too far. "Sid why are you doing this to me" pouting my face thought I know he couldn't see it. Sid – "Sid, I'm not Sid this Armaan on the phone" woo did he just say Armaan uh-oh "ARMAAN, what are you doing with Sid's phone, why didn't you tell me when I said I Love You" uhh this idiot one day is going to get me in trouble. Armaan – "I was just playing along that's it" now he had done it "ARMAAN THIS IS NO GAME AND WHY DO YOU SID'S PHONE" I tried to control my anger, but I wasn't getting far with that. Armaan – "Chill Ridhima I was just joking your Boyfriend left his phone here I'll give it to you tomorrow" before I could say anything he hung up I fell on the bed and didn't know when sleep crept to my eyes.

ARMAAN P.O.V.

"Wow Ridhima is such an over reactor anyways I will have to face her everyday unfortunately" I headed to the bathroom to change into to my sleep ware. As soon as I came out the phone rang. I walked to my phone, but it was not my phone and then I saw Sid's phone flashing. "Hello" I could not believe the things I was hearing. "Um can I talk to you later" ? – "Yeah sure" I hung up the phone and fell on bed. "Oh my god when Ridhima finds what is going to happen, I don't think she can handle after what I heard today in the Theater. Should I tell her?" I picked Sid's cell phone and called her. Ridhima – "Armaan what do you want?" "Um Ridhima" should I tell her was all I thought I didn't know how to break It to her. Ridhima – "Say what you want you, just woke me up, hurry up, I am very tired" "Good night that's all I wanted to say" Ridhima – "Stupid you called me just for that, whatever good night" we hung up the phone and sat on the bed again. "Why should I interfere with her life whatever happens to her is her problem not mine" I smiled and grabbed my pillow and went to bed.

SID P.O.V.

I was searching for my cell phone in my room and in the car, but I couldn't find it. A horrible thought came to my head "What happens if Ridhima has then oh my god she is going to kill me" I quickly ran downstairs to get the house phone I needed to know if she had my phone. I grabbed the house and called her number. "Hello Ridhima" Shashank – "No beta it's Shashank" "Oh hi uncle is Ridhima there" please say yes Shashank – "Yes" phew "Can I talk to her" Shashank – "She is sleeping is anything wrong" shot why do you have to be sleeping right now Ridhima "Um no, I called to say ill drop her to school tomorrow and good night" Shashank – "teek hai beta bye" "Bye uncle" I hung up the phone immediately. "Aw man what am I going to do what happen if she has my phone, then she will find out the truth and if she doesn't I will be very thankful" I laid on my bed and thought of all the possible outcomes of her finding out the truth. I didn't know when I fell asleep, but all I knew was tomorrow was going to be a tough day

3rd Person P.O.V.

The next morning was the morning of what could be happiness or sadness and the three woke up only one had a scared look Sid, one had a smile, Ridhima, and the other had a laugh Armaan. None of them knew what was going to come into their lives and change everything, from the second they wake up to the second they go to sleep.


Well i got little comments, but thought I wud post this anyways.

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