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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: -honeydew-
u make me wanna fall in love ...
u make me wanna have a man like this in my life...
u make me wanna go thro these emotions for real...
u make me wanna believe these things happen for real.....

i am so moved ... if anything else happens i wouldnt be affected in the least ...
why do you do this all the time????
why do you strike the right chord... say the right things ... it becomes so much harder for me to think beyond what you wanna convey ...!!

awesome piece of writing...

I don't know what to say....I thought this was a piece of junk that I just wrote....now you have left me speechless...wait I need to go and read again...was it that good?

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

@ DD : i dont need to lie to u .. and i always have told you .. there is honesty in ur writing ... and thats what touches me ... the emotions were raw, the way i love them the most ...!!

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311578

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: -honeydew-
@ DD : i dont need to lie to u .. and i always have told you .. there is honesty in ur writing ... and thats what touches me ... the emotions were raw, the way i love them the most ...!!

DA, I read it again and I was right. The emotions I was feelings didn't come out as I wanted it to. But you got a glimpse of what I was trying to portray naa....yeah their love makes me wanna love someone...makes me wanna have someone close to me...and makes me wanna feel the same that they do....Maaneet magic hai meri jaan..aur main kya kahoon....

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Bravo!

'Kuch jhoot nahi nahi – yeh nazdeekiyaan, yeh ehsaas, aapka pyaar, meri chahat – sab sach hai. Agar kuch jhoot hai, toh who hai natak – jo aaj tak hum karte aaye hain. Main aapke bigair nahi jee sakti, lekin mujhe darr lagta hai – aapko khone ka. Mujhe phir se akele hone ka darr lagta hai, aapse door rehne ka darr.'

Best dialog I have read so far. I hope what they show (when they show it_ is atleast half as beautiful as this.

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