OS - Maaneet - After thoughts

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Posted: 14 years ago
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After he had spoken those thought provoking words, she had become self conscious and moved away. She didn't have the courage to look him in the eye now, not after what he had said. She knew what he was trying to do, but she was still holding onto something, something so strongly that she needed the time to figure out what was it that was holding her back.

She got up and started walking towards the window again. Not able to contain himself, he followed her. She was cursing herself in her mind – she was rueing about having lusty thoughts about the man who had a heart of gold. She knew he would never go this far before he got a verbal assurance from her. Oblivious of the fact that he was now standing right behind her, she was startled when he put his hand on her shoulder and slowly turned her to come face to face with him. She gently pinned her against the wall next to the window and started moving closer. He moved so close that their chests were against each others – his pressing hard on hers. He noticed the struggle she made to breathe heavily when her chest didn't have the room to heave. He backed off – but only a mere millimeter. For he was enjoying the rhythmic movements of her heart. He cupped her face and asked again 'Kya yeh nazdeekiyaan, tumhare liye jhoot se alag nahi? Jawab do Geet!' Not sure what to do and not able to control anymore, she jerked his hands off her face causing him to move back a little and bounced ahead to hug him. At first, he was startled at her gesture, but he was quick to realize that she was beginning to say something.

'Kuch jhoot nahi nahi – yeh nazdeekiyaan, yeh ehsaas, aapka pyaar, meri chahat – sab sach hai. Agar kuch jhoot hai, toh who hai natak – jo aaj tak hum karte aaye hain. Main aapke bigair nahi jee sakti, lekin mujhe darr lagta hai – aapko khone ka. Mujhe phir se akele hone ka darr lagta hai, aapse door rehne ka darr.'

She was now just about to shed tears when he broke the hug and kissed her forehead and her eyes. His happiness did not know any bounds, but his love for her overtook every other emotion he held at that moment. They walked back towards the fireplace – she hugged him from the side around his waist while his hands curled around her shoulders. It was a protective gesture from his end assuring her that he is always with her – holding her close to him even if the world conspired against them to tear them apart. He seated her on the huge couch that lay right across from the fireplace and made her head rest against the armrest. He went and laid behind her not seemingly making an attempt to touch her at all. She turned her head to look at him only to notice he was looking at her with love written all over his eyes. She acknowledged the look by resting the side of her hand on his chest. He slowly moved his hand to gather her face from below her ear to show her much he loved her and all he wanted to do was to be with her. She turned her face back to the fireplace while keeping her hand on his hand to indicate she understands the meaning of his gestures and the depth of his love.

Snow had now stopped, the wind was not howling anymore and the fire was not raging. The ambience had now taken a calming stillness, the weather conspiring them to stay closer. They neither felt cold, nor hot. The effect of heat had forsaken them – the one from the fire had no effect on them for their bodies were now numb to any external feel, and their own body heats had quietened for this moment was only filled with love – outdoing all other emotions that they felt only a few moments ago. They both lay there in the same position all night her back against his chest – not wanting to talk or move from the fear of disturbing the beauty of this new awareness between them. And so, none of them slept through the night.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Good job Dols! You're a really great writer, but you don't need me to tell you that because you already know 😆 😆 Loved it!

Edited by LOLAnisha - 14 years ago
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👏👏👏..Beautifully worded Dol... i loved Geet's diag... i wish she could soothe the demons raised by her in him in the epi too.. Loved ur take... Poignant and captured both their feelings sooooooo artlessly!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow Sohniya, this is amazing, seriously very nice..Good you have taken out, and it's simply beautiful...

Very less couple has charm, and you all writers makes them more special with your words...

Fab job sweetheart....





Muniza
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😲 tryin to breathe......
😲need air........

😲
😲need air.......
😲hyperventilating......
😲gasping for air.....
😲ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

🤢 dead



Edited by mysterygurl1427 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: LOLAnisha

Good job Dols! You're a really great writer, but you don't need me to tell you that because you already know 😆 😆 Loved it!



Thanks Nissy...I know you are saying that because you are my friend 😊 Love ya.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Revv--

👏👏👏..Beautifully worded Dol... i loved Geet's diag... i wish she could soothe the demons raised by her in him in the epi too.. Loved ur take... Poignant and captured both their feelings sooooooo artlessly!!!



1 thing I want to see is 'love all around them'. Overpowering all other emotions...I so badly want to see that happen :-)

Thanks for the encouragement buddy....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: muniza75

Wow Sohniya, this is amazing, seriously very nice..Good you have taken out, and it's simply beautiful...


Very less couple has charm, and you all writers makes them more special with your words...

Fab job sweetheart....





Muniza



I soooo agree...only Maaneet have the charm to pull such a thing off. They are majestic.....simply divine...

Thanks babes....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427

😲 tryin to breathe......
😲need air........

😲
😲need air.......
😲hyperventilating......
😲gasping for air.....

😲ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

🤢 dead





Kyun babes...Maan pinned you against the wall and made you unable to breathe kya? LOL

Come back...come back...and write more....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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u make me wanna fall in love ...
u make me wanna have a man like this in my life...
u make me wanna go thro these emotions for real...
u make me wanna believe these things happen for real.....

i am so moved ... if anything else happens i wouldnt be affected in the least ...
why do you do this all the time????
why do you strike the right chord... say the right things ... it becomes so much harder for me to think beyond what you wanna convey ...!!

awesome piece of writing...

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