FF ...Datta punch - pt 11 - pg 27

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DATTA PUNCH - PART 1


Datta kill anna man one by one without any noise. Anna found that datta came to his house.

Anna is holding ghungat-nakku in gun point and shouting at top of his voice insisting datta to come out without any weapon as he said before.

Datta come out from the hiding place and drop his gun down. Datta is surrounded my anna men with the gun pointing toward datta. Datta ask anna to leave nakku as he surrender without any weapon.

Anna release nakku. Datta ask nakku to get out of this place. But nakku is not moving saying that she will not go without him. Datta order her to move from this place. She keep on saying no. Subu ask nakku get out for her safty, nakku say no subu hold nakku hand pull out from that place. Datta keep on seeing nakku moving out.

Anna snaps him out. Anna is saying before you die you have to know the truth that what make me to come back. A phone call from you house from your own people. That they have arranged a marriage for you with the girl. All she has to do is to make you fall for her and break your heart. She did her job fantastically and try to run away twice before the marriage.

She was stopped by your beloved wife nakku. So the stranger in you house has no other choice than trap nakku so he send two people to kanu pooja to introduce themselves that they are called by nakku for a proof. The stranger ask supriya to write a letter to you not only break your heart but also not to think about love in your life any more and put blame over nakku so you will finish nakku because nakku is the one who change your heart that she should try once more. As per plan when nakku and supriya returning from paurler supriya stop the car told nakku she is feeling thirsty first nakku protests but then give up. Nakku goes down to bring naarial pani. Ravi who followed them by another car brings two dead bodies put in the car. Nakku go to coconut stall, recognise the man and got little shocked. Mean while ravi press the button on remot control and made the blast. Nakku shouts supriya name and faint down. They ran away.

Datta become very sad. Ann look at datta becoming sad 'O'Wait the story is not over datta. Few more is waiting for you keep your heart strong. After you get completely broken the stranger ask me to finish your kingdom. And I am here to completely finish you.

After his speech anna ask his men to move out and ask to take the weapon of datta as he wants to be alone with datta. Anna put gun in his forehead of datta and laughs at datta saying that you are fooled by your own people. What say datta and you R going to die. Before that I will beat you down. Anna started punching datta.

Datta did not fight back until anna say that after I finish you I will kill your wife and send you both to the honeymoon. The word nakku bring back the conscious of datta to save nakku he has fought back. Datta lands the first punch on him. Anna did not expert this punch goes several feet try to stand up dutta punch after punch anna dosen't stand a chance and fall down. Datta hold the neck of anna put him in the gun point ask him to walk out.

Anna men were standing out side got shocked. Datta ask all the men to put the gun down and not to follow. Nakku ran and stand beside datta. They walked toward jeep.

Subu came back plea datta to leave anna. Datta did not say any thing make anna to sit in the jeep ask nakku to get in. and order his men to not to follow other wise he will kill anna. subu ask anna men to follow datta order to keep anna alive.

Datta ask anna to drive a jeep other wise he will die. After they reach the middle of the forest datta throw anna out.

And started driving datta looking at ghungat- nakku is she is ok. Shivered nakku said I am fine. Datta keep on looking at nakku and drive.

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I finished it if you like it plz click like button.

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awesome yaar.....update soon....i want to know if Dutta got to see real Naku.......
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sooooo cooooolll
plz continue and update fast :P
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very well written.So naku is still fair now and datta is taking her back to PN.Hope she gets some time to apply the black color before anyone sees her...
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DATTA PUNCH - PART 2


While driving datta started thinking what anna said how is was fool by his own people. Who, Why, what I did to them.

He stopped the car near the river side. In this condition he can't drive he needs a peace of mind. Datta said nakku stay in the car I will come back in a few minutes. He get down from the car and slowly walk toward the side of the river.

He started thinking what anna told to him.

He thinks about supryia her awkward behaviour during the engagement and sudden change in her behaviour how she try to seduce and how he fall for it and her letter.

How she blamed about him how she link nakku in that letter. Why did I concern the culprit letter as proof against nakku why why why.

He thinks about how nakku get blamed by the letter how kala taunt her, bajji ask datta to give chance for nakku to speak.

And nakku try to hold my hand for support said "you know sab I did not do that". And her confess love in gun point.

How he drags her married her taunts her in front of every one and drags her to the room. Keep on taunting her to say how she planed. And holds her neck and threatens her. How he asks her kill the man and taunts her and makes her my BG and asks her to shoot me.

Nakku tries to first aid me and her confession of love.

Nakku is waiting for me when I return from the crash.

Nakku saves me in the mandir. And confess her love once again.

Nakku returns the MS.

Nakku refuses to leave alone in the car. And her confession.

Nakku refuses to eat alone.

His dream

Nakku, Nakku, Nakku''''''''''''..

ALL the incident came into datta mind. Because of me nakku was trapped because she tries to lighten my heart, convince me to forget the past, move on, and give a chance love to fill my life with love only. Because of nakku my life was changed. She was always being there for me. How I become blind.

Datta hold head and sit down OMG what I have done to her, how I going to regret all my fault. I can't forgive myself.

Why she never get angry at me. All she did for love. Am I worthy for her love?

OMG what I am going to do

In the car nakku is thinking OMG what I am going to do what will happen if he find out she is praying to baba to help her.

She looks out side and sees datta sitting near the river.

All she wants to reveal her face.

All of sudden a car come and halt back of datta jeep.

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This is the first time I am write the story, I am not that much good in English. Plz forgive my blab la bla

When datta punch moory- it was too good more than excellent when ever I think about how moory get punched my felt chill in my heart that why I kept name datta punch.😉

Plz hit the button if you like it.

Edited by SASHA_10 - 15 years ago
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very well written waiting for next part
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u r writing it frst timebut still its very nice do continue nd yea like ur topic 😆
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GR8 update. Plz update the next part soon
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awesome ..... next part asap

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