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Originally posted by: cutiepreet

hey... nice idea.... of ur ff..
i really liked and enjoyed reading it... plzzz plzzz plzz continue and update quickly.. :)
plzzz add me to ur PM list.. ;)
really nice and creative idea of ur ff.. :)

thnk u already updated lol and ur added

hey budy....
nice ff.....nice concept.......
do continue n add me to ur pm list..................

awesome update loved it

Hey nice update... y did u stop at such a point... do continue soon.. very curious to knw wht Muski uld tell ridzi..

hey.. 2nd part was really nice... quite interesting... i loved how Ridz said that she want to hug Armaan.. haha of course everyone wants to.. :)
anywayzz... just a lil correction for u... ur ff is great but u know when u wrote Armaan's dialogues like when he was joking with Ridz at the beginning tht he luvs her... in ur words.. "mein tumse pyaar karti hun.." but it is supposed to be "main tumse pyaar karta hoon" instead of karti.. for guys itzz karta and i noticed in Ridz parts u wrote karta instead of karti... but itzz just i wanted to let u know... i really hope that u didnt mind me telling u... but believe ur ff is really nice and interesting... :)
sry if u mind but i didnt meant to hurt u just wanted to tell u abt tht.... :)
thanxxx :)

Originally posted by: cutiepreet

hey.. 2nd part was really nice... quite interesting... i loved how Ridz said that she want to hug Armaan.. haha of course everyone wants to.. :)
anywayzz... just a lil correction for u... ur ff is great but u know when u wrote Armaan's dialogues like when he was joking with Ridz at the beginning tht he luvs her... in ur words.. "mein tumse pyaar karti hun.." but it is supposed to be "main tumse pyaar karta hoon" instead of karti.. for guys itzz karta and i noticed in Ridz parts u wrote karta instead of karti... but itzz just i wanted to let u know... i really hope that u didnt mind me telling u... but believe ur ff is really nice and interesting... :)
sry if u mind but i didnt meant to hurt u just wanted to tell u abt tht.... :)
thanxxx :)

thnks for telling but i know the hindi rule was just typing fast so i didnt re look it thnk u for letting me know but i think people will understand lol

thnk u for reading hope u enjoyed

hi Chandni
1st i wana thanks 4 reply.
very nice and intresting update
AR r so cute together.
let's see waht happend next
y muskan want's ridz stay away from arman.
waiting 4 ur next part
plz update soon . 😊