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Posted: 14 years ago
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Well again a dis oriented epi. The only saving grace was angry, frustrated, hot, passionate maan.
Ok so i decided to write my own script.
Maan pulls geet out of the place and Geet follows Maan, quietly thinking how he told in front of everyone that she was his. She was overwhelmed with emotions and her eyes were teary. Maan stopped and turned back. He was shocked to see tears in Geet eyes.
He asked," Kya hua Geet. Meina bahut zhor se kechke laya kya.I am sorry. Maine realise nahin kiya." He was carassing Geets hand which had his hand marks. he felt bad for behaving so rudely. Geet could feel his love so much, she couldn't hold her emotions anymore. She hugged Maan tightly. Maan was awed but hugged her back with the same intensity. geet was silently crying. Geet asked him,"aap muchse itna pyar kaise karte ho." Maan was moved. he realised Geet slowly, lifted her chin and with a smile in his face said," tumne muche paagal kar diya hein, auur is pagalpan see muche pyaar ho gaya hein." geet smiled through her tears.
She wiped her eyes and said," waise aapko itna scene create karne ke zaroorat nahi thi. aap achi tarah baath karke unko samcha sakthe they. unke bete ko unke samne uthna neecha nahin bolna tha."
maan was angry with geet's words," achaa. To tumhe mere baath acha nahin laga. meri galti thi, unhe stop nehin karna tha. Woh log itne speed mein they, shagun deete deete shaadi bhi kar dete. waise unka pura family tha, bunti tha, bubli bhi thi, aur market mein sare cheez mil jati. tho shaadi bhi asani se ho jati. Muche tho sirf congratulate karke wapas aana tha." Maan was fuming by now.
geet got irritated," aap kya bol rahe ho. mein bol rahi di khi aapko apna gussa kabu mein rakna chahiya aur aap muchko bol rahein ki mein bunty se shaadi kar loon." she stomps away and maan was too angry and when he realised that she walked away, he got upset. chote se baath mein muche itna gussa nahin karna tha. ab yeh ladki kahan chali gayi. wo bhi kuch kam nahin hein. Muchko bolti hein, aur kudh uska gussa naak pe chada hota hein.
Maan came out to look for Geet. It was snowing heavily by now. after walking for sometime he saw her sitting in abench, muttering something under her breadth. He knew she was scolding him. He was relieved to see her. He went near her, she looked at him and turned her face. Maan gave a tiny smile, offered his hand and said,"lets go inside Geet. Please" But geet was too angry and ignored him. maan tried to pull her and she pushed his hands. Maan lost all his patience and pulled her from the chair and hugged her. geet was very irritated and tried to leave and Maan dragged her towards him holding her waist. He hated handling Geet rudely but she was stubborn to core and sometimes only understood this language. Geet's closeness was driving Maan insane. He was looking at Geet's eyes deeply and Geet pulled away her eyes, maan felt interrupted and moved Geet's face towards him. Geet knew that if she looks at him then she will melt. she wanted to be angry. Kitna bolta hein dusht danav. she tried running running away. Maan twisted her hand pulled her close and asked her to stop being stubborn and come inside. She looked adamantly back and Maan just lifted Geet and started walking. geet was protesting fiercely and Maan looked at her with anger. Geet got scared seeing him and became quiet.
maan brought her inside a deserted house and placed her gently on the bed. Geet was shivering. Maan looked at her and his anger came down. He could see her shivering and He started removing his shirt to give it to her. Geet could not help looking at him. Maan gave the shirt to Geet and asked her to wear. geet refused and turned her face. maan said,"geet tum kudh pehnoge yaa mein pehnadoon". Geet looked terrified but did not move. Maan got angry he pulled geet's duppata and tried to push her sleeves down. geet got scared, she grabbed the shirt and said, men kudh change kar loongi" and ran. maan stopped her, he pulled out a window curtain and said," Isse neeche pehen lo. Geele kapde ke saath rahne se bimar ho jaogi." geet quietly took it and went behind the blinds to change. Maan looked at her longingly.
maan was trying to light the fire and all he could think was Geet sitting with her sleeves pulled down. He could not help turning around and see her through the blinds. Her dupatta was off and she was unzipping her kurta. she could feel Maan looking at her. she turned and met his eyes. she quickly pulled her dupatta back. Maan felt guilty. He turned and sat looking the other side. Geet saw him turned away and then changed her clothes.
