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harshadeewani

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

wow.. it was awesum..

thanx for the pm

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Sanjana

@harshiti8

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

nice ff..i just read all of it today..plz add me in ur pm list

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kmh2rockzz

@kmh2rockzz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

hey amzing parts
just 2 gud & superb😊😊😊

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haya

@laviza97

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

CHAPTER

TITLE:HATE LUV STORIES

thaani table pr plates set kr rhe hoti hai..

mayank peeche se ata hai n sees k thaani thori tensed hai

mayank:kya hua?koi pareshani hai?

thaani:(turns)nahi...aisa kuch nhai hai..tum betho mai ate ho:-(

mayank:thaani ka hath pakrta hai..

thaani(turns):kya hua?

mayank:prem ki baat se pareshan ho...dekho thaani..hum kisi ki lyf mai uska sat hdey skta hai.usko himmat dey skte hai.usko pyaar dey skte hai.pr hum kisi ki lyf own nahi kr skte........

thaani:pr woh mera best frnd hai

mayank:best frnd hai.usk aur tumhre darmiyan dosti hai..aur jese tumhe mere zaroorat pari sab k hote hue bhi..pr woh..woh bilkul akela hai aur usko bhi pyaar chaye....aur usne toh mere bare mai kuch jane ki koshish nahi ki....toh tum ku uski lyf mai arhe ho.....let him live his lyf......

thaani:tum nahi smjho gai......tum prem ko jante he kaha ho.aur mai usko kuch galat nahi krte dekh skte

mayank:theek hai..jo krna hai kro......😡phr mat rona k prem ko tumhra ehsaas n all nahi rha......woh tumhe chor k agey barh rha hai..let him 😡😡

thaani leaves

mayank:thaani..thaani.mere baat toh suno.thaani

mayank:yeh larki kuch nahi smjhey ge

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mayank goes to thaani..thaani bed pr bethi ro rhe hoti hai

mayank:thaani k ansoo saaf krta hai

thaani:mayank plz..mjhe akel chor do(mayank ka hath hata dete hai)

mayank:dekho thaani......tum mjh se naraaz ho ya prem se

thaani:mai kese se naraaz nahi ho..plz jao.n window k paas khari ho jate hai

mayank:mjhe pta hai k larkia chahe ksii se bhi naraaaz ho pr un kfav kaam se nahi..

thaani:fav kaam?

mayank:shopping....chley?

thaani:mera mood nah ihai.plz jao.mjhe akele rhne do..(she shouts)tum mere aur prem k darmyaan kya hai aur kya tha jane ka tumhe koi haq nahi hai.aur na he mere aur us k darmyaan ane ka.😡😡

mayank:theek hai..........mat jao................pr ek akhri baat..mai na tumhre aur prem k darmyaan tha aur na ho...pr shayad prem aur uski dosti zaroor humare rishte k darmyaan arhe hai..aur use rishte k darmyaan koi ata hai jab woh rishta do alag alag raho pr hota hai..........aur shayad humari rahain bhi alag ho rhe hai ya shayad kabhi ek hue he nahi(he had tears in his eyes)...................

mayank leaves

thaani:mayank.mayank..........(mayank k sare word us k dimaag mai ate hai)

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prem coffe ley kr sitting room mai ata hai

prem:herez ur coffee

heer:thnx

heer:mai dad ko phn kr dya hai..woh bhi zaroori meeting k liye aaj shaam ko he dubai chley gai.mene unhe bta dya k barish ki waja se mai yaha ruk rhe ho

prem:tumhe kuch au chaye toh bta dena

heer:yeah sure..bta do ge

heer:tumhre mom dad kaha hote hai?

prem:mom dad..

heer:kya hua?

prem:pta nahi woh abhi the bhi

heer:matlab?

prem:matlab yeh k mom ko toh kabhi dekha he nahi..aur woh zinda hai ya mar gye..kabhi dad ne taya he nahi aur na he kabhi pta chal ska

heer:aur tumhre dad?

prem:dad.............un ki 8 yrs pehle ek car accident mai

heer:aww..so sad.aur tumhre behn bha nahi hai?

prem:nahi..mai akela beta tha.......tum btao tumhre behn bhai?

heer:mai bhi akele beti ho.........usko kya kehte hai..sum eklo beti..

prem:ekloti beti..

heer:yeah

woh dono coffe petai hai..heer k face pr coffe lag jate hai..prem usko ishar akr k btata hai.

prem:cofee

heer:han..bht ache hai

prem:tumhre face pr

heer:kaha ..woh apne face pr hath pehrti hai pr coffe saaf nahi hoti

prem:one sec

woh tisssue leta hai aur heer k face pr lage coffe saaf krta hai..heer strts feeling sumthin

aur then they th have eye lock session

n phr dono cples pr song ata hai

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NOTE:

I M MAKING A VM ON THEIR SONG SEQUENCE....JESE HE MERE VM BNTE HAI..I WILL UPLOAD IT N WUD UPDATE AFTER IT

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TILL THEN........

