New FF - HDDCS last part update page 73 - Page 2

oh really nice
very nice first update
finding it quite interesting !
waiting for next update :p

Hey thanx for starting the new FF and PM ...really very nice start ..pls update soon ... 🤗 👏 👍🏼

nice start...waiting for the next part

Hey..nice start ur FF sounds very interesting update soon

sounds intresting...keep going 😉

Part 2^nd

(Nurs chali jaati hai or Ravi soch me par jaata hai. kuch der baad Ravi ye sab bhool jaata hai or apne hotel ki or chala jaata hai. hotel pahuchne per Ravi ka phon ring hota hai.)

Ravi ' hello mom.

Swara ' hello Ravi beta. Thik se pahuch gaye na.

Ravi ' haan mom, main bilkul thik se pahuch gaya hoo.

Swara ' thik hai. Meeting kab hai?

Ravi ' mom meeting kal hai or aap fikar mat kijiye aapne jaisa kaha hai waisa hi hoga meeting khatam hone ke baad main aapke dost ke ghar hi jaaunga. Per ek problem hai mom na maine unhe dekha hai na unhone mujhe to wo mujhe kaise pehchanenge?

Swara ' uski fikar mat karo. Maine un logo ko phone kar diya hai wo tumhe hotel se pick kar lenge. Bus tum unhe phone kar dena.

Ravi ' ok mom'' waise Aadi kaisa hai.

Swara ' thik hai or Mili ke saath film dekhne gaya hai.

Ravi ' mom aap log kab tak aayenge.

Swara ' main to agle hafte hi aa jaungi or rahi baat Aadi ki to wo mere aane ke 3- 4 din baad aayega.

Ravi ' thik hai main intzar karoonga, abhi main phone rakhta hoo.

Scene Shifted:-

(ek khoobsurat ladki ek kamre me bed per baithi hai. Usne red lehnga chunri pehan rakhi hai. Uska mood kuch khrab hai. Tabhi darwaze per koi aata hai. Uske haanth me phoolo ka guldasta hai. Wo ander aata hai. He is our cute and handsom DSP.)

Dutta ' Nakku...

(Nakku apna chehra dusri or kar leti hai., Dutta phir se uske paas jakar uska naam pukarta hai or uske sammne phool rakhta hai.)

Nakku ' ye kis liye?

Dutta ' apni pyaari wife ke liye.

Nakku ' ye phool dekar aap mujhe behla nahi sakte. Jaiye mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karni.

Dutta ' sachmuch''. Per kyun?

Nakku ' kyun? Khan the ab tak?

Dutta ' wo kuch zaroori kaam tha isliye''..

Nakku ' zaroori kaam'' yahan main bhoolkh se mari jaa rahi hoo or aapko aapka zaroori kaam yaad aa gaya. Aapko pata hai na ki aaj mera pehla karwachauth ka wart hai. Or aaj ke din aapko ghar per rehna chahiye.

Dutta 'per Nakku'' main to chand nikalne se pehle aa gaya na.

Nakku ' mujhe us chand se jyada mere chand ka intzar tha.

Dutta ' accha ''. To main aa gaya na.

Nakku ' ab kya fayda. Or ye phool ye tarika bahut purana hio gaya. Is baar mujhko manane ke liye aapko kuch alag karna prega.

Dutta ' to kya kroo main jisase tum maan jaao.

Nakku ' ab ye bhi main hi batau''.. kudh soch lijiye.

(itna kehkar Nakku niche hall me chali jaati hai or Dutta sochta reh jaata hai. Thodi der baad Dutta bhi niche aata haui. Hall me sab karwachauth ki parti me buzy hai. Dutta Nakku ke paas chupke se shrbat ka glaas lekar jaata hai.)

Dutta ' Nakku ye lo chupke se pilo or maan jaao.

Nakku ' ye''.. aap pagal ho gaye hai kya? Aap mera warat turwana chahte hai. Kuch or kijiye mujhe manane ke liye.

Dutta ' lo maanane ke bajay or naraz ho gayee'.. ab kya karoo.

(tabhi Baji aat hai)

Baji ' kya hua Bhau?

Dutta ' wo Nakku hai na''.. naraz hai mujhse or mujhe use manana hai per usne kha hai ki mujhe kuch alag krna hoga.

Baji ' to isme kya problem hai wo filmi hero hote hai na jab heroin naraz hoti hai to wo usko manane ke liye gaana gaate hai aap bhi ga lo.

Dutta ' gana or main''.. nahi. Mujhse nahi hoga.

Baji ' to thik hai bhau Nakku ko bhi mnane ki baat bhool jaao.

(itna kehkar Baji chla jaata hai. Nakku sidhiyo seuper jaa rahi hoti hai jab use gaana sunai deta hai. Wo plat kar dekhti hai. Dutta gaana ga raha hai.)

Sajde kiye hai lakho lakho duaye maangi

Paaya hai maine phir tujhe

Chaht ki maine teri haque me hawaye maangi

Paaya hai maine phir tujhe'..

(Dutta gaane ke beech beech me Nakku ko manane ki kosis krta hai. Gaane ke end me Nakku ke chehre per smile hoti hai. Tabhi chand niklne ka shor hone lagta hai. Sab apne apne husband ke saath chat per karwachath ki puja ke liye jaate hai. Puja ke baad Dutta Nakku ka haanth pakadkar use sabse bacha kar niche le aata hai.)

Nakku ' saab ye kya kar rahe hai. Sab aurte mera baki ki rasmo ke liye imtzar kar rahi hai.

Dutta ' baad me chali jaana per pehle ye dekh main tere liye kya laya hoo. (Dutta apni kurte ke pocket se ek dabba nikal kar deta hai. Nakku use kholti hai. Uske ander ek khoobsurat sa tika hai. Nkku bahut khush hoti hai)

Dutta ' pasand aaya?

Nakku ' bahut'' ye bahut sunder hai.

Dutta ' pehan ke dikha. (Nakku tika pehan leti hai.)

Dutta ' Nakku main chahta hoo ki tu her saal karwachauth per ye tika pehne. Chahe main tere paas rahoo ya na rahoo. Wada kar mujhse'.

(tabhi AS ki aawaz aati hai'' Nakku)

Nakku ' accha saab wada ab jaane do na AS bula rahi hai.

(Dutta Nakku ko nahi chorta or awaz phir se aati hai Nakku''''..)

(achanak Nakku ke haanth se tika choot jaata hai or wo pichli yaado se bahar aa jaati hai.)

AS ' Nakku beta kab se aawaz laga rahe hai hum kha khoyee thi'..

Nakku ' ji AS kuch nahi '' aaj karwachauth hai na or main ab tak taiyaar bhi nahi huyee. Aap thoda sa intzar kijiye main abhi tiyaar hokar aati hoo.

AS ' tune bhi karwachauth ka warat rakha hai?

Nakku ' haan AS''.. ye to mera haque hai na. (Nakku Dutta ka diya tika pehan rahi hai or As niche chali jaati hai. Unki aankho me aansu hai.)

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oh what an update...i think dutta is dead in ur story n naku stil keepin KC vrath? hw sweet...

Awesum updatez yaar..loved dem all...!!!👏👏oh no ..i hav a feeling dutta iz dead in ur FF....!! but am so excited for ur next update....!!! keep rocking...!!!

Hey thanx for the update and PM 🤗 I guess dutta is dead in ur FF ..but i really wanna know what happens nxt ...pls jaldi update karna ...👍🏼👏🤗