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Wanderbug thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
😳Thanks for such encouragment guyz..🤗Todays episode was good, had some awesome droolable dutta scenes😍...So.. i'll try to match that level of intensity,he is a very complex character😳...which only adds to his attraction😳😍.Did you see the scene where he dreams he is running alone and then tied to the chair..wht anguish?😭Keep tht in mind while u read this... 😳
continuing from last updated scene...

Ch1


Its raining heavily,stormy night...dutta is still drinking😔. He takes the bottle upto his balcony and looks out..On the street a group of drunk beggers are gathered shelttered from the storm.They are strumping some instruments..a small girl is dancing to the tune..faint music wafts upto dutta..(This i first noticed abt the DSP character😍..he has a artists soul..remember him playing the soulful organ in earlier epis..Hope to see more of tht..😳😳😳☺️)

Song-Barsaat ke mausam mein(film naajayaaz)
Beggers singing
Barsaat Ke Mausam Mein
Tanhai Ke Aalam Mein
Barsaat Ke Mausam Mein
Tanhai Ke Aalam Mein
Main Ghar Se Nikal Aaya
Bootal Bhi Utha Laya...


Abhi Zinda Hoon To Jee Lene Do
Jee Lene Do
Bhari Barsaat Mein Pi Lene Do

Dutta walks out in rain with his bottle,waves the gaurds off and joins the banjaras

Dutta sings
Abhi Zinda Hoon To Jee Lene Do
Jee Lene Do
Bhari Barsaat Mein Pi Lene Do...

Bhari Barsaat Mein Pi Lene Do...
Mere Dushman Hain Zamaane Ke Gam
Baad Pi Ne Ke Yeh Honge Kam
Mere Dushman Hain Zamaane Ke Gam
Baad Pi Ne Ke Yeh Honge Kam

O, Zulm Duniya Ke Na Seh Paaonga
Bin Piyee Aae j Na Reh Paaonga
Mujhe Haalat Se Takrana Hai
Aise Haalat Main Pi Lene Do


Nakku comes out running and looks at Dutta wid anguish and pain😭 while dutta just keeps breaking his heart in his singing..He turns and looks at nakku ...comes close to her..and tilts the bottle in front of her and sings on while the wisky falls from the bottle..while looking in her eyes.(can u guyz picture it..😭😔)


Aaj Ki Shaam Badi Bojhal Hai
Aaj Ki Raat Badi Kaatil Hai
Ho ... Aaj Ki Shaam Dhalega Kaise
Aaj Ki Raat Kategi Kaise
Aag Sey Aag Bujhegi Dil Ki
Mujhey Yeh Aag Bhi Pee Leney Do
Abhi Zinda Hoon To Jee Leney Jee Leney Do
Bhari Barsaat Main Pee Leney Do


Nakku breaks the eye contact and looks away in pain ....seeing this Dutta breaks the bottle on his hand.🥺..blood ozzes out...'Nakku , kya tu bhi mujse nafrat karti hai,meri tai ki tarah?' 😭 nakku looks at his hand.

Nakku- saab khoon....aap...aap andar chaliye saab...bahut khoon aa raha hai saab..chaliye andar chaliye..
she drags him in while he keeps muttering...
Dutta-Nakku, sari duniya mujhse nafrat kare ...par tu mujhse kabhi mu mat ferna....mat ferna.

Nakku does marham patti for him(By the end of LTL and all our FF nakku would be a trained A&E nurse😛😆) She drags him upstairs to his room..makes him sit on the bed..Its dark in the room.
Nakku-Bahut raat ho gai hai saab..aap so jaieye..

She turns to leave him..he grabs her hand..'mujhe chod ke mat jaa nakku.. aaj mujhe tanhai se bahut darr lag raha hai...aapne aap se darr lag raha hai..'
Nakku sits down near his leg..'main yahi hu saab..aapke pass'😳

She tries to switch on the light..Dutta puts his hand on hers to stop her..

