Ek thi kahani-unke pyar ki Ch63 n epilogue(24aug)) - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31

He leans in to kiss nakku on her lips..nakku leans in too..Just when their lips are about to touch..Baaji walks in....


AT this point i jumped out of my chair and i started shouting "crap, crap CRAAAAPPPP"....!!!!! 😲😲😲


very cute update...!!!! i LOVED the last part splly...it was sooo *CUTIE PIE*...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
I loved it wonderfully penned specially the dialogues the shaan patti n Baji's yera kind a dialogues
waw waw waw
jaldi update karo
cant wait
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
very nice keep updating😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
wow nice update...so baji is a kebab mein haddi in ur ff too..lol..he shud gt an award for his bad timing...lol..
so naku is black in ur ff...wen will it b revealed to dutta? and does baji knw abt it or nt?
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
Hey
Just read your entire fanfiction!
Loved it!
Please add me to the PM list and update soon!
Thanks
Take Care =)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

wow nice update...so baji is a kebab mein haddi in ur ff too..lol..he shud gt an award for his bad timing...lol..

so naku is black in ur ff...wen will it b revealed to dutta? and does baji knw abt it or nt?



As i mentioned earlier..my ff is continuation of present show..as i would like it to progress in future..so till date whtevr has happened in real ltl holds true in my ff..in fact i'll have to bring in some of the earlier story line to make some progress in the story...So yes baaji knows abt fair nakku but he is keeping quiet till nakku or babi decide to tell him..

Thanks all for liking it so..much..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37

So I am back with new update already.Actually I have dreamt up so much of TaSha romance that I can go on and on about it for 100s of pages at ago..without stopping..😆

Therefore without any delay here comes next part..This is a cute one…😊

Ch2

Dutta and all PN wasis are gathered on table for breakfast.Nakku and others are serving them. Dutta keeps looking at nakk and every1 keeps looking at dutta's badle andaaz..😆When nakku goes to get something dutta turns back and tries to look normal(trust me no1 is fooled🤣) .AS looks at dutta and says,'Dutta,kal jo bhi hua,uske baad bhi tumhare chehre pe ye muskaan dekh ke hume bahut sukun mila. Aai jagdambe ye khushi hamesha kayam rakhe.' Dutta holds her hand and nods reassuringly.Nakku comes back with some parathas and starts serving AS and then Dutta.They stare at eachother 😳,nakku who was supposed to serve baaji next,forgets him and keeps on placing parathas in duttas plate.Baaji who was waiting for his turns keeps looking at them.😆

Baaji-Naaku(softly) kya pure parivaar ka ration sirf bhao ke liye hai…Hum kya hawa paani kha ke kaam pe jaye?😡😆

Nakku comes to her senses and sees with dismay that she has given dutta all the parathas meant for others too..without thinking she starts taking them back too. Everyone is very amused at nakku's clumsiness.Baaji says'nahi nahi ab rahne de .ab to bhao ki gusse wali ankhen dekh ke mujhe ye parathey pachengey bhi nai.'

AS-Baaji,chup kar.Nakku beta,koi baat nai.Tu ye rahne de,aa tu dutta ke pass bait nashta kar

Nakku-Nahi AS aap log khao na.😳

AS-Nakku,tune pehle bhi dutta ke kahne par humare sath khana nahi khaya tha.Tab humne kuch nahi kaha.Par ab tum jaldi sahi maino me humari bahu bananja rahi ho.aaj se dutta ki har jimedari bhi tumhari aur dutta ke patni ka haq bhi tumhara. Iski adat dalo.Baitho.Baaji.

Baaji gets the signal and shifts a seat..baaji dheerese (in a aside)'Pehle mere parathey bhao ko de diye.Ab meri jagah AS ne de di.Dekh Baaji.. zamana kitna badal gaya hai..Dost dost na raha'😭

Dutta hears it "BAAJI" 😡 Baaji-'arey bhao,kuch nai.Aap parathey khao na.ye lo dahi.MAST ekdum'🤣

Dutta tells nakku to sit with his eyes(remember the ganesh puja episode jisme pujari villain 😡ban gaya tha Humare TaSha ke bich me)Nakku sits beside dutta.Everyone starts eating.Dutta puts his hand under table and holds nakku's right hand😉.Nakku is surprised,she tries to pull away but dutta won't let go. He behaves as if nothings wrong and continues eating all the parathas😉😉😉. Nakku is helpless ,she gives him a pleading look,'plz evry1 will notice '.He smiles and ignores and keeps eating😈.So wht can she do,she starts eating with her left hand.AS notices this.'nakku,ye kya tum ultey hath se kyu kha rahi ho.Sedhey hath se teek se khao'.Dutta-'haan nakku seedhey hath se kha.ye kya tarika hai' Nakku gives him a angry 😡look and tries to free her hand in vain.

Sethji who is on the opposite side of the table ducks underneath sees whts up, comes up and says to AS very innocently,'AS,tai to seedhe hath se kha lengi,pehle bhao ko uska hath chodne to bolo'.🤣

Dutta leaves her hand suddenly and nakku gives a start and stands up nervously and knocks Baaji's plate of the table, who is sitting next to her and was about to eat a piece of omlette.😡

Nakku is agast😲. Baaji and all others stand up and look at the plate.Baaji folds his hand in front of dutta and nakku.'bas,aur nahi..Kasam se, nakku ab main kuch nai khaeyga.Tu aur bhao apna movie pura nipat lo.Tab talak mein tum log ke asspass bhi nai batkega..varna ye tum log ke lovestory ke chakkar mein apna aanshan(hungerstrike) ho jayega.' 😆😆😆

All the PN laugh at this,while Tasha blush pink. ☺️

AS-tu sahi bol raha hai baaji..hume jald se jald in dono ki shaadi karani chahiye.Warna ye dono najane kya kya tod denge.Tu aaj hi panditji ko bula la.Wo mohurat de to shaadi ki tayari shuru karengey.

