Ek thi kahani-unke pyar ki Ch63 n epilogue(24aug)) - Page 3

Originally posted by: swati2008

Shilpa.......very well written n dnt censor.......n next time pm me........do u want me to help u with a name.......

Originally posted by: geethasingh

Hi Shilpa,

In your LTL....U have Black Nakku r fair...In last scene you have shown her in the rain rt?

sweety really good please continue soon if you can please do PM me thanks😊

Originally posted by: sonee

nice update dear.........

shilpi...FF is really good hhhmmmmm

n plz next time PM me 2 plz......

n BTW what's ur name?????😛😛😛

Originally posted by: isatb

Hey ur ff is quite interesting. Loved the Tasha scene. And i thnk Tinnu Anand is DP- Damodar Patil, and SP- his his elder brother Shriram Patil. Anyways. I liked ur ff. And add me to ur p.m. list. Do cont. And dont 4get to p.m. me.👍🏼

Here goes ...

Ch2

Dutta and nakku are totally lost in each other's arms..Dutta deepens the kiss some more.He pulls her in his arms on the bed..and unwinds her hair,he then moves on to kiss her throat..the soft knape of her neck and slips the zip of her dress slowly..Nakku is so lost in his arms she totally forgets everything n doesn't ask him to stop.😳😳☺️

By now dutta is so fargone in the moment its impossible to stop for him,he kisses her eyes and cheeks and then again smooches her and slowly takes of her clothes(Its dark in the room so he can't see the different body color neck down does this seem feasible guyz)He lays her down on his bed..and takes of his sodden kurta in one swift movement..and lays down on nakku covering her wid his body.😳😳😳

He kisses her again for an eternity,this kiss is different then others before..Nakku can sense tht dutta is asking him to love him with this kiss.This kiss was asking for a permission to continue..it was request to stay wid him for the night..He was not forcing her..he was pleading her.❤️.she looks up in his eyes..and sees his question in them..she looks down in shyness..at his throat..sees her adam's apple bob up and down tense,and she places her lips on his throat.She moves her hands from his backup slowly into his thick hair and his lips in a deep shy lip lock😳😲😳.

That was all the encouragement he needed..and he responds with eager love..

(Background music for Tasha first love scene -mere haath mein tera haath ho ..saari jaanatey tere saath ho---from movie faana )

tere dil mein meri saanson ko panaa mil jaaye
tere ishq mein meri jaan fanaa ho jaaye

The curtains r blowing with the fierce wind..the screen is all blurry..with the image of two lovers totally lost in each other and in the moment.❤️

The final lines of the song plays..

adhoori saans thi dhadkan adhoori thi adhooren ham
magar ab chaand poora hain falak pe aur ab pooren hain ham..

And the scene ends..CUT..😳😳☺️

The sunrises in the horizon..with birds criping on trees..its dawn time. The whole PN is still sleeping.So are our love birds..😳😊

Dutta is dead to the world ,nakku has her head pillowed on his bare chest..She stirs slowly and looks up on dutta still sleeping face and smiles...😊

Nakku(in her mind)-saab kaise,bacho ki tarah masoomiyat se sotey hain!😳

Just then she notices tht they both are naked under the covers and her fair skin is visible..She panicks.😲

Slowly she gets out of the bed covering herself with dutta's kurta which was lying nearby picks up her clothes and looks back on bed to check if he has stirred..Dutta moves in his sleep and goes on sleeping(bechara lagta hai raat bikul nahi soya...sorry sunshine21 I forgot to count the rounds😆😆😳..)

She tiptoes into the bathroom and changes and fixes her dark makeup..she can't find a comb and she looks totally disheveled..as if she has just been out of bed..(Dutta's bed)She leaves the room quietly and goes to her kholi..her parents are asleep..they had probably not even noticed that she has not been home the entire night..She lays down beside her aai..and thinks abt the night..😍

Its morning time everyone is doing their own thing..Babi calls nakku frm her sleep .