Maan managed lighting the fire and Geet stepped out of the blinds. With nothing other than his white shirt and curtain drapped, and wet hair she looked so beautiful. His white shirt was touching all the intimate parts of her body. he could not stop staring at her bossom which was hid by nothing other than his shirt. Geet could feel the heat in his eyes and starting retreating behind the blinds, only to hit on Maan who was standing behind her. Geet turned around in reflex and her breast rubbed against Maan's chest. Maan was on fire and he touched Geet's face. geet was pulled by the passion in his eyes. she was about to touch him and then realised what she was doing and ran away. Maaan follwed her and stood behing her. he touched Geet's shoulder and kissed her neck. Geet tried to run and Maan pulled the collar of the shirt quickly and the first two buttons got opened. maan could see the upper part of her bossom and he was aroused. He hugged her tightly by waist and starting kissing her passionately in her neck and shoulder. Geet was melting and pulled herself away from him and ran. She knocked herself and landed on the bed. maan turned and looked at Geet. the sudden fall has shifted geet's clothes. her shirt had moved up showed her navel. the curtain she drapped had moved to her knees. Maan smiled naughtily. He lied down beside geet and put her arms around naked waist and teased her navel. geet was breating heavily.Maan turned her towards him and kissed her throat, neck and sank his head on her bossom. He knew that he has to pull himself away. But it was very very hard to do. Geet couldn't stop responding to his passion. she put her hand in his hair. Maan looked at geet and he kissed her eyes ,tip of her nose and her parted lips first softly and then passionately. His passion increased every second and he bit her lip lightly and heard her moan. his hand travelled from her waist into her shirt and was drawing lines on her naked back. Maan deepened his kiss and broke away only to breathe. Geet's eyes were closed. He smiled at her. he knew that geet was loving the moment. But he felt that he had to stop. he did not want to make him or her feel guilty later. he cupped her face and called her name. geet opened her eyes. he said with a smile and longing in his face," Geet hum jaldi shaadi kar lein."
geet had tears in her eyes. she smiled and hugged him tightly and wispered yes. maan kissed her hair and said," Geet aise kaske muche pakdo gi tho shaadi ke pehle hein hamara suhag raat ho jayegi." geet pulled away and looked away shyly . Maan smiled naughtily and toched her chin and kissed her lips gently and said, " daro math, Muche apna suhaag raat sirf tumhe patni banakar manana hein. Puree hak ke saath, bena koi guilt ke . " geet smiled and Maan said naughtily to her," haan hum main show us din karenge par trailers pehle kar sakthe hain. Geet opened her eyes wide and maan hugged her and said ab chup chap so jao. nahin tho mein kudh ko kabu nahin kar paunga. Maan and Geet slept hugging each other.
So guys give your comments
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautiful.loved it.It was so passionate
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oye hoye.kya dialogs....kya passion.....kya emotion.......ur imagination is fabulous!!!! love it.......!muuuahhh/............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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kash aisa kuch show mein bhi hota...instead of the silly argument in the beginning and geet accusing maan of the whole jhooti magni thing😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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haiiiiiiiiilaaaaaaaaaa...... hot hot hot <fanning myself> help someone i'm hyperventilating!!!!!!!!!! kya hot scene that yaar but "haan hum main show us din karenge par trailers pehle kar sakthe hain." lmao.... but aggar trailer se humara yeh haal hua hai to main show par hum to hospital hi pahounch jayenge!!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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can u pls b a part of geet cvs,its seems u can write the whole scenario more clearly without confusin the people.

👏👏 beautifully written and depicted the passion and love of geet and maan so aptly.this is hw the epi should have been.but wht we were shown was such a jigjaw puzzle which i can fanthom even now.
thats why i am crazy abt geet forum as we have some really talented writers in here who make it sure maneet lovers r not left in lurch like the tv cvs does
thnxs so much for writn it so nicelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
ur just fab .pls keep writin, u have a talent
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i have no words for this!! it was so passionate!! i wished this happend but it didnt!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hailaaaaaaa *hides behind pillow* Im blushin loool Wah bhai wah!!! Amazing!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow great penning of thoughts............... 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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My fav line, Maan and Geet slept hugging each other.So sweet

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