Dutta-Panditji ko bulana kaisa Aai,ye baaji khud jaake unhe le ayega,Hai na Baaji? Dutta gives baaji nudge and a signal(khufiyapantiwala…the kind he gave in the mandir epis whn aana's men were trying to kidnap him..pl refer 29th jun epi).😉

Baaji-aa..haan AS bilkul..main pandit ko le ayega na.😉

Everyone leaves the table including nakku.Dutta keeps staring at her😍.Baaji tries to go away silently(dheere se kat raha tha bachcha..wo bhi samaj gaya ki aaj bhao use he peetega..bahut bola tha naa wo dutta ke samney)😕

Dutta cathes him by his collar and drags him to a corner.Dutta looks around to make sure no ones watching this and says.

Dutta- dekh baaji,AS ye pandit wandit ki baat bahut manti hai.

Baaji –haan bhao.

Dutta- to wo saala job hi muhrat dega,AS maan jayegi.hai na?

Baaji nodding(trying to understand the problem here)-Haan bhao.😕

Dutta- Aur ye pandit pehle hi ganesh puja mein nakku aur mere beech jhol kar chukka hai.😡

Baaji-jhol..par bhao..😕

Dutta-dekh baaji, main chahta hu,ki tu pandit ko purey izat se leke aye par usey ye bhi samjha de ki agar mahurat 10 din ke andar ka nahi hua too…😉

Baaji(getting the meaning and smiling)-to hum uski bagwaan se meeting ka mahurat fix kar dengey..samaj gaya bhao..😉

Baaji goes away singing'mere yaar ki shaadi hai..'

Dutta thinks 'tujhe pata chala to tu naraj hogi nakku.par ab kal raat ke baad main aur intezaar nahi kar sakta. Ab tu meri zindagi,meri lat(addiction) ban gai hai. '❤️

He thinks abt how nakku had tried to console him after he was so down.Then he thinks of all the times she has done the same..He smiles. Nakku working in the kitchen thinking abt dutta's mischief this morning and smiles.❤️😍

(Time for a song…Meri zindagi me aye ho au raise aye ho tum-film ARMAAN)

Both thinking of the other while going abt his-her work. 😍😳Nakku watering the garden, arranging dutta's room etc.Dutta in his office looking at files,working on computer,cleaning his gun.😍😍

Both are busy living in their new found lalaTaShaland….😍

(song ends with nakku sitting downstairs with AS making a garland for bappa while dutta comes out of his roomand stands at banister and looks down at her..Eyelock😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳)

Baaji comes with the pandit who looks very nervous and tense. All gather around him. Dutta comes and sits facing him.(So that he can intimidate him.)😆

AS-panditji,humare dutta aur nakku ke shaadi ka koi achcha mahurat nikal dijiye..hum jald inkey shaddi fir se vidhi purvak karaengy.

Pandit-'AS,waise to shaadi ke mahurat 3mahine baad ke sare shub hai.(he looks at baaji who warns him wid his eyes and then at dutta who sits up straight😆😆😆) par main kundli firse dekhta hun.'Pandit nervously fidgets wid the kundli.'AS,aajse 10 din baad bhi 1 bahut achcha mahurat hai' 🤣

AS-10 din mein shadi ki tayari kaisey hogi..3mahina teek hoga shayad.🤣

Dutta gets tensed and looks at baaji .Dutta passes a 'dost,plz bacha mujhe 'wala look.😲😲 Baaji gives a 'main hu naa,bhao,tension nakko'wala look in answer.🤣😎

Baaji-arey,AS. Chat mangni,pat byaah.Aap tension mat lo😎.Bhao ke shaadi ka poora zimedaari apna😎.Aap 10din baad wala date fix karo. Main sab sambhal lega. Waise bhi ye haal raha to main 3 mahine tak bina khaye piye jinda nahi rahega.🤣 Nakko baba,AS aap 10din baad wala date lock kar dalo. Ae pandit tera kaam ho gaya na ab uth na..ya tujhe uthane doli bheju. AS,10 din baad fix.Mubarak ho bhao😆😃.Chal be pandit tere ko chod ke aane ka hai.😆😆

Baaji drags the pandit away.🤣

Everyone is astonished but happy.

AS-babi,10 din baad nakku aur dutta ki shaadi tai rahi.tum tayri shuru kar do. Dutta,tu khush hai na?

Dutta-haan aai.he looks down shyly.😳☺️

AS-aur nakku? Nakku looks at AS n duttta and hides behind Babi shyly.😳☺️


So that it for now..

Next update..TaSha Shopping..TaSha first date😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update... what a cute scene at the table..lol dutta gtin so naughty... holding naku's hand under the table..haha love sethji for bringing it al out n poor baji yaar, hehe he's so funi
loved the pandit scene too esp wer baji convinces evry1 2 set the earlier date, his excuse was funi...
precap sounds so romantic... plz update soon n if possible cn the FR tke place b4 the wedding?
btw 2 updates in 1 day..what a treat i hpe u continue updating this much😳
Edited by Yuvika_15 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
Haillaaa Haillaaa Hailllaaaa
OMG!!! LOVE IT!!! Yaaay First Datee!!! Wedding Shopping...Weddiingg.. Soo cool!!
Yaaaay Thanks for the PM
Please continue sooon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
Just finished reading your FF. Awesome. Since the wedding date has been fixed are you going to do the face revelation prior to the wedding?

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