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Posted: 15 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: moonlight2630


hi Chandni
1st i wana thanks 4 reply.
very nice and intresting update
AR r so cute together.
let's see waht happend next
y muskan want's ridz stay away from arman.
waiting 4 ur next part
plz update soon . 😊



thnks for commenting
AR will always be cute together
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

wow!!! so i just started reading your fan fic!!! AWESOME WORKK!! your a great writer! cant wait for the next part! can you pm me when you cont again? thanks! :)



i wiil PM u
thnks for reading and commenting
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: KaSh_Deewaanie

HIYA Chandini!
I am Jinil and am totally smitten by your fic!
I really enjoyed reading it!
Ugghhh but u left it at a cliffhanger!!
GRRRRR!!
N ya do update soon because I kind of have this rep for pestering people for updates!
Love u

Jinszy!


im glad u enjoyed very sweet of u
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: moonlight2630

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ok chillax i am
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: KaSh_Deewaanie

Is part coming soon since ur replying to comments?? **FINGERS CROSSED**


U guessed right. 😆
Im updating right now but will take a while cuz of the stupid spamming
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
UGHHH!!!!!

Yrh spamming ki toh MAIN!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
Part 3
~Recap~
Ridhima and Armaan did their rehearsals and then she left. She was bothered by some goons and Armaan came and saved her. He dropped her home. The next day Ridhima was waiting for Sid to come pick her up, when she heard a honk it was Armaan. She went with Armaan and the both went to school. Armaan found Ridhima had a boyfriend and they started talking about their lives. Ridhima left Armaan after seeing Muskann, Muskaan asked her what she was doingand Ridhina said she was with Armaan. Muskann told her to stay away from Armaan.




Ridhima – "Kyunki kya Muskann" she looked into her eyes, trying to find an answer, but wasn't recieveing one. Muskann – "Kyunki…kyunki woh ek gamandi larka hai, woh lardkio ko use karta hai aur pher phaktha hai, please Ridhima use dur rahiya. Ridhima was shocked at what she was hearing. Ridhima – "Lekhne woh toh mera partner hai skit kehliye, ab mein kya karu" she had to think of a way to escape from this problem. Muskann – "Ridhima listen do everything you are supposed to do, but don't let me him get close to you, not even a foot, ok?" Ridhima – "Ok thanks, I am getting late or class talk to you later"



RIDHIMA'S P.O.V.
As I walked to class I thought of ways to ignore Armaan, but it was hard he is in most of my classes and I am doing a skit with him. "Aww man what should I do" Sid - " Need any help" I turned around and saw his beautiful face. I ran and took a hold of him, knocking him back. Sid - "woww slow down there" he balanced himself and took a hold of me. I snuggled upto him and he tighten his grip on me. Sid – "wah bohat pyaar ah raha hai aaj" he loosened his grip on me and took my face in his hands as I looked up at him I smiled and he smiled back. "No just like that" I pulled away from the hug. "Walk me to class?" Sid – "anytime let's go" as I felt his lips on my forehead I closed my eyes as all my worried disappeared."Chal"

As we got to my class, he released my hand and I hugged him "Bye" Sid – "Bye sweeatheart" I walked into the class and stopped in my tracks. Turning around "Sid" Sid- "Mm?" "Will you come with me to my skit practice" Sid – "Yeah" "Bye" I walked into class thankful thank Sid said yes. "No worries Ridhima, Sid is going to be with you nothing to worry about" as I walked passed the teacher's desk I stopped in my tracks. There he was leaning against the table staring at me. I lowered my eyes trying not to make eye contact. I took a quick look around the room and saw another empty seeat I headed towards but someone got there before. The only seat left was the one next to Armaan. "God help me" I mumbled to myself walking towards the seat and sat down.



3rd Person P.O.V.
Armaan – "Hi Ridhima" still gazing down. Ridhima – "Hi". Armaan noticed her uneasiness, Armaan – "What's wro…" before he could finish Mrs. Mehra walked in. Mrs. Mehra – "Good morining class, hope you guys have started you project remember next Thursday we will be going to the theater for your final practice" she set her things on the table and sat down. Mrs. Mehra – "Class you guys may start practicing rmemeber we will be practicing everyday in class till Thursday and I need a copy of your script now get started". Armaan stood from his seat ans walked about to Ridhima. Armaan – "Ready". Ridhima – "Umm yeah sure" she got up they both went to a corner of the room to start practing. Nikki – "Armaannnn" Armaan stopped in his track and turned around. Armaan – "Hey Nikki" he walked upto her and hugged her. Nikki looked at Ridhima and winked at her slid her hands in his hair. Armaan oulled away slowly – "I wish I was your partner, my partner is so boring she is so unromantic" Ridhima didn't hear a word Armaan said. Nikki – "I wishhh I was your partner instead of that thing"ridhima looked up hearing what Nikki said. Armaan and Nikki laughed he turned and walked towards Ridhima "Chale". Ridhima – "ha chalo"

Armaan gave her his hand for her to climb onto the chair, but she refused, she got herself onto the the chair and they began.


