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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: laviza97

@liana di.like all tv serial mere ff mai bhi blooper agye......

😆 but u can change it by editing 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@laian.change kr diya:).thnx 4 telling
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Posted: 15 years ago
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niceee yaa hayaaa love ittttt👏👏⭐️⭐️ my star⭐️
keep it upppp
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey i love reading ur ff....
can u pls add me too n ur pm list?????
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks for writing this FF its like a dream of mine to see premeer mayur&sajan in 1 screen they didnt share 1 screen but a FF😆njoying it but missing nupur &samrat alot
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey very nyc part
juss 2 gud & awesme
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Posted: 15 years ago
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grd update yaaaar loved it....
urbi!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@liana di.remember yeh mere ff hai is mai sab hoskta hai.............
@moon-mine..yeah sure mai un sab ko pm krte ho jo mere ff ko like krte hai n tumne toh cmnt bhi kya hai.........thnx 4 likin it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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CHAPTER

TITLE:HATE LUV STORIES
prem apni meeting mai hota hai k heer usk office ajate hai
heer:yeh prem juneja abhi kaha hogey?
receptionist:mam..sir toh abhi meeting mai hai.
heer:pr abhi toh 12.30 ho rhe hai..prem ne toh kaha tha 12 baje meeting khatam hojayege
receptionist:ma..aap thori dair wait kijye..meeting bas khatam he hone wale hai
heer:ohk..thnx
receptionist smiles
heer ja kr sofe pr beth kr koi magazine parhne lagte hai after 15-20 min
woh magazine rkh kr phr receptionist k paas jate hai
heer:ab toh 1 bajne wala hai..aap ja kr mr.prem juneja ko bolye k heer aye hai...
receptinist:pr mam
k peeche se awaz ate hai:heer maan
n itz jay
NAME:jay bhanushali
AGE:28
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HEER TURNS
heer:jay....tum
heer:OMG..mjhe yaqeen he nahi horha
jay:mujhe bhi nahi.college k baad aaj milna hoa hai
heer:tum jo london chle gye the
jay:smiles
heer:tum london se wapis kab aye
jay:1 week pehle he aya ho
heer:itne din hogye tumhe aye hue aur ek baar bhi nahi miley.....so bad
jay:sorry.....(holding ears)
heer:laughs...tum abhi tak nahi badle na......
jay:acha he hai na..tum bhi toh nahi badle.......
heer:thnx wese tumreh kaha rhe ho.tum logo ka ghar toh band hai.......
jay:ha....woh actully mai hotel me he reh rha tha..........tumhe pta hai na mom k jane k baad us ghar mai jane ki himmat he naho hoye .us ghar mai mom k bina sab adhoora hai
heer:aww.....koi nahi.toh tum mere ghar mai reh lete.hotel mai ku?
jayh kahayl he nahi aya.............
heer:toh abhi chlo na
jay:nahi.ab toh raat ki flight hai..
heer:oh.toh extend kra lo na.....apni frnd k sath thora tym bhi spend nhe kr skte
jay:sorry heer.but waha london mai bhi kaam hai n dad kitna dekhe gai........
heer:chlo...phr aaj pora din tum mere stah guzaro gai..done
jay:done.....
prem ata hai apne kuch staff ka sath..heer usko dekh kr zor se chilate hai
heer:hii.prem.
(prem heer ko dekhta hai)
heer:aao jay..mai tumhe prem se milate ho
heer jay ko prem k paas ley kr jate hai
heer:prem yeh hai jay.mera bachpan ka dost..aur jay yeh hai prem..........mera dost
jay:nice meeting u mr.prem
prem:same here
prem:heer chale.........
heer;ha
jay:tum log kahi ja rhe ho......
heer:tum bhi aao na........
jay:nahi.tum log jao...............mai kya kro ga do dosto mai]
heer;tummere dost nhe ho............aur wese bhi mai aur prem frndship day pr apni new frndship celebrate krne ja rhe the .aur naye frndship mai ,mai porani frndship bhol thori na skte ho.......
jay:smiles
heer:tum bhi chlo.....
prem:chlo na jay
jay:ohk..chlo.pr jana kaha hai
heer:sab se pehle hum shopping krne jayenge..phr movie dekhe gai.phr ache se restura mai khana khaye gai aur phr tumhe airport chor k wapis chle jayege
prem:Airport?tum kaha ja rhe ho?
jay:woh mai aaj wapis london ja rha ho............
prem:oh
heer:ab jaldi chlo..............cum'on....(aur heer dono ka hath pakar kr bahir chli jate hai.....teeno car me bethte hai.......heer driving seat pr n prem usk sath n jay peeche)
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thaani tyaar ho rhe hoti hai..mayank neeche se awaz lagta hai
mayank:thaani jaldi kro na......bht late hogye hai hum pehle he
thaani:aye baba.....(woh neeche ate hai
thaani:chlo
thaani comes to mayank
mayank:mjhe samjh nhe ate k tum larkia shopping pr jane se pehle bhi itna tyaar hoti ho
thaani:mayank.yeh sab tumhre samjhne k l iye hai bhi nahi.ab chlo na
mayank:acha chlo.....n they both leave
mayank n thaani zar mai bethet hai.mayank driving seat pr n thaani usk sath
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prem,heer n jay shoppin krte hai.heer prem ko ek t-shirt nikal kr dete hai.......
heer:prem..dekho ..yeh tum pr kitne ache lag rhe hai.ab yeh jaldi se pehn kr aao
prem;heer.in kapro mai kya buraai hai
heer:in kapro mai koi achaai bhi nahi hai..ab jao na.......wrna lag hra hai k mai tumhre sath koi bht bari deal sign krne aye ho.jao.try room mai ja kr change kr k aao
jay:han prem heer saheeh keh rhe hai.in kapro mai waqae tum bht angry young man type lag hre ho
heer:dekha..........jao ab jaldi se change kr k aao(n heer prem ko try room k iutaraf ley jate hai
prem:pr heer
heer:pr war kuch nhe.cum'on cum'on.be agud boy jao...........
prem try roo mmai jata hai
n heer jay kuch aur dresses dekhne lagte hai........
k prem try room se ata hai
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KEEP READING
HATE LUV STORIES😉
Edited by laviza97 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sry .mai last update ache tarah nhe dey paye.pr ab mene edit kr di hai.........................hope u guyz like it

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