ott maaneet madness 5TH update

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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyy guyz this is my 5th update and dont worry not long before geet is gonna start again !! yay

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1461788 - part 1
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1461833 - part 2
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1462241 - part 3
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1462391 - part 4

when maan has finally tidied his mind of all thoughts of geet and how utterly beautiful she looked and how he just wanted to take her in his arms and... he said "hain toh geet woh chopra ki file kaha hai? sign karna hai" "yeh leejiye sir" geet said smiling. the smile left maaan dazzled for a few moments until he came back to life and said "um thank you"

after the deal had been signed, maan called them over to the dinner table. while everybody was having dinner maan couldnt help but keep glancing at geet over the dinner table. how could someone look so beautiful and pure, he felt as if the whole world revolved around her. He just wanted to keep looking at her but everytime she realised that he was staring at her he looked away.

"maan, maan can you pass the tissue please" said pari trying to get maans attention. geet looked at her in irritation the way she said his name. He was hers. Only she had the right to say his name. he passed her the tissue and in the small millisecond that their hands touched geet felt a strong will to kick pari under the table but she stopped her self. no geet hes just passing her the tissue and shes not letting go of his hand. let go off his hand she willed. it felt like ages before their hands finally parted but it was really only a few seconds.

When the dinner was over and the chopras were leaving. mr chopra said "lovely dinner mr khranna and we look forward to working with you. he shook maans hand and then went over to geet and shook her hand aswell. maan felt daggers in his stomach. urgh hes 40 years old why cant he get a woman his own age he felt so much anger towards mr chopra in that second he was about to cancel the deal but then stopped himself. maan she doesnt belong to you. but even he know he wished she did.

thanks guys for your lovely comments and please do keep posting unfortunately i think this might be my last update cos geet is back on. if you lot still want me to continue please do say in the comments section
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Posted: 15 years ago
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updates can be more than one....u can continue along with geet

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