ARMAAN: But soft! What light through yonder window breaks?
It is the East, and Juliet is the sun!
Arise, fair sun, and kill the envious moon
Who is already sick and pale with grief
That thou her maid art far more fair than she.
Be not her maid, since she is envious.
Her vestal livery is but sick and green,
And none but fools do wear it. Cast it off.
It is my lady! O, it is my love!
O, that she knew she were!
She speaks, yet she says nothing.
What of that? Her eye discourses; I will answer it.
I am too bold; 'tis not to me she speaks.
Two of the fairest stars in all the heaven
Having some business, do entreat her eyes
To twinkle in their spheres till they return.
What if her eyes were there, they in her head?
The brightness of her cheek would shame those stars
As daylight doth a lamp; her eyes in heaven
Would through the airy region stream so bright
That birds would sing and think it were not night.
See how she leans her cheek upon her hand!
O, that I were a glove upon that hand,
That I might touch that cheek!

RIDHIMA: Ay me!

ARMAAN: She speaks.
O, speak again, bright angel, for thou art
As glorious to this night, being o'er my head,
As is a winged messenger of heaven
Unto the white-upturned wond'ring eyes
Of mortals that fall back to gaze on him
When he bestrides the lazy puffing clouds
And sails upon the bosom of the air.


As Armaan spoke Ridhima couldn't help but gaze at him, when he said his words to Juliet it seems as if he meant it for her, Ridhima as kept looking he kept saying his lines and stopped to see Ridhima staring at him. He smiled and leaned towards her, "it's your line" she broke out of her trance and said her line.

RIDHIMA: O Romeo, Romeo! Wherefore art thou Romeo?
Deny thy father and refuse thy name;
Or, if thou wilt not, be but sworn my love,
And I'll no longer be a Capulet.


Slowly everyone started to break apart from their practice and come towards Armaan and Ridhima's performance, but they didn't notice. As everyone clapped they broke away and looked around the whole class was staring at them as always Armaan bowed down taking the fame. Ridhima nodded and went to her seat and sat down. Mrs. Mehra – "Armaan and Ridhima, you guys were fantastic I can't wait to see the whole thing on Thursday and Friday" Armaan and Ridhima – "Thanks" they said together hearing applause from the class again. As Mrs. Mehra was complimenting their performance Armaan whispered to Ridhima – "Theater at 3 for practice?" Ridhima looked at him – "um yeah". Armaan – "Cool 3 It is see you there" he got up as soon as the bell rang and left. Ridhima got up and left.



As the door opened Ridhima walked in, and walked towards the stage. As she was getting on there a hand came out she looked up to see whose it was – "Armaan?" Armaan – "Any problems?" Ridhima – "Um no" she didn't take a hold of his hands and helped herself onto the stage. Ridhima – "Um should we get started?" walking to the center of the stage leaving Armaan hanging by the stage. Armaan – "Um yeah sure, our next part is where we see each other ok so let's start from where we ended in class" walking toward the center of the stage handing Ridhima her script.


ARMAAN: Shall I hear more, or shall I speak at this?

RIDHIMA: 'Tis but thy name that is my enemy.
Thou art thyself, though not a Montague.
What's Montague? It is nor hand, nor foot,
Nor arm, nor face. O, be some other name
Belonging to a man.
What's in a name? That which we call a rose
By any other word would smell as sweet.
So Romeo would, were he not Romeo called,
Retain that dear perfection which he owes
Without that title. Romeo, doff thy name;
And for thy name, which is no part of thee,
Take all myself.

ARMAAN: I take thee at thy word.
Call me but love, and I'll be new baptized;
Henceforth I never will be Romeo.

RIDHIMA: What man art thou, that, thus bescreened in night,
So stumblest on my counsel?

ARMAAN: By a name
I know not how to tell thee who I am.
My name, dear saint, is hateful to myself
Because it is an enemy to thee.
Had I it written, I would tear the word.

RIDHIMA: My ears have yet not drunk a hundred words
Of thy tongue's uttering, yet I know the sound.
Art thou not Romeo, and a Montague?

ARMAAN: Neither, fair maid, if either thee dislike.

RIDHIMA: How camest thou hither, tell me, and wherefore?
The orchard walls are high and hard to climb,
And the place death, considering who thou art,
If any of my kinsmen find thee here.

ARMAAN: With love's light wings did I o'erperch these walls;
For stony limits cannot hold love out,
And what love can do, that dares love attempt.
Therefore thy kinsmen are no stop to me.