Dutta- rahene de andhere ko...roshni mein mere andar ka andhera aur gahera lagta hai..aaj is andhere mein hi mujhe sab saaf saaf dekh raha hai...tujhe dikhta hai nakku..mere haaton pe khoon...un logo ka jinhe dutta bhao ne mara..haan?😭..dikhta hai...mere baba ka khoon 💔mere haato pe...😭 (R u guyz crying by the buckets yet...Wait lemme grab my box of tissues ..crying alwyz gives me a running nose😆)

Nakku- aapne apne baba ko nahi mara...1 bacha jo aapne liye khud paani nahi le sakta tha vo kisi ki jaan kya lega..aap aisa mat socho saab..aap akele nai ho..tai thodi naraj hai..pan baki sab aapke sath hai..AS,leela,roop,baaji..sab.😳

Dutta- aur tu..

Nakku- nakku to har saas me aapke sath hai saab.❤️.aur aap nakku ki har dadkan me shamil hai saab...roshni aur suraj kabhi alag huye hai saab? Dil se dadkan ko alag karo to maut aati hai saab..aap nakku ki dadkan hai..aapke bina nakku kya?❤️😳

Dutta looks at her..cups her face in his hands..'aye nakku,tu meri zindagi hai..❤️'

And he kisses her..a very sweet kiss..just a touch..soft..hesitating..at first...He is so conscious tht its her first kiss...he thinks to himself..this has to be perfect for her..everything should be just right for her..Only gift tht God has ever given him is this sweet ,innocent creature in his arms..He'll never take her for granted..He is just thinking of a small sweet kiss, nothing more..☺️😳
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But then nakku moans..the sweetest sound he has ever heard in his life..all his intentions are washed away wid his need..he deepens the kiss a little. and then some more....

Nakku responds with equal fervor..she is awashed wid sensations..hot,sweet,painful all at the sametime..How can she refuse this man anything? He has been the center of her world since that fateful night wid that creep More..Can she ,a mere mortal stop the sun from rising? Saying no to anything saab wants from her is like stopping the sun for nakku..
She can't say no to saab, can she?

to be continued only if positively received..

Ufff.... cheeks are burning wid sharam☺️....plz tell if the scene was to hot to handle..😳😳😳i'll mellow it a little...pura censor🤬 kar dungi..agar inappropriate laga to..song ke lyrics ne kaafi jaga liya hai..par the lyrics were so suitable for the scene...Plz ppl listen to this song and try to picture dutta in it...u'll get what i mean.😍😳
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Any guesses what happens next...Plz press like button to increase my enthu..and ur bouquets and brickbats are always sar ankhon par..Ciao.😊😳😉
😉😳


.scorpio10 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12

Do continue .. Y shy away ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13

This is awesome... Im glad My FF Raat Ka Nasha inspired you,,, you're really good.. Please continue as soon as possible..

Dont forget to read mine as well.. i just updated as well! Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
very nice yar keep writing, i really like it alot. 😳 about the heading "Dusky before the drawn" ( dark before the sunshine) it is so abt to LTL because CV make us cry and give happiness. like -datta throw nakku out of the house🥺 and realize his feeling❤️☺️
Edited by sasha_1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
waw pls pm me with the next update
n no the scenes werent that besharm
but yeah i really cant picture Gadha singing songs
my bad sorry
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16

Princessmithai n all others, Thnks for liking it...And you better get used to gadha babe singing lotz of bolly hits...coz my dutta in my ltl is the don wid gun and golden voice...plus if he can play mouthorgan so well then he must like music and singing naa?😆

next update is going to be on the way soon...the name is still a confusion.i want a hindi name but not to long.. thnks for suggestions..

PeekPreview:

TaSha to doob gaye..😲....And aftermath...


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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
Hi Shilpa,

In your LTL....U have Black Nakku r fair...In last scene you have shown her in the rain rt?

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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
Wow. Nice update and yes i liked the Tasha scene. Do continue. Dont censor. LOL And plz p.m. me. Plz
spandana11 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
Shilpa very well written waiting for next update jaldi update karo
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
Shilpa.......very well written n dnt censor.......n next time pm me........do u want me to help u with a name.......

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