Gori tere aankhen kahe .........

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Pratigya is sitting on the corner of the bed lost in deep thought .....and looking very worried ..Kesar comes in stealthily holding a plate full of food and quickly closes the door [👏👏👏 ....The Thakur's have achieved their objective ...they have isolated Pratigya , but the ever faithful Kesar will be Pratigya's buffer ]...kesar offers the food to Pratigya but Pratigya refuses to eat [Khalo beta, you have to maintain ur form or these sabre toothed tigers will rip u apart ] ..she says , How can I eat ..Krishna left the house without eating anything [when did she get so concerned about it ....Right...after losing her heart to him ..of course 😃 ] ...she continues her soliloquy ..I don't know what is running thru his head [Not only u honey, even we don't know what is running thru his head ]..he wants to trust me but is finding it difficult and this is pulling him apart ...I myself don't know what to do [A first for Pratigya...usually she knows what to do and also what others shud do ]..I don't even know where he is ...

Where is he ?..Ah ! There you are !! Krsihna is chilling out in the monsoon rain amidst lush greenery..he is lying on the jeep and we get a glimpse of his mind....*Peering thru the Microscope, we discover * that Pratigya court scenes are galloping inside his head ..unable to bear the effect of those words, he shoots up ..[ he is drenched in rain...is the rain cleansing him, his thoughts ..clearing the dirt accumulated and giving the much needed clear view of Pratigya ,is it restoring his clarity or is it crying along with Krishna.. A mute witness to Krishna's pain ...sharing his sorrow , showing its sympathy in the only way it knows ] ...Krishna is still depressed

We now turn to sax ..Komal is feeling pretty lonely ..and sitting all by herself ..Adarsh comes and tries to apologize without actually apologizing in his own clumsy way ..But Komal understands perfectly ..and says I am not angry with u or ur family ...I even understand the Pratigya condition but what gets my goat is ur trait of hiding and covering the truth and keeping me out of the loop ..even if u were to tell me about Pratigya..I will not relay it to my parents ..👏👏👏 [Biwi ho tho Aisi ]...*Seedhi MUh , No Bakwas*

Amma is seething and bubbling and pulling the ear rings out her ear lobe...and the reason for her violent treatment of her own Ears ...Komal Supported Pratigya ....SS is hearing all this in silence and he says that he is waiting for election's ...then he is going to cut off all contact with Shyamji's parivar ...sending one sibling to heaven and sending termination of marriage notice to another ..[Made of for each other, these Thakurs ]

It has turned dark ...Pratigya is still waiting ..she has dozed of in the hall ...her face is covered partially by her hair ... a hand comes and gently pushes it off her face ..startled ..she wakes up and sees the gentle smiling face of KRISHNA ...She is unable to believe her eyes ..the ever ready tears spring down her cheeks [this time it is one of relief and happiness ] ..he continues to stand directly in front of her and gently lifts her up..his arms are supporting her ..gently he wipes off the tears * a few seconds of eyelock * PRATIGYA hugs him , even more importantly Krishna hugs her back, holding her close to him , engulfing her in his arms.....The Hug continues for a long time with Krishna giving a gentle and loving smile 😍 ....and then there is a ting tong ting-tong ...what is this sound doing in Kriya paradise bey 😡..Pratigya's eyes open and she realises that she was dreaming [ acha ab Dream tak pahunch gaya hai Krishna , kuch din mein 100% Krishna ki deeewani banjayegi aur sabi jaga nazar aane lagega ]..well hearing the ting tong [doorbell]....she runs to the door thinking krishna has come, but it is the milkman ..Pratigya is shattered .. and contines to stare at the MM vacantly..the MM tells the Bahu to get some vessels ,so that he may fill the vessel with milk ..Piyasiya comes with the milk vessel and finds Pratigya at the door...her greyhound nose twitches ..and her saucer eyes rolls..she asks Pratigya why is she awake so early ...and putting 1 and 1 together she asks whether Krishna has returned or not ..is she waiting for him ?unable to bear her pestering , Pratigya runs to her sanctuary ...

Here Komal has come with an peace offering to Shyamu ....and is hesitating ..Nainaji comes in and tells Sax about it ...and Nainaji calls her in ..and says all this was prepared by Komal and she has come to apologize ...and Komal immediately launches into a lengthy apology..where she also requests her sasurji to teach Adarsh some lessons on getting angry and finally ends up saying Anger is necessary to fight [ So there will be ladai, this time it will be Sax VS Thakur's ]..nainaji says she can become gentle with love and attention..and sax says what about the other Thakur's ..to which Nainaji retorts ..Krishna is there for Pratigya , he understands her .

Piyasiya delivers the good news that Krishna is not in the house ..and Amma and shakthi go into planning mode....

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HamiSky thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow!!
U sriously become a writer, Tanthya!!
It was tooo good!!
the hug scene was given in minute details!! after reading ur desc, saw the scene again..!!
u r a good observer!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Tanthya 😊

Lovely update

as ususal it was very well written especially the hug sequence😳

I am really starting to like Komal again and I agree she never beats around the bush she always says whatever is on her mind, It' s kind of hard to accept such a drastic change so quickly but I guess all she needed was some trust and for Adarsh to explain things to her nicely.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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As usual gr8 post Tanthya.
Nothing much to add but just wanted to check did Prof say something along these lines to Nainaji: our daughter has made sacrifices to be accepted in dat house but what has she achieved?

If it is a yes i actually want to shake that nutty porfessar Shamu and ask him what has Pratigya sacrificed till now:

She chose to marry Baba to seek revenge. She has always got away with what she wanted to do after marriage because she had a strong pillar in da form of her husband to support her. what sacrifices is he talking abt?

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Posted: 15 years ago
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@ Tanthya 🤗You really know how to find words and write so beautifully yet another beautiful post. Thank you so much.👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks Tanthya.....loved it as always
love komal....she is my fav
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Posted: 15 years ago
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what an awesome hug! i have loved all their hug scenes. this one is the best one so far! can anyone tell me what music was playing in the background? it was beautiful and seemed like was from a movie?
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Originally posted by: anjalisharma200

what an awesome hug! i have loved all their hug scenes. this one is the best one so far! can anyone tell me what music was playing in the background? it was beautiful and seemed like was from a movie?



its not from a movie. it is an old tune of the show, it was played in the epi when they tried to change her name and he defended her. it was playing in the background during another one of their silent moments (that one was not a dream) but was equally powerful in the emotions conveyed.😃😃😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great post tanthya. Loved it as usual.
The hug sequence was lovely - you have captured it so well, you must have watched it a zillion times, nah?😛😉😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome post as always....... loved the dream sequence
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