KEEP READING

HATE LOVE STORIES

BYE

HAYA(LAVIZA 97)

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AN RAMDAN MUBARAK TO EVERY1..........MAY GOD BLESS US!!

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haya

@laviza97

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

sorry..mere vm nhe ban skte.................so bina vm k he i m updating my story:-(

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haya

@laviza97

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

n i m sure k aap sab shock hojao gai mere upcumin twist k baad.........keep reading..............

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haajoo

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

gr8 part

loved itttt

but haya kya tum ek mehrbani kar sakti ho😆😆😆😆😆😆

by putting in the title the pg no of the new updateeeee😆😆 nd when u pm

link bhi bhej he dia karoooo

kuzz

meray khayal se mujhay link ni milaaa

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haya

@laviza97

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Posted: 15 years ago

#68

@haju.ohk.......woh kal bht late hogya tha toh mjhe bht neend arhe the.......toh shayad i 4got to pm u the link........

n @harshitti-16..thnx 4 liking it.

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haya

@laviza97

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Posted: 15 years ago

#69

CHAPTER

TITLE:HATE LUV STORIES

Mayank apne sitting room mai khara dewaar pr lage ek pic se kehta hai

mayank:aaj pta nahi ku mjhe aisa laga k yeh rishta thaani k dil se nahi balke uski majboori se jora hai...........is rishte ko 3 saal hogye..magar ab bhi yeh rishta sirf naam ka he rh hai........thaani pr apni majboor thoop kr hum ne bilkul acha nahi kia.........

mayank:tum kehte the na.k har rishta jo insaan bnata hai woh humesha dil ka hota hai aur dil jo chahe woh kr skta hai..toh mere dil ka rishta bhi tum se hai aur chahat bhi.toh tum mere paas ku nahi ho..ku chali gye mjhe chor kr..apne rishto se moun mor kr😭😭(he weeps)

and woh pic hoti hai

NAME:MRS.NUPUR MAYANK SHARMA

AGE:27

died on 19-05-2007

sister of thaani.died in a car accident....

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thaani in her room sitting on a sofa ...nupur ki pic apne hath mai pakri hoti hai n says

thaani:di......tum ku chali gye?mai apka har rishta nibhane ki koshish kr rhe ho di..pr mjh e nahi hota mjh se yeh rishta nahi nibhaya jata..........apki kehte the na har rishte mai dimaag se nahi dil se kaam lena chaye......lekan is rishte ko mene apne dil se caha hai ..pr yeh rishta sirf apk aur mayank k leye bna hai is rishte mai na tumhre jaga koi ley skta hai na he mayank ki.............

aur woh nupur ki pic apne galay se lgate hai......n strts crying

thaani:ku di ..mjhe chor kr mayank ko chor kr ku chli gye..ku😭😭

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heer n prem ..prem k sitting mai bethe hote hai .achanak heer ki nazar uski book shelf pr prte hai

heer:prem .tum itne sare books parhte ho

prem:han.mjhe books parhna bht psana hai hai.....

heer:so kool.......mjhe books parhna bilkul pasand nhe......................uff ..koi itna tym lga kr ek book ko parhe n phr finish..na koi faida na nuqsaan toh pta nah ilog kese parh lete hai

prem:tum ek book parh k toh dekho ..i m sure k tum addict ho jao ge novels k

heer:mai love stories parhte ho na..........

prem:love stories

heer:han..i love luv stories

prem:mjhe laga tha tumhe is love n all mai zzyada interest nahi hoga

heer:nahi.i luv love stories.so romantic..so kool..........so beautiful...............

prem:kool

heer:haina

prem:but i hate love stories..ku k yeh sirf bukz mai he rhte hai......yeh sirf kitabi baatein hai.........

heer:noo..tumhe kya pata.tumen kabhi koi love story parhe he nahi na he dekhe.............pta hai ek luv story mai sab se acha point kab ata hai..

prem:kab

heer:jab larka aur larki alag hote hai........woh tym jis mai woh ek dosre ko miss krte hai n woh sab love mai bht imp hai..judaai......dooryia............soooooooo cuteee

prem:lekan yeh judaai sehne walo ko he pta hota hai k woh kitna cute prt hai unki luv stry ka😭(he becums lil sad)

heer:khair choro in luv stries ko........aur mjhe btao mera room kaha hai.i m feeling soo so sleepyyy

prem:han chlo

they bth leaves aur prem heer ko uska room dikhata hai

prem:herez ur room.........

heer:thnx,gud nyt...

prem:gud nyt..bye

heer:bye

prem leaves n heer enters her room...........

