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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: swati2008

awesome dear.......loved it.........update soon.......



Thank you 😊


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Posted: 15 years ago
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well u are right its ur first time
cuz ur "dutta punch is" really fresh .
love it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
sasha waiting for your update update karo 😆 you are writing very well
Edited by spandana11 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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DATTA PUNCH - PART 3


She looks out side and sees datta sitting near the river.

All she wants to reveal her face.

All of sudden a car come and halt back of datta jeep.

Datta worried rush back to the jeep. Bajji get down from the car go near datta look so worried asked what happen. Datta sadly smile at bajji.

Datta go near the jeep and open the door asks nakku to get down from the jeep. Nakku got scared and did not make a move. He looked at nakku nothing is there to worried I am here.

Bajji come near and say nakku it going be a long drive back to home car is quite comfortable than jeep.


Nakku get down from the jeep and walk toward the car. Datta watch nakku walking toward.


Bajji ask to datta is she ok. Why she cover her face with ghungat. Datta keep on looking at nakku. bajji said is she hurt. Datta came to realise turn and see bajji.


Nakku open the car door. Datta said nakku wait. Nakku become so scared.


Datta walk toward nakku. bajji follow him.


Bajji cell started ringing. Bajji said it anna. Datta pick the cell before datta start speaks anna said Softly he says what to say yar I have fallen in love with nakusha. Then he arrogantly says that I will get her at any cost. He cut the phone.


Datta angrly sout ot his top of his that "I will kill you anna.


He look back at nakku so woridely


Datt hold nakku shoulder, and ask did anna hurt you.


Nakku started crying and try to run away from datta.


Datta hold her tight. Look so worried and sad at nakku.


Speak out nakku what happen, Speak out nakku he started shaking her shoulder.


I am cursed sab. Because of me


I have been running for very long time.


Datta leave her shoulder and take his hand near to ghungat.


She moved back and ran away from that place. Datta followed her hold her from the back.


It is ok nakku it is ok.


She turns back and hugged him tightly.


And say I am sorry sab.


I was running for very long time and fallen into the edge of the death you gave me hand sab.


I want say share my pain to sab but I don't want to become burden to you sab.


Because of me I don't want you to get into trouble. But I put you in sab. I am sorry sab. I am sorry.


What ever it is i don, care nakku, I will not let you down nakku I will not.


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Sorry yar I also behave like CV dragging. What to do yar. It is face revelation right I don't want write any thing wrong.

Edited by SASHA_10 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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rsrvd
editd: superb awsum zbrdst keep updating lovely update 😳
Edited by dusk - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very well written great part poor naku and you also doing like cv's jaldi update karo 😆 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very well written dearr..
updatee soon waiting 4 the next part !!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very nice and very interesting :)
thumbs up 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19
Nice fan fic...loving it..haha anna is such a creepy man...he's in love with naku? haha what a joke...he wil neva gt her...she belongs 2 dutta
plz continue soon... n dnt drag the revelation too much we already havin tht in the show...plz dnt do it in ur fan fic
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awww that last bit was so cute sasha 😍

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