RIDHIMA: If they do see thee, they will murder thee.

ARMAAN: Alack, there lies more peril in thine eye
Than twenty of their swords! Look thou but sweet,
And I am proof against their enmity.

RIDHIMA: I would not for the world they saw thee here.

ARMAAN: I have night's cloak to hide me from their eyes;
And but thou love me, let them find me here.
My life were better ended by their hate
Than death prorogued, wanting of thy love.

RIDHIMA: By whose direction found'st thou out this place?

ARMAAN: By Love, that first did prompt me to inquire.
He lent me council, and I lent him eyes.
I am no pilot; yet, wert thou as far
As that vast shore washed with the farthest sea,
I should adventure for such merchandise.

RIDHIMA: Thou knowest the mask of night is on my face;
Else would a maiden blush bepaint my cheek
For that which thou hast heard me speak tonight.
Fain would I dwell on form--fain, fain deny
What I have spoke; but farewell compliment!
Dost thou love me? I know thou wilt say "Ay;"
And I will take thy word. Yet, if thou swear'st,
Thou mayst prove false. At lovers' perjuries,
They say Jove laughs. O gentle Romeo,
If thou dost love, pronounce it faithfully.
Or if thou thinkest I am too quickly won,
I'll frown and be perverse and say thee nay,
So thou wilt woo, but else, not for the world.
In truth, fair Montague, I am too fond,
And therefore thou mayst think my havior light;
But trust me, gentleman, I'll prove more true
Than those that have more cunning to be strange.
I should have been more strange, I must confess,
But that thou overheard'st, ere I was ware,
My true love passion. Therefore pardon me,
And not impute this yielding to light love,
Which the dark night hath so discovered.

ARMAAN: Lady, by yonder blessed moon I vow,
That tips with silver all these fruit-tree tops--

RIDHIMA: O, swear not by the moon, th' inconstant moon,
That monthly changes in her circle orb,
Lest that thy love prove likewise variable.

ARMAAN: What shall I swear by?

RIDHIMA: Do not swear at all;
Or if thou wilt, swear by thy gracious self,
Which is the god of my idolatry,
And I'll believe thee.

ARMAAN: If my heart's dear love--

RIDHIMA: Well, do not swear. Although I joy in thee,
I have no joy of this contract tonight.
It is too rash, too unadvised, too sudden;
Too like the lightning, which doth cease to be
Ere one can say it lightens. Sweet, good night!
This bud of love, by summer's ripening breath,
May prove a beauteous flow'r when next we meet.
Good night, good night! As sweet repose and rest
Come to thy heart as that within my breast!


Armaan – "Ok Ridhima this is where we kiss, are you ready" looking up from the script. Ridhima – "Um" "what should I do I need to stay away from him" thinking to herself" "Um not really I've never kissed anyone but my boyfriend". Armaan – "There is a first for everything" he walked up to her and cupped her face in his hands. She slowly closed her eyes and felt her head being tilted up.

RIDHIMA's P.O.V.

" Oh my god he is going to kiss me, help me god, help me, Muskann told me to stay away from him but this kiss ahhhhhhhhh" as I felt his breath slowly reaching my lips I felt weak he slipped his hands around my waist to support me, but I wanted to stop myself, but couldn't. I could feel his lips inching closer and closer to mine and then….



Please comment Sorry For the Delay Been Gonna PMs will Come later Cuz this spamming thing is bugging me and i cant stand IF today So hope you enjoyed and Please please Comment all FFs run on comments and so does this one. I want long ones even those this one was boring sorry to leave u like tht

Bye
Love Chand
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
Reserved! Even before u changed title!

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CHANDINI!!!!!!!!!
Main tera ghar aake khoon kar doongi!!!!
Aise time pe chod diya!!
Kamini ab main kya karoon??? Aur kar bhi kya kar sakti hoon next part ke liye wait!
LOL
JK
Oh and loved Shakespear!
Great!
Love ya!
Oh n I Am FIRST!!

Jinszy!
Edited by KaSh_Deewaanie - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: KaSh_Deewaanie

Reserved! Even before u changed title!

**EDITED**

CHANDINI!!!!!!!!!
Main tera ghar aake khoon kar doongi!!!!
Aise time pe chod diya!!
Kamini ab main kya karoon??? Aur kar bhi kya kar sakti hoon next part ke liye wait!
LOL
JK
Oh and loved Shakespear!
Great!
Love ya!
Oh n I Am FIRST!!

Jinszy!



Mommy Mmujhe Bachaooo
Haha
Yup ab tume wait karni hi parengi 😆

Me too
Congo for being first glad u liked it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
AWESOME FF :)
i read all of it..and cant wait for more.
so pleasee do pm me :)

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