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thaani stairs prk hari hoti hai n she sees mayank crying n talking to nupur's pic

thaani comes down aur mayank k kandhe pr hath rkhte hai

thaani:i m sorry mayank

mayank turns

mayank:arre.tum sorry ku keh rhe ho........sorry toh mjhe kehna chaye

thaani:nahi mayank............mayank mjhe tum se kuch kehna tha

mayank:kaho na

thaani:mayank..mai jante ho k na tum kabhi di ko bhula pao gay ................na he mai....aur yeh rishta bhi sirf di ka he hai...........magar mai chate ho k yeh di ki akhri icha the toh mai is rishte ko ek aur moka do..mai humare is rishte ko ek aur moka dena chate ho

mayank:thaani...tumhre di ki language mai...by god tum bilkul kisi hindis serial ki tulsi lag hre ho

thaani:laughs..nahi mayank..mai seriously keh rhe ho...............

mayank:dekho thaani....hum dono ne nupur ki akhri icha k liye apni zindagi k 3 saal dey diye...........pr ab mai kuch chata ho.aur jese tum ne apni di ki icha k liye eyh rishta bnaya wese he mai chat ho k tum mere icha k liye apne zindagi k liye yeh rishta tor do

thaani shock hojate hai n mayank ko dekhte hai

thaani:mayank..yeh tum kya keh rhe ho..rishta toor

mayank:han thaani..yeh rishta toor do....ku k yeh rishta sirf nupur k liye hai aur nupur kabhi wapis nahi ayenge...............toh mai nupur k liye apni pori zindagi bhi dey do toh koi gam nahi..pr tum apni pori zindagi dey do yeh galat hai

thaani:mayank tum kese baatein kr rhe ho

mayank:han thaani.........mene aur nupur ne apne armaan pore kiye the ..humne us se shaadi ki jis se hum chate the..har rishta nibha kr gye hai nupur.............aur ab tum apne rishte bnao aur unhe nibhao............

thaani:pr mayank

mayank:tumhe tumhre uss he nupur di ki kasam.......aur apna hath thaani ki taraf barhate hai

mayannk:mjhe vachan do k tum apni zindagi bina kese majboori k apne liye jiyo ge apni rah khud chno ge apne rishte khud bano ge kisi aur k rishto ko nibhaney k liye tum nhe aye ho..apne rishte nibhao ge........vachan do thaani..apni di k samne mjhe vachan do k tum yeh sab kro ge

thaani:woh apna hath mayank k hath pr rakhte hai

mayank:smiles

thaani:pr simran ka kya hoga phr?

Name:Simran Sharma

d/o Mr n Mrs.Mayank Sharma

Age:3 yrs

D.O.B:09-05-2007

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Thaani:woh kese rhey ge?

mayank:bhagvan yehe chate the k uski maa usk paas na ho.isiliye pehle nupur chle gye pr ab tum apni zindagi simran k liye mat kharaab kro..jao aur apni zindagi jiyo..apne liye .........

thaani:(had tears in her eyes):tum bilkul di jese ho.mjhe tumhre hote hue kabhi di ki kami mehsooos he nahi hue......

mayank:toh ab tumhre di keh rhe hai...By GOD tumhra sapno ka raj kumar safed ghora ley kr tumhra intezaar kr rha hai aur tum yaha rone may tym waste kr rhe ho ..meena kumari ka 21 century ka role mila hai kya..........

they bth laughs

thaani:sach mai di is duniya ki sab se lucky larki the.jis tum jesa raj kumar mila......mere sweet se jija jee

mayank:bas saali sahiba .......aise he hansti raha kro bilkul 2 yrs ki baby lagte ho........

thaani laughs....

mayanl:chlo ab jao aur so jao.......

thaani:aur tum

mayank:mai ata ho.......

thaani:theek hai.bye..gudnyt

mayank:gudnyt

thaani upr apne room mai chli jate hai

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mayank sees nupur's pic