Babi-nakku,ae,nakku, khub ushira zala re..(its late)..ata uth(wake up) saab aur sab k liye nashta bhi banana hai..uthja..meri bachchi.(🤢Have to keep her in ff...i personally hate her)

Nakku gets up with start.."Saab" then she looks around and smiles..She gets up n goes to take a bath.😲

In the shower her dark makeup washes away,leaving the fair princess looking at her image and continuously thinking abt her prince..his kiss ,his touch,his hands on her body..she touches herself as he did last night and bluses pink..just then she notices the lovebites on her shoulder and smiles.😳😳

Babi- nakku , mein jati hai.tu loukar aaja(come fast).

Nakku comes out and gets ready by applying her makeup. She then goes to the PN kitchen to help her aai but AS calls nakku.

AS-Nakku,dekh dutta abtak nahi utha..jaa beta usey uhta kar chai de aa..kehna nashtey pe sab itezar kar rahe hai.

Nakku takes the tea goes to dutta's room.

Dutta has woken up with a smile on his face..he lies on his back wid his arms folded behind his head and thinks abt nakku n the night..'Ab humey koi alag nai kar sakta..'Just then nakku comes in..Dutta immediately closes his eyes and pretends sleep.😳😊

Nakku keeps the tea on the bedside table..'Saab,u..u..utho..ss..subha ho gai hai..'dutta keeps his eyes closed. Nakku touches his shoulders and just then notices her payal beside dutta on the other side.😳

'Hey bhagwan ,ye yaha choot gaya..koi dekh lega to?'she reaches over dutta to grab the offending thing and just then dutta opens his eyes giving her a start.nakku loses her balance and falls over dutta in his arms..😊

Dutta -Hmmm,aaj ki subha to bahut haseen hai..😊😳

He leans in to kiss nakku on her lips..nakku leans in too..Just when their lips are about to touch..Baaji walks in....

Baaji-aee Bhao, Ye Gali ka engineer Palke bahut shanna ban rahaaaa..😡

He notices bhao n nakku and turns his back..'kya Bhao,ye adult film darwaza bandh karke dekhne ka na...' Dutta n nakku separate in a start nakku stands up n looks away..😳☺️

Dutta-wo...wo..hum..aa..tu yaha kya kar raha hai?😳

Baaji-main todi na aapki movie me cut bolne aya tha.Kaam ki Baat bolne ka tha.😉

Naaku-Wo ..aisa nahi hai..😳

Both dutta and baaji look at her..Dutta-'Tu yaha kyu aai thi' (he has to appear stern infront of baaji..raangey haatho jo pakade gai)😆

Naaku blushes n stutters- Wo..main..Wo..Chai ne kaha aapko...AS de aane..Wo..aap intezaar kar rahe hai nashte ka sab ko khaneke liye.😕🤔🤪

And she runs out of the room.

Dutta keeps smiling after her😍.Baaji-Ye kya boli mereko to kuch paaley nai pada bhao..tereko samjha kya?🤪

Dutta gives him the 'moron,kabab me haadi😡'wala look,drinks his tea in one go and gets up to take a bath.On his way to shower he looks back at baaji n says 'aaj us Palke ko jaane de Baaji..Aaj kissi ko maarne peetne ka mood nahi hai.'Then he smiles and leaves.😃

Baaji stares at dutta..totally shocked.😲...He puts a finger in his ears and clears it🤡.'Ye aaj sabko kya ho gaya hai.Ya mera kaan kharab ho gaya hai..Nakku kya boli samaj nai aya aur bhao bola Maarne ka nai..mood nai hai..waha to din me panch admiyo ka baraat na nikalo to bhao ka mood nai banta tha. 😲Chal baaji, zamana teji se badal raha hai ..haan...bhao ka mood fir badal gaya to tujhe he subha ki movie ka 'the end' karne ke liye peet denge.. ..katle yaha se..'😆🤣

...To be continued..Very soon..Update is almost ready

Sneak Peek

TaSha cute moments..caught again in a candid moment...😳Tasha wedding date fixed.😊